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174 pages, Kindle Edition
First published April 4, 2014
Flynn looks proud and triumphant. “Acting like I don’t care.” He nods. “That’ll do the trick. Soon enough, you’ll feel wounded and annoyed because I’ve stopped asking.”
What the fuck. I can’t help but laugh. “You’re not supposed to explain your schemes.”
“Well…” His eyes flicker to the tablet. “I don’t want you to actually believe I don’t care.”
"Hi, my name is Flynn. Would you like to pretend to be me and whack it in a hotel window for my voyeuristic viewers? For $1,000 bucks."Cory needs the money more badly than he needs his dignity to remain in his rat-infested youth hostel home, so he reluctantly agrees to touch himself, down there, for public consumption. (Yes, the hotel / towel / window scene was definitely HOT.)
➜ Cory, the klutz, being more "klutzy". We're repeatedly *told* that he's a klutz, but didn't *see* much proof of his complete and utter 'klutzdom' very often. Please don't tell me, show me.
➜ Flynn, the awkward blurter, being more "blurty". His Google searches and lists were hilarious, but a bit infrequent, so including more on those would have been great.
➜ The voyeurism and exhibitionism hook of the story getting a few more scenes on-page, because the fairly limited number that we did see were *HAWT*.