What happens when a family's darkest secrets put lives in jeopardy? How far would you go for love? Molly Madison is unaware of the Sociopath who is on the loose, creating havoc with a sense of their own justice. Her life is shattered by the sudden death of her beloved parents and the revelation of her husband Phillip's affair - with another man - Molly leaves the life of Country Clubs and the luxury of city life in Florida and heads west to Montana, resolved to run the family ranch, and to move on with her life. Her attraction to Clayton Leatherbe, the ranch foreman, is instant, but before a romance can blossom, the ranch falls prey to sabotage by wealthy land developers determined to drive Molly out, and Clayton learns of a family secret and collides with the Sociopath that could put the ranch - and Molly's life - in jeopardy. A sharp mystery that swirls with family secrets, betrayal, love and loss, Once Wicked Always Dead is a strong debut from an author with literary blood in her veins.
T. Marie Benchley is an author and student in life. With a family heritage of actor/writers including famed Author Peter Benchley of Jaws and The Deep, she was introduced to classic literature at an early age and remains a passionate reader. Although the only sharks on her pages are Attorneys and the monsters in her plots are Sociopaths, her primary desire is to entertain her readers.
Though formally educated in journalism and marketing, she is also an avid traveler, finding inspiration for her novels by studying people and listening to their stories. Happily married with a son and daughter, she divides her time between Florida and Montana.
T. Marie is extremely happy to announce that she will be donating a portion of all book sales of Once Wicked Always Dead to Shriners Hospitals for Children.
Once Wicked Always Dead by T. Marie Benchley tries to be a thriller and ends up being a train wreck. It has strange pacing issues, characters acting without understandable motivation and a whole cast of stereotypes.
Molly Madison's parents are killed en route to her home and her husband is carrying on a homosexual affair. She needs some time off and decides to head home to her parents' ranch in Montana. It's there that she realizes she's being stalked by serial killer. While Molly is trying to cope with her life being in turmoil, she begins to fall in lust with Clayton the ranch foreman.
Here's where things start to fall to pieces; the book can't decide if it's a romance or a thriller. Nor can does it know how to balance the tropes of the two genres. The clashing motifs and changes of tone left me with literary whiplash.
Then there's the serial killer stalker. While Red John might be interesting plot device in The Mentalist the show gets away with it by not making every mystery relate directly to his crimes. But in a book with only one crime that's fighting for precious pages with a marriage gone bad and hot cowboy sex, a stalker serial killer is silly and not in a good way.
WARNING: This review contains spoilers and discusses graphic material which may not be suitable for general audiences.
Once Wicked, Always Dead is T. Marie Benchley's debut novel and, if her second manuscript is anything like the first, it may be her last. Although the concept for Once Wicked, Always Dead had the potential to result in a gripping thriller, Benchly tries too hard for sophistication and comes across as ponderous instead.
Once Wicked, Always Dead is the convoluted story of a Florida socialite who, after the death of her parents and learning of her husband's homosexual affair with his assistant, retreats to her family's cattle ranch in Montana to lick her wounds. Once there, she proceeds to fall in love with the ranch foreman. As Molly is coping with the fallout from her divorce and the death of her father, she is being stalked by a rival rancher, her husband's jilted ex-lover, and a serial murderer who is killing anyone the murderer sees as a "pervert" - including the jilted lover. In a plot twist Benchley probably intended to be clever, but which comes across as trite, the female serial killer is connected to Molly via an illicit affair Molly's father had with the woman's alcoholic mother.
From the first page, until I finally gave up on this novel right after the gratuitous bestiality scene in chapter forty-four, the mantra tattooing itself on my brain was "show, don't tell." I have a degree in creative writing and spent six months as an editorial intern at a literary publishing house. Once Wicked, Always Dead reads like some of the rough drafts I critiqued in my first-year writing class. I can't imagine my writing professors - let alone a professional editor - letting anyone get away with so much passive narration. I wanted to scream at Benchley to go take a freakin' writing class already!
I really wanted to like this book but the writing is just awful. If the vague descriptions of critical scenes such as when Clayton, the ranch foreman, first hears of the death of a man he considers a second father were not enough to turn me off, the head-hopping, artificial dialogue, and ineffective characterization are. In one scene, Benchley shows Molly needing her husband Phillip's help to walk because she is grief-stricken over her father's death. A paragraph later, she's admiring Clayton's backside and checking out his "package." Not. Bloody. Likely.
What ticked me off more than anything was the character of Sloan, Phillip's gay lover. I realize this cliched character is meant to be an antagonist, but Benchley's depiction of Sloan's self-absorption and lack of morality demonstrates flagrant ignorance of and insensitivity toward the gay community. Sloan embodies every degrading stereotype of the homosexual man and lacks a single redeeming quality. I got the impression Benchley took her inspiration for him from an episode of Jerry Springer. Although Benchley tries to make up for Sloan by pairing Phillip with a more respectable partner after he and Sloan end their relationship, her overall portrayal of the gay community is unforgivably offensive.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
I always hate writing bad reviews, and always try to avoid it. But, I can't this time. I almost stopped reading this book, but not because I couldn't get into it. It was because I was getting tired of it. But, I only had about 75-ish pages left, and figured I'd better see how it all plays out. I put enough time into it to read most of it, that I just wanted to know. I kinda wish I'd gotten to that point at about 75-ish pages into the book ...
What don't I like about this? Just about everything. I can't think of much that I do like. The writing didn't flow well, and instead was kind of choppy at times. Plus, cliches were everywhere. Almost any cliche you might have heard is probably in there somewhere. The dialogue was particularly bad, often sounding forced – often even unnatural. My main problem was the over use of profanity. Every character cursed like a sailor, if not worse, no matter what. While I could see a couple of characters swearing that much, it just doesn't work when every single character uses at least one profane term every time they speak. And I emphasize at least – often there was a string of obscenities. Add to that the narrator's occasional use of profanity, and it was just too much.
The plot as a whole wasn't bad. The overall story arch was interesting, and could have been compelling. There was a lot of potential, but the little intricate details just didn't do the job. Some plot twists and turns seemed contrived and just too much. There's enough of that to really make the book more of a frustrating read for me. While I can often – and often do – overlook writing that I find inadequate when there's a good plot, that just wasn't the case here. For that to happen, I need a plot so good that it makes me forget the writing. Unfortunately, that wasn't the case here.
My apologies to those who were involved in this book. I do not intend to hurt anyone's feelings or anything like that. I make it a point to post honest reviews. I believe my reviews are more credible when I share both the good and the bad. I recognize that my opinion is just that, an opinion. I always try to find positive in books when I generally don't have a lot of good things to say, but I believe honesty helps me keep my integrity as a reviewer. No one can possibly love – or even like – every single book that comes their way. And no one book will please everyone.
This book has a cover that will grab you. I don’t know that I have ever mentioned a cover in a post before but I do love this cover. A story of treachery, betrayal and modern, flexible mores contrasts with a cowboy morality. This could also be characterized as a tale of vigilante justice.
Molly Madison nee O’Malley unhappily lives a superficially perfect life. A perfect husband, a successful social life and an enviable life style is shattered by startling revelations and the shocking demise of loved ones. Molly rises admirably to combat her detractors. Her strength of characters suggests that there are many women in lives that they would change if they could.
Clayton the ranch foreman is described in terms that seem more appropriate to a Harlequin romance than a mystery.
The characters were portrayed with broad brush strokes and little depth. They were not believable but they were entertaining. The depths of anger and hatred did strike a chord with some of the more lurid tabloid headlines.
Molly just can't get any breaks. Her parents died suddenly and finds out that her husband has been cheating on her, with another man. This emotional roller coaster has broken her down in ways that she herself doesn't even understand. She packs up and moves to Montana. When she meets Clayton, she is captured by him and he makes her feel like she is alive once again. But when a nut job comes after the ranch, and Molly, she is in a puddle of emotions once again.
I had my nose buried in this book from start to finish. I only got up to eat and go to the bathroom. And I actually took the book with me to do both of those things. T. Marie is about to be a household name, as common as James Patterson.
I really wanted to like this book, I loved the premise and the synopsis made it sound so good but it just didn't live up to it for me. The story was on the good side of complex but I just didn't get into any of the characters I just didn't care what happened to any of them. For me the book could have done with being a little more graphic in places. Especially the relationship between Phillip and Sloan as I found that not so credible. I got as far as page 113 and have had to stop as I am having to force myself to keep going and that takes the joy out of reading for me. I gave this book 2 stars as I do think it has merit but was there was just no sexual chemistry for me and this story needs it.
Stopped reading and don't plan on finishing. I always finish books but.cannot bring myself to finish this. Sloan's last scene in the book finally did it for me! The dialogue was forced and the characters were very cliche.
I haven't read a murder-mystery thriller in ages so thought I would try this one seeing as I've had it from Netgalley for absolutely ages. It was ok, but not great. I actually got bored of reading it about halfway through and was constantly looking at the percentage marker on my Kindle to see how much more I had to go. I hate to feel like this about books, but I managed to get through it and actually it didn't end too badly and definitely not the way I expected.
Molly's parents die in a tragic accident leaving her as the only heir to their cattle ranch in Montana, a place her husband wants her to instantly sell to aid his political career, but somewhere she feels at home and really doesn't want to lose. Then to make matters even worse, her husband's secret lover reveals their affair to Molly, and all her worries about her marriage are completely explained when Philip's lover is revealed to be his male assistant. Of course the news gets out and Philip's career and marriage is basically over. Molly runs off to the ranch, determined to make a new start.
However, this new start does not turn out at all well for Molly. There are several offers on her ranch but she doesn't want to sell - she wants to carry on her father's legacy and is determined to prove that a woman can do the job just as well as her father did. But...someone is determined to undermine her and tries several attempts to ruin her plans and the ranch. To help her cop-e with all the underhand tactics is Clayton Leatherbe, the ranch foreman, who catches Molly's eye, but he has a few secrets of his own and tries to help Molly with her problems, without actually telling her about them! This romance was a little aside and not really the main plot, but the last sexual scene was quite sweet even though it ended badly!
Alongside all of this is a serial killer who only kills paedophiles and abusers, but takes an interest in Molly's husband's lover as well and causes him a great deal of pain and embarrassment. Eventually it was revealed who this killer was and it wasn't who I expected at all.
The plot was actually quite good, but I felt this story lacked action. It felt quite slow and even though it was pretty obvious who was sabotaging the ranch, none of the characters really suspected him until it was a bit too late! Sloan, Philip's original lover, I thought was completely crazy and really disliked his last scene in the field. I really didn't feel it leant anything to the story at all, other than leading to his demise, which would have happened anyway! And I'm not convinced by Molly's turnaround towards her husband and his new lover. I don't believe I would have been this laid back about meeting him after finding out about his first affair and inviting him to stay with me.
Anyway I would like to thank the author and publishers for sending me this book free through Netgalley.
Everyone has secrets, but there are secrets and there are Secrets! Once Wicked Always Dead by T. Marie Benchley is filled with secrets, some personal and others deadly.
Phillip Madison is hiding one very big Secret and Molly Madison, his wife, is the last to know. After 20+ years of marriage to a legal mover-and-shaker, Molly knows that their relationship has changed but she assumes it is because of work. Little does she know that Phillip is living a double life...not with another woman but with another man. As soon as "the other man" outs Phillip, she trades in her car for a truck, meets with a divorce attorney and moves from Florida to Montana to take over her family's working cattle ranch. Her life has truly been turned upside down, but the problems are just beginning. Fortunately she has Clayton Leatherbe, the ranch foreman, to help her through the transition of society wife to ranch owner.
Once Wicked Always Dead starts off with a murder and then transitions to a society lunch. Doesn't seem like these activities have a lot in common but Ms. Benchley does a fine job of bringing it together. There seems to be a lot going on in this story: Molly O'Malley Madison and ranch life and her romantic interest in Clayton; Phillip being outed then accepting his new life and finding a new love interest; Gavin O'Malley's secrets that may be a threat to Molly; Evin the resident bad guy willing to go to any means to get Molly's property; and Swan - Phillip's former lover and personal assistant, who is out for revenge. Oops...I forgot to mention the murderer that is taking out child molesters and bad guys. But Molly isn't a "bad guy" so why is she being targeted? Are the ghosts of her father's past coming back to haunt her?
Once Wicked Always Dead may loosely be considered a romantic suspense thriller, light on the romance. (There seemed to be more romantic action taking place with Phillip and Jack, Phillip’s new love interest, than there is between Molly and Clayton.) Although all of the characters intersect due to Molly and her past, present and future, the action doesn't make much sense or become cohesive until the end. I found most of the action and the characters to be somewhat believable but it stretched credulity at moments (I guess people with money can do almost anything). All things considered, this was a decent read in the suspense thriller genre.
Molly Madison is thrilled her parents are driving down to Florida to spend time with her and the family from Montana. She has been lonely lately as her husband Phillip always seems to be working. But then, her parents are killed on their trip and Molly and Phillip make a trip back to her home in Montana to settle the estate. Phillip, a lead partner in a lawyer firm, thinks they should sell the farm. The money would come in handy for his hopeful political career. Molly thinks the new ranch foreman, Clayton Leatherbe, is one fine man to look at, but she doesn't agree to sell just yet. She wants to think about it awhile.
Phillip has a secret life, and his lover wants him all to himself. In order to do that, he knows he has to tell Molly about them, even though Phillip doesn't want him to. But Molly takes the news better than expected, leaving Phillip everything but the ranch, and asking for a divorce. She moves back to Montana and begins to find herself again and how to run the ranch.
She'd like to get to know Clayton better, but he too has secrets, and is afraid to get too close just yet. Then, someone begins sabotage the ranch. Molly thinks she knows who it is, but is determined that the wealthy developers won't get their hands on her land. Clayton learns a secret about Molly's family and is determined to take care of it so Molly doesn't have to get involved. But the secret involves a sociopath who has come to town, as well as Phillips ex-lover. The town isn't big enough for all of them, but the sociopath is determined to take a life, even if it is Molly's.
Once Wicked, Always Dead is a stellar romantic suspense. The characters are vibrant, complex, and compelling. The plot is sound -- I never did figure out who the sociopath was until it was revealed to me. High marks for that! The killer is callous, cold, and calculated and quickly held my attention. I was fascinated with the workings of their mind. The romance is more of a back story but does lend more substance to the storyline, but it was passionate and emotional. I highly recommend Once Wicked, Always Dead to any mystery or thriller lover. I will be looking for more work from this very talented author!
"What happens when a family's darkest secrets put lives in jeopardy?"
"How far would you go for love?"
Molly Madison is devastated by her parents tragic death, then she learns her husband is having an affair...with another man. She has to get away from her current life to come to grips with everything that is happening around her.
Molly returns home to her parent's ranch in Montana to start over. She feels an instant connection to the ranch foreman, Clayton Leatherbe, but before a romance can even begin, strange things start to happen at the ranch. A prominent land developer wants her land and will do anything to get it, but would he murder someone.
Behind the scenes, there is a sociopath on the loose using their own brand of justice to reek havoc righting wrongs they believe are occurring. Just how close is this sociopath to Molly and are her life, her friends, and her ranch in danger.
When you come from a family the includes world renown author Peter Benchley who wrote JAWS, writing thrillers must be a gene passed down because this book is definitely a thriller.
I went through a plethora of emotions while reading this book, fear, joy, sorrow, disturbed, excitement, exasperation, distress, exhilaration, pleasure, sadness, confusion and even grief. At times I wasn't sure where the story was headed but I was drawn into the story so quickly and was unable to put the book down until I completed the last page and even then I could not get the story out of my mind.
There is mystery, suspense, romance and a cliffhanger. The sequel has to be in the works and I can't wait to read it. We are going to be hearing a lot about and from T. Marie Benchley in the future. I just know it!
Disclosure of Material Connection: I received this book free from the author through Newman Communications. I was not required to write a positive review. The opinions I have expressed are my own. I am disclosing this in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission 19s 16 CFR, Part 255 : 1CGuides Concerning the Use of Endorsements and Testimonials in Advertising. 1D
T. Marie Benchley describes herself as an author and student of life, and includes Peter Benchley, of Jaws fame, in her family heritage. I remember enjoying several of Peter Benchley’s books, besides the famous film, so I started reading with a pleasant feeling of anticipation.
Once Wicked Always Dead certainly has something for every taste. There’s the daring social consciousness story of a gay man outed by his lover and reviled by all who used to know and admire him. There’s the twist on traditional love stories, where a wife and mother, weary and rejected, is curiously drawn to the curiously handsome and well-muscled cowboy. There’s the brittle friendships of “town” intruding on “country” serenity, the pieces that need to be picked up after sudden death and brutal disaster tear the world apart, developers eager for rancher’s land, a mysterious old woman, secrets and lies… Oh, and the overarching tale of a murderous sociopath with an interesting sense of justice.
The characters are very elaborately drawn, with backstory and internal dialog ensuring their motivations won’t be misunderstood. Even the truck-driver who appears for only one scene has a history that ensures we see his scene through his eyes. The countryside is wonderful, and the contrasts between locations, lifestyles and world-views are nicely told. The heroine rises from tragedy and becomes a strong leading character. People change. Intolerance gives way to friendship, and suspicion to trust.
With material for several books crammed into 323 pages, Once Wicked Always Dead is a somewhat bumpy read, buffeted by changing viewpoints and depth, but covering an intriguing plot, several well-woven mysteries, and interesting cultural observation. Since I’ve only read an uncorrected proof, I’m guessing the final product will smooth out the lumps and bumps.
T. Marie Benchley has written a mystery/love story, kinds chick lit with an edge.
A serial killer is murdering perverts, each in a grisly manner. This killer is very smart and leaves no clues.
When Molly Madison loses her parents in a terrible accident, she inherits a large ranch, in Montana. Her husband is anxious for her to sell and has a plan for the money. When Molly discovers the ultimate betrayal (her husband's affair), she starts divorce proceedings, and returns to her ranch, to rebuild her life. Of course there is a handsome ranch manager, Clayton, the tough cowboy type, and instant attraction hits them both like lightning.
Someone wants her ranch at any cost, and when bad things start to happen, several suspects emerge.
Family secrets are revealed, and when things come to a head, the result is explosive.
This debut novel is a quick read. Although it is a little predictable, it still manages to hold the attention, and entertains the reader.
I received this book from Shirley at Newman Communications, Inc. for review
From my book review blog Rundpinne.[return][return]I have struggled with exactly what to say about Once Wicked Always Dead by T. Marie Benchley since I did not care for this novel. My goal as a book reviewer is to write an honest review without being disrespectful to the author and hopefully I will achieve those goals here. I truly wanted to like the book because the idea of the storyline is an intriguing one, and can be read above in the book synopsis, but unfortunately that is about as much as I cared for. What I disliked about the book may well be the best place to start. While I do not consider myself a prude, there was far too much profanity for my liking and the gratuitous sex scenes were definitely detailed and not something I enjoy reading about. I do think that Once Wicked Always Dead is a book that may be enjoyed by readers who like romance novels, drama, and/or soap operas but sadly, I truly do not care for any of those elements.
If you like soap operas, this book is for you. The story is complicated, so I won't even attempt to explain it here, but it is definitely worthy of a daytime TV show. Between the lies, betrayals, sexuality and murder, little is left to the imagination. If there is one thing T. Marie Benchley excels at, it is describing every detail...almost to the point of over-description. While it is certainly a well-thought out story that leaves the reader guessing until the very end, there are parts of the story that I could have done without. Let's just say there are more graphic sex scenes in this book than I needed to read and leave it at that. I'll leave it up to you to decide if the taste is to your liking.
I said it before and I'll say it again, if you like soap operas, grab this book now! If you prefer your suspense thrillers with less erotica, you may want to stay away.
I would have marked it as 2.5 stars if I could. It wasnt that it was a bad story but it was very unbelievable and predictible. This genre of books you expect it a little but not quite so much in this case. There didnt seem to be much depth to any of the characters and no character development at all. Character development for most of them was stupid in the beginning and all friends in the end. Could also have done without the last scene with Sloane, was a bit too graphic and gross (for lack of better word).
Now if you could get past the above it was a nice easy read. It wasn't too taxing on the brain and after stressful days at work, it was calming.
There is definately something there with the author, this is her first book and there is definate potential. I wouldnt give up with her books altogether but this wasn't great unfortunately.
I was really intrigued by the synopsis of Once Wicked, Always Dead that AtlasBooks sent around a few months ago and was excited to read the book. Unfortunately, the writing just didn't hold up to the promise of a good mystery. It felt unfinished, like the book could have used another heavy edit. And the characters could have been engaging if they didn't feel so wooden.
However, the story is interesting and moves quickly. And with the revelation of Molly's husband's sexuality and his affair, their subsequent divorce and her blooming romance with the foreman of her father's ranch, the story has a strong soap opera feel to it. I couldn't wait for each new twist.
In the end, I probably won't recommend Once Wicked, Always Dead to anyone. Unfortunately the writing is just too rough and distracts from what could have been a good story.
This was another really great way of spending my time, reading this awesome story! I was drawn right into the life of Molly. She quickly became a favorite character and I wanted to see what happened. I was impressed with all the twists and turns in the story too. Catching me in ways I didn't know I could be caught. Just when you think you have it all figured out, the author throws something else in. Not in a way that burdens you with plots either, but just enough to make you go, "Wow, who knew?!". I think everyone will like the tale, the characters and the writing style. Though there is some swearing. Not too much though.
I wish I could give this book a better rating. The story holds great promise but the writing didn't capture me at all. The beginning is an information dump, where the author is trying too hard to tell readers everything about every character all at once. When the story finally gets going, I felt like I was being told about each character's emotions but I never got in their heads and experienced the impact of those emotions. I lost interest and did a lot of skimming. In the end, I had no connection to any of the characters and didn't care what happened to them.
** I received this ebook as a review copy from BookMasters publisher via NetGalley. **
Once Wicked Always Dead is an entertaining book. The characters are a little underdeveloped but very interesting. It's a fast read and the drama keeps the reader turning pages. Some imagery is a little graphic, and parts seem overdescriptive leaving nothing to the readers imagination, but overall it's a good book.
I have to admit that upon seeing the cover of this book I quivered at the thought of reading a romance costumed as a mystery. However I was pleasantly surprised to begin reading and not wanting to put it down. It has a great mix of both genres and the author melds the characters' lives together very well.
All in all this was a good read. I do have to say the flow in so areas is off and some descriptions are a little long winded. The story line was creative however and there were plenty of twists and turns to keep you on the edge of your seat until the end. And I absolutely loved the ending. I also can't wait to read more from this author and see how she develops her writing!
Awesome book, great turns and twists... can't wait for the follow up to be published. If you like mystery, romance and a little bit of western chaos this is definitely the book for you!