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310 pages, Kindle Edition
First published September 5, 2022
First Down 2/5 stars
Breakaway 2/5 stars
Stealing Home 2/5 stars
Page 12
12 pages in and we have had multiple mentions of boobs and tits both from the MMC and FMC’s POV. What for though?
Page 18
“I won’t fight you. But I won’t throw to you” — James
Oof, I have a feeling I will not be able to stay partial regardless of this being a fictional story. As an ex-basketball player— no, we do not mix the game with our private lives. Screw him over at practice, but do not risk the game with your moral and ethical bullsh!t.
Page 80
Not to be mean, but this book is a lot of telling not enough showing.
“—she beat me at Pac-man—“
“—she’s a little trash talker when she’s doing well at a game—”
Most scenes that would show more than lust, some depth maybe, is in the form of “telling” whilst everything that is in the form of “showing” is just sexual and lust-filled behaviour and interaction.
Page 219
Gosh, I’m getting so fed up with Bex. Incredibly illogical, her way of thinking makes no sense. If you block someone then don’t freaking unblock them 5 minutes later you absolute moron!!!
Page 241
Excuse me?!!! No professional player would ever do that. And for a woman? I would never do it for a man that’s for sure. How freaking unprofessional. I hope James’ career is over. It’s not a sweet, romantic gesture. He screwed over his whole team! Absolutely unacceptable.
“If I could only pick one person to be around, one person to know, one person to love, for the rest of my life—I’d choose her.”