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The Unthinkable Triangle: ~ A Pride and Prejudice Variation ~
All is fair in love and war – or is it? What if Mr Darcy’s rival for Elizabeth Bennet’s hand and heart is not some inconsequential stranger, but his dearest, closest friend? How is he to reconcile the claims of loyalty and kinship with the urge to pursue his heart’s desire? (New cover. Content unchanged) "Eyes tightly shut against the horrifying future, Darcy dug his fingers in his hair. Lost to him forever. Not merely lost, but promised to his cousin – firmly in his life, but never his! How in God’s name was he to bear it and not become unhinged? How was he to have her at his table as Richard’s affianced, and not betray himself? How was he to see her, time and again, and give no sign that he wanted her more than he had ever wanted any woman? How was he to keep up the pretence, day after excruciating day?" “This cannot be! Today’s events have tampered with your judgement.” “Elizabeth, pray let my judgement be my concern alone. From the very first days of our acquaintance, I sat in judgement instead of courting you, and I paid a terrible price for it. After a year such as I had, there is nothing – nothing, do you hear? – that I would not do to be with you.” He kissed her with a passion bordering on desperation, then burst out, more fiercely than “You must leave me room to hope! Or, as God is my witness, by this time tomorrow I will have carried you off to Gretna Green and damn the consequences!”
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First published September 23, 2015
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Joana Starnes
21 books245 followersJoana Starnes lives in the south of England with her family. She swapped several hats over the years – physician, lecturer, clinical data analyst – but feels most comfortable in a bonnet. She has been living in Georgian England for decades in her imagination, and plans to continue in that vein till she lays hands on a time machine. She loves to look for glimpses of Pemberley and Jane Austen’s world, and to write about Regency England and Mr Darcy falling in love with Elizabeth Bennet over and over and over again.
She is the author of ten Austen-inspired novels and a contributor to the Quill Ink Anthologies. Joana’s novels are all available on Amazon in Kindle Unlimited and in paperback, and some have also been released in Audible.
You can connect with Joana on: Goodreads ; Facebook ; Twitter ; Instagram ; Website and at Austen Variations or visit Joana’s Facebook page All Roads Lead to Pemberley for places and details that have inspired her novels.
She is the author of ten Austen-inspired novels and a contributor to the Quill Ink Anthologies. Joana’s novels are all available on Amazon in Kindle Unlimited and in paperback, and some have also been released in Audible.
You can connect with Joana on: Goodreads ; Facebook ; Twitter ; Instagram ; Website and at Austen Variations or visit Joana’s Facebook page All Roads Lead to Pemberley for places and details that have inspired her novels.
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August 7, 2021
I reread this as an audible book and loved listening to Stevie's voice. Great book, great rendition.
The lady can write! I could not put this down...OK, I did have to sleep some but if it were not a demand of my body I would have read through the night...even though at times my eyes were blurred with tears and I struggled to read. This story is great not just because of the events told of within (and which we might have imagined) but because of Joana Starnes’ way with words…her ability as a word smith! The descriptions of both Darcy’s and then Elizabeth’s feelings: their love(s), their anguish, their disappointments, their pathways through so much misinterpretation, support and caring with no hope of any in return, then the need to disregard everything and everyone in the face of deep passion and love were so deeply stirring, so emotive!
There may be some hints at SPOILERS within but I must have my say:
We all know of the stages of grief. Darcy gives us those in detail as we read his POV at the beginning: shock, denial, anger, depression, bargaining with GOD and acceptance. My heart ached to read of his anguish and his struggles with himself, with his heart, mind, body and soul struggling to change, to reverse course, to offer support when and where needed as walls crumbled in upon his world!
I have read the other recent book with this same premise, Pride and Proposals, and I did love that book. Additionally I read another novel in which Col. Fitzwilliam is in love with Elizabeth, unbeknownst to her but not Darcy. BUT for some reason, this author’s way with words dug in and twisted as this dear man slowly works his way up to a proposal and then has to live with the fact that not only is there never to be an opportunity to offer such but he must then live his life watching her at another’s table, bearing his children, walking by his side. And because that man is as dear as a brother he can’t close the door to that relationship, to the possibility of being frequently in that company.
I dearly love Colonel Fitzwilliam so a tale such as this has few winners for me BUT Elizabeth and Darcy MUST have their HEA. It is a guarantee for me in reading Jane Austen Fan Fiction. My heart goes out to the Colonel; I hate to see him “settle”, but priorities are such that ODC are at the top of the list for their happily ever after. The epilogue did address the issue somewhat.
Then there is the dilemma of a “Dear John” letter. I have lived long enough to know how many a soldier was stabbed through and through on a battlefield with this betrayal by his loved one…Are we to read of this here? And there is the awakening from unconsciousness to hear, “Farewell, my love, be happy.” spoken to one’s fiancée by one who is near, dear and TRUSTED! And even earlier in this tale an ironic discovery by a hateful, nasty roué of a relative who upon watching across the theatre floor determines where Darcy’s gaze falls and realizes what it reveals…will that tidbit be used against both parties?
There are all the complications we know of from canon: family background, behaviors and no connections, relatives in trade, the alliance between cousins dreamed of by two mothers, the hauteur from the ton upon learning of the pairing, no money, no dowry, etc. which come into play in this story again. We also read of Richard’s military service, of some of the campaigns in which he serves, of people he meets and of a consequence of battle.
This story is another top effort by this author. It is not only one I can highly recommend but also one I will re-read in the future.
I again listened to this story on Audible while walking but also read parts when I was anxious to get on with the story. Even knowing the story ahead of time - I could not put it down! 10-26-18
I now own a paperback copy.
The lady can write! I could not put this down...OK, I did have to sleep some but if it were not a demand of my body I would have read through the night...even though at times my eyes were blurred with tears and I struggled to read. This story is great not just because of the events told of within (and which we might have imagined) but because of Joana Starnes’ way with words…her ability as a word smith! The descriptions of both Darcy’s and then Elizabeth’s feelings: their love(s), their anguish, their disappointments, their pathways through so much misinterpretation, support and caring with no hope of any in return, then the need to disregard everything and everyone in the face of deep passion and love were so deeply stirring, so emotive!
There may be some hints at SPOILERS within but I must have my say:
We all know of the stages of grief. Darcy gives us those in detail as we read his POV at the beginning: shock, denial, anger, depression, bargaining with GOD and acceptance. My heart ached to read of his anguish and his struggles with himself, with his heart, mind, body and soul struggling to change, to reverse course, to offer support when and where needed as walls crumbled in upon his world!
I have read the other recent book with this same premise, Pride and Proposals, and I did love that book. Additionally I read another novel in which Col. Fitzwilliam is in love with Elizabeth, unbeknownst to her but not Darcy. BUT for some reason, this author’s way with words dug in and twisted as this dear man slowly works his way up to a proposal and then has to live with the fact that not only is there never to be an opportunity to offer such but he must then live his life watching her at another’s table, bearing his children, walking by his side. And because that man is as dear as a brother he can’t close the door to that relationship, to the possibility of being frequently in that company.
I dearly love Colonel Fitzwilliam so a tale such as this has few winners for me BUT Elizabeth and Darcy MUST have their HEA. It is a guarantee for me in reading Jane Austen Fan Fiction. My heart goes out to the Colonel; I hate to see him “settle”, but priorities are such that ODC are at the top of the list for their happily ever after. The epilogue did address the issue somewhat.
Then there is the dilemma of a “Dear John” letter. I have lived long enough to know how many a soldier was stabbed through and through on a battlefield with this betrayal by his loved one…Are we to read of this here? And there is the awakening from unconsciousness to hear, “Farewell, my love, be happy.” spoken to one’s fiancée by one who is near, dear and TRUSTED! And even earlier in this tale an ironic discovery by a hateful, nasty roué of a relative who upon watching across the theatre floor determines where Darcy’s gaze falls and realizes what it reveals…will that tidbit be used against both parties?
There are all the complications we know of from canon: family background, behaviors and no connections, relatives in trade, the alliance between cousins dreamed of by two mothers, the hauteur from the ton upon learning of the pairing, no money, no dowry, etc. which come into play in this story again. We also read of Richard’s military service, of some of the campaigns in which he serves, of people he meets and of a consequence of battle.
This story is another top effort by this author. It is not only one I can highly recommend but also one I will re-read in the future.
I again listened to this story on Audible while walking but also read parts when I was anxious to get on with the story. Even knowing the story ahead of time - I could not put it down! 10-26-18
I now own a paperback copy.
December 18, 2015
What if, despite his need for an heiress with a large fortune, Colonel Fitzwilliam proposes to Elizabeth Bennet, unknowingly a day before Darcy intends to, and is accepted?
What if Darcy’s hesitation cost him his dearest desire and he must now witness the joyful and affectionate union of the woman he secretly loves to his closest male relation?
It would be unthinkable…wouldn’t it?
In a very courageous and compelling variation, Joana Starnes illustrates what happens when there is a greater impediment to Darcy’s and Elizabeth’s happily ever after than misinterpreted pride and misguided prejudice. And that impediment is affable and likable Colonel Fitzwilliam. Readers are placed in a quandary because our hearts tell us that Elizabeth can only marry Darcy, yet we like Colonel Fitzwilliam and see how happy Elizabeth is with him. Their romance isn’t one of contention and misunderstandings. Their courtship is one of joy and devotion; and with their lively personalities, congenial spirits, and similar inclinations, readers must admit – Fitz and Liz make sense. But how can this end happily? Even though we are Team Darcy all the way, we don’t want to see our dear colonel terrible hurt and unhappy…Ahh what are you doing to us, Joana Starnes?
In this variation Darcy does not take the easy way out – he does not hole up in Pemberley or travel abroad. He remains in town, visits with the Bingleys, invites them and Elizabeth Bennet to his home, and allows his sister to become friends with his cousin’s future bride. All the while Darcy attempts to keep his feelings secret, which sometimes makes him appear standoffish and disapproving. Elizabeth, after so much interaction with Darcy, catches glimmers of the kind, warm-hearted, and dependable man Darcy truly is, and begins to think better of him and draw him into a friendship which soon puts Darcy’s resolve and pledge to treat her as a sister to the test…
This variation, to the delight of many readers I’m sure, is very Darcy-centric! Ms. Starnes, with meticulous detail, outlines Darcy’s emotional journey as he attempts to move on and imagine a life without Elizabeth. The language is poignant and strikingly expressive; Mr. Darcy’s ardent love, intense yearning, and anguish is palpably felt in every speech, action, and description. *Sigh* beware readers, it will melt your heart! I think one of Joana Starnes’ greatest strengths as a writer is her ability to intuitively and perceptively describe a character’s emotions, particularly Mr. Darcy’s. The reader does more than just read and discover, they feel with understanding and depth exactly what the character is feeling – it is a more profound and empathetic connection. While I do love Darcy, and enjoy spending copious amounts of time in his head, I sometimes wish we saw a little more of the other two points of the triangle – Elizabeth and Colonel Fitzwilliam. But then again, having too much Darcy is not something one should complain about!
This daring variation is sure to enthrall readers with its complicated premise, emotional journey, and introspective look into the heart and soul of Fitzwilliam Darcy. Joana Starnes dauntlessly and skillfully delivers a beautifully romantic and tender love story that is deserving of praise and attention! I highly recommend!
What if Darcy’s hesitation cost him his dearest desire and he must now witness the joyful and affectionate union of the woman he secretly loves to his closest male relation?
It would be unthinkable…wouldn’t it?
In a very courageous and compelling variation, Joana Starnes illustrates what happens when there is a greater impediment to Darcy’s and Elizabeth’s happily ever after than misinterpreted pride and misguided prejudice. And that impediment is affable and likable Colonel Fitzwilliam. Readers are placed in a quandary because our hearts tell us that Elizabeth can only marry Darcy, yet we like Colonel Fitzwilliam and see how happy Elizabeth is with him. Their romance isn’t one of contention and misunderstandings. Their courtship is one of joy and devotion; and with their lively personalities, congenial spirits, and similar inclinations, readers must admit – Fitz and Liz make sense. But how can this end happily? Even though we are Team Darcy all the way, we don’t want to see our dear colonel terrible hurt and unhappy…Ahh what are you doing to us, Joana Starnes?
In this variation Darcy does not take the easy way out – he does not hole up in Pemberley or travel abroad. He remains in town, visits with the Bingleys, invites them and Elizabeth Bennet to his home, and allows his sister to become friends with his cousin’s future bride. All the while Darcy attempts to keep his feelings secret, which sometimes makes him appear standoffish and disapproving. Elizabeth, after so much interaction with Darcy, catches glimmers of the kind, warm-hearted, and dependable man Darcy truly is, and begins to think better of him and draw him into a friendship which soon puts Darcy’s resolve and pledge to treat her as a sister to the test…
This variation, to the delight of many readers I’m sure, is very Darcy-centric! Ms. Starnes, with meticulous detail, outlines Darcy’s emotional journey as he attempts to move on and imagine a life without Elizabeth. The language is poignant and strikingly expressive; Mr. Darcy’s ardent love, intense yearning, and anguish is palpably felt in every speech, action, and description. *Sigh* beware readers, it will melt your heart! I think one of Joana Starnes’ greatest strengths as a writer is her ability to intuitively and perceptively describe a character’s emotions, particularly Mr. Darcy’s. The reader does more than just read and discover, they feel with understanding and depth exactly what the character is feeling – it is a more profound and empathetic connection. While I do love Darcy, and enjoy spending copious amounts of time in his head, I sometimes wish we saw a little more of the other two points of the triangle – Elizabeth and Colonel Fitzwilliam. But then again, having too much Darcy is not something one should complain about!
This daring variation is sure to enthrall readers with its complicated premise, emotional journey, and introspective look into the heart and soul of Fitzwilliam Darcy. Joana Starnes dauntlessly and skillfully delivers a beautifully romantic and tender love story that is deserving of praise and attention! I highly recommend!
December 29, 2015
Once again, Joana Starnes has written a P&P variation that deserves to be read, savored and celebrated... But maybe not all in the very same day, because now that I gulped down this book, I long for more, and more (and more.)...
The "Unthinkable Triangle" accomplished exactly what I needed it to accomplish... Starnes has crafted a fresh story within a storyline that is similar to other recent works of JAFF: yet, it is resolved by her in her own heartwarmingly romantic and original ways.
I loved that this story is so close to canon in so many pleasant ways for an Austen admirer to savor, such as the length of the story's timeframe, the characters' interior personalities, the motives for many of the characters, etc... Yet, this new dilemma between two beloved cousins is something readers must grapple with, and struggle to resolve. I love Darcy, I love Elizabeth, I love Colonel Fitzwilliam... and I want no one hurt here... but I do want a story that resembles a realistic love triangle, fraught with sorrow, regrets and misunderstandings!!! Basically, I want it all!!!
The good news is Starnes certainly delivers all of this for us... She does a fabulous job developing her love stories over a significant timeframe. These aren't feelings that are developed at a whim... There are struggles, and obstacles, and journeys that our characters must endure throughout their quests for affection, and love and happiness. Self-awareness creeps within the membranes of their hearts, and it is within these spaces that we witness how love not only alters ourselves, but also alters the people we hold and love dearly... Readers are treated to moments of everyday candor and routine interactions that allow our characters to slowly reveal their true natures and come to terms with who they truly are and what they really feel and need in their young and bewildering world.
The parallel actions of Darcy and Colonel Fitzwilliam are observable throughout the book. The reader just needs to pay close attention to them as they are revealed, because it is these parallel actions that prevent us from harboring ill tidings towards either man by the story's conclusion. One man struggles at the beginning of the development of his feelings, the other towards the end. The consequences experienced by each man, as he comes to realize Elizabeth has really been placed within a precarious position by both of these men, leaves the reader wondering if a satisfying conclusion can be achieved for anyone. Truly, how can one choose one's fate when so much seems to hang in the balance?
Starnes' writing craft is beautifully displayed within the pages of this text. Similar to Austen, she moves her plot quickly within the actions of her scenes, yet slowly enough between her characters so that the reader feels as though he/she is a guest within the room, or ambling through the garden or hiding the dark and private hallways that these characters share together... close enough to feel their struggles, even when the characters themselves can't identify the exact feelings he/she are grappling with throughout this story.
Another brilliant move is how Starnes develops her own unique solutions for her characters, leaving the reader feeling like he/she has sat alongside a friend and served as witness to his/her greatest struggles. Her solutions are not quick, easy fixes, but are born through a curvaceous plot and carefully drawn characters. I struggled alongside each of them and felt like the story ended where it needed to end...
As with any great read, I also found myself coming back to a part of the book where I felt such a deep connection,
"Brought back into sharp focus by the discovery of what it truly meant, being in love, the affection she had felt - that she still felt, was revealed for what it finally was: fondness for a kindred spirit, esteem, warm understanding and an attraction to handsome man. Enough to base a marriage on, of course- most women entered matrimony with less- but woefully insufficient now that she could compare one set of feelings with another."
This is so similar to what I am left with after reading another JAFF book by Joana Starnes... The knowledge of what a truly wonderful read feels like and the hope she will continue to write more JAFF... Thank you Mrs. Starnes!
The "Unthinkable Triangle" accomplished exactly what I needed it to accomplish... Starnes has crafted a fresh story within a storyline that is similar to other recent works of JAFF: yet, it is resolved by her in her own heartwarmingly romantic and original ways.
I loved that this story is so close to canon in so many pleasant ways for an Austen admirer to savor, such as the length of the story's timeframe, the characters' interior personalities, the motives for many of the characters, etc... Yet, this new dilemma between two beloved cousins is something readers must grapple with, and struggle to resolve. I love Darcy, I love Elizabeth, I love Colonel Fitzwilliam... and I want no one hurt here... but I do want a story that resembles a realistic love triangle, fraught with sorrow, regrets and misunderstandings!!! Basically, I want it all!!!
The good news is Starnes certainly delivers all of this for us... She does a fabulous job developing her love stories over a significant timeframe. These aren't feelings that are developed at a whim... There are struggles, and obstacles, and journeys that our characters must endure throughout their quests for affection, and love and happiness. Self-awareness creeps within the membranes of their hearts, and it is within these spaces that we witness how love not only alters ourselves, but also alters the people we hold and love dearly... Readers are treated to moments of everyday candor and routine interactions that allow our characters to slowly reveal their true natures and come to terms with who they truly are and what they really feel and need in their young and bewildering world.
The parallel actions of Darcy and Colonel Fitzwilliam are observable throughout the book. The reader just needs to pay close attention to them as they are revealed, because it is these parallel actions that prevent us from harboring ill tidings towards either man by the story's conclusion. One man struggles at the beginning of the development of his feelings, the other towards the end. The consequences experienced by each man, as he comes to realize Elizabeth has really been placed within a precarious position by both of these men, leaves the reader wondering if a satisfying conclusion can be achieved for anyone. Truly, how can one choose one's fate when so much seems to hang in the balance?
Starnes' writing craft is beautifully displayed within the pages of this text. Similar to Austen, she moves her plot quickly within the actions of her scenes, yet slowly enough between her characters so that the reader feels as though he/she is a guest within the room, or ambling through the garden or hiding the dark and private hallways that these characters share together... close enough to feel their struggles, even when the characters themselves can't identify the exact feelings he/she are grappling with throughout this story.
Another brilliant move is how Starnes develops her own unique solutions for her characters, leaving the reader feeling like he/she has sat alongside a friend and served as witness to his/her greatest struggles. Her solutions are not quick, easy fixes, but are born through a curvaceous plot and carefully drawn characters. I struggled alongside each of them and felt like the story ended where it needed to end...
As with any great read, I also found myself coming back to a part of the book where I felt such a deep connection,
"Brought back into sharp focus by the discovery of what it truly meant, being in love, the affection she had felt - that she still felt, was revealed for what it finally was: fondness for a kindred spirit, esteem, warm understanding and an attraction to handsome man. Enough to base a marriage on, of course- most women entered matrimony with less- but woefully insufficient now that she could compare one set of feelings with another."
This is so similar to what I am left with after reading another JAFF book by Joana Starnes... The knowledge of what a truly wonderful read feels like and the hope she will continue to write more JAFF... Thank you Mrs. Starnes!
September 7, 2017
I lived to tell the tale. Joana, you are a genius mistress of written music. I don't think I can say anything else to justify this lovely book. My new favorite of yours!
July 17, 2016
Gird your loins and be prepared for the Darcy-Elizabeth-Colonel love triangle.
I cannot begin to give voice to the emotions that Joana Starnes was able to garner in this…another 5-star book for me. I am still amazed that she was able to gently pull me through the various levels of hell and, frankly, I enjoyed every minute of it. Go figure.
As you read this work, it is best if you tackle it in sections knowing that there will be conflict, angst, feelings of betrayal, guilt, grief, despair, lost opportunities, and all manner of emotions that encompass love gained and love lost. Because I had previously read several wonderful reviews [look for them], I knew going in I was in for an emotional ride. That helped a lot so I could guard my heart and emotions in order to avoid having an apoplexy.
We start off in Kent with Darcy and the Colonel visiting Rosings at Easter. Like canon, our dear Colonel was smitten by Elizabeth’s beauty and wit. Darcy was still struggling with his feelings for Elizabeth and, due to fighting his inclinations, missed his opportunity with her. Remember, he had no idea of her true feelings for him; so he thought everything was a go. As Darcy approached Huntsford Parsonage, with the intent to propose, he encountered the couple and was informed of their engagement. To say he was stunned is a misnomer.
On the one hand, we have our dear Colonel’s joy and on the other, Darcy’s despair. He, naturally, left Rosings immediately and headed back to London where he went through hell in his disappointed hopes. Darcy’s descent was horrible to witness. We struggle with him as his emotions run the gamut as he contemplates his life without Elizabeth as his wife.
Our dear Colonel now must defend his betrothed to his family. It did not go well as they fought him tooth and nail. They think her a chit from the country with no fortune, no connections and a family tainted by trade. They are awful and the worst was his older brother, the heir. This guy was disgusting, taunting, despicable, loathsome and an otherwise immoral person. He and Darcy have an altercation while at Netherfield that was delightfully delicious. I loved it. Way to go Darcy.
Second sons have always had problems with money or lack thereof; our dear Colonel was no different. The Earl was not impressed with the engagement and threatened Richard if he didn’t give her up. Because Richard defied his father, the Earl withheld funds intended for Richard from another side of the family. Since he was now unable to resign his commission, he was forced to return to the conflict on the Continent. When he was seriously injured, Darcy brought Elizabeth and her father back to Darcy’s house where Richard was being treated. An express was sent to the Earl as they were away. This was a highly charged emotional time when we didn’t know whether Richard was going to live or die. Everyone was on an emotional run that was difficult to read. In one scene, I simply covered my mouth… OMG!!!
Joana is a genius in her use of language in this work. She is a true wordsmith as she created word pictures that were simply delicious. She crafted scene after scene that left me amazed and weak in the knees. The language she chose for our lovers was so private that I was embarrassed to eavesdrop on such a poignant, personal, sensual, and sexual moment. I blushed, held my breath and read as quickly as I dared in order to not miss a single delightful word. I was fanning myself, stunned and in awe at the beautiful scene before me, my heart pounding in my chest. I don’t have the words to even give a decent review. Just read it for yourself. I applaud Joana Starnes… Brava my dear, Brava!!!!!
I cannot begin to give voice to the emotions that Joana Starnes was able to garner in this…another 5-star book for me. I am still amazed that she was able to gently pull me through the various levels of hell and, frankly, I enjoyed every minute of it. Go figure.
As you read this work, it is best if you tackle it in sections knowing that there will be conflict, angst, feelings of betrayal, guilt, grief, despair, lost opportunities, and all manner of emotions that encompass love gained and love lost. Because I had previously read several wonderful reviews [look for them], I knew going in I was in for an emotional ride. That helped a lot so I could guard my heart and emotions in order to avoid having an apoplexy.
We start off in Kent with Darcy and the Colonel visiting Rosings at Easter. Like canon, our dear Colonel was smitten by Elizabeth’s beauty and wit. Darcy was still struggling with his feelings for Elizabeth and, due to fighting his inclinations, missed his opportunity with her. Remember, he had no idea of her true feelings for him; so he thought everything was a go. As Darcy approached Huntsford Parsonage, with the intent to propose, he encountered the couple and was informed of their engagement. To say he was stunned is a misnomer.
On the one hand, we have our dear Colonel’s joy and on the other, Darcy’s despair. He, naturally, left Rosings immediately and headed back to London where he went through hell in his disappointed hopes. Darcy’s descent was horrible to witness. We struggle with him as his emotions run the gamut as he contemplates his life without Elizabeth as his wife.
Our dear Colonel now must defend his betrothed to his family. It did not go well as they fought him tooth and nail. They think her a chit from the country with no fortune, no connections and a family tainted by trade. They are awful and the worst was his older brother, the heir. This guy was disgusting, taunting, despicable, loathsome and an otherwise immoral person. He and Darcy have an altercation while at Netherfield that was delightfully delicious. I loved it. Way to go Darcy.
Second sons have always had problems with money or lack thereof; our dear Colonel was no different. The Earl was not impressed with the engagement and threatened Richard if he didn’t give her up. Because Richard defied his father, the Earl withheld funds intended for Richard from another side of the family. Since he was now unable to resign his commission, he was forced to return to the conflict on the Continent. When he was seriously injured, Darcy brought Elizabeth and her father back to Darcy’s house where Richard was being treated. An express was sent to the Earl as they were away. This was a highly charged emotional time when we didn’t know whether Richard was going to live or die. Everyone was on an emotional run that was difficult to read. In one scene, I simply covered my mouth… OMG!!!
Joana is a genius in her use of language in this work. She is a true wordsmith as she created word pictures that were simply delicious. She crafted scene after scene that left me amazed and weak in the knees. The language she chose for our lovers was so private that I was embarrassed to eavesdrop on such a poignant, personal, sensual, and sexual moment. I blushed, held my breath and read as quickly as I dared in order to not miss a single delightful word. I was fanning myself, stunned and in awe at the beautiful scene before me, my heart pounding in my chest. I don’t have the words to even give a decent review. Just read it for yourself. I applaud Joana Starnes… Brava my dear, Brava!!!!!
August 10, 2021
Another incredibly emotional story from a favorite author
What awful circumstances happen to our three most favorite characters. What if Lizzy accepts a proposal from the Colonel? Poor Darcy, to lose his true love to his best friend and favorite relative. Then while the Colonel is off to fight a war, Lizzy matures and finds out she only esteems the Colonel but loves Darcy?
The dreaded love triangle where everyone love the others, just in different ways.
The author tells a wonderful story about three beloved characters and how they got into such a mess and how their lives are changed forever.
I love this book. I highly recommend it.
What awful circumstances happen to our three most favorite characters. What if Lizzy accepts a proposal from the Colonel? Poor Darcy, to lose his true love to his best friend and favorite relative. Then while the Colonel is off to fight a war, Lizzy matures and finds out she only esteems the Colonel but loves Darcy?
The dreaded love triangle where everyone love the others, just in different ways.
The author tells a wonderful story about three beloved characters and how they got into such a mess and how their lives are changed forever.
I love this book. I highly recommend it.
January 27, 2023
I was surprised at how good this book was. If you like Jane Austen FF, I recommend it.
The opening one-third or so of Austen's Pride and Prejudice is mentioned as backstory, as the book opens with Lizzie visiting Charlotte Collins and encountering Darcy and his cousin Fitzwilliam at Rosings. Darcy is on the verge of proposing when Lizzie and Fitzwilliam announce their engagement. Naturally, Darcy is crushed and agonizes at the thought of the woman he loves being married to his dearest friend.
Fitzwilliam is on leave from the Army and must return to the Peninsula, and here is where the author begins her own plot. Events conspire to throw Lizzie and Darcy together in fairly believable ways, and Lizzie begins to see Darcy's admirable traits, even though Darcy is careful not to reveal his true feelings for her.
Fitzwilliam is a doll, though, so how can Lizzie dump him for Darcy? Fear not, this author has devised a plot that gives everyone a happy ending. As I said, it's really quite good.
The opening one-third or so of Austen's Pride and Prejudice is mentioned as backstory, as the book opens with Lizzie visiting Charlotte Collins and encountering Darcy and his cousin Fitzwilliam at Rosings. Darcy is on the verge of proposing when Lizzie and Fitzwilliam announce their engagement. Naturally, Darcy is crushed and agonizes at the thought of the woman he loves being married to his dearest friend.
Fitzwilliam is on leave from the Army and must return to the Peninsula, and here is where the author begins her own plot. Events conspire to throw Lizzie and Darcy together in fairly believable ways, and Lizzie begins to see Darcy's admirable traits, even though Darcy is careful not to reveal his true feelings for her.
Fitzwilliam is a doll, though, so how can Lizzie dump him for Darcy? Fear not, this author has devised a plot that gives everyone a happy ending. As I said, it's really quite good.
December 2, 2024
"The Unthinkable Triangle" is delicious angst. What else could it be? What happens when Elizabeth Bennet forms an attachment at Hunsford with not Fitzwilliam Darcy but the dear colonel, Darcy's amiable cousin Richard? Good grief! Author Joanna Starnes is an evil genius. How else could one contrive a scenario so well that I felt myself accepting, nay! welcoming this connection. After all, they do get on well! But Darcy. Poor Darcy. My heart broke for him as he was witness to the colonel's wooing--and Colonel Fitzwilliam even asked his cousin Darcy to look after her, should the worst happen when he heads off to the Peninsula! I would not for the world tell you how Starnes wraps this up to our ultimate satisfaction but I will admit to shedding tears. And it is not an ending you would suspect! A happy ending for all indeed! This author has definitely become one of my "must reads!"
July 16, 2016
What an absolutely fantastic story!
This is ,without doubt , one of the best books that I have ever had the pleasure of reading!!The language in it is so prosaic, the heartbreak felt by all concerned is,at times so difficult to read yet so easy to imagine.
The plot is so beautifully constructed and compelling that I wavered from shouting out 'Oh no!' to begging anyone who would listen for a resolution ...... one that would allow everyone to have their happy ending.....how this was to be accomplished to everyone's satisfaction mystified me...... until .......well,to speak further on this topic would not be wise.
Suffice to say that this book must be read by all who adore Darcy and Elizabeth,by all who hold their union dear........ thus do they truly deserve such a 5* literary treasure!!
This is ,without doubt , one of the best books that I have ever had the pleasure of reading!!The language in it is so prosaic, the heartbreak felt by all concerned is,at times so difficult to read yet so easy to imagine.
The plot is so beautifully constructed and compelling that I wavered from shouting out 'Oh no!' to begging anyone who would listen for a resolution ...... one that would allow everyone to have their happy ending.....how this was to be accomplished to everyone's satisfaction mystified me...... until .......well,to speak further on this topic would not be wise.
Suffice to say that this book must be read by all who adore Darcy and Elizabeth,by all who hold their union dear........ thus do they truly deserve such a 5* literary treasure!!
June 15, 2021
Like taking an Edible: Nothing happens for a long while, and you almost think it won’t kick in at all, but boy when it hits- giddy up!
I had been playing chicken with this book for months, knowing the delectable angst inherent of the premiss awaited around the corner of it’s cover to pounce me. Finally, the stars had aligned, owed to my last few books being saccharine to the wazoo and so I was emboldened & eager to get hurt and face my 'JAFF taboo love triangle' fears.
I had tissues at the ready, but I won’t sugarcoat it: I would have been better prepared with some strong coffee to keep me from dozing, or fortified wine to ease me through the dragging first half.
Expectations:
Reality:
Now I stress - in hopes that a reader who is faced with my same early scruples, and is vacillating over whether to put aside the book altogether is reading this- the second half delivers and makes up for the slow start.
The issue I believe was that we get an inordinate amount of prose from Darcy just lamenting over Colonel Fitz beating him to the proposal, how much he loves Lizzy, and how there can't be anyone who could ever replace her.
However lovely & ardent these sentiments, they are not supported by much interaction between ODC, thus it feels like the story stars Darcy and his love for a page phantom Lizzy, rather than the tangible, jump off the page love, between Lizzy and Darcy I read for. It came off to me like Darcy was more in love with the idea of Lizzy than she herself. She does have a few scenes where they speak a little, but their interactions are heavily summarized; it's like 20% actual dialogue & concrete events, and 80% is simply Darcy’s 'stream of angst consciousness.'
I think this above all made this story more boring than angsty or compelling. As I prefaced before I was bracing myself to read this, but in the end the fear of too much emotional turmoil was unfounded and my true foe turned out to be tedium.
Now to Lizzy; what can I say about Lizzy's input in the first half of the story?
Hmm..
Lizzy’s lack of POV, especially in understanding how her feelings developed for the Colonel really derailed my immersion in the story and my ability to buy into Lizzy entering into the engagement, as we don't witness any courting or much in ways of their interaction.
Both Darcy & I when Lizzy gets betrothed :
We get almost no page time with the good Colonel overall as he was always like, 'ight imma head out,' and scampers off to war, so it was hard to feel overly attached to him or any perceived connection between him & Lizzy. Honestly, most JAFF's I read feature Col Fitz much more heavily than in this story where you would expect a more leading role presence.
Lizzy overall seemed more like a secondary character as a result. I don't think it a coincidence the story came emotively alive when she finally gets her share in POV in the final half.
The Brass Tacks:
The second half salvaged the lot of the story; events begin to descend, we get a lot of beautiful dialoged ODC interaction, dual POV, and one of the most heart fluttering JAFF climaxes. Tis no surprise as Ms Starnes has some of the most poignant writing chops on the JAFF block:
I was half expecting, as this is by Starnes, one of my fav JAFF authors, that this yarn would usurp my favorite Col Fitz x ODC triangle from its cozy abode in my top 5 ATJ (All Time JAFFs). Alas it has not, Darcy's Denial: A Pride and Prejudice Variation is still the GOAT by more than 50 miles of good road; that one just hits you like a punch to the stomach and winds you deliciously- you feel it all acutely. If you have not read it yet, then you have your marching orders, make haste and read it!
꙳ Spice Scale: Subtle Serrano 🌶 🌶/5 ꙳
In the spirit of the Scoville Scale- a system that measures the degree of spicy- I am coopting it to facilitate rating the degree of sensual content in reading material. For expanded scale ref. photos.
I had been playing chicken with this book for months, knowing the delectable angst inherent of the premiss awaited around the corner of it’s cover to pounce me. Finally, the stars had aligned, owed to my last few books being saccharine to the wazoo and so I was emboldened & eager to get hurt and face my 'JAFF taboo love triangle' fears.
I had tissues at the ready, but I won’t sugarcoat it: I would have been better prepared with some strong coffee to keep me from dozing, or fortified wine to ease me through the dragging first half.
Expectations:
Reality:
Now I stress - in hopes that a reader who is faced with my same early scruples, and is vacillating over whether to put aside the book altogether is reading this- the second half delivers and makes up for the slow start.
The issue I believe was that we get an inordinate amount of prose from Darcy just lamenting over Colonel Fitz beating him to the proposal, how much he loves Lizzy, and how there can't be anyone who could ever replace her.
However lovely & ardent these sentiments, they are not supported by much interaction between ODC, thus it feels like the story stars Darcy and his love for a page phantom Lizzy, rather than the tangible, jump off the page love, between Lizzy and Darcy I read for. It came off to me like Darcy was more in love with the idea of Lizzy than she herself. She does have a few scenes where they speak a little, but their interactions are heavily summarized; it's like 20% actual dialogue & concrete events, and 80% is simply Darcy’s 'stream of angst consciousness.'
I think this above all made this story more boring than angsty or compelling. As I prefaced before I was bracing myself to read this, but in the end the fear of too much emotional turmoil was unfounded and my true foe turned out to be tedium.
Now to Lizzy; what can I say about Lizzy's input in the first half of the story?
Hmm..
Lizzy’s lack of POV, especially in understanding how her feelings developed for the Colonel really derailed my immersion in the story and my ability to buy into Lizzy entering into the engagement, as we don't witness any courting or much in ways of their interaction.
Both Darcy & I when Lizzy gets betrothed :
We get almost no page time with the good Colonel overall as he was always like, 'ight imma head out,' and scampers off to war, so it was hard to feel overly attached to him or any perceived connection between him & Lizzy. Honestly, most JAFF's I read feature Col Fitz much more heavily than in this story where you would expect a more leading role presence.
Lizzy overall seemed more like a secondary character as a result. I don't think it a coincidence the story came emotively alive when she finally gets her share in POV in the final half.
The Brass Tacks:
The second half salvaged the lot of the story; events begin to descend, we get a lot of beautiful dialoged ODC interaction, dual POV, and one of the most heart fluttering JAFF climaxes. Tis no surprise as Ms Starnes has some of the most poignant writing chops on the JAFF block:
I was half expecting, as this is by Starnes, one of my fav JAFF authors, that this yarn would usurp my favorite Col Fitz x ODC triangle from its cozy abode in my top 5 ATJ (All Time JAFFs). Alas it has not, Darcy's Denial: A Pride and Prejudice Variation is still the GOAT by more than 50 miles of good road; that one just hits you like a punch to the stomach and winds you deliciously- you feel it all acutely. If you have not read it yet, then you have your marching orders, make haste and read it!
꙳ Spice Scale: Subtle Serrano 🌶 🌶/5 ꙳
In the spirit of the Scoville Scale- a system that measures the degree of spicy- I am coopting it to facilitate rating the degree of sensual content in reading material. For expanded scale ref. photos.
August 14, 2021
Emotional
This is one of those books I have had in my TBR stack for a very long time. I love this author, so my hesitation wasn’t for fear of experiencing a bad read. The love triangle “trope” of these three beloved characters is simply hard on my heart. Many variations have the Colonel Fitzwilliam become interested in Elizabeth, but to my current knowledge, this is the only published one where the entire book is based on that trope. Going in, I knew it would be emotional for me and I wasn’t wrong. Whew!
Admittedly, and as those who follow my reviews are likely aware, this is my least favorite trope. However, brilliant wordsmith that she is, Joana Starnes figuratively took my hand and held it as she walked me through from the first to the last page. A few pages in I wanted to stop, but took a deep breath and walked on. It’s most definitely a tense, angst-filled read, and for me, even with the happy ending, in my heart, things can never be the same for my three most loved characters of Pride and Prejudice. That’s why it’s so hard. Some things can’t be undone, and thankfully, only endures until the next book I will read.
That said, I cannot fault the writing, which is excellent, with good dialogue, and the way in which the storyline unfolds is gripping and brilliantly done. Poor Darcy’s heart. A day late and a dollar short, as they say. Since, for a time in the book Elizabeth and Richard are ignorant of what Darcy’s intentions had been, it was for him my heart broke most, plus, well… it’s Darcy after all. Then Richard’s discovery, and finally, Elizabeth’s revelation. Sighhh….
I read this book while following along with the audiobook, which I think made the read easier for me. Stevie Zimmerman gives another outstanding performance. She’s really wonderful.
So to those like me who have been hesitant to read this book, I won’t deny it’s difficult, but the book is truly excellent, with nobody’s character or integrity sacrificed to propel the story. They remain good people throughout. I do highly recommend it, and I’m glad I finally took the plunge.
This is one of those books I have had in my TBR stack for a very long time. I love this author, so my hesitation wasn’t for fear of experiencing a bad read. The love triangle “trope” of these three beloved characters is simply hard on my heart. Many variations have the Colonel Fitzwilliam become interested in Elizabeth, but to my current knowledge, this is the only published one where the entire book is based on that trope. Going in, I knew it would be emotional for me and I wasn’t wrong. Whew!
Admittedly, and as those who follow my reviews are likely aware, this is my least favorite trope. However, brilliant wordsmith that she is, Joana Starnes figuratively took my hand and held it as she walked me through from the first to the last page. A few pages in I wanted to stop, but took a deep breath and walked on. It’s most definitely a tense, angst-filled read, and for me, even with the happy ending, in my heart, things can never be the same for my three most loved characters of Pride and Prejudice. That’s why it’s so hard. Some things can’t be undone, and thankfully, only endures until the next book I will read.
That said, I cannot fault the writing, which is excellent, with good dialogue, and the way in which the storyline unfolds is gripping and brilliantly done. Poor Darcy’s heart. A day late and a dollar short, as they say. Since, for a time in the book Elizabeth and Richard are ignorant of what Darcy’s intentions had been, it was for him my heart broke most, plus, well… it’s Darcy after all. Then Richard’s discovery, and finally, Elizabeth’s revelation. Sighhh….
I read this book while following along with the audiobook, which I think made the read easier for me. Stevie Zimmerman gives another outstanding performance. She’s really wonderful.
So to those like me who have been hesitant to read this book, I won’t deny it’s difficult, but the book is truly excellent, with nobody’s character or integrity sacrificed to propel the story. They remain good people throughout. I do highly recommend it, and I’m glad I finally took the plunge.
June 14, 2017
Best Love Triangle ODC Story
The Darcy/Lizzy/Richard storyline has been hashed and rehashed time and again in JAFF. Ms Started, however has mixed the "Richard proposed first" with history to establish a perfect context for Lizzy's love for Darcy to grow in Richard's absence. Darcy's angst, no, outright anguish is palpable. Georgianna shines as a mature and perceptive young woman. No weaknesses. Indulge yourself in a well-crafted novel.
The Darcy/Lizzy/Richard storyline has been hashed and rehashed time and again in JAFF. Ms Started, however has mixed the "Richard proposed first" with history to establish a perfect context for Lizzy's love for Darcy to grow in Richard's absence. Darcy's angst, no, outright anguish is palpable. Georgianna shines as a mature and perceptive young woman. No weaknesses. Indulge yourself in a well-crafted novel.
July 1, 2017
It's a very high angst story, showing Darcy's heartbreak and suffering masterfully. Elizabeth had accepted colonel Fitzwilliam's offer before Darcy proposed. His painful battle between his honorable nature and his deep love for Elizabeth. A lifelong friendship of Fitzwilliam and Darcy put in jeopardy because of their love of the same woman. Beautifully written, true to characters, this book was a great pleasure to read. There are more than one HEA, even one for colonel Fitzwilliam.
Highly recommended with an ample supply of chocolate, tissues and a drink of your choice.
Highly recommended with an ample supply of chocolate, tissues and a drink of your choice.
February 12, 2018
Che Joana Starnes sappia scrivere - ma scrivere davvero - è palese anche per chi, come me, legge i suoi libri in una lingua che non è la propria.
Dalla sua penna sono già scaturiti The subsequent proposal e The second chance, che mi avevano attirata per il fatto che, pur essendo variation di Orgoglio e pregiudizio, incrociavano le storie di Darcy, Lizzie e gli altri con quelle dei personaggi di Persuasione l'una, e di Ragione e sentimento l'altra. Tuttavia di sicuro il mio romanzo preferito della scrittrice britannica - per ora - è proprio The unthinkable triangle, che, riguardo a personaggi e ambientazione, si mantiene strettamente nei limiti di Orgoglio e pregiudizio.
Nocciolo della storia è, come ci suggerisce il titolo, l'impensabile triangolo a cui la stessa Jane Austen aveva alluso, ovvero quello tra Elizabeth, Darcy e il colonnello Fitzwilliam. Nella storia originale, infatti, quest'ultimo confessa che, se non dovesse necessariamente sposare una donna ricca, essendo lui un figlio cadetto, le sue attenzioni ricadrebbero con piacere sulla secondogenita dei Bennet.
Nel romanzo di Joana Starnes, il colonnello, Richard, manda all'aria tutti i suoi precedenti propositi matrimoniali pur di coronare il suo sogno d'amore con Elizabeth, che, a sua volta, non dà peso alle condizioni economiche dell'uomo.
Darcy, dal canto suo, assiste impotente alla materializzazione di un incubo: la donna amata legata non solo ad un altro uomo, ma a quello che è il suo affezionato cugino nonché amico fraterno ...
Già in The subsequent proposal Joana Starnes era stata superba nel descrivere la disperazione di Darcy, allora permeata, almeno in principio, di rabbia a causa del rifiuto della sua proposta di matrimonio. Qui abbiamo invece la disperazione che nasce dal rimpianto per aver sprecato tempo prezioso: Richard, infatti, si dichiara ad Elizabeth ad Hunsford proprio lo stesso giorno in cui Darcy si era finalmente deciso a compiere lo stesso passo (in quella che probabilmente sarebbe stata, come nel romanzo originale, una proposta disastrosa).
La storia riesce ad essere piacevole ed originale: ad un certo punto ho pensato a ben tre svolte della vicenda, tutte prevedibili e noiose in realtà, ma la scrittrice è riuscita a trovare una strada inaspettata e realistica.
I personaggi mi sono piaciuti molto, li ho trovati tutti in linea con i corrispettivi austeniani (e ringrazio di tutto cuore l'autrice di aver tenuto fuori Wickham). Mrs Bennet è resa benissimo, non è presente in molte scene, ma mi ha strappato un sorriso ad ogni apparizione. Elizabeth è molto dolce, non una super donna come spesso accade in altre variation, e Mr Bennet perfettamente pacato ed amorevole.
Se dovessi trovare una nota negativa, direi che non mi sono sentita coinvolta nella storia tra Lizzy e Richard, probabilmente perché essa è stata raccontata solo attraverso quest'ultimo, e quasi nulla ci viene mostrato del suo sbocciare.
La mia parte preferita è stata di sicuro quella del chiarimento tra i due protagonisti principali, Darcy ed Elizabeth. Si è trattato di una scena molto delicata, dolce ed emozionante quale raramente mi è capitato di trovare in un romanzo.
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Dalla sua penna sono già scaturiti The subsequent proposal e The second chance, che mi avevano attirata per il fatto che, pur essendo variation di Orgoglio e pregiudizio, incrociavano le storie di Darcy, Lizzie e gli altri con quelle dei personaggi di Persuasione l'una, e di Ragione e sentimento l'altra. Tuttavia di sicuro il mio romanzo preferito della scrittrice britannica - per ora - è proprio The unthinkable triangle, che, riguardo a personaggi e ambientazione, si mantiene strettamente nei limiti di Orgoglio e pregiudizio.
Nocciolo della storia è, come ci suggerisce il titolo, l'impensabile triangolo a cui la stessa Jane Austen aveva alluso, ovvero quello tra Elizabeth, Darcy e il colonnello Fitzwilliam. Nella storia originale, infatti, quest'ultimo confessa che, se non dovesse necessariamente sposare una donna ricca, essendo lui un figlio cadetto, le sue attenzioni ricadrebbero con piacere sulla secondogenita dei Bennet.
Nel romanzo di Joana Starnes, il colonnello, Richard, manda all'aria tutti i suoi precedenti propositi matrimoniali pur di coronare il suo sogno d'amore con Elizabeth, che, a sua volta, non dà peso alle condizioni economiche dell'uomo.
Darcy, dal canto suo, assiste impotente alla materializzazione di un incubo: la donna amata legata non solo ad un altro uomo, ma a quello che è il suo affezionato cugino nonché amico fraterno ...
Già in The subsequent proposal Joana Starnes era stata superba nel descrivere la disperazione di Darcy, allora permeata, almeno in principio, di rabbia a causa del rifiuto della sua proposta di matrimonio. Qui abbiamo invece la disperazione che nasce dal rimpianto per aver sprecato tempo prezioso: Richard, infatti, si dichiara ad Elizabeth ad Hunsford proprio lo stesso giorno in cui Darcy si era finalmente deciso a compiere lo stesso passo (in quella che probabilmente sarebbe stata, come nel romanzo originale, una proposta disastrosa).
La storia riesce ad essere piacevole ed originale: ad un certo punto ho pensato a ben tre svolte della vicenda, tutte prevedibili e noiose in realtà, ma la scrittrice è riuscita a trovare una strada inaspettata e realistica.
I personaggi mi sono piaciuti molto, li ho trovati tutti in linea con i corrispettivi austeniani (e ringrazio di tutto cuore l'autrice di aver tenuto fuori Wickham). Mrs Bennet è resa benissimo, non è presente in molte scene, ma mi ha strappato un sorriso ad ogni apparizione. Elizabeth è molto dolce, non una super donna come spesso accade in altre variation, e Mr Bennet perfettamente pacato ed amorevole.
Se dovessi trovare una nota negativa, direi che non mi sono sentita coinvolta nella storia tra Lizzy e Richard, probabilmente perché essa è stata raccontata solo attraverso quest'ultimo, e quasi nulla ci viene mostrato del suo sbocciare.
La mia parte preferita è stata di sicuro quella del chiarimento tra i due protagonisti principali, Darcy ed Elizabeth. Si è trattato di una scena molto delicata, dolce ed emozionante quale raramente mi è capitato di trovare in un romanzo.
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June 2, 2018
I dreaded reading this book because of the premises and I was right, it was heart-wrenching.
I have not come across an author that can write Darcy's anguish quite as soulfully as Joanna Starnes.
Beautifully and so well written that I utterly believed every word from cover to cover.
Happily for me, the angst relented at about 75% and in the epilogue, the world was put to rights again. Restoring my equilibrium admirably.
The Colonel's proposal came the day before Darcy had planned his, sending him into depths of despair. It did not help that the Colonel asked Darcy to take care of his betrothed while he went of to the continent to fight off Boney.
Proving himself as her staunchest champion and protector, earned him her better opinion.
His cousin coming home injured, set his priorities straight but he could not hide his feelings from everyone... Especially after the Colonel ventures back to the frontline when he is recovered.
Ends in a HEA for ODC but how that came about, you will have to read the book to find out.
Heartily recommend this book!
I have not come across an author that can write Darcy's anguish quite as soulfully as Joanna Starnes.
Beautifully and so well written that I utterly believed every word from cover to cover.
Happily for me, the angst relented at about 75% and in the epilogue, the world was put to rights again. Restoring my equilibrium admirably.
The Colonel's proposal came the day before Darcy had planned his, sending him into depths of despair. It did not help that the Colonel asked Darcy to take care of his betrothed while he went of to the continent to fight off Boney.
Proving himself as her staunchest champion and protector, earned him her better opinion.
His cousin coming home injured, set his priorities straight but he could not hide his feelings from everyone... Especially after the Colonel ventures back to the frontline when he is recovered.
Ends in a HEA for ODC but how that came about, you will have to read the book to find out.
Heartily recommend this book!
November 5, 2017
As predicted by everyone in the JAFF group, I loved it. I only hope that Col Fitz realizes later that he did not love E as much as he thought. I am assuming we are supposed to gather that from the ending but I wish it was written specifically. I love him so much. I hate to think of him hurting. So, he isn't real! I love him still!
Reread: Oh, the angst for poor Col Fitzwilliam! My heart breaks for him.
Reread: Oh, the angst for poor Col Fitzwilliam! My heart breaks for him.
June 29, 2021
Wow, talk about being torn in 2, I didn't know who to root for...
First read was a paperback, second was Audiobook. Outstanding.
A wonderful story of being torn in 2 by the love of 2 men who are like brothers.
First read was a paperback, second was Audiobook. Outstanding.
A wonderful story of being torn in 2 by the love of 2 men who are like brothers.
March 6, 2016
I did say it somewhere, I have wanted to try a variation where Colonel Fitzwilliam proposes to her, and she accepts. She and Richard always seemed to fit, so what if he threw caution or the wind and got there first?
Oh yes, intriguing!
This was not a prudent match. She comes with 100 pounds a year. He with his his army pay, which is not a lot. They get engaged at Rosings, well not AT Rosings, but at that time.
Oh no! Drama! We all know Darcy was on his way. Yes yes we all know she would have turned him down, but now she never has the chance. Now Richard tells her what an awesome guy Darcy is, now Richard helps things turn around. Now Lizzy actually starts to think Darcy is a good guy. Maybe she will start to think he is too good? Too nice? Too likable ;)
We also know that come on, she wont leave Darcy in the dust. But the way she handles the Richard situation was good. They are not meant to be together and he will see it too. I also liked Darcy more this way, he was so madly in love and torn apart when his cousin is with the woman he loves. Poor poor Darcy.
Oh yes, intriguing!
This was not a prudent match. She comes with 100 pounds a year. He with his his army pay, which is not a lot. They get engaged at Rosings, well not AT Rosings, but at that time.
Oh no! Drama! We all know Darcy was on his way. Yes yes we all know she would have turned him down, but now she never has the chance. Now Richard tells her what an awesome guy Darcy is, now Richard helps things turn around. Now Lizzy actually starts to think Darcy is a good guy. Maybe she will start to think he is too good? Too nice? Too likable ;)
We also know that come on, she wont leave Darcy in the dust. But the way she handles the Richard situation was good. They are not meant to be together and he will see it too. I also liked Darcy more this way, he was so madly in love and torn apart when his cousin is with the woman he loves. Poor poor Darcy.
August 6, 2016
I have loved all of Joana Starnes books so eagerly anticipated this one but with some trepidation as I love the character of Colonel Fitzwilliam and worried for him and his HEA. The book drew me in really quickly and although it probably has more angst than I seek in these books I couldn't fail but be taken along on poor Darcy's tortuous journey so brilliantly written. For a long time I found it hard to see how the author could make things right for Darcy and Elizabeth but at no time could I possibly give up the journey with them.When they did finally find each other the scenes were written so beautifully but leaving things to the imagination so that anyone can read them. As for the Colonel's Happy Ever After? Now that looks like a whole new book!!
June 27, 2025
An emotional read that has not a word wrong. Mostly from Darcy's perspective as he struggles through the pain of seeing Elizabeth betrothed to another.
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November 3, 2017Check out my review on Diary of an Eccentric
October 22, 2015
This is a wonderfully written book. But I really hated Darcy for most of it. Now that doesn't make it a bad book, I mean you don't love Buffalo Bill but Silence of the Lambs is still a good book.
There are some book that are full of action, there are some books that are full of dialogue; this book is full of exposition and reflection. Most things happen away from the character and then you go through their emotions and feelings. And Darcy began to get on my last nerve on several occasions.
I have to confess I preferred Darcy's Denial: A Pride and Prejudice variation (https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/26761751-darcy-s-denial) more even though it doesn't have the standard HEA.
There are some book that are full of action, there are some books that are full of dialogue; this book is full of exposition and reflection. Most things happen away from the character and then you go through their emotions and feelings. And Darcy began to get on my last nerve on several occasions.
I have to confess I preferred Darcy's Denial: A Pride and Prejudice variation (https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/26761751-darcy-s-denial) more even though it doesn't have the standard HEA.
September 4, 2017
In this Pride & Prejudice variation, Richard Fitzwilliam proposes to Elizabeth before Darcy does and she says yes. Darcy is, of course, devistated to see is love engaged to another. However, duty calls and he must support the happy couple. He even agrees to watch over Elizabeth when Fitzwilliam goes to war. This story was gut wrenching as the author forced you to feel how trapped Darcy feels and yet his love continues. Fitzwilliam is just as stretched as he feels inadequate to care for a bride compared to his rich cousin. Elizabeth is caught in the middle without even knowing it.
I can't add much more without spoiling the story but the gut wrenching feelings and the story telling in this one made it a great read.
I can't add much more without spoiling the story but the gut wrenching feelings and the story telling in this one made it a great read.
December 3, 2015
Definitely unthinkable triangle!
This is the forth book I've read by this author and I have not been disappointed yet! In this alternative the Col asks Elizabeth to marry him the day before Darcy's disastrous proposal is to take place. She excepts him and this sends the story into all sorts of angst and hiding of feelings for Darcy. The journey to happiness for all is fraught with good intentions, and lots of hurt feelings and definite angst. But fear not the journey is worth it and you will be pleasantly surprised with the ending.
Definitely recommend for JAFF fans!
This is the forth book I've read by this author and I have not been disappointed yet! In this alternative the Col asks Elizabeth to marry him the day before Darcy's disastrous proposal is to take place. She excepts him and this sends the story into all sorts of angst and hiding of feelings for Darcy. The journey to happiness for all is fraught with good intentions, and lots of hurt feelings and definite angst. But fear not the journey is worth it and you will be pleasantly surprised with the ending.
Definitely recommend for JAFF fans!
October 17, 2015
This is a terrific book with a lot of emotional ups and downs that kept me guessing about a resolution until the very end. The writing is lovely; I wanted to treasure every word. I can't wait for the next book by this author!
July 27, 2019
My first Jane Austen world variation this year. Sadly it’s “great premise, disappointing in the execution” case for me.
Nothing too horrid but with a premise this golden, I’d expected it to be so much more delicious ya know?
Nothing too horrid but with a premise this golden, I’d expected it to be so much more delicious ya know?
September 27, 2015
Exquisite!
February 3, 2016
Author Joana Starnes does it again! Her latest release joins the ranks of yet another most excellent book by this author. With the multitude of emotions that I experienced as I read The Unthinkable Triangle, in my mind, it rightly became ‘the unforgettable triangle’!
This novel is replete with descriptions and nuances that put me in the middle of the action and allowed me to experience it with the characters. Ms. Starnes’s imageries of scenes are awe-inspiring, partly due to her firsthand knowledge of the country and area where the scenes are set but mostly due to her creative and ingenious talent for writing compelling narratives. Her words come alive on the page.
The novel begins at Hunsford with Lizzy visiting Charlotte. Just when Darcy decides to propose to Elizabeth, the unthinkable happens and Colonel Fitzwilliam asks for her hand first. A shaken Darcy tries to come to grips with this unexpected situation, his loyalty to his cousin, and his feelings for Elizabeth. How can he be around them, see their happiness? How in the world is he going to pretend to be only a friend to the one woman he loves more than life itself? Such torture, such torment for the master of Pemberley! My heart ached with his.
I truly adored the way Ms. Starnes chose to have the Colonel discover, quite by accident, Darcy’s hidden feelings for Elizabeth. The subtle revealing, in the dark of the night was poignant and heartfelt. I was so moved that I almost gasped aloud when reading the passage. Inevitably, I had to go back and read through it again.
Owing to certain circumstances, Elizabeth is much thrown in company with Darcy. As she grows to know the ‘real’ man and realize her love for him, her feelings of turmoil and betrayal are strong. As she struggled, I struggled with her. What was she to do?
I enjoyed Charlotte and her thoughts in this story. What can she see that Lizzy cannot? What about Georgiana? Does she see through her brother's facade? With the inclusion of the Colonel’s parents and a not so nice brother, the drama deepens. What role will they play in this unthinkable triangle? Then there is the addition of a well-developed new character and the triangle becomes even more complicated, or so it would seem.
This book elicited many emotions. I felt the joy of Colonel Fitzwilliam, then his confusion, frustration, and even his anger. I felt the deep love of Darcy and his anguish. (and he did agonize over his loss of Elizabeth and his devotion to the Colonel) Both men were good and even though I wanted Lizzy with Darcy, I didn’t want the Colonel to be hurt either. I had wondered and even worried how Ms. Starnes would ‘pull off’ the ‘happily ever after’ for Darcy and Elizabeth without too much trauma to the Colonel, but never fear, she did not disappoint! She handled it with her usual finesse. Well done, Joana Starnes. Exceptional writing and superb storyline! This is a book not to be missed!
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This novel is replete with descriptions and nuances that put me in the middle of the action and allowed me to experience it with the characters. Ms. Starnes’s imageries of scenes are awe-inspiring, partly due to her firsthand knowledge of the country and area where the scenes are set but mostly due to her creative and ingenious talent for writing compelling narratives. Her words come alive on the page.
The novel begins at Hunsford with Lizzy visiting Charlotte. Just when Darcy decides to propose to Elizabeth, the unthinkable happens and Colonel Fitzwilliam asks for her hand first. A shaken Darcy tries to come to grips with this unexpected situation, his loyalty to his cousin, and his feelings for Elizabeth. How can he be around them, see their happiness? How in the world is he going to pretend to be only a friend to the one woman he loves more than life itself? Such torture, such torment for the master of Pemberley! My heart ached with his.
I truly adored the way Ms. Starnes chose to have the Colonel discover, quite by accident, Darcy’s hidden feelings for Elizabeth. The subtle revealing, in the dark of the night was poignant and heartfelt. I was so moved that I almost gasped aloud when reading the passage. Inevitably, I had to go back and read through it again.
Owing to certain circumstances, Elizabeth is much thrown in company with Darcy. As she grows to know the ‘real’ man and realize her love for him, her feelings of turmoil and betrayal are strong. As she struggled, I struggled with her. What was she to do?
I enjoyed Charlotte and her thoughts in this story. What can she see that Lizzy cannot? What about Georgiana? Does she see through her brother's facade? With the inclusion of the Colonel’s parents and a not so nice brother, the drama deepens. What role will they play in this unthinkable triangle? Then there is the addition of a well-developed new character and the triangle becomes even more complicated, or so it would seem.
This book elicited many emotions. I felt the joy of Colonel Fitzwilliam, then his confusion, frustration, and even his anger. I felt the deep love of Darcy and his anguish. (and he did agonize over his loss of Elizabeth and his devotion to the Colonel) Both men were good and even though I wanted Lizzy with Darcy, I didn’t want the Colonel to be hurt either. I had wondered and even worried how Ms. Starnes would ‘pull off’ the ‘happily ever after’ for Darcy and Elizabeth without too much trauma to the Colonel, but never fear, she did not disappoint! She handled it with her usual finesse. Well done, Joana Starnes. Exceptional writing and superb storyline! This is a book not to be missed!
Posted at More Agreeably Engaged
June 6, 2019
Really happy to have found this variation on Pride and Prejudice.
Historically accurate, the style and language used is very similar to Austen, and the characters we know and love act exactly as those characters might be thought to act in these different (and believable) circumstances.
I thoroughly enjoyed this, and I also think the Audible narration was excellently done, helping to smooth over the few places where characters use too similar turns of phrase with distinctive voices and accents to make them more individual.
My only complaint is a tendency to use the phrase 'truth be told' frequently enough that it became intrusive. But anyone that knows me and how critical I can be, especially of attempts to play with beloved characters in my favourite universe, will realise that this is unusually high praise from me.
I immediately bought another of Starnes' Pride and Prejudice variations on Audible and will certainly look out for more of her works. I hope she may also play in the world of Persuasion, which is my other favourite Austen book.
Historically accurate, the style and language used is very similar to Austen, and the characters we know and love act exactly as those characters might be thought to act in these different (and believable) circumstances.
I thoroughly enjoyed this, and I also think the Audible narration was excellently done, helping to smooth over the few places where characters use too similar turns of phrase with distinctive voices and accents to make them more individual.
My only complaint is a tendency to use the phrase 'truth be told' frequently enough that it became intrusive. But anyone that knows me and how critical I can be, especially of attempts to play with beloved characters in my favourite universe, will realise that this is unusually high praise from me.
I immediately bought another of Starnes' Pride and Prejudice variations on Audible and will certainly look out for more of her works. I hope she may also play in the world of Persuasion, which is my other favourite Austen book.
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