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The Suitable 'Verse #3

A Suitable Captive

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The mysterious figure known as the Wild Dog has risen up to crush and humiliate the Earls who control the North. Fen, son of a powerful Earl, has been sent to form an alliance to benefit his father’s plans against the bold rebel. There are many kinds of alliances in the world of nobles, but political alliances often grow to include the intimacy of lovers or even marriage, and Fen has been ordered to use his famed beauty seduce his intended, regardless of what he feels. But Fen has no love for his cruel father or in forming any kind of alliance with a noble his father prefers. He takes his first chance to run, only to end up lost and hungry in vast wilderness… where he is found by the Wild Dog himself.

Lan, called Wild Dog by furious Earls who don’t like to be challenged, looms over Fen and most others, and yet carries Fen when Fen is too weak to walk any longer. He allows his friends to tease him and ensures his people are fed before he sits for his own meals. Fen, who has rarely known kindness, is captivated. But Fen is also an Earl’s cub, and if the Wild Dog can change rules that have always existed, then so can Fen. Without his father’s say he offers an alliance of his own, promising to use his knowledge of the nobles to help the Wild Dog achieve his aims. No seduction is required, although for the first time in his life, Fen considers it. Each time Lan listens to him, or pulls him close to share warmth as they sleep, or shows that he trusts Fen, Fen wants him in a way he barely understands.

But Fen is more powerful than he realizes or that his nickname of “Flower” would suggest. He sees destiny at work when he looks at Lan. The Wild Dog is something greater than a mere Earl, and fate, or the fae, have placed Fen in his path. Now it’s time for Fen-the-flower to decide if his agreement with Lan might become more—an alliance, or marriage, for the ages.

189 pages, Kindle Edition

First published December 26, 2023

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446 reviews348 followers
March 22, 2024
“A little cunning would go a long way. And much is forgiven for a pretty face.”

Even if I were to go back a year, I’d wholeheartedly think that authors putting a shirtless man on the cover was the ugliest thing you could put on a book jacket. If I happened to come across something that sounded interesting, I'd still have to give it a huge pass, simply because of Mr. Half-Dressed standing there. I don’t know, just the thought of reading them in public was absolutely mortifying to me. Nightmare fuel! Thankfully, after getting a Kindle, and getting used to all these six-packs on my Goodreads feed, I really don’t mind them all that much anymore. Nice! Is that character development or character regression? Eh, I'll let you decide. It’s not even like I’m out, out or anything (one foot in, one foot out, you know how it is), I just don’t have the energy to fret about it like I used to. Nothing more freeing than not giving a damn anymore! I thought I’d try being candid for a couple sentences, tops. Speaking of tops, this book’s shirtless man looks kind of silly, standing there, all mean-mugging and smoldering at us. Whenever I see a “shirtless-dude-book” now, it usually goes one of two ways; between me thinking they’re really hot or really funny. And I’ve got to say, this one is definitely more on the latter side. I couldn't help but laugh every time I closed out the book and was affronted with it. Mind you, it's also not at all befitting the story. Anyway, I should probably talk about the book now because… woah, this is starting to sound like my diary or something ha ha. I think what I was trying to get at is that the cover does the book a disservice, because what we actually get is a wonderfully emotional romance. The writing is simple and not too wordy but still conveys just as many dramatic highs-and-lows as any book overwrought with flowery prose. And while I sometimes thought that maybe Fen and Lan had a language barrier, accounting for the disjointed dialogue at points, I think that was just this novel’s particular style. I suppose it works because it’s a love story about two people who, until very recently, existed on different planes of life, and though there is a connection, they’re still learning how to be comfortable and stand on even ground with each other. In this regard, it’s very much like that classic hit, The Lake House, starring Keanu Reeves and Sandra Bullock! Am I just saying that to sneak in talking about 2006’s, The Lake House with Keanu Reeves and Sandra Bullock? Absolutely not.

What impressed me most about this story was how patient and natural the pacing of the romance between Fen and Lan, “The Wild Dog,” progressed. This isn’t a long book, but it somehow never felt like anything was rushed or contrived. At first, I wasn’t sure if I was a big fan of how little Fen changed from the first to the last pages, or the fact that he never actually grows out of his more submissive role in the story, but after thinking about it for a while (like a minute), I truly believe that this aspect is one of this book’s greatest strengths. I know that the “spunky and outspoken” archetype is flashier and more popular in these kinds of stories, but sometimes it’s nice when a character is allowed their demure nature without the narrative telling them that they need to become someone else entirely. Fen shows his strength in different ways and his development isn’t about him changing his personality to be less introverted, but rather him learning that being loved doesn’t equate to how useful he can be. Being shy isn’t something he should be ashamed of, or a character flaw that needs to be “grown out of.” Sheesh, I'm getting a little emotional here. I’ve got to tell you; I really didn’t go into this expecting a muted, tender love story. I thought I’d get ten pages max before Fen and Man-Mountain would be freaking it, sexual-style. I’m not mad about it though, this is better, I think. Sure, it’s not the sweetest, most beautiful love story ever told, as that title goes to the smash-hit, The Lake House, starring Keanu Reeves (opposite Sandra Bullock), but because of the dream-like quality to the prose, reading it had a very calming effect on me. I felt like a piece of driftwood floating serenely down river every time I turned the page. Ahhh. This book is good. Really, really good! Anyway, final thought, but I even enjoyed how the promised violence that was hinted at throughout the novel was handled off-screen. It might seem a little odd and disappointing to some, but I really think it ultimately wouldn’t have fit the mellow tone of the rest of the story. Besides, it’s nice to read a book where a queer person’s closure isn’t met through confronting their abusive parent, but rather in simply focusing on the people who do care about them. As they say: "to love, and be loved in return."

There was a boy / A very strange, enchanted boy / They say he wandered very far / Very far, over land and sea / A little shy and sad of eye / But very wise was he (Nature Boy – Nat King Cole).
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1,467 reviews194 followers
May 9, 2025
3,5 stars.
I adore the author's writing, enjoyed reading about Fen and Lan and their journey (literal and emotional).
The relationship development was slow but steady, I loved watching them getting closer.
The story is told in single pov (Fen) so it was very rewarding feeling alongside Fen every new small (and big) relevation of Lan's interest and devotion.
The ending was too abrupt for me, I had hoped for a more satisfying reunion, and the epilogue (set decades/centuries? in the future) was even more disappointing, only hinting at Fen and Lan's victories from afar.
On an eventual reread I'll better skip the epilogue entirely.
Profile Image for Kat.
386 reviews207 followers
December 28, 2023
I'm just going to pretend there is more to this series (and that that complete departure of an epilogue didn't exist).
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420 reviews28 followers
April 2, 2024
I absolutely adored the first half of this!
It fell off a little in the second half unfortunately. There is something about R. Cooper's dialogues that always seems a bit off to me. The characters have a specific way of almost intentionally talking past one another while never explicitly addressing the topic they actually want to talk about (and it usually happens about two thirds into the story). I like the general drama of it but it reads very unnaturally to me and always takes me out of the story, and unfortunately, this also happens in this story.

I wonder if some other R. Cooper readers feel the same or know what I'm talking about because I find it's hard to put to words.
Profile Image for Rachael.
47 reviews1 follower
March 5, 2024
Don’t judge me I loved this. Tying up your lovers hands sexual style during an important political meeting is just A+ shit I truly don’t know what else to say.
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2,778 reviews59 followers
January 23, 2024
The end of chapter seven made me say "Awwww!"

Okay, honestly, I tried to read this slowly, and mostly succeeded. It was very like enjoying a delectable box of fine chocolates. What I loved best about this one: delightful subtlety, with a core of devoted concern that satisfies me down to my bones.

I should've realized it's in the same universe as the two other "A Suitable..." books, but really that doesn't matter except it made me grin. I loved all three.
Profile Image for ❥ Tracy.
458 reviews36 followers
July 29, 2024
Another lovely slow burn by R Cooper with a surprise dash of praise & bondage kink. Fen, the Flower of the North, is a typical R Cooper MC - beautiful and oblivious. It’s my fave recipe and I will keep coming back for more 💜
Profile Image for Kelli W.
45 reviews
December 28, 2023
Me, reading this book:

Oh cute

Ohhhh cuuute

D’aww

Oh whoa that’s…. kinkier than I was expecting???

Awwww cute

There’s that r cooper pining(tm) I’m here for

Ahh what a lovely love story.

Epilogue? Sweet- OH MY GOD IT’S A PREQUEL *elmo fire gif*
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777 reviews75 followers
February 23, 2024
Other World-y

This was a first time for me reading a book set in this world that reminded me of Robin Hood and his Merry Men.

Wild Dog is a Robin Hood type MC fighting against the Earls of territory North, South.

Walking through the forest, returning from scouting adjacent territory, Wild Dog aka Killan, accompanied by Heni his sister and his friend Race, they discover a young man sleeping in the bushes.

This young man, Fenwit, turns out to be a man of Nobel birth and is taken to Wild Dog’s encampment hidden way in the forest.

Expecting to be used as a pawn in battle with the Earls Fen is surprised when he is warmly accepted by Wild Dog, who is happy to be taught by Fen in the ways of the Earls in preparing for future wars.

Something sparks big time between Wild Dog and Fen and I became engrossed in this whole new reading genre for me. I was drawn into this weird world of Killan and Fen and watched as their relationship developed.

A bit disappointed with the unexpected abrupt ending and an Epilogue that did not seem to relate to the story I had just read.
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13 reviews1 follower
December 27, 2023
Excellent!

The third book in R Cooper's "Suitable" series. It's interesting that it is a prequel to the other two books, fleshing out the history and politics of the world setting. I would recommend reading the books in order. I adore R Cooper's books and she is an auto buy author for me. Her characters are fascinating, well developed, and complex.
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1,413 reviews5 followers
April 17, 2024
This is a love story for the ages with fantastic world-building and great character development. Fen is the son of a cruel earl, who has sent him as a gift to a neighboring earl to forge an alliance. Fen, known as the Flower for his notable beauty and soft demeanor, outwits his guards to escape before arrival at the new Hold. The earls hope to strengthen their power to fight against the Wild Dog, a marauder who has been having some success against several other earls.

Out in the wild and exhausted, he is awakened by a small group with a leader Fen is somehow drawn toward. Not wanting to return to his home and a sad fate, Fen suggests that he be taken captive by this small group. He meets the Wild Dog and hopes to slowly gain his trust. Can love bloom between these two men in their special relationship? This book has a beautiful story of strength and influence emerging from natural submission, the hidden magic of the fae, peace earned as much from diplomacy as battle, a slow-rising passion, and a deep love found in consent and choice.
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3,251 reviews209 followers
November 29, 2024
Thank you to Peppermint Vixen for gifting this to me during the 2024 Secret Santa Book Exchange!
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3.5 rounded down

Enjoyable book in the Suitable 'verse! It's revealed in the epilogue of this book (which I didn't enjoy, because it introduces random characters I don't have any reason to care about) that this takes place a long, long time before the other books in the series, which I wish had been made clearer earlier. The reveal didn't add anything and I was distracted while reading wondering how to place this within the greater 'verse, but that's a small quibble overall.

But on the whole, I enjoyed this one! It does have Cooper's signature polarizing dialogue, where characters sort of seem to speak past each other, and it tends to bother me inconsistently -- I was fine with it for the first half of the book but it began to wear by the second.

Still, on the whole I enjoyed the characters and dynamic!
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161 reviews4 followers
May 2, 2024
A promising and interesting story, not easy to read, and that unfortunately leaves you with a strong taste of unfinished work.

This was difficult to read because of the writing style. Not only are there numerous characters to follow, but most of the information about them are brought within dialogues that jump from one subject to another. As if that wasn't difficult enough, the dialogues have to be systematically read between the lines to be understood. I ended going frequently back one or several pages in the book to understand what I was reading. Even the description of the sex scenes left to be desired.

As for the story itself, it was all about discussing plots, not without dragging and repetition, and there was close to no action. The book ends on a few very slow chapters telling almost nothing about what happened as a consequence of all the plotting. Literally every thread is left unfinished. At 80 % the book could have ended up with "and they lived happily ever after" without losing anything, while according to the story's pace I expected at least 2 more books to tell the whole development.
And then there's an epilogue that falls out of nowhere, that is only remotely related to the rest of the story, that brings literally nothing, and that tells of another story that itself remains unfinished.

The main good thing in this book was the romantic aspect of the show burn. But then the more I think about it, the more I realize that the two MCs can only be characterized as "good people".

I liked the promise of an interesting story, of an angsty slow burn romance, but the way it was delivered left me deeply frustrated.

Not reading anything else by this author.
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521 reviews30 followers
October 27, 2024
I think I would’ve preferred a little more text and a little less subtext because my dumb ass did not always get what they were really saying to each other lol
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135 reviews8 followers
May 17, 2025
"Dol says it is plainly obvious what I feel. That you stir more than my body. That I..." Lan's gaze made him swallow and take his bound hands from Lan's chest to pat his own. "There is a sore, sweet feeling here. Do you have that too?"
"Yes." Lan's gaze said Fen had done well. "And heat, when I think of things I shouldn't. Then you offer them to me and... Mine. Is what you are—what I'd like you to be."


Fen runs away from his guards to escape arranged marriage, but ends up lost and hungry in the woods. He is found by a famous Wild Dog who rose against the nobles who abuse their position and power. But the title is very misleading, as Fen is more protected and taken care of by Lan (the Wild Dog), rather than being held captive. You could say that Fen is a willing captive, but Lan wants to give him all the freedom that Fen never knew while living with his own family.

I loved this. It has all the things I enjoy: historical fantasy, hurt/comfort, anxious MC, gentle love interest, praise kink, LOTS of consent. The worldbuilding is interesting and there are tidbits about different cultures and traditions that I enjoyed a lot, but the focus is primarily on romance and our main character Fen. Amazing side characters and strong found family vibes.

I had this same complaint in the previous book I read by this author, but sometimes I'm struggling to follow the dialogue. Characters are talking in circles and then they suddenly come to conclusions that gives us new information, but I don't understand how they connected that. This is not a big deal, though, definitely not enough for me to lower my rating.

The ending was a bit abrupt and it left me wishing to see more. The epilogue doesn't give us anything. It is set in the future (decades or even centuries later, I don't know) and barely hints at Fen and Lan's victories; there's only a mention of songs about them and their banner (last paragraph, a beautiful picture but it somehow left me sad), and the epilogue is mostly about two new characters, Fy and Peach, hooking up.

I still loved it, I just don't think I'd reread that epilogue again.

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*General Notes*
-historical fantasy, anxious MC, gentle love interest, size difference, caretaking...
-MC is a willing captive (but he isn't a captive, really)
-CWs: past family abuse - physical, not sexual, and it's only hinted but it never goes into details.

*Intimacy Notes*
-Top/bottom/verse:
-Kinks/sex notes:
-Other:
•huge focus on consent
•handtimacy (lots of sweet touches; Fen has delicate hands & Lan has calloused, but gentle hands)
•Fen is and the reveal was so cute :)
•Fen lmao (it's cute, I promise)
•rope has important meaning for them
•Fen likes
•nicknames:
•snuggling up for warmth moments
•a nice "you're mine" and "I'm yours" moment
•caretaking
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787 reviews20 followers
April 18, 2024
4+⭐

I like this Suitable series very much. (Why isn't it marked as series anywhere?)
R. Cooper has these humble and quiet heroes, who don't really think much of themselves, but are still very capable and strong. In this series I think all the protagonists really shine with all these political schemes. And there's always the pining and the almost magical moments between the characters.

The final chapters were perhaps a little bit disconnected, and I would have wished them just a bit smoother or having something more, to make this 4.5⭐ or greater.
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306 reviews12 followers
January 3, 2025
Loved reading about how the Canamorra came about.

The epilogue made me feel like another book could be in the works. One could only hope so!

What I wouldn’t give for these books to have better covers. I hate them
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Author 8 books24 followers
February 21, 2024
I am not sure what possessed me to read this because the cover is highly suggestive of a BDSM relationship, which I’m not usually interested in reading. The book description hooked me, and the reviews posted used words like “sweet” and “adorable” so I bought it.

I had the strangest experience with this book because about half the time, I didn’t understand what was going on, but I was still totally hooked by the relationship, which is filled with sexual tension and longing.

The story is basically that Fen is the pretty, inexperienced son of an evil Earl (one of many in this world) who runs away into the woods and is rescued by Lan, a Robin Hood–esque character who is taking down the system one Earl at a time. Fen has a huge crush on Lan; Lan wants Fen but is determined not to take advantage of his innocence. There are many conversations about alliances and Lan’s role in reshaping society, and this was where I felt lost; but I sort of felt like I was reading about an unfamiliar culture and could accept their unfamiliar rules (sort of like when you read your first Victorian novel and think, “So they’re alone in the garden. Why is this a big deal?”). Also, Fen is narrating and his inexperience with the world affects the narration.

Technically there is some amount of Fen’s hands being tied up in this book, but it was always done in the most highly consensual way. I kept thinking, “I love how much consent is in this book, and every time it comes up, it seems to add to the sexiness of the scene.”

Also, while there is a background of battles and evil Earls, we don’t actually see any of that in the book, which is why I thought it counted as a cozy romantasy. The story starts with Lan finding Fen and stays with Fen at the rebels’ camp and home base, with the war happening off-page. So, the most stressful it gets is worrying about people making it home safely (which, given that it is a romance novel, I did not find too worrying).
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Author 8 books40 followers
February 20, 2024
Now that is quite a terrible cover for such a lovely story where nothing much happened and yet everything happened and it was way too lovely for both of those things to make sense.

Fen is kidnapped although really, he run away first so maybe he is simply finding a new place where he can finally be himself. What he finds is Lan. There's travel and waking up and bringing food to people and then he sleeps and the wakes and he finds something useful to do and then they are at a camp and basically nothing happens but, well, everything was happening all along and now you can see it... a bit more clearly. The story feels like a poem for what we see on the surface is only the smallest part of what is happening.

This is a story of freedom, of an underdog, pardon my pan, freeing... it sounded like England although this is fantasy so it's about uniting a fractured territory and making things better for the common people. What actually happens is more of the above - some travel, some basically just surviving, some vague and specific and huge and ambitious plans and then it happens and there is love and oh my, I have very little idea why I liked this so much but moments like Lan uncovered that silly rope was more swoon-worthy than some other love interest declaring their undying love. There was a hint of kink in that poetic way so it just felt gentle and natural and unassuming and there was hint of action but 99% of that was not shown or even talked about...

I was also quite unaware this is from that particular universe but I guess it gives credit to the author that I remember the story mentioned in the epilogue despite thinking it was not a four-star material.

Definitely recommend, one of those hidden gems though I'd be the first to point out it might not be to everyone's taste or idea of romance.
234 reviews5 followers
November 7, 2024
R. Cooper's work is always beautiful-- melancholic yet still hopeful. Every once in a while, you'll notice a typo, but nothing too distracting. This book was not like that. It really could've used some editing – – the kind that catches typos and missing words and the kind that tightens up the store line and removes unnecessary elements.

The mistakes in this book were many and distracting. It's a shame because, like all our Cooper stories, this one had an interesting plot line and could've been something special but it wasn't. Also, the epilogue was weird. It was like it was just tacked on in an effort to tie this story to one of the author's previous works.

2 1/2 stars rounded up. Really, two stars rounded up and I think I'm giving it that much for nostalgia's sake since I'm such a big fan.

Don't judge Cooper by this work if it's the only thing you've ever read. Try Taiji from Beyond the Rings. https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/4...
It is one of my all-time favorite romance novels. It might be my absolute favorite. I recommend that one highly.
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82 reviews
June 18, 2025
I enjoy the world and plots created for this series but I’m afraid I found this book to be the least enjoyable of the three. The stories themselves were intriguing but the romance fell a bit flat.

The main characters in all three books have been far too similar, more similar to each other than they are different. Binge reading the books back-to-back, they got a bit…boring? It’s the same couple(/throuple) over and over. Their romances end up extremely similar too, with the obtuse obliviousness, despite multiple extremely obvious signals and declarations.

The other issue that I think correcting would improve this writer’s work leaps and bounds would be minimizing their use of unspoken conversations. If you’re going to make your MCs have whole conversations ‘between the lines’, you need to be 100% sure you’ve written in the context to lead the reader to be able to fill in those blanks. These books did not do that. As others have noted, you end up rereading a few times trying to figure out conversations.

Entertaining series, no regrets over reading. May look into more from this writer in the future but three was enough for now.
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Author 27 books33 followers
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March 13, 2024
This is the same world (and has the same type of protagonist) as Cooper's A Suitable Bodyguard and A Suitable Consort For the King and His Husband . They don't need to be read in any particular order. If you're only trying one I liked A Suitable Consort For the King and His Husband best. If you want to get a sense of the relationships without buying it, the author has an AU called "Nobody Needs to Tiktok" in which the kings are retired hockey players and Mattin is their social media intern. All the pining, none of the political intrigue.
137 reviews2 followers
August 21, 2024
Love the book, love the “suitable” ‘verse, and love the way R. Cooper characterizes the fae there. I tried to put it down for a while just so it would last longer - I didn’t want to have to stop reading it. But it was too good, I just gobbled it up. Going back to read the first book again.

Some of the things that were wonderful: how richly Fen and Lan (and others) were developed with so little said about them. (How does R. Cooper DO that? Say so much with so few words?) How Fen finds his place. How insightful Fen is about Lan, Lan’s motivation, and is able to articulate Lan’s goals and guide his campaign, despite being small, and quiet, and essentially downtrodden his whole life. How Lan feels and expresses his feelings. How Lan cares for his people and yet undervalues himself. I also love how this is the third book in the series, despite not being third in a timeline. The three books work SOOOOO well together when read in the order they were written.

The only thing I didn’t like is my autocorrect changing “Lan” to “LAN” every single time. 🤣😂🤣😂
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1,244 reviews34 followers
June 8, 2024
4.5 stars

Ate this up. It took a little while to get used to the writing style and the way the characters seemed to do a lot of communicating through facial expressions and gestures, but I really ended up liking that--that Fen and Lan didn't need words to convey emotions because they were THAT close. Lan is the 'Wild Dog' unifier of the downtrodden and Fen is his 'Flower-of-the-North' plotter. This kind of read like a legend in the making, what with the ongoing references to the ballads being written about their love story. Ballads about the Wild Dog and his Flower that people would be singing about long into the future.

The ending is odd--the epilogue swerves to 2 completely different characters, but I did get the connection to Fen and Lan's story with the mentions of those very same ballads based on them. And the final chapter did give good closure to their story.

Oh... And I really don't like the cover. It doesn't do the story justice.
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2,648 reviews37 followers
May 25, 2024
MM romance in a pre-industrial society where faeries recently lived, or still do. A young, sheltered nobleman with no aptitude for combat runs away rather than go through a marriage arranged by his stern, neglectful father. He is discovered by seeming-soldiers, and offers himself as a captive. One of his captors is a rogue he's only heard about. He and the rogue fall in love with each other.
Lots of politics, some mm sex. Too many names to keep track of.
The epilogue is either for the wrong book, or is set in the far future, and has only the most minor connection to this one. It certainly adds absolutely nothing to this story.
Typos: Several parenthetical phrases, parentheses are punctuation marks [this clause added for illustration], are separated not by parentheses or dashes, but by commas.
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150 reviews14 followers
December 30, 2023
I really did enjoy this, especially the first half of the book, I couldn't put it down. I loved the building dynamic between Lan and Fen, really enjoyed the cute moments. Unfortunately, to me it b came less satisfying as the story dragged on. The political drama and over-explaining had me scratching my head, with the nuances of alliances, the Earls, etc. It seemed there was a lot of plotting on what would happen on the greater scale, which we don't actually see a lot of, and not much happening between the actual characters in the later third of the book. There was a lot of 'this will happen, then this will happen, then this' with not a lot of opportunity for the reader to guess.

The ending was enjoyable though.

Overall cute, low angst read. Lan and Fen were the sweetest.
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427 reviews7 followers
May 24, 2025
To be fair, I didn’t read the first two in this series (though this is apparently a prequel so it shouldn’t matter much). There was some sweetness to this story, but overall I often didn’t really understand what was trying to be communicated in conversations.
Like they would be talking about something and I would follow and then they’d say something that seemed totally unrelated and I felt like it was missing something. I think I have a bit of a learning disability for fantasy books.

I also would have liked a bit more steam, but I am a dog that way.

Finally, with the caveat that I started skimming pretty fast and stopping trying halfway into it, the epilogue didn’t seem to be about this couple at all, so if you haven’t read, and don’t intend to read, the first two books, skip it.
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413 reviews
June 22, 2025
4.75 stars ⭐️

There’s just something about these barbarian type books that have me so tickled 😂 I love how Lan is known as the Wild Dog but has a literal heart of gold both for Fen and his people. Also WE NEED TO BRING YEARNING BACK?? Those months when Fen was waiting for Lan to come and get him from the safety of one of their holdings had me smiling like a loon 😭 This man literally conquered the entire world for him and went back as soon as he could even in the midst of a storm. I just loved these two so much and THE PRAISE?? Calling Fen flower, good cub and good boy? LIKE GOODBYE I’D FOLD TOO. I definitely needed more since the ending was so abrupt and the epilogue doesn’t seem to have anything to do with them 😭
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