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The Bit In Between
There are seven billion people in the world. This is the story of two of them.
After an unfortunate incident in an airport lounge involving an immovable customs officer, a full jar of sun-dried tomatoes, quite a lot of vomit, and the capricious hand of fate, Oliver meets Alison. In spite of this less than romantic start, Oliver falls in love with her.
Immediately.
Inexplicably.
Irrevocably.
With no other place to be, Alison follows Oliver to the Solomon Islands where he is planning to write his much-anticipated second novel. But as Oliver's story begins to take shape, odd things start to happen and he senses there may be more hinging on his novel than the burden of expectation. As he gets deeper into the manuscript and Alison moves further away from him, Oliver finds himself clinging to a narrative that may not end with 'happily ever after'.
After an unfortunate incident in an airport lounge involving an immovable customs officer, a full jar of sun-dried tomatoes, quite a lot of vomit, and the capricious hand of fate, Oliver meets Alison. In spite of this less than romantic start, Oliver falls in love with her.
Immediately.
Inexplicably.
Irrevocably.
With no other place to be, Alison follows Oliver to the Solomon Islands where he is planning to write his much-anticipated second novel. But as Oliver's story begins to take shape, odd things start to happen and he senses there may be more hinging on his novel than the burden of expectation. As he gets deeper into the manuscript and Alison moves further away from him, Oliver finds himself clinging to a narrative that may not end with 'happily ever after'.
272 pages, Kindle Edition
First published August 1, 2015
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About the author
Claire Varley
9 books7 followersClaire Varley grew up on the Bellarine Peninsula and lives in Melbourne. She has sold blueberries, worked in a haunted cinema, won an encouragement award for being terrible at telemarketing, taught English in rural China, and coordinated community development projects in remote Solomon Islands.
Her short stories and poems have appeared in Australian Love Stories ('A Greek Tragedy'), Australian Love Poems ('Beatitude'), Seizure online ('Poll', 'Hallow'), page seventeen ('Once', 'Hamlet, Remus and Two Guys Named Steve'), Sotto ('in the name of') and [Untitled] ('The Nicholas Name', 'Behind Tram Lines').
The Bit In Between is her first novel.
Her short stories and poems have appeared in Australian Love Stories ('A Greek Tragedy'), Australian Love Poems ('Beatitude'), Seizure online ('Poll', 'Hallow'), page seventeen ('Once', 'Hamlet, Remus and Two Guys Named Steve'), Sotto ('in the name of') and [Untitled] ('The Nicholas Name', 'Behind Tram Lines').
The Bit In Between is her first novel.
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October 16, 2017
This book has an attention-grabbing opening sequence, which made me laugh and repelled me in equal parts. Certainly, it got me engaged with the story from the get-go.
Basically the book charts the love affair of Alison and Oliver, two 20-something Australians who have been travelling overseas and have had their hearts broken by earlier loves gone wrong. They end up travelling to Honiara, in the Solomon Islands, because Oliver, a budding author, wants to set his next book there. Although they fall into their relationship, they grow to love each other deeply. They also fall in love with aspects of life in the Solomons, and with the locals.
Oliver has a serious case of "writers block", and wastes a lot of time and energy alternatively lying around the house or pursuing a friendship with the dodgy American ex-pat Rick. Meanwhile the resourceful Alison gets involved with local women and their social and political issues. Her best friend, the gracious Sera, is beautifully drawn by the author.
This book interested me on several levels. I think it is refreshing to read contemporary stories of Australians engaging with near Pacific nations, societies that are in our neighbourhood but of which we know very little. Secondly, I think the author exposes some of the truths and fallacies about the craft of book writing, as her character Oliver struggles to get his work into any kind of shape. Furthermore, I think it is a well-written exploration of what works and doesn't work in relationships, love and life (life, according to Oliver, being the bit in between birth and death!)
The prose is well-crafted and immediately accessible. The story is told with a gentle dose of humour. It has a light touch, making it thoroughly enjoyable, but which did not take away from some of the more serious issues under examination, such as infant mortality in less developed countries, alcohol abuse, and dealing with self-absorbed narcissists.
A solid 4 star rating is deserved.
Basically the book charts the love affair of Alison and Oliver, two 20-something Australians who have been travelling overseas and have had their hearts broken by earlier loves gone wrong. They end up travelling to Honiara, in the Solomon Islands, because Oliver, a budding author, wants to set his next book there. Although they fall into their relationship, they grow to love each other deeply. They also fall in love with aspects of life in the Solomons, and with the locals.
Oliver has a serious case of "writers block", and wastes a lot of time and energy alternatively lying around the house or pursuing a friendship with the dodgy American ex-pat Rick. Meanwhile the resourceful Alison gets involved with local women and their social and political issues. Her best friend, the gracious Sera, is beautifully drawn by the author.
This book interested me on several levels. I think it is refreshing to read contemporary stories of Australians engaging with near Pacific nations, societies that are in our neighbourhood but of which we know very little. Secondly, I think the author exposes some of the truths and fallacies about the craft of book writing, as her character Oliver struggles to get his work into any kind of shape. Furthermore, I think it is a well-written exploration of what works and doesn't work in relationships, love and life (life, according to Oliver, being the bit in between birth and death!)
The prose is well-crafted and immediately accessible. The story is told with a gentle dose of humour. It has a light touch, making it thoroughly enjoyable, but which did not take away from some of the more serious issues under examination, such as infant mortality in less developed countries, alcohol abuse, and dealing with self-absorbed narcissists.
A solid 4 star rating is deserved.
August 19, 2015
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The Bit In Between is a fun, vibrant book about two artistic beings – a poet and writer, who meet on a plane, and decide to travel to the Solomon Islands for writing inspiration. The writing was really easy to get into, and it felt like a really light island comedy romance, with eccentric characters, the island life style and a meaningful story.
The novel is light hearted with some fantastic dialogue between the characters. Alison seemingly has no direction in life following artistic men wherever the tide takes them. In the past, she’s been swayed by her Greek god-like ex-boyfriend Ed, and when she meets Oliver, she’s attracted by his talent as a published writer. Befriending Sera at the Solomon Islands was a turning point for Alison, and she really begins to grow as a character. Her journey tells us that even if you have no direction in life, sometimes it takes going out of your comfort zone to figure out what that is.
Oliver’s writing process was an interesting nod towards writers. He gathers ideas from his personal situation between himself and Alison, writing people that he meets and situations that they encounter into his novel. From becoming a shut in as he furiously writes drafts to, supporting his bromance friend Rick, Oliver’s creative journey felt like an authentic one. Later in the book, I thought it was going the magical realism route, but I’m glad it didn’t follow this path.
The political, cultural, and traditional tide of the Solomon Islands is captured in the book. I really felt the heart of these people and of the culture, and it was captured in an interesting way through Alison’s involvement with Sera and the people that they encountered. It also opened my eyes to the expat community and how they make a difference to a country, but are so far away from home.
Throughout the book, The Bit In Between gives us brief snippets of people’s lives that they encounter. From expats, to diplomats, to island men and wives, it was interesting seeing the different lives that people lead and how they came to be there. They pretty much have no impact on the book or it’s story though.
The Bit In Between is a comedic contemporary romance between two quirky individuals. It features eccentric characters, the creative journey of drafting a manuscript and a close look at the Solomon Island’s culture. Books that open our eyes to new experiences and different cultures are always a plus in my book, and The Bit In Between did exactly that.
I received a review copy from the publisher in exchange for an honest review.
The Bit In Between is a fun, vibrant book about two artistic beings – a poet and writer, who meet on a plane, and decide to travel to the Solomon Islands for writing inspiration. The writing was really easy to get into, and it felt like a really light island comedy romance, with eccentric characters, the island life style and a meaningful story.
The novel is light hearted with some fantastic dialogue between the characters. Alison seemingly has no direction in life following artistic men wherever the tide takes them. In the past, she’s been swayed by her Greek god-like ex-boyfriend Ed, and when she meets Oliver, she’s attracted by his talent as a published writer. Befriending Sera at the Solomon Islands was a turning point for Alison, and she really begins to grow as a character. Her journey tells us that even if you have no direction in life, sometimes it takes going out of your comfort zone to figure out what that is.
Oliver’s writing process was an interesting nod towards writers. He gathers ideas from his personal situation between himself and Alison, writing people that he meets and situations that they encounter into his novel. From becoming a shut in as he furiously writes drafts to, supporting his bromance friend Rick, Oliver’s creative journey felt like an authentic one. Later in the book, I thought it was going the magical realism route, but I’m glad it didn’t follow this path.
The political, cultural, and traditional tide of the Solomon Islands is captured in the book. I really felt the heart of these people and of the culture, and it was captured in an interesting way through Alison’s involvement with Sera and the people that they encountered. It also opened my eyes to the expat community and how they make a difference to a country, but are so far away from home.
Throughout the book, The Bit In Between gives us brief snippets of people’s lives that they encounter. From expats, to diplomats, to island men and wives, it was interesting seeing the different lives that people lead and how they came to be there. They pretty much have no impact on the book or it’s story though.
The Bit In Between is a comedic contemporary romance between two quirky individuals. It features eccentric characters, the creative journey of drafting a manuscript and a close look at the Solomon Island’s culture. Books that open our eyes to new experiences and different cultures are always a plus in my book, and The Bit In Between did exactly that.
I received a review copy from the publisher in exchange for an honest review.
July 31, 2015
This book was easy to read. I really liked Varley's writing style. I could sympathise to an extent with the character's lack of purpose & feeling that everyone else has life sorted (I still feel that way).
It would make a great switch the brain off book to read on holiday but here are the issues I had with it:
1) The three main male characters (Oliver, Rick & Ed) were all completely self involved wankers. Seriously, why is she having a dilemma over Ed? He might be good looking but every time he opens his mouth I want to either laugh at him or slap him. Oliver is hardly any better and the sections of his "writing" sound like a bad historical romance.
2) The little interludes where we learn the back story of every minor character we come across - is this to tempt us with the far more interesting stories we could have read? And also all but one of these stories was either depressing &/or tragic - is the point to show us everyone regrets things / has disappointments?
3)The whole magic / story affecting life plot point. Why? Just Why? I can accept this in YA to an extent, but this just seems lazy.
4)The ending.
It would make a great switch the brain off book to read on holiday but here are the issues I had with it:
1) The three main male characters (Oliver, Rick & Ed) were all completely self involved wankers. Seriously, why is she having a dilemma over Ed? He might be good looking but every time he opens his mouth I want to either laugh at him or slap him. Oliver is hardly any better and the sections of his "writing" sound like a bad historical romance.
2) The little interludes where we learn the back story of every minor character we come across - is this to tempt us with the far more interesting stories we could have read? And also all but one of these stories was either depressing &/or tragic - is the point to show us everyone regrets things / has disappointments?
3)The whole magic / story affecting life plot point. Why? Just Why? I can accept this in YA to an extent, but this just seems lazy.
4)The ending.
January 25, 2022
Super fast paced and entertaining but it felt like a chore to read and idk why.
I loved the element (that I can’t say due to spoilers) that was thrown in the last quarter of the book
Sera is a character I didn’t know I would love so much but wow, I want my own sera :(
I loved the element (that I can’t say due to spoilers) that was thrown in the last quarter of the book
Sera is a character I didn’t know I would love so much but wow, I want my own sera :(
September 21, 2023
Random little read. I liked it.
September 6, 2015
I was particularly keen to read this book as I spent some time in the Solomon Islands in 2002. I was the Australian-based project manager for a health project and travelled there 4-5 times over the course of the year.
I found myself constantly transported back to the (ocean-side and hillside) houses I visited when there and the busy streets I walked as Varley creates a strong sense of place.
I enjoyed the story arc as Alison settled into life in the Solomons and Oliver struggled with his novel… eventually finding inspiration via Alison’s exploits.
The Bit in Between is essentially a love story, but it’s set in a complex and changing world which impacts on our characters…. well, on one of them and that’s probably why Alison and Oliver start to untangle.
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3.5 - 4 stars
I found myself constantly transported back to the (ocean-side and hillside) houses I visited when there and the busy streets I walked as Varley creates a strong sense of place.
I enjoyed the story arc as Alison settled into life in the Solomons and Oliver struggled with his novel… eventually finding inspiration via Alison’s exploits.
The Bit in Between is essentially a love story, but it’s set in a complex and changing world which impacts on our characters…. well, on one of them and that’s probably why Alison and Oliver start to untangle.
Read the full review on my blog: http://www.debbish.com/books-literatu...
3.5 - 4 stars
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August 15, 2015An Advance Reading Copy was provided by Pan Macmillan Australia in exchange for an honest review.
DNF-ed at page 133.
I did try. Really, really hard. This is only the third physical ARC I've ever received in my life and I appreciate the publisher's generosity so much.
But I can't read it any further. I never thought I'd DNF-ed this because the first chapter was so well done. Unfortunately, following that it reads like a non-fiction book delivered with unfunny and disjointed narration.
DNF-ed at page 133.
I did try. Really, really hard. This is only the third physical ARC I've ever received in my life and I appreciate the publisher's generosity so much.
But I can't read it any further. I never thought I'd DNF-ed this because the first chapter was so well done. Unfortunately, following that it reads like a non-fiction book delivered with unfunny and disjointed narration.
September 16, 2019
A subtle tale of a developing relationship between two expats in their mid-twenties set in the Solomon Islands. The characterisation is truly special, and the writing is cleverly humorous. Brilliant storytelling.
January 18, 2016
I've received this novel through Netgalley, many thanks to Pan Macmillan Australia for the opportunity to read and review.
This novel was wonderfully refreshing, quirky, albeit, at times a bit slow.
The first chapter is fantastic and it stars off beautifully:
"This is how it starts. A young man sits alone in an airport lounge. The seat beside him is empty. Someone sits down. This is how it starts and every time it starts like this. In every universe. In every dimension. In every possible version of this story, this is the start. It starts like this because life is nothing but a series of tides and waves, the constant movement of a vast ocean propelled by the sun, the moon and what scientists swear to us isn't magic. Most times they trickle, sometimes they surge, and every so often the earth realigns and the ocean responds in kind."
I was captivated. The first few pages are beautiful.
"There are no tsunamis in this story - no seismic vibrations or geological cataclysms - but there are waves". This phrase describes this novel perfectly, as it's not about any major dramatic twists in the main characters' lives, but it's about life and its occasional waves.
The Bit in Between is the story of Oliver and Alison, both in their mid twenties, both going through some sort of life crisis. Oliver is an anxious writer, whereas Alison is impulsive and doesn't really know who she is or what she wants.
Their first encounter is very amusing, albeit, not for poor Oliver. Their accidental meeting in an airport lounge turns into a relationship. So Alison ends up following Oliver to the Solomon islands, where he is going to write his second novel.
Life in the Solomons is slow; Oliver is trying to write and for weeks he doesn't come up with anything worth keeping. Meanwhile, Alison just wonders around, exploring the area, shopping for food. Little by little, she immerses herself into the local culture, thanks mostly to her new local friend, Sera. Meanwhile, Oliver makes friends with an American expat, Rick.
Life drags on, Oliver and Alison start having little squabbles here and there. Oliver seems to have found inspiration, which is mostly drawn from Alison and his life in the Solomons. Oliver has a feeling that Alison is going to leave him. Will she?
Claire Varley's debut novel is very well written, funny at times and insightful.
I loved that Ms Varley's painting of the Solomons is done without prejudice and at the same time there's no painting over with bright colours where there shouldn't be any.
The character development is expertly done. Both protagonists are incredibly realistic, their struggles felt authentic, and many will probably identify. Even the title is extremely well chosen.
Why I'm not giving this 5-stars? It's because I was kind of puzzled by these back stories for many of the transient and inconsequential characters: a cab driver, an aunt, a lady in a cafe etc. I really couldn't see the point. The only thing I could come up with was that the author wanted to show that everybody has a story, which is true, but still, I thought they were distracting and a bit annoying, especially once I'd realised I was never going to come across those characters again.
Regardless, this is an impressive first novel, from a very talented writer. Looking forward to reading the next novel from Claire Varley.
Recommended: To readers who enjoy realistic, finding yourself stories.
Cover: 5 stars
This novel was wonderfully refreshing, quirky, albeit, at times a bit slow.
The first chapter is fantastic and it stars off beautifully:
"This is how it starts. A young man sits alone in an airport lounge. The seat beside him is empty. Someone sits down. This is how it starts and every time it starts like this. In every universe. In every dimension. In every possible version of this story, this is the start. It starts like this because life is nothing but a series of tides and waves, the constant movement of a vast ocean propelled by the sun, the moon and what scientists swear to us isn't magic. Most times they trickle, sometimes they surge, and every so often the earth realigns and the ocean responds in kind."
I was captivated. The first few pages are beautiful.
"There are no tsunamis in this story - no seismic vibrations or geological cataclysms - but there are waves". This phrase describes this novel perfectly, as it's not about any major dramatic twists in the main characters' lives, but it's about life and its occasional waves.
The Bit in Between is the story of Oliver and Alison, both in their mid twenties, both going through some sort of life crisis. Oliver is an anxious writer, whereas Alison is impulsive and doesn't really know who she is or what she wants.
Their first encounter is very amusing, albeit, not for poor Oliver. Their accidental meeting in an airport lounge turns into a relationship. So Alison ends up following Oliver to the Solomon islands, where he is going to write his second novel.
Life in the Solomons is slow; Oliver is trying to write and for weeks he doesn't come up with anything worth keeping. Meanwhile, Alison just wonders around, exploring the area, shopping for food. Little by little, she immerses herself into the local culture, thanks mostly to her new local friend, Sera. Meanwhile, Oliver makes friends with an American expat, Rick.
Life drags on, Oliver and Alison start having little squabbles here and there. Oliver seems to have found inspiration, which is mostly drawn from Alison and his life in the Solomons. Oliver has a feeling that Alison is going to leave him. Will she?
Claire Varley's debut novel is very well written, funny at times and insightful.
I loved that Ms Varley's painting of the Solomons is done without prejudice and at the same time there's no painting over with bright colours where there shouldn't be any.
The character development is expertly done. Both protagonists are incredibly realistic, their struggles felt authentic, and many will probably identify. Even the title is extremely well chosen.
Why I'm not giving this 5-stars? It's because I was kind of puzzled by these back stories for many of the transient and inconsequential characters: a cab driver, an aunt, a lady in a cafe etc. I really couldn't see the point. The only thing I could come up with was that the author wanted to show that everybody has a story, which is true, but still, I thought they were distracting and a bit annoying, especially once I'd realised I was never going to come across those characters again.
Regardless, this is an impressive first novel, from a very talented writer. Looking forward to reading the next novel from Claire Varley.
Recommended: To readers who enjoy realistic, finding yourself stories.
Cover: 5 stars
August 25, 2015
I REALLY liked this book actually.
It was like this massive breath of fresh air. The romance isn't too heavy but very realistic. The characters are fantastically independent, their aspirations and willingness to help others is admirable and the writing itself is unique.
After that creepy David Tennant gif, you should have definitely accepted the fact that you will like this book.
This romance starts off hilariously in an airport and involves a girl vomiting on a guy, some ugly t-shirts and somewhere along the way, YOU WILL FALL IN LOVE WITH THESE CHARACTERS. There's something so special about them. Oliver is kind (a rare trait in today's world), a writer and the sort of person who at first glance may seem average but has so much more lingering underneath. Alison is the sort of person who constantly thinks of others. Throughout this book, she is always helping someone, whether it's a pregnant woman, a mother, a sister, just someone. I admired both these characters so much. I admired their silent determination to write a book, make a difference, achieve their aspirations. I think many readers will find themselves inspired by Oliver and Alison.
Their romance is equally inspiring. There's a serious light-heartedness. That's an oxymoron that doesn't really make sense but what I'm trying to say is that its stable but it kind of isn't at the same time. It's a very healthy relationship but the only thing that stands in their way is their own individual determination to continue their own dreams. I think this should've frustrated me but it honestly didn't. It only made me admire them more.
There isn't really a distinct complication to this book like you get with most YA contemporary novels. Instead, you - the reader - are along for the ride, watching this relationship and the character's lives unfold before you. Oliver's writing blocks and Alison's tight friendships with the people she helps and even her own and poetry journey will be a vibrant and entertaining story you will enjoy.
I don't want to spoil you all but the ending just somehow feels very right. It left you with hope and allowed the characters to come alive in their own way.
Plus this book is set in the Solomon Islands. SOLOMON ISLANDS!!! Australian authors never fail to amaze me. We are a seriously talented bunch. The rest of the world (especially America) better watch out!
The Bit in Between is a seriously good book with its admirable characters and a plot line and setting that will just give you those good feelings. It's a relatively short read that will capture you from the very beginning with vomit and ending with satisfaction.
October 25, 2017
There were great moments in this book, but it didn't pull together for me. It seemed the author was trying too hard to insert true moments of her own travel experiences into the book, at the expense of narrative. The genre also changes strangely towards the end of the book, and left me wondering what I had just read.
The device used of writing snippets from different character's perspectives was interesting, but just didn't suit this narrative, and in fact this device was dropped altogether in the second half of the book. I feel like perhaps the author should have written a collection of short stories from different perspectives, as this seemed to be where her interest lied.
Overall, one to probably skip.
The device used of writing snippets from different character's perspectives was interesting, but just didn't suit this narrative, and in fact this device was dropped altogether in the second half of the book. I feel like perhaps the author should have written a collection of short stories from different perspectives, as this seemed to be where her interest lied.
Overall, one to probably skip.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
July 25, 2021
I really enjoyed reading this book, it’s uncomplicated, free flowing and easy to relate too. Refreshing to be able to find a story that keeps one entertained from start to finish and without a predictable ending. I really hope Varley has another book up her sleeve.
February 13, 2018
It starts well but doesn’t quite deliver.
March 26, 2018
It was OK, I hated the beginning but it got better towards the end. The random character POV paragraphs were nice. I wasn't rooting for the love story though.
June 4, 2018
An interesting story about finding out who you are. Not sure if I really liked the ending but it was an easy read.
February 22, 2022
Some ideas were good, but I found it a bit tedious.
August 13, 2015
I received a copy of this title from the publisher for review.
Ten Second Synopsis:
Alison and Ollie strike out together on a precarious relationship after a chance meeting. Both will find out that life relies on decision rather than destiny.
Now I know that I have a blanket policy of disliking romance books on sight – it comes from having a heart of stone, you see – but I do like to give an affirmative response when asked to review new release contemporary Australian books. This is mostly because I like to keep at least half an eye on what many people are picking up when they wander into a bookshop. So while I was interested in the Solomon Islands setting and the sun-dried tomatoes, particularly, I did have a certain sense of trepidation on entering this story, given that it is advertised as a love story of sorts.
I was happy to discover, however, that The Bit in Between is much more a story about relationships than romance. Phew. Oliver and Alison are an unusual pair, who sort of fall into a spontaneous relationship as much out of a shared sense of ennui as anything else. Oliver is a semi-successful published writer who hates what his publisher did to his debut novel, while Alison is adrift after an unsuccessful relationship with an attractive, narcissistic quasi-poet. I will admit that I didn’t particularly warm to Oliver at all throughout the book, but I became quite fond of Alison by the end.
Once the happy pair decamp to the Solomon Islands, the planned setting of Oliver’s anticipated tour de force, we are introduced to two characters who have the potential to be the most annoying creatures in contemporary literature. Rick is a loud-mouthed, thrill-seeking, hard-drinking American working for an NGO, who befriends Oliver and becomes an entrenched feature in the lives of the two Australians. Ed is Alison’s aforementioned ex-boyfriend who arrives in the Solomons unexpectedly and creates a fair bit of havoc (as well as some truly dreadful poetry).
Out of the two, I much preferred Rick. His interactions never failed to provide a bit of comic relief and I particularly enjoyed his plans to make his (as yet unnamed) band a sound to be reckoned with in the Pacific region and beyond. Similarly, his bout of malaria was quite amusing in both its outrageous enactment and the fact that one couldn’t help but indulge in a bit of schadenfreude. Ed, however, was just a pain in the proverbial. I have to agree with Doris, in that I didn’t find the storyline between Alison and Ed convincing at all, especially considering Alison’s personal growth throughout her time helping local women in the Solomons.
The part of the book that I enjoyed the most was the inclusion of mini-narratives about minor characters – taxi drivers, passers-by, shop assistants – that gave a hint of these characters’ back stories and provided a bit of an interlude during transitions in the main story.
The ending to the story is quite ambiguous. I suspect that a particular interpretation is somewhat implied, but I was quite happy to deliberately ignore that interpretation and craft a much more satisfying (to me) ending in my mind. I think people will take what they want to out of the ending, depending on how they feel about the characters and relationships overall.
All in all, this was a strange beast of a read. It has elements of romance, social issues, personal growth, destiny versus decision-making, grief, loss, happiness, achievement and just a touch of something that could be magical realism. For all that though, the fact that I only really connected with one of the main characters made the read not all that it could have been. On the other hand, the variety of elements in the story, and the unexpectedness (unlikeliness?) of some of the events will keep readers on their toes in what will certainly be a great pick for those looking for a holiday romance novel with a bit of real life thrown in.
Ten Second Synopsis:
Alison and Ollie strike out together on a precarious relationship after a chance meeting. Both will find out that life relies on decision rather than destiny.
Now I know that I have a blanket policy of disliking romance books on sight – it comes from having a heart of stone, you see – but I do like to give an affirmative response when asked to review new release contemporary Australian books. This is mostly because I like to keep at least half an eye on what many people are picking up when they wander into a bookshop. So while I was interested in the Solomon Islands setting and the sun-dried tomatoes, particularly, I did have a certain sense of trepidation on entering this story, given that it is advertised as a love story of sorts.
I was happy to discover, however, that The Bit in Between is much more a story about relationships than romance. Phew. Oliver and Alison are an unusual pair, who sort of fall into a spontaneous relationship as much out of a shared sense of ennui as anything else. Oliver is a semi-successful published writer who hates what his publisher did to his debut novel, while Alison is adrift after an unsuccessful relationship with an attractive, narcissistic quasi-poet. I will admit that I didn’t particularly warm to Oliver at all throughout the book, but I became quite fond of Alison by the end.
Once the happy pair decamp to the Solomon Islands, the planned setting of Oliver’s anticipated tour de force, we are introduced to two characters who have the potential to be the most annoying creatures in contemporary literature. Rick is a loud-mouthed, thrill-seeking, hard-drinking American working for an NGO, who befriends Oliver and becomes an entrenched feature in the lives of the two Australians. Ed is Alison’s aforementioned ex-boyfriend who arrives in the Solomons unexpectedly and creates a fair bit of havoc (as well as some truly dreadful poetry).
Out of the two, I much preferred Rick. His interactions never failed to provide a bit of comic relief and I particularly enjoyed his plans to make his (as yet unnamed) band a sound to be reckoned with in the Pacific region and beyond. Similarly, his bout of malaria was quite amusing in both its outrageous enactment and the fact that one couldn’t help but indulge in a bit of schadenfreude. Ed, however, was just a pain in the proverbial. I have to agree with Doris, in that I didn’t find the storyline between Alison and Ed convincing at all, especially considering Alison’s personal growth throughout her time helping local women in the Solomons.
The part of the book that I enjoyed the most was the inclusion of mini-narratives about minor characters – taxi drivers, passers-by, shop assistants – that gave a hint of these characters’ back stories and provided a bit of an interlude during transitions in the main story.
The ending to the story is quite ambiguous. I suspect that a particular interpretation is somewhat implied, but I was quite happy to deliberately ignore that interpretation and craft a much more satisfying (to me) ending in my mind. I think people will take what they want to out of the ending, depending on how they feel about the characters and relationships overall.
All in all, this was a strange beast of a read. It has elements of romance, social issues, personal growth, destiny versus decision-making, grief, loss, happiness, achievement and just a touch of something that could be magical realism. For all that though, the fact that I only really connected with one of the main characters made the read not all that it could have been. On the other hand, the variety of elements in the story, and the unexpectedness (unlikeliness?) of some of the events will keep readers on their toes in what will certainly be a great pick for those looking for a holiday romance novel with a bit of real life thrown in.
August 9, 2015
The Bit In Between by Claire Varley asks the question, what happens after the initial flush of giddy romance and lust is over in a relationship? How can you get to the happily ever after? Will your relationship even make it that far? In need of a good dose of reality in my next read, I picked this book up not really knowing what to expect – was it going to be serious and reflective? But after seeing how Oliver and Alison meet (she throws up on him in an airport after downing an entire jar of sundried tomatoes to prove a point at Customs), I knew that this book would have a quirky side to make me grin in places. Varley’s manuscript was picked up by Pan Macmillan from the slush pile, so I knew that there would be something special in the story.
In fact, there are quite a lot of great moments in the story. Varley has a talent for romantic comedy (the airport vomit scene is only the tip of the iceberg) but can also detail sensitive moments well. What I loved about The Bit In Between is that it’s not just Oliver and Alison’s story. The minor characters that they come into contact with also get a moment to tell their story, what haunts them or what makes them happy. It’s like people watching but with the ability to read minds. Varley captures that minor character and succinctly tells the reader something that lifts them from the person in the street to a real person with hopes and dreams. Varley is just as strong when it comes to characterisation – Oliver and Alison are nicely fleshed out with their strengths and concerns. (Oliver is a writer with one successful book behind him, however he’s distressed that he was forced to change the ending to a happy one. His new book will be on his own unhappy terms, if only he could get the words on to the page. Alison’s somewhat of a drifter and her spontaneous nature has found her travelling for love on numerous occasions. But she feels the need to create and leave her mark on the world).
The plot of The Bit In Between is quite simple, but executed well in a more unusual setting. Caught up in the first flush of love, Oliver and Alison decide to live in the Solomon Islands while he writes his book. A tropical paradise sounds wonderfully romantic, but they are soon caught up in reality – the monotony of housework and being in each other’s pockets. Yet it is the making of Alison as she makes friends and starts to help young women get jobs, write resumes and improve their English. It’s Oliver that is left in the same world, alone in the house all day. When he tries to make friends, it’s the opportunity to meet some of the quirkier members of the expat community. There’s also some interesting subplots with the appearance of Alison’s ex-boyfriend, Ed and Oliver starting to worry that the narrative of his book is guiding his and Alison’s real lives. This last part didn’t really work as well for me because I didn’t feel it fit in with the other themes of the story. The ending of the story was also not what I’d expected, but in a good way. I liked the reality and the hope that it left for the reader. Some might think it’s a letdown, but for me it was just one of these things that happens in real life.
The setting of the Solomon Islands was also interesting – it’s not a place I’d read about in fiction before and learning more about the people and their way of living (especially through the minor character vignettes) made me realise how little I knew about it. The expat behaviour was a nice juxtaposition and helped with the theme of feeling lost, a kind of ‘what next?’. The writing is honest but it’s characterisation where Claire Varley shines in her debut novel. This is a great new read that will have you chuckling and crying in places.
Thank you to Pan Macmillan Australia for the copy of this book. My review is honest.
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In fact, there are quite a lot of great moments in the story. Varley has a talent for romantic comedy (the airport vomit scene is only the tip of the iceberg) but can also detail sensitive moments well. What I loved about The Bit In Between is that it’s not just Oliver and Alison’s story. The minor characters that they come into contact with also get a moment to tell their story, what haunts them or what makes them happy. It’s like people watching but with the ability to read minds. Varley captures that minor character and succinctly tells the reader something that lifts them from the person in the street to a real person with hopes and dreams. Varley is just as strong when it comes to characterisation – Oliver and Alison are nicely fleshed out with their strengths and concerns. (Oliver is a writer with one successful book behind him, however he’s distressed that he was forced to change the ending to a happy one. His new book will be on his own unhappy terms, if only he could get the words on to the page. Alison’s somewhat of a drifter and her spontaneous nature has found her travelling for love on numerous occasions. But she feels the need to create and leave her mark on the world).
The plot of The Bit In Between is quite simple, but executed well in a more unusual setting. Caught up in the first flush of love, Oliver and Alison decide to live in the Solomon Islands while he writes his book. A tropical paradise sounds wonderfully romantic, but they are soon caught up in reality – the monotony of housework and being in each other’s pockets. Yet it is the making of Alison as she makes friends and starts to help young women get jobs, write resumes and improve their English. It’s Oliver that is left in the same world, alone in the house all day. When he tries to make friends, it’s the opportunity to meet some of the quirkier members of the expat community. There’s also some interesting subplots with the appearance of Alison’s ex-boyfriend, Ed and Oliver starting to worry that the narrative of his book is guiding his and Alison’s real lives. This last part didn’t really work as well for me because I didn’t feel it fit in with the other themes of the story. The ending of the story was also not what I’d expected, but in a good way. I liked the reality and the hope that it left for the reader. Some might think it’s a letdown, but for me it was just one of these things that happens in real life.
The setting of the Solomon Islands was also interesting – it’s not a place I’d read about in fiction before and learning more about the people and their way of living (especially through the minor character vignettes) made me realise how little I knew about it. The expat behaviour was a nice juxtaposition and helped with the theme of feeling lost, a kind of ‘what next?’. The writing is honest but it’s characterisation where Claire Varley shines in her debut novel. This is a great new read that will have you chuckling and crying in places.
Thank you to Pan Macmillan Australia for the copy of this book. My review is honest.
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September 30, 2015
4 and a half STARS........Published by Pan Macmillan. 263 pages.
I enjoyed this book. I enjoyed it very much indeed.
But before we get into why, let me warn you that there will be a few spoilers and a lot of adjectives.
Before this book was released, I was asked if I would like to write a review. I'm a writer and I have a long established blog that occasionally writes reviews. Then, they promptly forgot about me, but to their credit, when I pointed this out they sent me an actual book to read and I am very pleased that they did.
When the initial request came in, I was up to my armpits in work and I was fighting a deadline to publish my two latest books, TRUST, and SLIGHTLY SPOOKY STORIES, but I was intrigued to read that this book came into being because it was 'plucked' from the publisher's 'slush pile'. My early manuscripts languished on a few slush piles, so I have a vague idea how it would feel to be 'discovered' in this way.
I can see how the person [I wanted to say 'unfortunate person'] who had the job of reading these manuscripts felt. If they were anything like me they would have taken a few pages to get into the rhythm of the book and then they would have said something like, "Wow, this is really good." They may even have stopped what they were doing and grabbed the mail boy as he sailed by and got him to read a bit. "I'm not imagining this am I? This is really good, isn't it?" I had visions of someone who looked a bit like Hope Lang in 'The Best of Everything' taking home manuscripts and reading them on the train on her way into Manhattan, except that she would be on a train heading into Sydney or Melbourne [I don't actually know where Pan Macmillan people hang out, but I'm hoping that it is in Melbourne.]
Okay, so I'm a romantic. I know that there was probably an agent involved [they get a credit in acknowledgments] and this isn't a Cinderella story, but the idea did get me interested.
Being an Australian writer I like to support Australian writers, but I would not normally head for this kind of story, but I have to say that the genres are less important than the talent of the writer and Claire, in my not-so-humble opinion, is a very good writer.
Let me explain what I mean by that.
I'm one of those readers [and writers] who loves characters. Plots are okay, but seriously, who can be bothered with all the twists and turns! A solid plot that lets us readers discover the characters that heave into view is my idea of heaven.
I instantly fell in love with the mini-biographies that Claire uses. So often, the bit-parts in a novel get little respect. These characters are ALWAYS of interest to me [my short stories are full of them].
The age group of the two main character is far removed from my own, but I do remember being that age and I do remember what it felt like trying to make your way in the world and waiting for the day when you felt like a grown up. Ms. Varley captured this masterfully.
I won't spoil the ending for you, but I must make a few comments. Firstly, it is brave and completely in character with the rest of the work. It left me wondering and we [I read it aloud to my wife over a period of evenings] found that the story and the characters and the ending stayed with us; we needed to talk about what we had experienced.
I am very much looking forward to reading more of Claire Varley's work. I hear a lot about how there are not enough opportunities for women writers. It isn't about gender, it's about the ability to engage the reader, and Claire Varley has that ability.
I enjoyed this book. I enjoyed it very much indeed.
But before we get into why, let me warn you that there will be a few spoilers and a lot of adjectives.
Before this book was released, I was asked if I would like to write a review. I'm a writer and I have a long established blog that occasionally writes reviews. Then, they promptly forgot about me, but to their credit, when I pointed this out they sent me an actual book to read and I am very pleased that they did.
When the initial request came in, I was up to my armpits in work and I was fighting a deadline to publish my two latest books, TRUST, and SLIGHTLY SPOOKY STORIES, but I was intrigued to read that this book came into being because it was 'plucked' from the publisher's 'slush pile'. My early manuscripts languished on a few slush piles, so I have a vague idea how it would feel to be 'discovered' in this way.
I can see how the person [I wanted to say 'unfortunate person'] who had the job of reading these manuscripts felt. If they were anything like me they would have taken a few pages to get into the rhythm of the book and then they would have said something like, "Wow, this is really good." They may even have stopped what they were doing and grabbed the mail boy as he sailed by and got him to read a bit. "I'm not imagining this am I? This is really good, isn't it?" I had visions of someone who looked a bit like Hope Lang in 'The Best of Everything' taking home manuscripts and reading them on the train on her way into Manhattan, except that she would be on a train heading into Sydney or Melbourne [I don't actually know where Pan Macmillan people hang out, but I'm hoping that it is in Melbourne.]
Okay, so I'm a romantic. I know that there was probably an agent involved [they get a credit in acknowledgments] and this isn't a Cinderella story, but the idea did get me interested.
Being an Australian writer I like to support Australian writers, but I would not normally head for this kind of story, but I have to say that the genres are less important than the talent of the writer and Claire, in my not-so-humble opinion, is a very good writer.
Let me explain what I mean by that.
I'm one of those readers [and writers] who loves characters. Plots are okay, but seriously, who can be bothered with all the twists and turns! A solid plot that lets us readers discover the characters that heave into view is my idea of heaven.
I instantly fell in love with the mini-biographies that Claire uses. So often, the bit-parts in a novel get little respect. These characters are ALWAYS of interest to me [my short stories are full of them].
The age group of the two main character is far removed from my own, but I do remember being that age and I do remember what it felt like trying to make your way in the world and waiting for the day when you felt like a grown up. Ms. Varley captured this masterfully.
I won't spoil the ending for you, but I must make a few comments. Firstly, it is brave and completely in character with the rest of the work. It left me wondering and we [I read it aloud to my wife over a period of evenings] found that the story and the characters and the ending stayed with us; we needed to talk about what we had experienced.
I am very much looking forward to reading more of Claire Varley's work. I hear a lot about how there are not enough opportunities for women writers. It isn't about gender, it's about the ability to engage the reader, and Claire Varley has that ability.
October 4, 2016
A pompous and joyless Stranger Than Fiction.
July 21, 2016
The Bit In Between, debut novel for Australian author Claire Varley, appears at first to be a romantic comedy. And on one level this is true - it is a romance, and it is very witty and at times terribly funny. But there is more to this novel than lightweight entertainment. Oliver is a one-time published author who is struggling to write his second novel when he meets Alison in an airport waiting lounge. Both are fleeing failed relationships. Both are unprepared for the instant attraction they feel for each other. Alison decides to travel to the Solomon Islands with Oliver, who is hoping to find inspiration for his writing:
"He wanted his book to be everything. A brilliant literary masterpiece. A commercial success. Comedy. Tragedy. An instant classic. Though on days like today he would just settle for 'finished'. Or even 'started'."
So far, so predictable, I hear you saying. But there are a few things that make this book stand out from the crowd. The first is the twist of unreality that occurs as Oliver progresses with his manuscript...it appears that art is imitating life, or is life imitating art? Is he predicting (through his writing) what will actually happen? Is he MAKING things happen? Or is it all just a bizarre set of coincidences? This is a construct similar to that used in the acclaimed book The Miniaturist by Jessie Burton (where the models in the doll house begin to mimic the behaviour of the real people before that behaviour happens), and once you suspend your disbelief a little, it makes for an interesting twist. The second point of difference is the setting - most of the story is set in the Solomon Islands, and Varley manages to evoke the landscape and culture, and to replicate native dialogue, in a way that is not stilted or overdone. And in fact, her dialogue between the two main characters - light, flirty, funny - is some of her best writing. But the third thing that stood out for me in this novel, and the bit I most enjoyed, was Varley's clever vignettes of minor characters scattered throughout the story. Every so often, a taxi driver or somebody's aunt or a stranger at a funeral will be allotted a few paragraphs of backstory, subtly inserted into the main story, which gives a delightful insight into their lives. Oliver considers this himself:
"As a child he'd often been distressed by the fate of minor characters in movies...even into adulthood, Oliver continued to look at life through the eyes of the minor characters and realised that essentially the world was just a complex web created by the backstories of several billion intersecting lives." How true. A good holiday read.
"He wanted his book to be everything. A brilliant literary masterpiece. A commercial success. Comedy. Tragedy. An instant classic. Though on days like today he would just settle for 'finished'. Or even 'started'."
So far, so predictable, I hear you saying. But there are a few things that make this book stand out from the crowd. The first is the twist of unreality that occurs as Oliver progresses with his manuscript...it appears that art is imitating life, or is life imitating art? Is he predicting (through his writing) what will actually happen? Is he MAKING things happen? Or is it all just a bizarre set of coincidences? This is a construct similar to that used in the acclaimed book The Miniaturist by Jessie Burton (where the models in the doll house begin to mimic the behaviour of the real people before that behaviour happens), and once you suspend your disbelief a little, it makes for an interesting twist. The second point of difference is the setting - most of the story is set in the Solomon Islands, and Varley manages to evoke the landscape and culture, and to replicate native dialogue, in a way that is not stilted or overdone. And in fact, her dialogue between the two main characters - light, flirty, funny - is some of her best writing. But the third thing that stood out for me in this novel, and the bit I most enjoyed, was Varley's clever vignettes of minor characters scattered throughout the story. Every so often, a taxi driver or somebody's aunt or a stranger at a funeral will be allotted a few paragraphs of backstory, subtly inserted into the main story, which gives a delightful insight into their lives. Oliver considers this himself:
"As a child he'd often been distressed by the fate of minor characters in movies...even into adulthood, Oliver continued to look at life through the eyes of the minor characters and realised that essentially the world was just a complex web created by the backstories of several billion intersecting lives." How true. A good holiday read.
February 23, 2017
It’s hard not to love a romance that begins with the heroine vomiting sun-dried tomatoes all over the hero after eating a whole jar in defiance of rigid airport security. The scene sets the tone for this unexpected, modern love story – of sorts – which was a gorgeous read.
Debut author Claire Varley introduces us to two people who are intelligent, complex, feisty, funny and very real. The Melbourne writer has a talent for building characters that feel rounded and rich. She has an ear for dialogue and I found everything believable and true – even though she toys with the rules of the universe at times, sliding from hyper-realism into magical realism and back again.
The novel follows the romance between unlucky-in-love Alison and Oliver, a novel-writing wunderkind struggling beneath the weight of expectation as he contemplates his second novel. After meeting en route to Melbourne, they find themselves in the Solomon Islands where Oliver tries to find inspiration for his next book, and Alison searches for purpose.
Both succeed – somewhat – and find the momentum of their different endeavours pulling them in opposite directions. Oliver takes inspiration from the world around him, while Alison befriends local woman Sera and becomes swept into her world. Varley’s talent as a writer is on show again as she creates a strong sense of place. The story is punctuated with little vignettes from the lives of people our protagonists encounter, which enriched the story.
The narrative takes the reader to places that are both tragic, touching and fall-down funny. For all its qualities, it was the humour of The Bit in Between that stayed with me. Varley made me laugh forcefully and frequently. She is a writer to watch.
Debut author Claire Varley introduces us to two people who are intelligent, complex, feisty, funny and very real. The Melbourne writer has a talent for building characters that feel rounded and rich. She has an ear for dialogue and I found everything believable and true – even though she toys with the rules of the universe at times, sliding from hyper-realism into magical realism and back again.
The novel follows the romance between unlucky-in-love Alison and Oliver, a novel-writing wunderkind struggling beneath the weight of expectation as he contemplates his second novel. After meeting en route to Melbourne, they find themselves in the Solomon Islands where Oliver tries to find inspiration for his next book, and Alison searches for purpose.
Both succeed – somewhat – and find the momentum of their different endeavours pulling them in opposite directions. Oliver takes inspiration from the world around him, while Alison befriends local woman Sera and becomes swept into her world. Varley’s talent as a writer is on show again as she creates a strong sense of place. The story is punctuated with little vignettes from the lives of people our protagonists encounter, which enriched the story.
The narrative takes the reader to places that are both tragic, touching and fall-down funny. For all its qualities, it was the humour of The Bit in Between that stayed with me. Varley made me laugh forcefully and frequently. She is a writer to watch.
August 16, 2015
The Kuala Lumpur International Airport lounge.
Two seats.
Two people.
This is how the story begins. This is how the story ends.
And The Bit In Between?
For that, Claire Varley transports us to the Solomon Islands as we follow the lives of Ali and Oliver.
Oliver is a writer, wracked with insecurities and feelings of inadequacy. Ali doesn’t know who she is or what she wants. But together they are right.
Right, that is, until Oliver’s story weaves them into its fabric. What started as a shadow of a plot idea, grows as it incorporates their own tale, until finally they are not sure if Oliver is controlling the story, or if the story is controlling them.
Claire sweeps us up with words both beautiful and powerful in this bewitching tale of love, loss and finding oneself.
As soon as I heard that they had found this book on the ‘slush pile’ (a room manuscripts from unpublished authors go to die) I was keen to review it. How good did a book have to be to make it out of the depths of the slush pile?
The answer – really good.
Claire Varley can write. Yes, yes - I know we can all write. But can we all construct sentences that flow hypnotically as the words wing their way gracefully across the page? Can we effortlessly evoke emotions? Can we create characters real and raw in all their failed glory?
This was a love story but it was also so much more. It was poignant and honest and I was caught from the very first paragraph; a victim to the rhythm and sway of Claire’s words. It was unique, unusual and utterly compelling.
Claire Varley is a writing talent born, not made, and I can honestly say that this is the best written book I have read in years.
Two seats.
Two people.
This is how the story begins. This is how the story ends.
And The Bit In Between?
For that, Claire Varley transports us to the Solomon Islands as we follow the lives of Ali and Oliver.
Oliver is a writer, wracked with insecurities and feelings of inadequacy. Ali doesn’t know who she is or what she wants. But together they are right.
Right, that is, until Oliver’s story weaves them into its fabric. What started as a shadow of a plot idea, grows as it incorporates their own tale, until finally they are not sure if Oliver is controlling the story, or if the story is controlling them.
Claire sweeps us up with words both beautiful and powerful in this bewitching tale of love, loss and finding oneself.
As soon as I heard that they had found this book on the ‘slush pile’ (a room manuscripts from unpublished authors go to die) I was keen to review it. How good did a book have to be to make it out of the depths of the slush pile?
The answer – really good.
Claire Varley can write. Yes, yes - I know we can all write. But can we all construct sentences that flow hypnotically as the words wing their way gracefully across the page? Can we effortlessly evoke emotions? Can we create characters real and raw in all their failed glory?
This was a love story but it was also so much more. It was poignant and honest and I was caught from the very first paragraph; a victim to the rhythm and sway of Claire’s words. It was unique, unusual and utterly compelling.
Claire Varley is a writing talent born, not made, and I can honestly say that this is the best written book I have read in years.
August 12, 2015
The debut novel from Australian author Claire Varley, The Bit In Between was plucked out of the slush pile. And it’s clear to see why.
Opening in an airport lounge, the first scene of the book is brilliantly written. Captivating, comical and clever, it draws you in and before you know it you’re hooked. You just have to know what happens next.
The Bit In Between explores just that – the bit in between the initial fireworks of attraction and the happily ever after. The bit where relationships are often made or broken. Oliver and Allison, the main characters, meet and are wildly swept up in each other, ending up in the Solomon Islands, where Oliver intends to write a novel and Allison, fill in time and perhaps find what she really wants from life. From here, the story heads down a path exploring the dynamics of relationships and life.
Varley is particularly talented when it comes to characters and this drives the story well. Oliver and Allison’s internal discourse is detailed and honest allowing the reader to relate and understand each character intimately. Even with her minor characters (and ones only passing by the story), Varley shows rather skillfully, that everyone has a story to tell.
Of particular interest is Varley’s ability to weave in meaningful subplots, examining issues important to the Solomon Islands. These themes empower the novel and take it from a simple romantic read, to a deeper level.
Although, slow in parts, I was engaged with both Oliver and Allison’s stories and had to keep reading to see their fate. A great read.
Opening in an airport lounge, the first scene of the book is brilliantly written. Captivating, comical and clever, it draws you in and before you know it you’re hooked. You just have to know what happens next.
The Bit In Between explores just that – the bit in between the initial fireworks of attraction and the happily ever after. The bit where relationships are often made or broken. Oliver and Allison, the main characters, meet and are wildly swept up in each other, ending up in the Solomon Islands, where Oliver intends to write a novel and Allison, fill in time and perhaps find what she really wants from life. From here, the story heads down a path exploring the dynamics of relationships and life.
Varley is particularly talented when it comes to characters and this drives the story well. Oliver and Allison’s internal discourse is detailed and honest allowing the reader to relate and understand each character intimately. Even with her minor characters (and ones only passing by the story), Varley shows rather skillfully, that everyone has a story to tell.
Of particular interest is Varley’s ability to weave in meaningful subplots, examining issues important to the Solomon Islands. These themes empower the novel and take it from a simple romantic read, to a deeper level.
Although, slow in parts, I was engaged with both Oliver and Allison’s stories and had to keep reading to see their fate. A great read.
August 4, 2015
3 1/2 stars
My View:
A contemporary love story that explores all the relationships in the narrative rather than focusing on just those of the protagonists - Alison and Oliver; everyone that comes within their orbit has a unique story, even the minor characters – the taxi driver, the house cleaner, an aunt, members of the band, the passer-by…I loved these little vignettes of life, where we are privy to the personal events that have shaped people rather than just seeing the faces/the facade usually presented to the world.
In a particular I enjoyed reading about the development of the relationship between Alison and Sera and her extended family – seeing how the extended family/community helps to raise the children, “… babies are part of the cycle of nature…the community raises the baby. I (Sera) am not doing it on my own. It is not just my love that will raise these babies.” (p219) This is just one example of the very poignant and astute story telling that forms part of this complex narrative which is punctuated with such observations and hilarious anecdotes.
More than a story of romance and love this is a story of real relationships and personal growth, perhaps this could even be recognised as a contemporary “coming of age” story. Claire Varley writes with passion and exuberance.
My View:
A contemporary love story that explores all the relationships in the narrative rather than focusing on just those of the protagonists - Alison and Oliver; everyone that comes within their orbit has a unique story, even the minor characters – the taxi driver, the house cleaner, an aunt, members of the band, the passer-by…I loved these little vignettes of life, where we are privy to the personal events that have shaped people rather than just seeing the faces/the facade usually presented to the world.
In a particular I enjoyed reading about the development of the relationship between Alison and Sera and her extended family – seeing how the extended family/community helps to raise the children, “… babies are part of the cycle of nature…the community raises the baby. I (Sera) am not doing it on my own. It is not just my love that will raise these babies.” (p219) This is just one example of the very poignant and astute story telling that forms part of this complex narrative which is punctuated with such observations and hilarious anecdotes.
More than a story of romance and love this is a story of real relationships and personal growth, perhaps this could even be recognised as a contemporary “coming of age” story. Claire Varley writes with passion and exuberance.
January 5, 2016
Going into this book with no expectations, this was an enjoyable and easy holiday read. A love story of sorts about "the bit in between" the beginning and the ending of a relationship. Asking the question: Can we really stop the inevitable?
I enjoyed the snippets of back-story for the very minor characters, giving the idea that regardless of how little we may know someone, they also have a significant story to tell which has shaped them into who they are today.
I enjoyed the snippets of back-story for the very minor characters, giving the idea that regardless of how little we may know someone, they also have a significant story to tell which has shaped them into who they are today.
January 9, 2016
Characters are all unpleasant or spoken about as if white-arses are superior. Unrealistic portrayal of where I grew up and at times frankly insulting. Solomon Islands is a beautiful country filled with many beautiful, strong people. There are problems as with any country but the beauty outweighs the problems. Since the author apparently spent 2 years there I am sad she only appears to have met the expat numptys and not the far more interesting characters to be found around the country.
June 11, 2016
This book's greatest strength was under-utilised. Instead we were given an onslaught of back stories to every single character we met. Most of which were cartoonish and unrealistic. It would've been great if she explored the events in the book coming true more.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
October 1, 2015
Loved this, great read, couldn't put it down.
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