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The Deadly Path
In this short story, five-year-old Cindy watches from her bedroom window as an old man passes by in the middle of the night. Strangely drawn to the man, Cindy sneaks out of her house and finds him by following a golden path that only they can see. She watches as he buries strange coins by the corners of several houses.
What Cindy does not know, is that people start dying in those houses. Cindy's life changes when her best friend dies in a fire, and she finds one of the coins buried under the ashes.
What Cindy does not know, is that people start dying in those houses. Cindy's life changes when her best friend dies in a fire, and she finds one of the coins buried under the ashes.
19 pages, Kindle Edition
First published April 22, 2011
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About the author
Will Granger
8 books14 followersWill Granger was born near Pittsburgh, PA and grew up in New Jersey and Geneva, Switzerland. He spent 20 years in the U.S. Air Force, where he was able to travel around the world. Scenes from his travels appear throughout his books. He also attended James Madison University and earned his MA in Language Arts Education from the University of Central Florida.
Will’s Anabar's Run is the first book in his two-part coming-of-age Anabar saga, and the second book is Anabar Rises.
Anabar is a young man who dreams of leaving his isolated valley home and trains to join the Scouts, a band of ruthless, elite warriors. He ultimately decides to resist an unjust war and risks everything to try to bring peace to the land.
Check out Will's fun, interactive Anabar Series blog at http://anabarseries.blogspot.com/ where readers can find many features not found in the books.
Will is getting ready to publish his new book, When Royal Heads Are Hunted, in September 2025. This is a historical fiction novel about the Aztecs, Spanish Conquistadors, and Calusa Indians from Florida.
Will’s Anabar's Run is the first book in his two-part coming-of-age Anabar saga, and the second book is Anabar Rises.
Anabar is a young man who dreams of leaving his isolated valley home and trains to join the Scouts, a band of ruthless, elite warriors. He ultimately decides to resist an unjust war and risks everything to try to bring peace to the land.
Check out Will's fun, interactive Anabar Series blog at http://anabarseries.blogspot.com/ where readers can find many features not found in the books.
Will is getting ready to publish his new book, When Royal Heads Are Hunted, in September 2025. This is a historical fiction novel about the Aztecs, Spanish Conquistadors, and Calusa Indians from Florida.
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June 30, 2011
I understand that this is a short story, but this book felt more like a very rushed outline to me than an actual short story.
I bought it because I did like the premise and the sample sounded promising.
Basically a little girl follows some creepy old man at night while he places gold coins in the ground and the people that live there will die.
I understand that some authors think that to leave some of the plot to the unknown is scarier than to explain it all away like as to why this man does this, who he is, what the coins say and why the little girl disappears a few days after she pretty brutally kills the guy after her only fried dies.
Personally, I like a little explanation for some of the story.
All in all, I feel like this could be a really good story if there were just a little more detail and explanation because like I said, the premise is really good.
I bought it because I did like the premise and the sample sounded promising.
Basically a little girl follows some creepy old man at night while he places gold coins in the ground and the people that live there will die.
I understand that some authors think that to leave some of the plot to the unknown is scarier than to explain it all away like as to why this man does this, who he is, what the coins say and why the little girl disappears a few days after she pretty brutally kills the guy after her only fried dies.
Personally, I like a little explanation for some of the story.
All in all, I feel like this could be a really good story if there were just a little more detail and explanation because like I said, the premise is really good.
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July 3, 2011
I liked the idea of this story. A mysterious old man is seen walking down the middle of a street and is seen and later followed by a little girl. He buries coins at the corners of houses being built on a new development and later the inhabitants die. The girl becomes entangled in this strange event and …… well you’ll have to read it to find out.
There is not very much detail because it is a short story, which I can live with, but I missed not having a conclusion. If you like mysterious stories where you decide why things turn out the way they do, then this is for you.
There is not very much detail because it is a short story, which I can live with, but I missed not having a conclusion. If you like mysterious stories where you decide why things turn out the way they do, then this is for you.
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