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Gravity and Divinity System #2
Apocalypse Command
A jokester gets serious and grows from strong to OP with Gravity Magic. But that’s not enough. He takes control of the System. He gets command of the Champions.
Jay Luckrun was your typical dorky weirdo. A lover of street dancing, anime, action movies, and comedy. But everything changed when a divine creature chose him to be a dungeon crawler of the Multiverse. He fought monsters in another dimension and returned home to slay hundreds of assassins.
He’s still a jokester. He tries to look past the consequences of having a System that he bends and breaks. It's fun gaining new levels, stats, skills, loot, and magical powers while teaming up with the most interesting people ever. Why stress over the small details? But with more power comes more responsibility.
Because the Champions need a strong and unique leader to face the Apocalypse.
The gods plot revenge. The assassins lurk in the background. The rules of the game are shifting and turning more monstrous. And the world is transforming into something new, which might be Jay’s fault.
With his new life and his Chance becoming more unpredictable, Jay and his fellow Champions face harder challenges. But the changes Jay will see might push him in a direction that’s freakier and more powerful than before.
After all, he has gravity and divinity on his side. He has the power to influence everything.
What should you expect?
- It’s Book 2 of the series
- Go from strong to OP with gravity magic
- Explore a System Progression with growing depth
- See new powers, unique tactics, super imaginative fights
- Influence the world to become something different
- Take command and be the one who leads the way to victory
- Feast on 840+ pages while knowing the next book is out on Feb 2023
- Click the buttons to read the book and enjoy!
Jay Luckrun was your typical dorky weirdo. A lover of street dancing, anime, action movies, and comedy. But everything changed when a divine creature chose him to be a dungeon crawler of the Multiverse. He fought monsters in another dimension and returned home to slay hundreds of assassins.
He’s still a jokester. He tries to look past the consequences of having a System that he bends and breaks. It's fun gaining new levels, stats, skills, loot, and magical powers while teaming up with the most interesting people ever. Why stress over the small details? But with more power comes more responsibility.
Because the Champions need a strong and unique leader to face the Apocalypse.
The gods plot revenge. The assassins lurk in the background. The rules of the game are shifting and turning more monstrous. And the world is transforming into something new, which might be Jay’s fault.
With his new life and his Chance becoming more unpredictable, Jay and his fellow Champions face harder challenges. But the changes Jay will see might push him in a direction that’s freakier and more powerful than before.
After all, he has gravity and divinity on his side. He has the power to influence everything.
What should you expect?
- It’s Book 2 of the series
- Go from strong to OP with gravity magic
- Explore a System Progression with growing depth
- See new powers, unique tactics, super imaginative fights
- Influence the world to become something different
- Take command and be the one who leads the way to victory
- Feast on 840+ pages while knowing the next book is out on Feb 2023
- Click the buttons to read the book and enjoy!
844 pages, Kindle Edition
First published December 14, 2022
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August 4, 2024
Tone is wrong, the more you read the more you grind your teeth
I think the author is going for a Jester of the Apocalypse feel, but shanks it.
Rape, torture, alcoholism, and child abuse are all treated weighty but superficially, grist for a tragic background of a rising hero. Just one more challenge to overcome.
The writing is good and the world is interesting, but I’m not sure I’ll be reading more with the choices the author keeps making.
The darker heavier choices kinda overshadow the central bizarre icky writing choice. That the MC apparently has had a crush on the FMC since she was 3 or 4 at a daycare together. From 6 to 17 they never speak and rarely see it each other. On her bday he finally asks her out after finding out about her magical background, and through out the books keeps doing so no matter how often she says no. The FMC isn’t innocent in this and often encourages him, but it’s not a star struck romance, their every romantic interaction makes me want to call a therapist and the police. They stalk each other, they manipulate each other, the deliberately harm each other. That the author views this as high romance worries me.
I think the author is going for a Jester of the Apocalypse feel, but shanks it.
Rape, torture, alcoholism, and child abuse are all treated weighty but superficially, grist for a tragic background of a rising hero. Just one more challenge to overcome.
The writing is good and the world is interesting, but I’m not sure I’ll be reading more with the choices the author keeps making.
The darker heavier choices kinda overshadow the central bizarre icky writing choice. That the MC apparently has had a crush on the FMC since she was 3 or 4 at a daycare together. From 6 to 17 they never speak and rarely see it each other. On her bday he finally asks her out after finding out about her magical background, and through out the books keeps doing so no matter how often she says no. The FMC isn’t innocent in this and often encourages him, but it’s not a star struck romance, their every romantic interaction makes me want to call a therapist and the police. They stalk each other, they manipulate each other, the deliberately harm each other. That the author views this as high romance worries me.
April 29, 2023
I’m not sure that I buy whatever is going on with the System Admins
This book felt interminably long. Why would the System remove Jay’s capacity to share EXP when they clearly don’t want him to get any stronger? Why is it not permissible for a pantheon to utilize the very System mechanics that are set to invade the universe anyway? Just because Jay understands how the narrative can drive Chance seems to be a bit unreasonable for the Admins to get so pissy.
This book felt interminably long. Why would the System remove Jay’s capacity to share EXP when they clearly don’t want him to get any stronger? Why is it not permissible for a pantheon to utilize the very System mechanics that are set to invade the universe anyway? Just because Jay understands how the narrative can drive Chance seems to be a bit unreasonable for the Admins to get so pissy.
January 4, 2023
Major improvement
This book was a lot of fun. I'm still grinding my teeth every time the past/present/future tenses get mixed into soup in a single sentence or paragraph, but it was honestly a lot less than the first book.
Glad I stuck with it, this series is a blast. Very interested to see what the newly gained affinities do.
This book was a lot of fun. I'm still grinding my teeth every time the past/present/future tenses get mixed into soup in a single sentence or paragraph, but it was honestly a lot less than the first book.
Glad I stuck with it, this series is a blast. Very interested to see what the newly gained affinities do.
January 15, 2023
💛💚💙💜
I'm in love/obsessed with this series and I cannot wait to see what happens next!! Jay is evolving very fast which is freaking out a lot of beings and he is hilarious. More chaos, antics, power, death, dancing, and comedy to come. I am looking forward to read more about Jay's, Kleos, and the Pantheon adventures.
I'm in love/obsessed with this series and I cannot wait to see what happens next!! Jay is evolving very fast which is freaking out a lot of beings and he is hilarious. More chaos, antics, power, death, dancing, and comedy to come. I am looking forward to read more about Jay's, Kleos, and the Pantheon adventures.
January 7, 2024
Wow. One of the Highest ranking litrpg series
I came across this series in a Facebook group because one guy said he couldn't unbeaten why the teen hero was drinking. The trauma of the MC and his family, friends and soon to be allies is truthful and painful. The comedy of errors is joyful.
Must read if you are a fan of storylines that cros boundries
I came across this series in a Facebook group because one guy said he couldn't unbeaten why the teen hero was drinking. The trauma of the MC and his family, friends and soon to be allies is truthful and painful. The comedy of errors is joyful.
Must read if you are a fan of storylines that cros boundries
May 12, 2024
good story, abysmal writing
Feels like a high school kid wrote this book over the weekend and published it without proofreading. If you are a high school kid looking for a good book to read; look elsewhere. The colloquialisms are all wrong. Every single one. Like he says, cool and collective, instead of calm and collected. He says, death bells, instead of death knell.
Feels like a high school kid wrote this book over the weekend and published it without proofreading. If you are a high school kid looking for a good book to read; look elsewhere. The colloquialisms are all wrong. Every single one. Like he says, cool and collective, instead of calm and collected. He says, death bells, instead of death knell.
January 10, 2023
deeper into insanity
Having the MC and some of his fellow champions, be aware of and attempt to manipulate the narrative without Breaking the fourth wall… Amazing.
I can’t wait for the next book.
Having the MC and some of his fellow champions, be aware of and attempt to manipulate the narrative without Breaking the fourth wall… Amazing.
I can’t wait for the next book.
May 24, 2023
The series has an interesting take on the genre.
Unfortunately, the premise basically requires playing into the roles of each character which results in whole sections focused on teen drama and playing it up.
It just isn't for me
Unfortunately, the premise basically requires playing into the roles of each character which results in whole sections focused on teen drama and playing it up.
It just isn't for me
July 6, 2023
Boring
Too much felling and illogical raving and ranting, child alcohol abuse I found the story medicore and overly melodramatic. The narrative was a bit confusing between system and system admin
Too much felling and illogical raving and ranting, child alcohol abuse I found the story medicore and overly melodramatic. The narrative was a bit confusing between system and system admin
October 12, 2023
Zaniness continues
I really enjoyed this entry into the series. The absolute storyline driven craziness continues in something that reminds me of a Tarantino film. I loved it and binged right through.
I really enjoyed this entry into the series. The absolute storyline driven craziness continues in something that reminds me of a Tarantino film. I loved it and binged right through.
February 12, 2024
very good
This one was very good ! There seemed to be more detailed information and descriptions in this one. I enjoyed it, thanks so much. Definitely recommend reading this one too! Hope you all enjoy as much as I did.
This one was very good ! There seemed to be more detailed information and descriptions in this one. I enjoyed it, thanks so much. Definitely recommend reading this one too! Hope you all enjoy as much as I did.
May 5, 2024
Great Stuff
This series kind of grew on me since I was forced to read this prequel to Rogue’s Ascension. This story of a young goddess who is trying to setup her court was interesting. The young man she’s grooming to be her mate is a Gravity Freak.
This series kind of grew on me since I was forced to read this prequel to Rogue’s Ascension. This story of a young goddess who is trying to setup her court was interesting. The young man she’s grooming to be her mate is a Gravity Freak.
November 28, 2024
Love this series
Love this series !
What makes it even better is that the home town is in a small central fl town with the same high school named in my small central fl hometown 😀
Love this series !
What makes it even better is that the home town is in a small central fl town with the same high school named in my small central fl hometown 😀
August 17, 2025
System and World Building
The system building and world building are fun. The character development is crazy good even though it comes in short bursts outside of the main character. The teen angst and hormones are palpable.
The system building and world building are fun. The character development is crazy good even though it comes in short bursts outside of the main character. The teen angst and hormones are palpable.
December 23, 2022
A must read!!!
If you like crazy fast paced action with some comedy then this is a must read for you! This series is amazing!
If you like crazy fast paced action with some comedy then this is a must read for you! This series is amazing!
January 17, 2023
Very good read
I enjoyed reading this book very much and I recommend this book to anyone who like magic and progression type of books with lots of action.
I enjoyed reading this book very much and I recommend this book to anyone who like magic and progression type of books with lots of action.
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