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Legend of Tal #2
A Queen's Command
The legend of Tal Harrenfel lives on, and a new song spreads across the Westreach. But as a devil inhabits Garin and old enemies and old flames haunt Tal, their victory promises to be short-lived...
Tal, Garin, and their companions survived the traps of one Extinguished at great cost, but their troubles have only begun. Garin having learned why Tal took him under his wing, the secret has broken them apart, even as circumstance and need force them to travel together. The roads to the elven realm of Gladelyl, once the safest in the Westreach, are rife with danger. And Tal is bound to the commands of the Elf Queen he cannot trust.
Upon reaching Elendol, the capital of Gladelyl, they find their troubles go further. With the gates to the East open, Elendol is in turmoil. The nobles strive for greater power, while the underclass and Eastern immigrants seek new rights. And all the while, an ancient enemy strives to turn them all against each other…
Now Garin must come to terms with his devil, and Tal with his challenges both past and present, before civil war tears Elendol apart…
Tal, Garin, and their companions survived the traps of one Extinguished at great cost, but their troubles have only begun. Garin having learned why Tal took him under his wing, the secret has broken them apart, even as circumstance and need force them to travel together. The roads to the elven realm of Gladelyl, once the safest in the Westreach, are rife with danger. And Tal is bound to the commands of the Elf Queen he cannot trust.
Upon reaching Elendol, the capital of Gladelyl, they find their troubles go further. With the gates to the East open, Elendol is in turmoil. The nobles strive for greater power, while the underclass and Eastern immigrants seek new rights. And all the while, an ancient enemy strives to turn them all against each other…
Now Garin must come to terms with his devil, and Tal with his challenges both past and present, before civil war tears Elendol apart…
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First published October 26, 2020
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About the author
J.D.L. Rosell
39 books513 followers**ANNOUNCEMENT** The third Legend of Tal deluxe edition is live on Kickstarter through October 7th! Look up An Emperor's Gamble to pick it up. Books 1 & 2 are also available!
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J.D.L. Rosell was swept away on a journey when he stepped foot outside his door and into The Hobbit. He hasn't stopped wandering since.
In his writing, he tries to recapture the wonder, adventure, and poignancy that captivated him as a child. His explorations have taken him to worlds set in over a dozen novels and five series, which include Ranger of the Titan Wilds, Legend of Tal, The Runewar Saga, and The Famine Cycle.
When he's not off on a quest, Rosell enjoys his newfound hobby of archery and older pastimes of hiking and landscape photography. But every hobbit returns home, and if you step softly and mind the potatoes, you may glimpse him curled up with his wife and two cats, Zelda and Abenthy, reading a good book or replaying his favorite video games.
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Books by J.D.L. Rosell:
RANGER OF THE TITAN WILDS
1. The Last Ranger
2. The First Ancestor
3. The Hidden Guardian
4. The Wilds Exile (Out Now!)
5. The Titan Revenant (March 2026 release)
LEGEND OF TAL
1. A King's Bargain
2. A Queen's Command
3. An Emperor's Gamble
4. A God's Plea
A Battle Between Blood (Novella)
THE RUNEWAR SAGA
1. The Throne of Ice & Ash
2. The Crown of Fire & Fury
3. The Stone of Iron & Omen
Book 4 TBA
THE FAMINE CYCLE - Available as a complete box set
1. Whispers of Ruin
2. Echoes of Chaos
3. Requiem of Silence
Secret Seller (Prequel)
The Phantom Heist (Novella)
GODSLAYER RISING - Available as a complete box set
1. Catalyst
2. Champion
3. Heretic
* * * * *
J.D.L. Rosell was swept away on a journey when he stepped foot outside his door and into The Hobbit. He hasn't stopped wandering since.
In his writing, he tries to recapture the wonder, adventure, and poignancy that captivated him as a child. His explorations have taken him to worlds set in over a dozen novels and five series, which include Ranger of the Titan Wilds, Legend of Tal, The Runewar Saga, and The Famine Cycle.
When he's not off on a quest, Rosell enjoys his newfound hobby of archery and older pastimes of hiking and landscape photography. But every hobbit returns home, and if you step softly and mind the potatoes, you may glimpse him curled up with his wife and two cats, Zelda and Abenthy, reading a good book or replaying his favorite video games.
* * * * *
Books by J.D.L. Rosell:
RANGER OF THE TITAN WILDS
1. The Last Ranger
2. The First Ancestor
3. The Hidden Guardian
4. The Wilds Exile (Out Now!)
5. The Titan Revenant (March 2026 release)
LEGEND OF TAL
1. A King's Bargain
2. A Queen's Command
3. An Emperor's Gamble
4. A God's Plea
A Battle Between Blood (Novella)
THE RUNEWAR SAGA
1. The Throne of Ice & Ash
2. The Crown of Fire & Fury
3. The Stone of Iron & Omen
Book 4 TBA
THE FAMINE CYCLE - Available as a complete box set
1. Whispers of Ruin
2. Echoes of Chaos
3. Requiem of Silence
Secret Seller (Prequel)
The Phantom Heist (Novella)
GODSLAYER RISING - Available as a complete box set
1. Catalyst
2. Champion
3. Heretic
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March 4, 2023
As sequels go, this is probably one of the better ones.
I thoroughly enjoyed my time with this outing, more than book one. That's not to say book one wasn't good, it was, but this book held my attention throughout.
The character and world building is this story's strength. With mystery, twists and turns, and rich lore, it has all the hallmarks of classic high fantasy.
Tal is a brilliantly intriguing character that is written so well, particularly his internalised thoughts.
The pacing is spot on here, and the writing style is just up my alley.
Im looking forward to continuing this excellent fantasy adventure in the final two books in the series.
Thank you for taking the time to read my review.
I thoroughly enjoyed my time with this outing, more than book one. That's not to say book one wasn't good, it was, but this book held my attention throughout.
The character and world building is this story's strength. With mystery, twists and turns, and rich lore, it has all the hallmarks of classic high fantasy.
Tal is a brilliantly intriguing character that is written so well, particularly his internalised thoughts.
The pacing is spot on here, and the writing style is just up my alley.
Im looking forward to continuing this excellent fantasy adventure in the final two books in the series.
Thank you for taking the time to read my review.
June 18, 2023
Pretty much everything I said about book one still rings true here. These books are a delight so far. I love that I can read something a little shorter and simpler and walk away feeling this well rewarded
A Queen’s Command took off running with the crew (plus the Dancing Feathers) off to the elven land to see if Garin can be saved from his devil. Rosell took me by surprise by bringing political turmoil and civil war into the plot – the elves are about to split into factions. Tensions are high as different races are fleeing the East and settling in the elven city. Another Extinguished is stoking the flames. The entire situation is waiting for one final push into chaos.
One of Rosell’s biggest strengths is that he gives the reader just enough back story to feel invested in the characters and conflict without bogging us down. I barely know these new characters but here I am rooting for a sad Minotaur, an overwhelmed gnome, a cranky old monkey, and even Tal’s ex.
Generally I thought the plot was more interesting too. Geminia and Gladelyl brought back World of Warcraft nostalgia with night elves, minotaur (tauren), gnomes too, giant kin trees and rival elf factions. Specifically about the elves, I liked seeing the world/food/society/customs. Another of Rosell’s talents is bringing us these aspects through character experiences vs through description.
The characters are pretty good here too. I like how they grow and start making tough decisions about forgiveness and what is important in their lives. Hard truths are laid bare and the fallout is navigated. There is a big theme of good vs. evil tied into Garin’s character arc and I just love it! Is a tool evil just because it’s been used by evil people? What are these “devils”? Tal tied into this too at the end and I can’t wait to learn more about his sorcery going forward.
Feeding off of that: all the excerpts of “A Fable of Song and Blood” are starting to make some sense. The mage is painting a story of powerful, possibly sentient magic and heresy involving the “dark” side of things. Getting Yuldor’s backstory was the best touch because I feel like “the big background story” is starting to reveal itself. Tal’s “hidden talents” and Garin’s discovery that not all dark things are evil… Oh .. well .. no spoilers but this is all shaping up to be very interesting later on.
Overall: lots of action, character, magic, and story is packed into these books
A Queen’s Command took off running with the crew (plus the Dancing Feathers) off to the elven land to see if Garin can be saved from his devil. Rosell took me by surprise by bringing political turmoil and civil war into the plot – the elves are about to split into factions. Tensions are high as different races are fleeing the East and settling in the elven city. Another Extinguished is stoking the flames. The entire situation is waiting for one final push into chaos.
One of Rosell’s biggest strengths is that he gives the reader just enough back story to feel invested in the characters and conflict without bogging us down. I barely know these new characters but here I am rooting for a sad Minotaur, an overwhelmed gnome, a cranky old monkey, and even Tal’s ex.
Generally I thought the plot was more interesting too. Geminia and Gladelyl brought back World of Warcraft nostalgia with night elves, minotaur (tauren), gnomes too, giant kin trees and rival elf factions. Specifically about the elves, I liked seeing the world/food/society/customs. Another of Rosell’s talents is bringing us these aspects through character experiences vs through description.
The characters are pretty good here too. I like how they grow and start making tough decisions about forgiveness and what is important in their lives. Hard truths are laid bare and the fallout is navigated. There is a big theme of good vs. evil tied into Garin’s character arc and I just love it! Is a tool evil just because it’s been used by evil people? What are these “devils”? Tal tied into this too at the end and I can’t wait to learn more about his sorcery going forward.
Feeding off of that: all the excerpts of “A Fable of Song and Blood” are starting to make some sense. The mage is painting a story of powerful, possibly sentient magic and heresy involving the “dark” side of things. Getting Yuldor’s backstory was the best touch because I feel like “the big background story” is starting to reveal itself. Tal’s “hidden talents” and Garin’s discovery that not all dark things are evil… Oh .. well .. no spoilers but this is all shaping up to be very interesting later on.
Overall: lots of action, character, magic, and story is packed into these books
January 31, 2022
The second installment was wayyyy better than the first one! If I could cut out all of Garin’s chapters, I’d give it a 5 star rating. He’s too much of a wanker for me to even begin to like. His gf, Wren is a force to be reckoned with who never cowers in fear and puts her safety before others. She can do so much better than Garin. 😒 My favorite by far is Aelyn! He’s snarky as hell and feisty but also has a vulnerability. All of these characters, including Tal are great minus the one I can’t stand. 4 stars.
September 26, 2024
It's been a good few years since this book released! Might be about time for a collector's edition, wouldn't you say?
...What's this? There's already one funding on Kickstarter?!
Guess I'll just leave this link here ;)
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/...
In all seriousness, thank you if you pick up a copy - the support is very much appreciated!
~ Josiah
...What's this? There's already one funding on Kickstarter?!
Guess I'll just leave this link here ;)
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/...
In all seriousness, thank you if you pick up a copy - the support is very much appreciated!
~ Josiah
September 8, 2022
Well being quarantined has one good thing , I can audio everything while I rest up and get better.
I give this 5 ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️’s
This story gets better, I like that!!!!
I give this 5 ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️’s
This story gets better, I like that!!!!
November 25, 2020
You're a fool, Tal Harrenfel, he told himself. But then again, I've always known – a fool can do what a wise man never could.
War brews as the tendrils of an awaiting evil begin to slither into all corners of The Westreach in J.D.L. Rosell's A Queens Command, book two in the epic Legend of Tal series. A tale of duty, courage, and the power of forgiveness, readers journey into new lands under the guise of seeking knowledge, but are quickly embroiled in a plot to tear a kingdom asunder from deep within. This is a story that explores the haunting concept of “what if”, ultimately urging that the past lies in the past. And while anger and guilt may be a heavy burden to bear, one must endure and continue on the path forward in order to properly heal. Filled with charismatic characters to love and hate, beautifully realized settings, and an ample amount of intrigue, A Queen's Command is a gripping and deserving follow-up novel to Rosell's debut, A King's Bargain .
At the core of this story lies a sprawling cast of all walks of life – human, elf, and everything in between. We encounter many familiar faces, as well as a generous amount of new ones, each fighting their own demons in their own way, and each battling the tides of fate. Whether you're peering through the eyes of a reluctant hero hiding his guilt behind a facade of false smiles, or a young, powerful boy and fount of barely-restrained rage, readers witness this tale unfurl from all angles. Much like book one, the narrative revolves around Tal and Garin and the consequences of their actions. Immediately following the events of A King's Bargain, their adventure takes them to Elendol, whether by obligation or desperation, and a rift continues to grow between the two after some shocking secrets come to light. Rosell beautifully captures the heartache and melancholy that accompanies the conflict, and smartly utilizes the inclusion of additional characters to both evolve and dive deeper into the tale being told.
This book also gives insight into the pasts of several beloved characters that we've already been acquainted with. I won't say too much here, because these discoveries answer the burning questions that arise in the previous installment. Just know the breadcrumbs that have been placed along our path lead to what we seek; the monikers and the tales they're weaved upon, the truth behind the legend, the bits and pieces that come together to craft the grand scheme.
He felt as if he leaned over a precipice, toes scraping pebbles into an endless chasm below, the winds of fate kissing his face, urging him to leap.
The majority of this tale takes place in the Kingdom of Elendol, home of the proud Gladelysh elves. Rosell's portrayal of this area is awe-inspiring, delivering you into an alien world with such beautiful detail. Noble houses built into and composed of gargantuan trees, a canopy so dense sunlight fails to penetrate, gloom lifted by twinkling sorcerous lights, and so much more. Far below high society lies the Mire, the murky slums that house those of lesser blood, as well as an influx of Eastern foreigners seeking refuge. Crime and danger lurk around shadowed corners, while scheming occurs in deserted alley ways. The kingdom is rich with history and customs, even more so with political unrest that acts as the backbone for the conflict of this intriguing adventure. There's something magical about Elendol, its roots steeped deep in the past and its soaring branches reaching into a new future of progress. I adored my time here, and I only hope to revisit it in the future.
A Queen's Command is indeed a mystery laced with uncertainty and machination. Its slow build introduces pieces of the puzzle and allows time for readers to properly arrange them before being heaved into an explosive conclusion. The narrative does suffer some pacing issues, especially towards the middle of the book, caused by just a bit too much fluff to explain histories that may or may not have bearing on the story at hand. However, the race to the finish is extraordinary, the honorable fight for a common cause a stunning display of courage and loyalty. I always evaluate a book on the emotions it's able to induce, and judging by the hitched breaths and heart swelling with the incredible feeling of victory, this is one that's absolutely capable of drawing in its readers in the best of ways.
A Queen's Command is a spellbinding story of second chances within grasp where the hope of redemption trumps the darkness. The particular story arc within its pages ties up nicely, but paves the way for a new, harrowing adventure that awaits. We're left with the forming of a new fellowship, a legend in the making that will be sung about for time immemorial, I'm sure. I've become a huge fan of Rosell's Legend of Tal series, and while I know it will eventually conclude, I honestly don't want it to end. If you're looking for an excellent Epic High Fantasy tale, then I thoroughly recommend you give this series a shot. I can't wait for the next.
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NOTE: A huge thank you to the author for a complementary advance copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
See this review and others at Whispers & Wonder
March 20, 2023
3 stars. This was a buddy read but I would still probably have read it on my own eventually but was kind of let down with the second installment. The MC has this grudge against Tal for like 3/4s of the book and it REALLY REALLY REALLY got old and annoying after a few chapters of it. Tal as a character is witty and fun. Think a lesser violent and toned down Geralt. There's even a scene in this book where he's using different herbal powder and such to enhance his fighting capabilities. The book wears its influences on its sleeve and I can respect that. Now a days most newer authors slide right into the tropes of current fantasy but not this author nor this book. We have elves, evil lords, dwarves, monsters out the bumhole. Two timing nobility. A pretty soft hard magic system. I wouldn't say I disliked the book I think I just expected more from it which bums me out because I hate having to bring stuff like this up in my reviews but it's impossible to LOVE everything ya read.
September 12, 2022
As I expected, this definitely was a step up from the already good first book in the series.
The cast felt more balanced and the characters grew more rounded and three dimensional as well. I really liked to learn more about each of them, and how they all have their own internal struggles as well as the big and flaming problems for the world overall!
This is again mostly a political plot, with brewing unrest, assassin's, betrayals and a lot of plotting and planning to uncover. This bit of the book also did feel a lot smoother than in the first book. I was constantly puzzling along with everyone, wondering what exactly was happening, and who could be behind it all.
There's a couple of expected things happening, but also some nice twists coming fully out of the left field that gave all sorts of reactions. From "Oh No!" to elation and also some stunned blinking at the pages. I really liked how it blended the surprises with other parts of the story you felt clever for picking up in advance. It kept me on my toes, while still feeling believable.
Especially the very end definitely had me do a double take at least twice, and I loved both the action and revelations there.
One closed plot arc, but also a cliffhanger for the overarching series plot managed to both satisfy me, and yet have me eager to read more.
The cast felt more balanced and the characters grew more rounded and three dimensional as well. I really liked to learn more about each of them, and how they all have their own internal struggles as well as the big and flaming problems for the world overall!
This is again mostly a political plot, with brewing unrest, assassin's, betrayals and a lot of plotting and planning to uncover. This bit of the book also did feel a lot smoother than in the first book. I was constantly puzzling along with everyone, wondering what exactly was happening, and who could be behind it all.
There's a couple of expected things happening, but also some nice twists coming fully out of the left field that gave all sorts of reactions. From "Oh No!" to elation and also some stunned blinking at the pages. I really liked how it blended the surprises with other parts of the story you felt clever for picking up in advance. It kept me on my toes, while still feeling believable.
Especially the very end definitely had me do a double take at least twice, and I loved both the action and revelations there.
One closed plot arc, but also a cliffhanger for the overarching series plot managed to both satisfy me, and yet have me eager to read more.
February 20, 2023
Love this series....the characters as well as the plot....really looking forward to book 3
November 10, 2020
A great read
Very good indeed. Book #2 out did book #1 . Alot of Mystery for the reader to puzzle out. Mr. Rowell did a excellent job bring the story to life. A nice smooth read an if you think you figured it out what the purpose of all the characters are about, well you're probably wrong. Good verses evil, companionship, courage, love an friendship. Who an what will prevail. A long journey ahead for all.
A excellent read.
Very good indeed. Book #2 out did book #1 . Alot of Mystery for the reader to puzzle out. Mr. Rowell did a excellent job bring the story to life. A nice smooth read an if you think you figured it out what the purpose of all the characters are about, well you're probably wrong. Good verses evil, companionship, courage, love an friendship. Who an what will prevail. A long journey ahead for all.
A excellent read.
December 12, 2020
The second installment in “The Legend of Tal” series was even more engaging and difficult to put down than the first. We joined the gang on the road to Elendol and the story did not slow down. JDL Rosell used beautiful imagery to describe the Elven kingdom. Seriously, he was able to paint such vivid scenes throughout the story that filled my mind with wonderfully colorful pictures. The relationships in the story followed very satisfying and real arcs. The emotions were often palpable and drew me in tightly. I cannot wait for book 3. It’s going to be a long wait, but it’ll be at the top of my TBR until then!
February 5, 2024
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This is probably the book of the year for me.
Updated review:
September ended on a high note for me, with an anticipation that was genuinely exciting as I delved into "A Queen's Command," the second book in the Legend of Tal series by JDL Rosell. This series, consisting of four novels, progressively increasing in size, presents a manageable yet rich narrative. Not exactly a short read, but certainly not one of those colossal tomes that often characterize Epic Fantasy.
The Legend of Tal series adheres to the classic elements of the genre, with humans, elves, and the aesthetics of a medieval fantasy world. It's a comforting read, offering a recognizable aesthetic with unexpected cultural nuances in the world-building.
At the core of this series is the character of Tal Harrenfel, a living legend reluctantly thrust into the limelight. Tal, with a desire for a quiet life, is forced back into action, accompanied by a farm boy named Garing. The first book follows their journey, revealing Tall's complex past and the consequences of the heroic and dark deeds that define him.
What makes Tall's character special is his refusal to forget his past. A living legend with a mix of heroic and regrettable actions, he seeks a life at peace with his memories. Book one explores this internal struggle, bringing forth the consequences of Tall's choices. The dynamic between Tall, Garin, and other characters is both heartwarming and intriguing.
Book two takes a different turn, offering a more confined setting within the elven cities. The narrative deepens on a political level, exploring schemes and machinations within the nobility. The series delves into cultural acceptance, portraying how different races are treated and received, especially in the wake of a cultural shift in the Elven city.
The character development in book two is striking, particularly the relationships evolving from the first installment. The consequences of past events aren't always pleasant, but they contribute to a stronger, more profound narrative. Tal's relationships with Garin and Falcon, his best friend from book one, are highlights, showcasing a positive representation of masculinity.
Tal's character arc is both layered and relatable. His attempts to shield himself from personal connections, a result of his scarred past, gradually fade away. The exploration of vulnerability and the fear of its consequences is a theme that resonates universally. Tal's journey becomes a compelling reflection on human connection, showcasing growth and resilience.
JDL Rosell's writing style remains top-notch, blending seamlessly with the narrative. The story is captivating, and the action sequences are cinematic. The concluding chapters of book two are a rollercoaster of high stakes, featuring fire, monsters, and characters fighting for survival—everything one could hope for in a fantasy epic.
As an author myself, I'm both envious and impressed by Rosell's storytelling prowess. The writing is not just aesthetically pleasing; it serves the narrative impeccably. September closed with the Legend of Tal series standing out as my most enjoyed reads of the year. If book one was a delightful surprise, book two solidified this series as a potential favorite for 2023.
So, what are you waiting for? Dive into the Legend of Tall series, starting with "A Queen's Command." It promises a fantastic journey with a charismatic protagonist, rich world-building, and a narrative that keeps getting better. I can't recommend it enough!
https://youtu.be/f6dhuF5TFm4?si=NCYB2...
This is probably the book of the year for me.
Updated review:
September ended on a high note for me, with an anticipation that was genuinely exciting as I delved into "A Queen's Command," the second book in the Legend of Tal series by JDL Rosell. This series, consisting of four novels, progressively increasing in size, presents a manageable yet rich narrative. Not exactly a short read, but certainly not one of those colossal tomes that often characterize Epic Fantasy.
The Legend of Tal series adheres to the classic elements of the genre, with humans, elves, and the aesthetics of a medieval fantasy world. It's a comforting read, offering a recognizable aesthetic with unexpected cultural nuances in the world-building.
At the core of this series is the character of Tal Harrenfel, a living legend reluctantly thrust into the limelight. Tal, with a desire for a quiet life, is forced back into action, accompanied by a farm boy named Garing. The first book follows their journey, revealing Tall's complex past and the consequences of the heroic and dark deeds that define him.
What makes Tall's character special is his refusal to forget his past. A living legend with a mix of heroic and regrettable actions, he seeks a life at peace with his memories. Book one explores this internal struggle, bringing forth the consequences of Tall's choices. The dynamic between Tall, Garin, and other characters is both heartwarming and intriguing.
Book two takes a different turn, offering a more confined setting within the elven cities. The narrative deepens on a political level, exploring schemes and machinations within the nobility. The series delves into cultural acceptance, portraying how different races are treated and received, especially in the wake of a cultural shift in the Elven city.
The character development in book two is striking, particularly the relationships evolving from the first installment. The consequences of past events aren't always pleasant, but they contribute to a stronger, more profound narrative. Tal's relationships with Garin and Falcon, his best friend from book one, are highlights, showcasing a positive representation of masculinity.
Tal's character arc is both layered and relatable. His attempts to shield himself from personal connections, a result of his scarred past, gradually fade away. The exploration of vulnerability and the fear of its consequences is a theme that resonates universally. Tal's journey becomes a compelling reflection on human connection, showcasing growth and resilience.
JDL Rosell's writing style remains top-notch, blending seamlessly with the narrative. The story is captivating, and the action sequences are cinematic. The concluding chapters of book two are a rollercoaster of high stakes, featuring fire, monsters, and characters fighting for survival—everything one could hope for in a fantasy epic.
As an author myself, I'm both envious and impressed by Rosell's storytelling prowess. The writing is not just aesthetically pleasing; it serves the narrative impeccably. September closed with the Legend of Tal series standing out as my most enjoyed reads of the year. If book one was a delightful surprise, book two solidified this series as a potential favorite for 2023.
So, what are you waiting for? Dive into the Legend of Tall series, starting with "A Queen's Command." It promises a fantastic journey with a charismatic protagonist, rich world-building, and a narrative that keeps getting better. I can't recommend it enough!
December 20, 2023
Book Review - A Queen’s Command
Sometimes sequels struggle to better the first book in a series. And sometimes times the opposite is true.
For me, A Queen’s Command was a big step up from book 1.
The character development and world building have been elevated massively by the author.
The action is also vastly improved. With loads of fast paced detailed fights, the action was definitely one of the many plus points in this book.
This book wasn’t perfect however. I really struggled with Garin POV in this book and found I wanted to just skip ahead. Which is the opposite to book 1.
I see the Author was putting Garin through some challenging situations to further develop his character.
He is still a very young man and quite literally growing up under our very eyes.
Unfortunately in this book, Garin attitude and actions just made me really dislike him.
I’m hoping to see some positive character growth from him in book 3 that pulls Garin back into my good graces.
All the characters were very well written in this book, even Garin. I may dislike him but I cannot argue against the fact that his character is brilliantly written.
Tal is by far the best character in this series so far, he was just brilliant to follow in this book. He has so much richness about him with a long history that we’re only just scratching the surface of.
I’m really excited to see where the author takes Tal in the final two books of this series.
This book has a bucket load of political intrigue with twists and turns around every corner.
The pacing in this book for me was spot on, an even speed for the first 75% then ramping up toward the end of the book, just how I like it.
I’m looking forward to continuing this series with book 3.
Rating 8/10 ⭐️
Sometimes sequels struggle to better the first book in a series. And sometimes times the opposite is true.
For me, A Queen’s Command was a big step up from book 1.
The character development and world building have been elevated massively by the author.
The action is also vastly improved. With loads of fast paced detailed fights, the action was definitely one of the many plus points in this book.
This book wasn’t perfect however. I really struggled with Garin POV in this book and found I wanted to just skip ahead. Which is the opposite to book 1.
I see the Author was putting Garin through some challenging situations to further develop his character.
He is still a very young man and quite literally growing up under our very eyes.
Unfortunately in this book, Garin attitude and actions just made me really dislike him.
I’m hoping to see some positive character growth from him in book 3 that pulls Garin back into my good graces.
All the characters were very well written in this book, even Garin. I may dislike him but I cannot argue against the fact that his character is brilliantly written.
Tal is by far the best character in this series so far, he was just brilliant to follow in this book. He has so much richness about him with a long history that we’re only just scratching the surface of.
I’m really excited to see where the author takes Tal in the final two books of this series.
This book has a bucket load of political intrigue with twists and turns around every corner.
The pacing in this book for me was spot on, an even speed for the first 75% then ramping up toward the end of the book, just how I like it.
I’m looking forward to continuing this series with book 3.
Rating 8/10 ⭐️
November 6, 2020
Excellent
I don’t often write a review, although I read quite a lot. But this book is exceptional. Can’t wait to read the next!
I don’t often write a review, although I read quite a lot. But this book is exceptional. Can’t wait to read the next!
February 1, 2023
This was a much better read than the first in the series. The characters & world building came along very nicely, paced well with quite a battle at the end. I have even started to hate Garin a little less . .....barely lol
May 24, 2021
Not a bad book, I struggled to connect with the characters. I think others will greatly enjoy it. Not sure if I will push through for the third one. I think I might be done.
December 5, 2022
this story is definitely fantastic.
March 24, 2025
I don’t know how but I kept reading this book. I think it was the unsuspecting love story between it.
November 17, 2020
New lands explored, a fellowship is formed
Tal and company go to the land of the elves where political rivalries and a dark cult await. I love the magic in this book. Mysteries are revealed and yet more struggles await. Epic fantasy at its best!
Tal and company go to the land of the elves where political rivalries and a dark cult await. I love the magic in this book. Mysteries are revealed and yet more struggles await. Epic fantasy at its best!
December 9, 2020
Love!
I am so ridiculously in love with this series! I wish there were like 5 more book, but alas I'm still waiting for the third to come out.
I am so ridiculously in love with this series! I wish there were like 5 more book, but alas I'm still waiting for the third to come out.
November 19, 2021
Inner Demons
A fantastic follow up to A King's Bargain, I really love J.D.L Rosell's writing, fantastic worldbuilding, plot and setting. There is an evil ancient enemy of darkness at play here in the lands of the Westreach, all the rulers all seem to bought and paid for. When Tal and Garin return to their village Hunt's Hollow after defeating one enemy the Extinguished, but it will only be a short stay. Tal has been bound by magic to serve the Elf Queen, Garin struggles with his inner demons, literally. When a long-kept secret emerges of how Garins father died, it causes a rift between them. But they must travel into the realms of the elves Gladelyl, when they arrive the realm is turmoil and civil war is on the horizon as the nobles grasp for power. Tal and Garin will have more than their inner demons to contend with. An excellent and dark magic system, fast paced, plenty of action will keep you quite intrigued trough out. The narration by Derek Perkins continues to give a great a preformence, I've just preordered the third book on audible, I very highly recommend...😁🖤🔥
A fantastic follow up to A King's Bargain, I really love J.D.L Rosell's writing, fantastic worldbuilding, plot and setting. There is an evil ancient enemy of darkness at play here in the lands of the Westreach, all the rulers all seem to bought and paid for. When Tal and Garin return to their village Hunt's Hollow after defeating one enemy the Extinguished, but it will only be a short stay. Tal has been bound by magic to serve the Elf Queen, Garin struggles with his inner demons, literally. When a long-kept secret emerges of how Garins father died, it causes a rift between them. But they must travel into the realms of the elves Gladelyl, when they arrive the realm is turmoil and civil war is on the horizon as the nobles grasp for power. Tal and Garin will have more than their inner demons to contend with. An excellent and dark magic system, fast paced, plenty of action will keep you quite intrigued trough out. The narration by Derek Perkins continues to give a great a preformence, I've just preordered the third book on audible, I very highly recommend...😁🖤🔥
August 2, 2022
The second book in the Legend of Tal series follows Tal and Garin as they travel to get Garin some magic teaching as well as to follow through on Tao’s duty to the Elvin queen that he was tricked into. They soon become embroiled in civil war as rumours of an uprising amongst the slums in an elvin city leads the queen to task Tal with finding who is seeding the unrest.
Similar to the first book, this is a story of mystery and intrigue sprinkled with fights and larger battles, and all leads to one epic conflict.
Garin continues to develop as a character, trying to learn to use his magical albilities while keeping his inner demon under control.
The world-building is taken up a notch from book 1 with numerous new races of people introduced.
A great, suspense-filled tale of plotting and historical revelations.
Similar to the first book, this is a story of mystery and intrigue sprinkled with fights and larger battles, and all leads to one epic conflict.
Garin continues to develop as a character, trying to learn to use his magical albilities while keeping his inner demon under control.
The world-building is taken up a notch from book 1 with numerous new races of people introduced.
A great, suspense-filled tale of plotting and historical revelations.
November 28, 2022
I finally made it to this book that I won in a give away a little while ago as I found it also available as audiobook as that makes reading books for me so much easier.
Now, I always love me a good ranger quest story, and with Hal Harenfels and his new apprentice as they set out to sort out a threat that has come up in the kingdom, we get exactly this.
The first book has a main cast of male characters and for a moment I wondered if this books was really for me. But then the story really takes over, specially when we get into book two.
More questions arise and more things need sorting out.
The second book I really started to enjoy the all of the book, the story line, the characters, the world.
And listening to it on audio was an absolute blaze.
I think Podium gets it so incredibly right with getting the right narrator for a book, it was a joy to listen to this narration from beginning to end of book two.
Now, I always love me a good ranger quest story, and with Hal Harenfels and his new apprentice as they set out to sort out a threat that has come up in the kingdom, we get exactly this.
The first book has a main cast of male characters and for a moment I wondered if this books was really for me. But then the story really takes over, specially when we get into book two.
More questions arise and more things need sorting out.
The second book I really started to enjoy the all of the book, the story line, the characters, the world.
And listening to it on audio was an absolute blaze.
I think Podium gets it so incredibly right with getting the right narrator for a book, it was a joy to listen to this narration from beginning to end of book two.
November 10, 2021
Another great and intense adventure in the series about Tal and his companions. Now that the Queen Geminia is dead and she has no heir and that most of Elendola has been destroyed Garin and the rest of his companions must continue and follow where Tal is heading. Even they don't know what the east holds. More dangers and mysteries and of more magic. So let the next journey begin and see where it will take them.
November 20, 2021
Well written.
Tal and the troupe, Dancing Feathers, are on their way to Gladelyl. Tal is tied to Elf Queen
Geminia by an unbreakable bond to do as she commands. When they get to the city things are not as they should be. There is treachery afoot and Tal is commanded to look into it and things come to a head at the winter ball. All does not end well and leads to the next part of the story..
Tal and the troupe, Dancing Feathers, are on their way to Gladelyl. Tal is tied to Elf Queen
Geminia by an unbreakable bond to do as she commands. When they get to the city things are not as they should be. There is treachery afoot and Tal is commanded to look into it and things come to a head at the winter ball. All does not end well and leads to the next part of the story..
February 2, 2022
A great continuation of the series. I really like how the author keeps you wondering what will happen next. Interesting characters, and a darn good story. Plenty of action and intrigue. I can hardly wait for the next book.
July 7, 2021
Stagnant
Couldn't finish it, a book and a half is enough for some character progression. The whining of the angsty child and bitter pawn that both keep falling for the same crap is intolerable
Couldn't finish it, a book and a half is enough for some character progression. The whining of the angsty child and bitter pawn that both keep falling for the same crap is intolerable
April 23, 2022
it was good
I love the story line and the characters! The plot is creative and the writing is pretty good. I’m attached to this story and can’t wait to read what’s next Even if Garin drives me nuts with his self pity; he unfortunately reminds me of Fitz Chivalry in Assassins apprentice. Also, I do have a few things to say about this book in particular.
The climax was too fast paced, I felt like I was speed reading though it all even though I was not, maybe that was the intention? It confused the actions and movements of the characters.
There were too many insignificant details replacing the void of the much needed clarifications. I felt the book needed more descriptive details pertaining to the character’s surroundings. For example, where is the mire in reference to all of the kin trees? Are there some kin trees in the mire while some are higher up on a hill? Why aren’t spiraling staircases mentioned wrapping around the tree? It drove me crazy having to go back and see if I missed some sort of description but realizing things like this weren’t really ever mentioned. All in all a good second book to an amazing series!
I love the story line and the characters! The plot is creative and the writing is pretty good. I’m attached to this story and can’t wait to read what’s next Even if Garin drives me nuts with his self pity; he unfortunately reminds me of Fitz Chivalry in Assassins apprentice. Also, I do have a few things to say about this book in particular.
The climax was too fast paced, I felt like I was speed reading though it all even though I was not, maybe that was the intention? It confused the actions and movements of the characters.
There were too many insignificant details replacing the void of the much needed clarifications. I felt the book needed more descriptive details pertaining to the character’s surroundings. For example, where is the mire in reference to all of the kin trees? Are there some kin trees in the mire while some are higher up on a hill? Why aren’t spiraling staircases mentioned wrapping around the tree? It drove me crazy having to go back and see if I missed some sort of description but realizing things like this weren’t really ever mentioned. All in all a good second book to an amazing series!
September 22, 2023
This book is generally well written, but fails the Bechdel test (I know, it's a book instead of a movie, but that arguably only makes it more egregious). There are only three women who speak (two love interests and one mother), and they don't have a conversation with each other. There's also a queen, but she's peripheral to the heart of the story (though significant to its background/plot).
The story is interesting enough that I read it anyway and enjoyed it, but it gave me heavy flashbacks to fantasy from the 1980s, especially considering the bonus casual racism when the main character first experiences what seems to be Chinese food--he deprecates the chopstick-like utensils and strong flavoring. There are so many other ways to describe a new cuisine; falling into heavy stereotypes is really inexcusable for an author who otherwise shows serious talent.
I did finish the first two books (free via my Audible membership), but doubt I'll spend a credit to pick up the next one.
The story is interesting enough that I read it anyway and enjoyed it, but it gave me heavy flashbacks to fantasy from the 1980s, especially considering the bonus casual racism when the main character first experiences what seems to be Chinese food--he deprecates the chopstick-like utensils and strong flavoring. There are so many other ways to describe a new cuisine; falling into heavy stereotypes is really inexcusable for an author who otherwise shows serious talent.
I did finish the first two books (free via my Audible membership), but doubt I'll spend a credit to pick up the next one.
April 2, 2022
Audible freebie, together with book 1. Narration was very good. I enjoyed the idea of a legend having to live up to the stories that are told about him.
However.
Garin. Whining his way towards his ideal of manhood.
Didn’t see the point of him. At all. Nor of Ren. Felt they were added halfway through the idea of the book to attract a younger audience.
And the writing. It exhausted me. Lips were tugged into smiles, eyes narrowed and/or swirled with hidden emotions, brows creased in confusion. There were smirks and grins and stances. But mainly there were lots and lots of feelings of inadequacy, failure, insecurity and angst. Dear gods, why did we have to listen to every self-obsessed thought? And watch characters make the same mistakes every time because they didn’t learn?
I am not travelling to the East with this lot.
However.
Garin. Whining his way towards his ideal of manhood.
Didn’t see the point of him. At all. Nor of Ren. Felt they were added halfway through the idea of the book to attract a younger audience.
And the writing. It exhausted me. Lips were tugged into smiles, eyes narrowed and/or swirled with hidden emotions, brows creased in confusion. There were smirks and grins and stances. But mainly there were lots and lots of feelings of inadequacy, failure, insecurity and angst. Dear gods, why did we have to listen to every self-obsessed thought? And watch characters make the same mistakes every time because they didn’t learn?
I am not travelling to the East with this lot.
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