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118 pages, Paperback
First published May 1, 2011
In place of my feelings, substitute the emptiness of a rain barrel, its wood drying out, its metal staves creaking, an arid silence after two years of learning to hold the rain.You don't have to be an MFA student to get the power of that.
Amelia and Richard walked arm in arm, looking happy, but not particularly just married. They might have been coming out of a bar, thought Alex, or a show.WTF? I mean, huh? What does that have to do with anything in the previous 30 pages? What does that tell me about Alex, or the oracle, or meaningless bizarre sex? It's hard to take it as anything other than an inside joke, and it sours the whole story for me.
"Oh, well," Richard said. "I've seen bigger sea lions than that."