Beautifully nuanced poetry with reoccurring themes of planets, nakedness, dreams, loneliness and hope.
Some of my favourite lines: Sat glittering inside myself Love goes limping All her senses open out, To receive each sensation for herself He has learnt to make all worlds his own Waking in strange beds, we are screwed and perfect
In the first few poems, the idealised 'fantasy of the female' was explored, which I thought may be another example of the male gaze. However, with each new poem, I saw the sophistication in Patten's depictions of women, and how each perspective was used to illustrate the specific mindset of each man. For example, the retired schoolmaster who dreams of a woman "tall and blonde and damaged by boredom" is oversimplified, but gives me such a clear insight into his character.
I LOVE this line: But more afraid of what the night might not offer us