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Beauty and terror await beyond the veil in this classic Christian fantasy.

The Council for Exploration Into Worlds Unseen believed there was more to reality than the Empire had taught them—but when they came a little too close to the truth, tragedy ended their work, leaving the terrifying and beautiful world behind their own still hidden.
Forty years later, one of the last Council members entrusts an ancient relic to the orphaned young woman Maggie a scroll that reveals the truth at last. Along with Nicolas Fisher, a Gypsy who hears things no one else can, Maggie sets out on a journey across the Seventh World to deliver the scroll to those who can use it.
But the price of truth may be too for Maggie and Nicolas are tearing at the Veil between the seen and the unseen, between good and evil, between forgotten past and treacherous future. Monstrous forces are already on their trail.
And when the Veil grows thin enough, it's anyone's guess what may come through.
WORLDS UNSEEN is the first book in The Seventh World Trilogy, a Christian fantasy adventure with hints of steampunk and depths of spiritual truth. If you love page-turning action, memorable characters, and inspirational fiction that confronts darkness, reveals breathtaking beauty, and moves your heart to connect more deeply with God, this series is for you.
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Life-Changing, Inspirational Christian From the Author
Hey, my name is Rachel Starr Thomson. I love Jesus and believe wholeheartedly in the power of fiction to change our lives. While nonfiction may teach us something, fiction allows us to experience it. When we're experiencing truth, beauty, struggle, and triumph, we find our lives enriched and deepened by what we read.
That's why I write. I want my readers to discover depths of truth about themselves, about the world, and about God that stretch and inspire them. My stories are always clean, but I don't shy away from hard questions and honest characters.
Whoever you are, I believe in you. I believe your life has immeasurable worth. I believe you were personally handcrafted by a loving Creator with a vision and purpose for your life. I believe your struggles, your dreams, and your hurts matter. I believe you walk a path no one else does, one that is intended to benefit the world. I hope you'll enjoy what you read and come back for more.
Most of all, I hope that through my stories, you'll forge a new depth of connection with the God who truly loves you.  
Genre-Bending Christian Biblical, Historical, Suspense, Fantasy—Always Lyrical, Always Christian, Always Changing the Game
Readers would be forgiven for asking what genre exactly Rachel Starr Thomson writes. Her work is described as spiritual, visionary, biblical, fantasy—and literary, poetic, and anchored in the real world.
Always a clean read, her books are suitable for teens but have the depth, beauty, and characterization to keep adults riveted.
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First published November 1, 2007

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Rachel Starr Thomson

79 books171 followers
Rachel Starr Thomson is in love with Jesus and convinced the gospel will change the world.

Rachel is a woman of many talents and even more interests: she’s a writer, editor, indie publisher, singer, speaker, Bible study teacher, and world traveler. The author of the Seventh World Trilogy, The Oneness Cycle, and many other books, she also tours North America and other parts of the world as a speaker and spoken-word artist with 1:11 Ministries.

Adventures in the Kingdom launched in 2015 as a way to bring together Rachel’s explorations, in fiction and nonfiction, of what it means to live all of life in the kingdom of God.

Rachel lives in the beautiful Niagara Region of southern Ontario, just down the river from the Falls. She drinks far too much coffee and tea, daydreams of visiting Florida all winter, and hikes the Bruce Trail when she gets a few minutes. A homeschool graduate from a highly creative and entrepreneurial family, she believes we’d all be much better off if we pitched our television sets out the nearest window.

LIFE AND WORK (BRIEFLY)
Rachel began writing on scrap paper sometime around grade 1. Her stories revolved around jungle animals and sometimes pirates (they were actual rats . . . she doesn’t remember if the pun was intended). Back then she also illustrated her own work, a habit she left behind with the scrap paper.

Rachel’s first novel, a humorous romp called Theodore Pharris Saves the Universe, was written when she was 13, followed within a year by the more serious adventure story Reap the Whirlwind. Around that time, she had a life-changing encounter with God.

The next several years were spent getting to know God, developing a new love for the Scriptures, and discovering a passion for ministry through working with a local ministry with international reach, Sommer Haven Ranch International. Although Rachel was raised in a strong Christian home, where discipleship was as much a part of homeschooling as academics, these years were pivotal in making her faith her own.

At age 17, Rachel started writing again, this time penning the essays that became Letters to a Samuel Generation and Heart to Heart: Meeting With God in the Lord’s Prayer.

In 2001, Rachel returned to fiction, writing what would become her bestselling novel and then a bestselling series–Worlds Unseen, book 1 of The Seventh World Trilogy.

A classic fantasy adventure marked by Rachel’s lyrical style, Worlds Unseen encapsulates much of what makes Rachel’s writing unique: fantasy settings with one foot in the real world; adventure stories that explore depths of spiritual truth; and a knack for opening readers’ eyes anew to the beauty of their own world–and of themselves.

In 2003, Rachel began freelance editing, a side job that soon blossomed into a full-time career. Four years later, in 2007, she co-founded Soli Deo Gloria Ballet with Carolyn Currey, an arts ministry that in 2015 would be renamed as 1:11 Ministries. To a team of dancers and singers, Rachel brought the power of words, writing and delivering original narrations, spoken-word poetry, and songs for over a dozen productions. The team has ministered coast-to-coast in Canada as well as in the United States and internationally.

Rachel began publishing her own work under the auspices of Little Dozen Press in 2007, but it was in 2011, with the e-book revolution in full swing, that writing became a true priority again. Since that time Rachel has published many of her older never-published titles and written two new fiction series, The Oneness Cycle and The Prophet Trilogy.

Over 30 of Rachel’s novels, short stories, and nonfiction works are now available in digital editions. Many are available in paperback as well, with more released regularly.

The God she fell in love with as a teenager has remained the focus of Rachel’s life, work, and speaking.

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Profile Image for C.S. Wachter.
Author 10 books103 followers
July 12, 2018
When Maggie leaves home and her guardian, Mrs. Cook, to fulfill her promise to a dying man and deliver a parchment, she has no inkling of the terror that would hunt her or the world-changing events she would stumble into. But what is meant to be will be, and Maggie, though she doesn’t know it yet, is no ordinary girl.

Arriving in the port town of Calai, Maggie soon becomes the target of some unsavory characters. Nicholas and his friend, Bear, come to her aid. Like Maggie, Nicholas is no ordinary boy and he’s had to cope with being different since he was small. But the real trouble is yet to come. Nicholas rescues Maggie again when an otherworldly creature comes after her. They escape and join some gypsies on their way to Pravik. Once again, Maggie is attacked by something supernatural, and they agree to travel alone, leaving the gypsies behind.

On arriving in Pravik, they are thrust into a skirmish between the High Police of the Overlord and a group of angry farmers and students. Maggie meets the man she is committed to deliver the parchment to and things start to heat up.

Meanwhile Mrs. Cook helps an old acquaintance rescue another special young person who is being hunted by the same evil that hunts Maggie. But all is not as it seems. Mrs. Cook and her party arrive in Pravik as well, and Maggie and Mrs. Cook reunite. As the story progresses, history unfolds.

This is a well-written and engaging tale. My only negative is that my favorite character didn’t get enough page time. It looks as if that will be corrected in Burning Light, the next book in The Seventh World Trilogy. Worlds Unseen is an enjoyable story that pulls the reader in. It is populated with rounded characters who learn and grow.
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Author 46 books460 followers
November 21, 2012
I normally do not read fantasy, but this year it seems I have stumbled into a rare breed of fantasy that I like; non-magical fantasy. After reading Truth and The Tiphereth Trilogy, I decided I was willing to try Rachel Thomson’s Seventh World Trilogy. I was not disappointed.

This whole series is nothing like I expected it to be. Although an allegory, Rachel went beyond the typical to make an extraordinary tale that not only was captivating, but gave some deeper insight into our faith. Without giving too much away, the allegory focused more on the beginning of the Bible.

The only thing that kept me from giving it five stars was that there were some pretty intense and dark moments in the book. The dark didn’t overshadow the good, and Rachel did well at not making it too dark, but it was very intense at points.

Rachel’s writing style is nothing short of lyrical. I reread many portions and read some of them aloud, just because they sounded amazing. I can see this as wonderful book to read aloud as a family. Rachel has what many traditionally published others struggle to obtain -- a unique and compelling writing style.

The story itself kept me on the edge of my seat. In fact I read the whole series in a little over a week while I was sick. It is a real page-turner and took many unexpected twists. The relationships that develop were nothing like what I expected in the beginning. It was so refreshing to read a book that didn’t turn out like I thought it would at the beginning.

I highly recommend this whole series those who love non-magical fantasy, allegories, adventure stories, and those looking for a book that is anything but normal.

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Profile Image for Davis Smith.
889 reviews110 followers
March 3, 2018
This was a refreshing and engaging, though not the most compelling, pleasure read. The writing is sharp and clean, and all the elements of a good story are there and fleshed out nicely. There were also some very interesting characters mixed in with the inevitable stereotypes. About halfway through, I realized the overt Christian allegory that was being intertwined, and started to feel some dread about the potential for yet another “preachy”, over-milked allegorical fantasy. But instead, the imagery lends itself to to the setting quite well. Two main complaints, though: 1. Thomson resorts far too much to tired fantasy tropes that have pretty much been sapped of life by now. Betrayal, death, separation, stereotypes, etc. 2. “A character tells a long, disengaging story to fill in the backstory and lay the ground for a quest.” The Lord of the Rings-type plot device that instantly disconnects me from the story. However, this was quite a pleasant adventure and the concept lends itself well to a trilogy.
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Author 27 books1,122 followers
June 28, 2016
I don't usually read high/epic fantasy, but I made an exception for Worlds Unseen, and I'm glad I did. It was a fantastic story of good vs. evil, and there was a nice Chronicles of Narnia-reminiscent Christian theme in the background that made it all the more interesting. At times, the storyline did seem to go too fast and it was occasionally confusing, which is why is doesn't have five stars.
My more thorough review here!
~Kellyn Roth
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1,711 reviews79 followers
November 12, 2016
This is a book that speaks deeply in one's soul. It's about World's Unseen that are not unlike the one we live in today. It's an allegory of the forces of good and evil and the choices that man must make. I found it to be of the same caliber as the Chronicles of Narnia. This is a beautiful and brave story and I am eager to read more by this author.
Profile Image for Shari Branning.
Author 12 books20 followers
August 8, 2016
I have really mixed feelings about this book. There were things that I really loved, and other things I really didn't.
The best thing about the book, I think, is the imagery. It is really, truly beautiful in a way I haven't seen in a long time. It's whimsical and vivid at the same time, and full of wonder and longing and mystery. I adored the shadow beasts, and the way she described her gifted characters gifts. Classic fantasy at its best.
What I didn't like so much about it...It's hard to get into. I started reading it, put it down, and didn't bother to pick it back up again for several months. Part of that was due to characters that felt generalized and...not exactly shallow, but lacking realness. Ms. Thomson uses an omniscient point of view, never staying in any one character's perspective for long, and so I never was able to care for any of the characters fully. They became more interesting as the book went on, but not human to the extent of being able to love them. I think my biggest complaint for this book was the way she handled a potential romantic subplot. The book isn't a romance, but it *seemed* like there could have been potential for one developing, until the sudden introduction of another character (for whom there is even less character development than the others) who inexplicably and suddenly makes everything go haywire, leaving me blindsided and more than a little annoyed. The whole thing felt really awkward and distant, like it was being held at arm's length while wearing rubber gloves. Worse, it didn't make sense either logically or emotionally, and wasn't horribly clear, leaving me wondering 'What WAS that?'
This book definitely doesn't have the same modern sensibilities I'm used to in Christian fantasy. It wasn't romanticized, in that there wasn't any one central hero to strive and sacrifice and make my heart bleed. But it had its own unique appeal. It reminded me of Tolkien in a way (only less long-winded), reveling in beauty and wonder, and showcasing a group of very different characters fighting the good fight for very different reasons.
Overall, I liked it. I was just disappointed that I couldn't love it. All the right elements were there, and the writing and concepts were elegant and rich, it just didn't pack the emotional punch it could have. If you're a fan of classic fantasy and can appreciate beautiful world building, then you would probably enjoy this.
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Author 12 books11 followers
November 27, 2016
As a second-generation homeschooler and a Christian and a speculative fiction lover, I am THE market for this book. However, as a voracious reader and long-time reviewer of speculative fiction, I am also very picky. It is rare for me to find a series that both meets my high expectations and gives kudos to Christianity and homeschooling.

Worlds Unseen (The Seventh World Trilogy Book 1) by Rachel Starr Thomson is a story of darkness versus the light. It’s good versus bad, and I’m happy to see archetypes and imagery reminiscent of Celtic and medieval fairy tales.

Maggie Sheffield begins as a subtly weak character, often being saved by other characters and never the first one to speak up or take that leap. Halfway through the narrative she reaches an epiphany and becomes a purposeful, strong character. Her actions early in the novel hint at this potential - she is the one who offers to take on a dangerous mission, and we know early on that she is no stranger to adventure/trauma.

Worlds Unseen is a great epic fantasy read for adults (and young adults) who enjoyed C. S. Lewis’ Chronicles of Narnia as a kid.
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Author 36 books210 followers
April 16, 2016
This was a really neat read. The storyline and fantasy is intriguing; it's sort of allegorical but with a few twists not in the usual allegory. It's as if the author took the idea of the great spiritual battle we wage in this world and just adapted it for her world, without necessarily trying to teach anything. I liked that about it because our real, epic struggle with evil makes the best kind of story, but it's very recognizable and doesn't need to be rehashed in every detail. The world Rachel Thomson created was one of my favorite aspects because it's similar to our world but everything is under a different name.
I almost gave this book three stars because I think the characters could have been developed more and the pacing slowed down a bit without losing its wonderful suspense. But I anticipate the two subsequent books to fill out the story and make it very satisfying.
Rachel Thomson writes beautifully, lyrically, and grippingly. I am definitely going to delve into more of her work! She's quite prolific.
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2,207 reviews29 followers
August 16, 2012
Until about halfway through, I thought I'd be giving this book 3 stars. I enjoyed it but it didn't seem like anything special. Once all the piece started falling in place I saw it deserved more. This will be hard for me to explain, but I can only imagine the author has a strong Christian upbringing. Now if that's not something that appeals to you don't let it scare you away. The author turns bible stories into a fantasy realm instead. If you're not religious this can be read as a straight fantasy. If you are, you can put your biblical figures into the roles and legends of the novel. The end left me hopeful of where the author can take this story since it is supposed to be a trilogy. I hope she can live up to my expectations.
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227 reviews8 followers
November 25, 2017
I love a good Sci - Fi type book. I could have liked the ending better, but all in all it kept my interest so much so that I couldn't put it down for long.
Profile Image for Sara Quinones.
16 reviews
July 6, 2019
Worlds Unseen wants to be a Christian fantasy, and it does send across a Christian message without being preachy. But unfortunately, while the writing is nice, the actual content is just all over the place. Important things like character development are rushed and "told" when they shouldn't be, while the plot can't deliver enough tension to keep me engaged despite that. Thomson has good prose and good ideas, but she just doesn't tell them in a way that showcases their full potential.

Worldbuilding: Barebones. It's steampunk, but that's never mentioned beyond a few references to trains. There's an evil empire that's evilly oppressing people, but other than some really strict police and a couple mentioned laws, we never see oppression. Geographically, there's an island and forests and uuuuuh...I don't know. The descriptions of places in the world are pretty, but the world itself just feels like a blank slate. By the end of the book, I still don't even know the capital of the country (or Maggie's country's NAME) or the customs, culture, etc, of any place. The only stand-out were the diary entries in some chapters, recording mankind's betrayal against the King.

Plot: Weird. The book has a strong prologue, then a meandering first chapter, them suddenly a lot of action, then meandering, and so on. Constant rise-and-fall that never really reached enough highs or lows to suck me in. It improved around the third-way mark with genuinely tense action, and my interest went from "I'm just killing time" to "okay, what's going to happen next?"...and then, due to characters I couldn't care about (see below), it falls apart around the halfway point. I did a lot of skimming because I just didn't care about what was going on, but didn't think it deserved a DNF. It presents a lot of stuff that should be good--mysteries, secret resistances, being hunted, spiritual growth--but just...isn't delivered properly.

Characters: The characters, unfortunately, fell flat. The omniscient narrator meant I couldn't really connect with any of them, since I never got too deeply in their heads. This meant a lot of scenes meant to be emotional just didn't draw reactions from me--in fact, the most anguished I was, was when a cat died because I'm a cat lover. Furthermore, there was way too much telling instead of showing. I was told Maggie had changed, but I didn't believe it. I was told Mrs. Cook and everyone had a grand adventure, but I didn't believe it. And I was told Maggie and Jerome were in love and I REALLY didn't believe that, because that was the most out-of-nowhere romance I've read in a long time. They knew each other for one day, had two conversations, and suddenly that's love? If it was presented as Maggie being an infatuated teen, I'd buy it, but the author clearly wants us to believe it's a grand romance. It was so infuriating it knocked off an entire star by itself.

Verdict: 1.5/5
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72 reviews5 followers
July 31, 2021
[3.5]

“He loved you very much,” Nicolas told her. “I heard the love in his heart. It was beautiful.”

“Let history write the story, my love,” she said. “It is your task to make it.”

“I survived, because people loved me and I knew how to love them back”

“To bring cosmos out of chaos,”

“He had wounds of his own, and something in her wished to heal them”

What an amazing story about love, darkness and light. I can definitely recognize the Christian metaphor on here, and although I’m not a Christian, I can easily admire the beautiful essence of this story. The characters are well developed for it being the first book out of a trilogy, although the characters that are surely not appearing on the others are not well treated and a little bit of more characterization should have been great, and the setting is immaculate! When Rachel Starr describes the environment you can really feel the emotions and the physical things she’s trying to evoke as well as the same story. I am profoundly in love with Jerome and Nicolas, I think being gifted with hearing is just spectacular.

Definitely talks about important stuff like the power of truth, as well as the strength found in love, resilience, belief, and loyalty. Additionally, the fragility of admiration, and of a blinded heart.

On the other hand, my own experience was not good at all since I spent too much time on it, but anyway it was a full roller coaster of energy and I am definitely looking forward for reading the other two books.
I think this is a book with a background so well written and taught. The story tells itself, and really touches the reader’s heart, soul and spirit. 🪶


Bottom line tho, the cover is horrendous compared to the precious story written behind it. And, that end of Jerome just shattered my heart in millions of pieces.
Profile Image for Jill Williamson.
Author 70 books1,609 followers
October 14, 2009
Maggie Sheffield lives in the city of Londren. She encounters an injured old man who carries many secrets, including an old scroll. The man shares information about an old group of friends, members of the Council for Exploration into Worlds Unseen. As the man lay dying, he begs that someone take the scroll to the city of Pravik and give it to a man named Huss. Maggie is drawn by the old man’s story and volunteers to help.

Partway through her journey, Maggie seeks out an inn to spend the night. She gets lost in the city of Calai. Two rowdy thieves attempt to rob her, but she is rescued by a young gypsy man named Nicolas and his black bear.

Nicolas sends Bear to the forest to wait for him and escorts Maggie to a nearby inn. Once she has a room, he leaves her to head back to the forest. But he doesn’t get far before he senses the hounds that are chasing her. Nicolas returns to rescue Maggie from those who hunt her. The two set off on a journey for Pravik, which is no simple task. Dark forces want the scroll Maggie carries and will stop at nothing to get it. Maggie joins up with the last surviving members of the Council to discover the truth.

Worlds Unseen is a much more complex story than the intro I’ve given. Thomson weaves several characters’ journeys together on this fantasy adventure, though Maggie is the heroine. I enjoyed Thomson’s allegorical style. She creates a wonderfully realistic fantasy world. I would have liked to see more development between Maggie and Jerome. Their relationship seemed to happen very quickly. It was a bit difficult to follow all of the characters at first, but once things got going, everything came together in an exciting conclusion. Recommended.
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28 reviews1 follower
January 29, 2014
I was drawn into this book from the first page and remained interested all the way through. But I was put off by the inclusion of two historical figures--Jarin Huss and Jerome. The author's website says that the The Seventh World is based loosely on our own, real world. The inclusion of these specific individuals fighting against an evil government system makes it seem as if the author is equating the evil, demonic even, system of her novel with the Roman Catholic Church, the entity against which the real Jarin Huss and Jerome struggled. If that's what she meant to do, then I'd rather not read any more of her books, no matter how entertaining the story is. If that implication is not what she intended, she would have done much better not to have included these historical figures at all. I'm uncertain as to whether I'll read the other two books in the trilogy, even though this one had a good story. I also had a few minor quibbles with the writing--overly poetic in places, which didn't mesh with the less poetic parts, and what felt like a rushed and formulaic climax and too-drawn-out conclusion--but those wouldn't be enough on their own to prevent me from finishing the series. The uncertainty about whether she intended the parallel between the Catholic Church and her evil empire, however, is making me hesitant to continue.
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698 reviews2 followers
August 29, 2016
wonderful book! I really love this author. While I read a lot of books, there aren't many authors who write consistently great Christian fiction, but Rachel is one of them. She shows the truth about our God; His love for us, His hate of sin, His judgment, and His coming Kingdom. She shows it all in a way that keeps you riveted, and wanting to know what will happen next. She shows sin for the evil it is without trying to pretty it up. She shows too, the difference between the world's love and God's love, and how very powerful it is. Great book and series!
Profile Image for Lydia.
68 reviews
October 5, 2016
I generally have a tired view of Christian fantasy because they all seem to run together, reuse the same old stereotypes, and get too preachy in the end with their themes. Rachel Thomson did better than most, but there were still many places in the chapters where it just felt like she was trying to hard to make people agree with her characters views or was trying to hard to communicate the greatness of God - and came off as preachy and stereotypical to me. This is all personal opinions, though, and I know everyone responds differently to these kinds of stories.
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194 reviews2 followers
May 1, 2021
The writing feels elementary and too quickly, unrealistically paced at times, but enjoyable to read. I like the concept of the Gifted but the Otherworld came across a bit heavy-handedly for me. I absolutely loved Nicolas and Maggie's friendship and characterization, but felt other characters lacked the necessary development for me to care about their fate. The writing, pacing, and descriptions felt like I was watching a movie--again, enjoyable, but leaving me wanting to have been given more to work with as a reader.
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295 reviews
July 21, 2010
I would like to give this a high 3 stars. I enjoyed the story line, but I did not understand the "big" change in the main character. I felt like the author just kept telling me things, ie: who she loved, how strong she was now, how she wasn't the same girl. But, I felt like she never showed me how these things came to be. I am interested in where the story is going and look forward to the next book. I just hope for better character development.
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Author 7 books15 followers
October 19, 2021
This book wasn't for my personal taste, but it's a well-balanced fantasy story that is likely to entertain some Christian and non-Christian readers. The religious aspect isn't so heavy that it would put other readers off, unless they're very sensitive to the topic, in which case I don't recommend it. I think if you're neither a very plot-focused, a world-building-focused, or a character-focused reader, this book might have a nice balance for you.
Author 11 books55 followers
November 2, 2016
Ok, so I love this author! Have read several of her works over the past few months and I have to say here stories touch my heart. "World's Unseen" is no different. Great epic Christian fantasy! This is only book one and I do plan on finishing the series. Requesting my library to order the series. Good versus evil, lives redeemed, and sacrifices made, this is a good read! I give it five stars and can recommend to all fantasy lovers, teens on up.
Profile Image for Angela Wilson.
13 reviews
January 17, 2018
Just not my cup of tea I guess. I lost interest about halfway through. Personally, it just felt like there was too much hinting at future events. But the plot did move rather well. Just not the kind of story I really get into.
Profile Image for Carol Kean.
427 reviews73 followers
June 15, 2022
The author bio captured me before any description of this book did. Magic, ancient parchments, visions, monsters, otherworldly villains, treachery, battles, evil overlords, governments to overthrow, good citizens dying for the cause: nothing new here, but as the author of Ecclesiastes said thousands of years ago, there is nothing new under the sun. Stories and tropes get repeated all the time; what sets one apart from another is how well the story is told. This is a well-told story.

Thomson's voice is lyrical, with a rhythm and a poetry that sound almost Biblical.

And that brings me back to the author bio. She addresses the reader with a personal message. Excerpts here:

- Hey, my name is Rachel Starr Thomson.
- I believe wholeheartedly in the power of fiction to change our lives.
- I want my readers to discover depths of truth about themselves, about the world...
- Whoever you are, I believe in you. I believe your life has immeasurable worth. I believe you were personally handcrafted by a loving Creator with a vision and purpose for your life. I believe your struggles, your dreams, and your hurts matter. I believe you walk a path no one else does, one that is intended to benefit the world.

There's more, but the timing of her words won me over. I tend to think there is no such thing as a loving Creator God, much less that I was planned and formed by this God, and that this God notices or cares what I think or do. "Worlds Unseen" opens with a populace that no longer believes in God, but a few prophets and poets speak of a God of light and love, and some dare to anticipate a Return of the King.

The powers that be have purged all records of such a King ever having lived on earth, but those who know better start sharing what they know, and a revolution is launched.

A man on a mission dies before he can deliver the ultimate weapon against the regime, and an orphan takes up his cause, risking her life to carry an old scroll to one man who might know what to do with it. Along the way she meets a boy with a bear, an encampment of "Gypsies" (someone didn't get the message that the Romani people regard Gypsy as an ethnic slur), a rebel leader (the charismatic Ploughman), a princess, and a scholar who inspires the revolutionaries.

Summarizing the plot does not convey in the least the myth and the magic of it.

While "Worlds Unseen" has a C.S. Lewis vibe, it is much more 21st Century in the prose style. Fast paced to the point that each scene is very short, the way Poldark the TV series is compared to Poldark the novel. It may not be a bad thing, but it does leave the reader feeling a little cheated when Maggie meets her true love. Well, that happened fast! Now, will it last...?

Good people die in this story, and it's heart-rending. Good thing we didn't spend all that much time with them, getting attached--so that's one perk of the swift narrative. I hope to see more of the blind girl and more of Pat in the next installment. More Bear! More Nicholas!

The demonic elements, I am in no hurry to meet again.

For a fast-paced fantasy with the richness (but quite the depth) of Tolkien and Lewis, Thomson's "Worlds Unseen" is a pleasing place to begin.
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400 reviews16 followers
May 5, 2019
Intriguing story of hidden gifts and strange awakenings

This is a story that grabs your attention and won't let go. I read it in one day, because I could not put it down!

The prologue opens with the scene of an assassin coming for her intended victims and reluctantly leaving one member of the household alive. Then the author fast-forwards, and we meet the girl that wasn't slain that fateful day.

Maggie is an orphan entrusted first to the care of the kindly Mrs. Cook, and then to John and Mary, the couple whose house was burned to the ground. When she rescues a sweet old man who used to being the children at the orphanage presents, she learns there is more to her story than she could have imagined. The dying man entrusts to Maggie's care an ancient scroll, which she promises to take to a scholar in a distant city. Not long after she begins her journey Maggie meets a delightful young man, who can hear and understand what others don't, and he helps her escape fearful dark creatures who will stop at nothing short of their destruction to recover the scroll.

Meanwhile, a nobleman who was also once involved with the secret group that Maggie's guardians were a part of, rescues a blind girl with the power to see what others can't. Evil forces are pursuing her, as well. But she has had an encounter with the King of the universe, and He has claimed and empowered her to fight. When the nobleman shows up with the girl at Mrs. Cook's doorstep, she finds herself involved in this but of intrigue, too.

All roads lead to Pravik, the capital of the Eastern kingdom, and a showdown between the forces of good and evil. There are casualties and triumphs, both physical and spiritual along the way, as well as many discoveries about themselves and the unseen world for the travelers.

Set in a fantasy world not unlike medieval Europe, Worlds Unseen has it all--princesses and paupers, rebels and gypsies, magic, romance, mystical writings, good and evil, terrifying creatures and valiant battles fought for the fate of the kingdom. Once you connect with the characters and plot, it's hard to disengage!

If you liked C.S. Lewis's Chronicles of Narnia or J.R.R. Tolkien's Lord of the Rings books, then you should find this one intriguing, as well. Allow yourself a substantial block of time to read it, because, once you start, you may not want to stop until it's done! If you're like me, you'll be hungry to read the other two books in the trilogy, too.
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125 reviews1 follower
December 30, 2017
Worlds Unseen suffers from a problem that characterises many of Thomson’s works: rushing the story. This takes a few forms. First is unrealistic jumps in time or place. For example, one scene ends with a character leaving to search for another over a vast area, and the next scene from the character’s perspective begins with him having found her. This communicates an unrealistically easy search and strained my ability to believe in the story. The other way rushing the story appears is that the action scenes are over too quickly. They’re too general, too distant, not detailed enough for proper fantasy suspense and excitement. At another level they can be unrealistic (does a ship really burn that quickly?). If there’s an area in which I’d love to see the author improve her skill, it’s this depth and pacing of the scene-by-scene development.

Part of me hesitates to criticise the book, because Worlds Unseen is by Rachel Starr Thomson, and I love her Prophet Trilogy (Abbadon’s Eve, Comes the Dragon and Beloved). Worlds Unseen shows the seeds of their thematic prowess, but Thomson doesn’t pull it off quite so well here.

As a redeeming feature, some of the characters were genuinely interesting, particularly Lord Robert and his interest with the spiritual realm. It’s Thomson’s characters and their relationship with truth and lies that is her real strength, and again, Worlds Unseen shows the seeds of a strength which we'll later see done really well in the Prophet Trilogy.

Worlds Unseen held my interest and (as an earlier work) shows Thomson’s developing promise, but it doesn’t motivate me to continue with the series immediately.

Rating: 2 stars (Promising but not yet there. Would consider reading the next book eventually.)
233 reviews7 followers
March 1, 2025
“The King has gone from the land.” Though all nature holds its silence, there are Gifted persons walking in the world of men, and the King is whispered to be coming again.

The holy ones of God, the Shearim, have committed themselves to be a barrier to hold back the darkness that presses to gobble up the earth. To protect the children of men, they have sacrificed themselves. But that veil grows thin, and wicked men arise who practice obscene arcane arts, inviting the darkness into the world.

Everyone needs a bustling Mrs. Cook to offer a cup of tea and take care of us. Maggie and Pat—struggling orphans though they are—not the least. When a dying old man shows up on the doorstep, a quest is begun that will unravel the lies that have woven the solid empire together.

Rich characters, full of hopes, imaginings, and weird connections with the supernatural will make you forget our world as you enter this one. And yet, we can see that we are traversing an allegory inviting us to seek the true and living King. “His reign shall not be taken up first on the Throne of Men, but in their Hearts…”
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Author 1 book8 followers
August 30, 2024
Maggie’s story begins in the Prologue as we meet her adoptive parents as their lives are cut short by a mysterious woman. In chapter one, Maggie is briefly introduced along with Mrs. Eva Cook, who was once Maggie’s foster mother. Old Dan stumbles into the picture bearing an old scroll that reminds Mrs. Cook of a secret society that she, Old Dan, and Maggie’s adoptive parents had all been part of. Maggie takes on the quest of getting the scroll to Huss in Pravik after Old Dan died. Along the way she must depend on Nicolas and gypsies to even get to Pravik, despite the efforts of the dark forces which are drawn by the scroll. Maggie discovers others who were part of the secret society. In addition, she learns of an underground rebellion involving Huss, Jerome, Libuse, and the Ploughman.

For those who want to find them, there are Christian undertones and themes. In all, it is a traditional light versus dark, peasants seek to overthrow the ruling power. Overall, it was an enjoyable read and peek into a fantasy world.

I bought this book, and this is my honest and unbiased review.
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320 reviews7 followers
August 14, 2018
I enjoy a fast-paced book and one without a bunch of 'filler' to bog down the story. The pacing of this one was part of the reason I liked Thomson's first book in this trilogy. Other things I liked were the originality of it while still putting me in mind of Narnia (the very first fantasy series I read in the dark ages when I wasn't yet a teenager).
The Christian themes and identifiable characters placed in a fantasy setting, although an easily recognized world, were a pleasure to follow. It was also nice to read an adventurous story without lewdness inserted or filthy language many writers feel the need to add.
I'm just starting the second book and am confident that it will be as much a pleasure to read as the story continues. I'm looking forward to the return of the King in more ways than one!
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21 reviews
July 20, 2019
Excellent - just read for the second time

Rachel Starr Thomson creates amazing worlds; I've enjoyed each book of hers I've read to date, and this is no exception. Bought it a while back, then splurged this week and purchased the entire series plus another series she's created.

This is the second time I've read this novel. The author draws us quickly into a world where the forgotten is becoming known once more, and the unseen becoming clear - to some, at least. A very enjoyable alt medieval universe, good vs evil tale. Looking forward to reading the next book in this series!
36 reviews
July 8, 2019
Want a little fresh breeze of beauty and courage? I read this trilogy curled up by the Christmas tree, on the bus crisscrossing Jerusalem, even walking home down our very steep and winding road, bursting into a grin at the last line. I keep thinking of them as songs for the weary heart. I needed an oasis and a fresh inrush of courage, and this time it came through Rachel's writing, with all its bracing beauty.
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130 reviews2 followers
April 18, 2023
Rachel Starr Thomson has created another new world for good and evil to battle one another. Hmm, just noticed that I read this a little over a month ago...should have read it in April because the bad guy is collecting taxes! (lol)

The protagonists are characters to care for and about. The plot is busy. The denouement is appropriately paced and of a good length. S-T has also managed to avoid creating cardboard characters of absolute goodness...their flaws and foibles add to the story.
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