When What's Right Is Wrong

Rights and Wrongs

by LovesBitca8

“There will be a medical examination tomorrow morning.”

Her breath hitched, and something stuck in her throat. She waited calmly, trying not to betray her frantic heartbeat. “Alright,” she managed. “Is there something you need me to do?”

A breath left him, almost a laugh, and he spun to stare at her bookshelf, like he couldn’t bear the sight of her.

“You are a virgin. Still.”

Realization cracked over her like an egg against a bowl. Her skin was tingling and numb as she took a deep breath. “Will they check for that?”

Genres: Fan Fiction, Fantasy, Romance, Dystopia

Unknown Binding

About the author

Fanfiction pen name for Julie Soto.

Reviews

[Morgan · Rating 4 out of 5]

Another short that I think would have made The Auction better🤷🏻‍♀️

[⊹ ⁺ ₊ ✧ she's book obsessed ✧ ₊ ⁺ ⊹ · Rating 4 out of 5]

When What’s Right Is Wrong
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

[Amna · Rating 3 out of 5]

Love the au of an au concept, such a funny spicy scene 😂

[julia ☾ (sirius' version) · Rating 4 out of 5]

★★★★☆ - 4 stars
cute but i liked their first time in 'the auction' more… it was more passionate yk

[Gabriela · Rating 3 out of 5]

Well, this was intense. I would say, not my favorite LovesBitca8 so far, but entertaining nonetheless.
I love how she brings life and fully fleshes out characters, even when doing a one-shot story. However, this is a very grey area and dark au, closer to rape than I would like so I found the subject matter a bit too confronting to find it funny or cute.

[sj🍒 · Rating 5 out of 5]

desperately need to reread the auction

[Em · Rating 4 out of 5]

3.75!

We love a little smutty au of a dark au 😩✨

[Celeste]

An AU (alternate universe) of the AU in Rights and Wrongs fanfic Dramione series 😂 Spicy AF. AU of chapter 19 in "The Auction".

🌶️🌶️🌶️/5 (toeing the line at half plot half smut)

[Mia · Rating 4 out of 5]

Hilarious 🤣 reading this at 4:50am just after finishing The Auction and I'm cackling.

[✧.* ☽｡⋆ ˖⁺. ༶⊹ hannah ✧.* ☽｡⋆˖⁺. ༶⊹ · Rating 3 out of 5]

such a silly little scene. i did enjoy the actual events in chapter 19 better in the auction but this was still funny and awkward 🙏🏼

[Tina · Rating 1 out of 5]

:( Next time I’ll stick with the main story

I felt this longing after finishing The Auction, , so I thought reading a bit more of them in this world would be good.
It was not.

It was all awful.
The only thing I’m happy about, is that this did not make it in the story.

I mean, it could be done without magic spells, but still good.
This was rape. There as a pressure for her to do it. he did not want to show any affection (no kissing, no touching)

And maybe there was a try to make it better when he "snapped" but it was too late to shake the feelings I had about it.
He still could have made it "more romantic" or "less clinical"... whatever.

This was rape, the only thing i felt with this is pain and being horrified and disgusted.

[lana_cobb · Rating 4 out of 5]

Voto: 3,85
Capitolo speciale per "The auction" in caso alcuni avvenimenti non fossero andati come in realtà avrebbero dovuto (chi ha letto capirà).
Sinceramente penso sia una delle poche scene spicy che mi abbia fatto ridere date le circostanze ma tutto sommato è andata bene.
Consigliato? Si

[Kiajia · Rating 4 out of 5]

This was an alternative chapter 19 ending from the fanfiction The Auction. It was wonderful. We are lucky we were given this gift from the author. Only reason it isn't a 5 star is because sexually if felt not as passionate and shocking it could have been.

[Charlotte McNair · Rating 2 out of 5]

Not my favorite but I love seeing writers ideas aside from what they put into their work

[bebe ♌︎ · Rating 3 out of 5]

Never laughed so much at a sex scene 😂 (don’t worry gets spicy in the end)
loved what the author did with this, original and beautifully written as always.

[Shruti · Rating 3 out of 5]

This was very well done, I liked how Draco and Hermione slowly became lost in one another due to their (hidden) feelings for eachother. I could really feel the emotions they were going through.

[Weronika · Rating 5 out of 5]

rereading

[Taylor Goodban · Rating 4 out of 5]

A fun spicy scene🌶️ I really liked how events went down in chapter 19 of The Auction but this was a fun take on that chapter if events were different.

[em · Rating 2 out of 5]

i very much prefer the actual way they had their first time tbh

[Tarah Fitzgerald · Rating 3 out of 5]

⭐️3.5

[Eva’s Grimoire · Rating 3 out of 5]

I love the main idea but this spicy scene was nice, I just expected Draco to be more witty rather than just shy as Neville hahah

[Cati Ivan · Rating 4 out of 5]

BAHAHA "I can ask Blaise," he said suddenly. "If you'd be more… If you'd prefer it not be me." THIS WAS GOLD.

[Hollie Newman · Rating 5 out of 5]

Read in 12 minutes. Loveeee

[Volkoren · Rating 5 out of 5]

OMG I had flutters in my stomach during the whole read. Can Draco please me real

[Lena Blazejova · Rating 3 out of 5]

Draca a Hermiona..
SMUT 🌶️🌶️🌶️ pokud zjisti, ze je jeste panna bude problém.... A ten se musi hned vyresit... Jde se na reseni problemu...

[halina mae · Rating 4 out of 5]

it was good writing, but I don't enjoy pwps lol

[Veronica · Rating 3 out of 5]

3.5/5

[Hetta · Rating 1 out of 5]

Pointless

[lins୨ৎ⸆⸉❤️‍🔥📚 on reading hiatus · Rating 5 out of 5]

10/10. No notes.

[Melissa Witney · Rating 2 out of 5]

I liked the original scene that happened in the auction better.