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The Violet and the Tom
In what might have been the middle ages, had neither Alexander the Great nor Jesus the prophet died young, the Greek State is a powerful economic force in southern Europe, and slavery is a profitable and well-entrenched social institution. Nygell, a Lord of the Northern Isles, is given the gift of a Grecian slave by the King. Nygell wants no such responsibility.
A homoerotic romance. Set in an alternate universe with institutionalized slavery, thus consent is by nature dubious at best. Elements of BDSM.
Status: Complete
Word count: approx. 100,865
A homoerotic romance. Set in an alternate universe with institutionalized slavery, thus consent is by nature dubious at best. Elements of BDSM.
Status: Complete
Word count: approx. 100,865
295 pages, ebook
First published January 1, 2009
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60852 people want to read
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Eve Ocotillo
9 books233 followersIn the mundane world, Eve Ocotillo plays a scientist. She escapes from the grind by conjuring tough and conflicted men and then throwing them at each other in romantic and not-so-romantic situations. Her stories range from alternate history to contemporary to science fiction and are influenced by her interest in diverse social issues, her fascination with the natural environment, and her fundamentalist upbringing. She doesn’t much like TV, but her Xbox and a new RPG can suck her in for weeks at a time.
That's my book cover blurb. :) I write to feed my id and to learn a little more about myself, my values and belief systems. I believe that my strengths as a writer are in world-building and in strong, complex characterization. Nearly all of my writing explores social issues, and whereas nobody would argue that I'm anything but left, I also have empathy for more conservative value systems and work hard to keep my stories honest and above all, non-preachy.
I consider myself something of a naturalist and think that comes through in my writing; I love examining and describing the natural world. I have a particular affinity for the desert.
Find more of my writing at ocotillo-dawn.livejournal.com. A full description of all available stories is at http://ocotillo-dawn.livejournal.com/.... You will need an account (and for me to 'friend' you) in order to read most of them -- this is about ensuring adulthood, not exclusivity.
-Oco
That's my book cover blurb. :) I write to feed my id and to learn a little more about myself, my values and belief systems. I believe that my strengths as a writer are in world-building and in strong, complex characterization. Nearly all of my writing explores social issues, and whereas nobody would argue that I'm anything but left, I also have empathy for more conservative value systems and work hard to keep my stories honest and above all, non-preachy.
I consider myself something of a naturalist and think that comes through in my writing; I love examining and describing the natural world. I have a particular affinity for the desert.
Find more of my writing at ocotillo-dawn.livejournal.com. A full description of all available stories is at http://ocotillo-dawn.livejournal.com/.... You will need an account (and for me to 'friend' you) in order to read most of them -- this is about ensuring adulthood, not exclusivity.
-Oco
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March 12, 2016
Not my cuppa—dammit.
I read The Claiming of Sleeping Beauty and the rest of Anne Rice's yummy sekret erotica when I was 14.
That's about the last time I was all that titillated by BDSM to any degree, and mostly because it had naked boys in it.
This is nicely-written, but unfocused. And inefficient. And then BDSM-y.
That it took me 2/3 of this to become bored is to its credit.
Some gay dudes wish they were straight; they haz reasons.
I wish I was a woman. Because then I could Gobble All The Cocks from cradle to grave.
I also wish I were into BDSM.
A woman. Into BDSM. In the age of Fifty Shades of Weak Sauce?
*slutty shiver of speculation*
Magnificent.
I read The Claiming of Sleeping Beauty and the rest of Anne Rice's yummy sekret erotica when I was 14.
That's about the last time I was all that titillated by BDSM to any degree, and mostly because it had naked boys in it.
This is nicely-written, but unfocused. And inefficient. And then BDSM-y.
That it took me 2/3 of this to become bored is to its credit.
Some gay dudes wish they were straight; they haz reasons.
I wish I was a woman. Because then I could Gobble All The Cocks from cradle to grave.
I also wish I were into BDSM.
A woman. Into BDSM. In the age of Fifty Shades of Weak Sauce?
*slutty shiver of speculation*
Magnificent.
December 5, 2014
**Rating re-write!**
I have read this book a few times by now. It is my go-to book when I want to read something really kinky and special in the M/M fantasy realm. By now, I have read many BDSM books, M/M and M/F, and this one stands out to me. Eve Ocotillo just does a brilliant job of showing the dynamics of a BDSM relationship. She manages to capture every desire that the characters have in a way the feels charged and emotional, not rote like some BDSM relationships I have read about. This book sticks with me long after I have read it, each and every time that I read it. It is such a smart twist on the master-slave theme. Bravo Ms. Ocotillo!
I have read this book a few times by now. It is my go-to book when I want to read something really kinky and special in the M/M fantasy realm. By now, I have read many BDSM books, M/M and M/F, and this one stands out to me. Eve Ocotillo just does a brilliant job of showing the dynamics of a BDSM relationship. She manages to capture every desire that the characters have in a way the feels charged and emotional, not rote like some BDSM relationships I have read about. This book sticks with me long after I have read it, each and every time that I read it. It is such a smart twist on the master-slave theme. Bravo Ms. Ocotillo!
July 22, 2013
This was amazing and fascinating! Absolutely fascinating … all of it!
This story is a personal account of an Eromenos slave who was trained at the temples of Eros for the sole purpose of becoming a pleasure slave. After years of accepted abuse by his trainers and previous owner Sylvan is discovered amongst his master’s reclaimed possessions and put on the auction block – sold to the highest bidder and given to his new Master as a gift from a King.
Now you probably think that this is just one of those typical Master slave type stories, and you would be right and so very wrong too. This is so much more than that, honestly. Just to be in this world where slavery is just another commodity, to hear the story told from Sylvan’s POV is to be entrenched it. The perspective defines the reality of this world.
What happens when a Master doesn’t want his slave, wants nothing to do with him? What is to become of Sylvan who’s only wish is to please and serve when he was born and raised for that purpose alone. And now … he has no purpose, he’s lost, vulnerable and achingly lonely, desperate for a touch, a command or even a glance from his handsome new Master.
“Erotic allure defines my existence. Without it, I am nothing. It takes more than bread to feed a soul.” – Sylvan
Oh God, this boy … this beautiful man-boy stole my heart with his exquisitely scripted narration. I highlighted so many moving passages in this book. The psychology of it all blew me away; the twisted dynamic is just stunning. My frustration with Slyvan drove me crackers, but I was still able to understand him and love him through it all.
For those who have read Captive Prince: Volume One; I subconsciously believed that I could easily be reading the story of Erasmus, the Akielan pleasure slave, remember him? I know it’s not fair to compare but I couldn’t help it. The world dynamic is VERY similar, but this is focussed more on the relationship between Sylvan and his new master than the goings on of Kings and their courts.
This author throws all the rules of a master/slave dynamic out the window, creating a shift in convention that is genius. I don’t think I’ll ever read anything like it again.
I adore this story, for some reason it sings to me. Perhaps because it was unexpected, perhaps because it was a breath of fresh air, I don’t care, whatever … I loved it.
This story is a personal account of an Eromenos slave who was trained at the temples of Eros for the sole purpose of becoming a pleasure slave. After years of accepted abuse by his trainers and previous owner Sylvan is discovered amongst his master’s reclaimed possessions and put on the auction block – sold to the highest bidder and given to his new Master as a gift from a King.
Now you probably think that this is just one of those typical Master slave type stories, and you would be right and so very wrong too. This is so much more than that, honestly. Just to be in this world where slavery is just another commodity, to hear the story told from Sylvan’s POV is to be entrenched it. The perspective defines the reality of this world.
What happens when a Master doesn’t want his slave, wants nothing to do with him? What is to become of Sylvan who’s only wish is to please and serve when he was born and raised for that purpose alone. And now … he has no purpose, he’s lost, vulnerable and achingly lonely, desperate for a touch, a command or even a glance from his handsome new Master.
“Erotic allure defines my existence. Without it, I am nothing. It takes more than bread to feed a soul.” – Sylvan
Oh God, this boy … this beautiful man-boy stole my heart with his exquisitely scripted narration. I highlighted so many moving passages in this book. The psychology of it all blew me away; the twisted dynamic is just stunning. My frustration with Slyvan drove me crackers, but I was still able to understand him and love him through it all.
For those who have read Captive Prince: Volume One; I subconsciously believed that I could easily be reading the story of Erasmus, the Akielan pleasure slave, remember him? I know it’s not fair to compare but I couldn’t help it. The world dynamic is VERY similar, but this is focussed more on the relationship between Sylvan and his new master than the goings on of Kings and their courts.
This author throws all the rules of a master/slave dynamic out the window, creating a shift in convention that is genius. I don’t think I’ll ever read anything like it again.
I adore this story, for some reason it sings to me. Perhaps because it was unexpected, perhaps because it was a breath of fresh air, I don’t care, whatever … I loved it.
July 23, 2018
**** 4.5 Stars ****
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This started a bit slow for me, it took me almost half of the story to become fully invested.
Over 18 only please *sigh*
I wasn’t too sure where it was heading since Sylvan was a very transparent character
but Nygell a kind of enigma.
What was his deal after all???
However, as soon as I got to see Nygell’s character being unraveled layer by layer, I was kind of gobsmacked. What a skilled twist!!
The dynamic in their relationship oh-so-smoothly shifted that I couldn’t help but be amazed by it.
So hawt!
Great read!
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This started a bit slow for me, it took me almost half of the story to become fully invested.
Over 18 only please *sigh*
I wasn’t too sure where it was heading since Sylvan was a very transparent character
but Nygell a kind of enigma.
What was his deal after all???
However, as soon as I got to see Nygell’s character being unraveled layer by layer, I was kind of gobsmacked. What a skilled twist!!
The dynamic in their relationship oh-so-smoothly shifted that I couldn’t help but be amazed by it.
So hawt!
Great read!
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July 8, 2011I'm sort of astonished at how well this one's been received. I wrote it on a lark, really, and it took me MUCH less time than anything else I've ever written. Maybe that is telling me something about the value simplicity, I dunno. :)
Some very kind people have expressed surprise that I haven't published this. Answer is, it's too late. I had NO idea this was any good, it was the very first piece I ever put out for public consumption. And now? I doubt many publishers would touch it, it is so widely read already. Someone might, but I don't have the time to find them.
Hey. One thing that I am only recently beginning to realize is that the ending is being misinterpreted by an awful lot of you. If the epilogue leaves you upset, then you've probably misunderstood it. Ahem. That is MY fault. In trying for subtlety, I went too far.
Yes, I do need to rewrite. It is unforgiveable that an author has to explain an ending, but it has to get in line with a lot of other projects and RL stuff so the following will have to do, for now. My sincere apologies.
Click here ONLY if you've already read it. MAJOR spoiler.
review edited (rewritten entirely) 7/8/11.
Some very kind people have expressed surprise that I haven't published this. Answer is, it's too late. I had NO idea this was any good, it was the very first piece I ever put out for public consumption. And now? I doubt many publishers would touch it, it is so widely read already. Someone might, but I don't have the time to find them.
Hey. One thing that I am only recently beginning to realize is that the ending is being misinterpreted by an awful lot of you. If the epilogue leaves you upset, then you've probably misunderstood it. Ahem. That is MY fault. In trying for subtlety, I went too far.
Yes, I do need to rewrite. It is unforgiveable that an author has to explain an ending, but it has to get in line with a lot of other projects and RL stuff so the following will have to do, for now. My sincere apologies.
Click here ONLY if you've already read it. MAJOR spoiler.
review edited (rewritten entirely) 7/8/11.
January 7, 2018
3.5 I wasn't entirely swept off my feet by The Violet and the Tom. With this kind of story, about a slave boy who is bought by a King and handed to a Lord Nygell at the Greek court to avoid the latter from getting involved in any more sexual scandals, I would expect the boy to be immersed in political intrigue and brilliantly villainous schemes. This story is much, much simpler than that. For example, it doesn't have the depth of, I'm sorry for the possibly unfair comparison, Captive Prince.
Sylvan is taught from a very young age to always attend to his master's needs, sexually and otherwise, and to obey him in everything. So his daily grind consists of rimming his eyes with Kohl, brushing his hair, preparing for sex and dropping to the floor, crawling at his master's feet crying to not only offer his body, but to beg for forgiveness for the most trivial little things. But what he - despite this constant fixation on his new reluctant master, who has no use for infantilized slave boys - fails to grasp is that Nygell has otherrrr needs, ones that he cannot seem to fulfill.
This continuous confusion about the desires of Sylvan's new master could have been so intriguing. Unfortunately, it never was a mystery why Nygell refused his slave's attempts to pleasure and serve him. And yet the author kept dropping major hints and clues! Ones that made being trapped in the mind of Sylvan as a narrator a frustrating affair. His thoughts about his master's issues kept going in self-pitying and angsty circles. For someone who followed his master's whereabouts like a dog on a leash, and supposedly spent hours studying and reading in the library (a clear sign of the existence of brain cells) it's hard to comprehend that he was able to miss the OBVIOUS so completely.
Don't get me wrong. I understand why the author created him the way she did. The concept of is exciting to explore. But I do think that she went overboard in emphasizing Sylvan's annoying characteristics and his utter focus on not only getting his master off, but himself as well (worked my way through those lukewarm casual sex encounters, yawning).
Honestly? I wish she would've let him solve a few pieces of the puzzle earlier in the game. That surely would've saved me from having to read a bunch of awkward, unenthusiastic sex scenes!
So ultimately, I'm not sold on the wobbly story as a whole, but intrigued nonetheless. There are a few spectacular scenes in The Violet and the Tom that toy with power dynamics. The author exceeds herself in terms of intense writing and engrossing her reader in those. Add to this the fact that this book's a freebie and...
Oh, one last thing. No one has to fret about not getting a HEA. The author states on page 1 that she's a fan of HEAs, which is fine. I just wish that everything that happened towards the end wasn't so terribly...convenient. It was like the Fairy Godmother suddenly dropped by to sprinkle fairy dust on all the loose ends. And then some more on that awful epilogue! Maybe I should go with 3 stars after all.
Sylvan is taught from a very young age to always attend to his master's needs, sexually and otherwise, and to obey him in everything. So his daily grind consists of rimming his eyes with Kohl, brushing his hair, preparing for sex and dropping to the floor, crawling at his master's feet crying to not only offer his body, but to beg for forgiveness for the most trivial little things. But what he - despite this constant fixation on his new reluctant master, who has no use for infantilized slave boys - fails to grasp is that Nygell has otherrrr needs, ones that he cannot seem to fulfill.
This continuous confusion about the desires of Sylvan's new master could have been so intriguing. Unfortunately, it never was a mystery why Nygell refused his slave's attempts to pleasure and serve him. And yet the author kept dropping major hints and clues! Ones that made being trapped in the mind of Sylvan as a narrator a frustrating affair. His thoughts about his master's issues kept going in self-pitying and angsty circles. For someone who followed his master's whereabouts like a dog on a leash, and supposedly spent hours studying and reading in the library (a clear sign of the existence of brain cells) it's hard to comprehend that he was able to miss the OBVIOUS so completely.
Don't get me wrong. I understand why the author created him the way she did. The concept of is exciting to explore. But I do think that she went overboard in emphasizing Sylvan's annoying characteristics and his utter focus on not only getting his master off, but himself as well (worked my way through those lukewarm casual sex encounters, yawning).
Honestly? I wish she would've let him solve a few pieces of the puzzle earlier in the game. That surely would've saved me from having to read a bunch of awkward, unenthusiastic sex scenes!
So ultimately, I'm not sold on the wobbly story as a whole, but intrigued nonetheless. There are a few spectacular scenes in The Violet and the Tom that toy with power dynamics. The author exceeds herself in terms of intense writing and engrossing her reader in those. Add to this the fact that this book's a freebie and...
Oh, one last thing. No one has to fret about not getting a HEA. The author states on page 1 that she's a fan of HEAs, which is fine. I just wish that everything that happened towards the end wasn't so terribly...convenient. It was like the Fairy Godmother suddenly dropped by to sprinkle fairy dust on all the loose ends. And then some more on that awful epilogue! Maybe I should go with 3 stars after all.
November 4, 2019
Damn near perfection. This was my first Eve Ocotillo and I started reading it based on recommendations from reviewers I trust, even though I find reading fiction online almost intolerable. I leapt in despite the format, thinking if it wasn’t worth it I would DNF quickly. But yeah, that wasn’t even something I considered after I started reading. One-sitting read.
TVatT is beautifully written from Sylvan’s (first person) perspective. Sylvan was trained - actually, programmed - as a pleasure slave since his childhood. At the beginning of the story, he is between masters due to the downfall of his previous abusive owner, and he gets sold to the king as a gift for his surly bastard son. But it’s an unwelcome gift — Lord Nygell has no desire for a slave like Sylvan. And Sylvan, being thoroughly conditioned that this is his one and only value, is completely lost as he is unable to fulfill the only purpose that he knows.
The character development was ON POINT. Sylvan, Nygell, and even the SCs came richly alive. I fluctuated between wanting to comfort, strangle, and fuck both of the MCs throughout the story, so you know something was written right. 😂
The evolution of Sylvan and Nygell’s relationship completely sucked me in — what they ultimately needed from each other and the winding path it took to get there. It’s angsty as all hell for a while, super uncomfortable to read — in a way that was absolutely necessary for the story to be as well-written as it was. It’s almost impossible to go into any more detail without too many spoilers, so I’ll just leave it at this mild one:
There’s no question in my mind that I’ll reread this one. Amazing work, Ms. Ocotillo! I can't wait to read the rest of your stuff.
TVatT is beautifully written from Sylvan’s (first person) perspective. Sylvan was trained - actually, programmed - as a pleasure slave since his childhood. At the beginning of the story, he is between masters due to the downfall of his previous abusive owner, and he gets sold to the king as a gift for his surly bastard son. But it’s an unwelcome gift — Lord Nygell has no desire for a slave like Sylvan. And Sylvan, being thoroughly conditioned that this is his one and only value, is completely lost as he is unable to fulfill the only purpose that he knows.
The character development was ON POINT. Sylvan, Nygell, and even the SCs came richly alive. I fluctuated between wanting to comfort, strangle, and fuck both of the MCs throughout the story, so you know something was written right. 😂
The evolution of Sylvan and Nygell’s relationship completely sucked me in — what they ultimately needed from each other and the winding path it took to get there. It’s angsty as all hell for a while, super uncomfortable to read — in a way that was absolutely necessary for the story to be as well-written as it was. It’s almost impossible to go into any more detail without too many spoilers, so I’ll just leave it at this mild one:
There’s no question in my mind that I’ll reread this one. Amazing work, Ms. Ocotillo! I can't wait to read the rest of your stuff.
October 16, 2020
DNF @ 50%
September 30, 2014
4,5 Stars - a spellbinding, beautiful free M/M story - so worth reading - he came, he took, he defeated...
I don't really know how I found this completed on-line story, nor what first attracted me to start reading it. Maybe it was because I love another wonderful story about a slave and master in a fictional historical kingdom, the Captive Prince: Volume One (now a published novel, but from the beginning an on-line story - my review). Anyway after a chapter or two, I was hooked in this captivating and beautiful story.
Lord Nygell of the Northern Isles, is given the gift of a Grecian slave by his father, King Orgud. This is a kingdom with institutionalized slavery but the lord wants no such responsibility. He don't want to be the Master to this, for pleasure so well trained eromenos slave. The younger slave has no name but will later be called Sylvan.
New in the palace is Sylvan scared and unsure. He want nothing more than in the best way, do what he since he was a kid is trained to, serve his new master.
This story concerns BDSM and a master-slave relationship, a subject I usually avoid. Relieved now in retrospect, I can say that this topic was handled in such a nice way here. I basically never felt that I was reading something outside my comfort zone. On the contrary, I learned something about such a relationship, which means that I right now feel a little more peace for this topic. The master-slave subject is always very nice, tenderly and lovingly handled in this novel and I really love both of these wonderful characters now when the last page is read. (Possibly it is also a curious circumstance, but that the topic with a Dom & Sub or similar, feels better to me, when it occurs in a kind of tale or fictional world.)
It happens so much, it's quivering, steaming and uncertain. I gasp sometimes nervous and can't stop reading (...the lost night). The story progress is just so beautiful slowly in the beginning of the book. And I'm happy - I don't want "everything" already on page 20. We have time to get to know the characters, understand their feelings, background and desires.
With small slow steps forward, this becomes, chapter by chapter to a finely narrated, and slightly different, grand love-story.
Possibly, this is classified as an erotic novel, but in my opinion it isn't more "erotic" than any other of the romances I usually read. On the contrary, it was never needlessly described sex scenes etc, but just nicely described in its proper context. There were a few small details at the end which I think was a little unnecessary, but otherwise, I like this one.
Wonderful, captivating and heart warming - I sacrificed, with joy, a night's sleep on this steamy and emotional M/M romance. It's hot, with a few surprising twists and really written with love for the characters. Would recommend it!
I Like - very much!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
You can find it here: http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2626920...
[And if you want to download web-based fics as mobi or epub files, use https://www.flagfic.com/ as a nice gr girl, and M/M author, just told us. It works.
~ Thank you Con. I will certainly read your books now...]
I don't really know how I found this completed on-line story, nor what first attracted me to start reading it. Maybe it was because I love another wonderful story about a slave and master in a fictional historical kingdom, the Captive Prince: Volume One (now a published novel, but from the beginning an on-line story - my review). Anyway after a chapter or two, I was hooked in this captivating and beautiful story.
‘Lord Nygell. Rolling the name over in my mind, like a hard candy over a tongue, not so much to set it to memory—it had been branded there since this morning—but because I was already infatuated with the sound of it. Lord Nygell. Master.’
Lord Nygell of the Northern Isles, is given the gift of a Grecian slave by his father, King Orgud. This is a kingdom with institutionalized slavery but the lord wants no such responsibility. He don't want to be the Master to this, for pleasure so well trained eromenos slave. The younger slave has no name but will later be called Sylvan.
New in the palace is Sylvan scared and unsure. He want nothing more than in the best way, do what he since he was a kid is trained to, serve his new master.
‘I laughed, low and soft. "There are things even an eromenos cannot fake. You have felt them. And as you once promised to me, I will not lie to you. My words of desire are full truth; you give me the freedom to express them."
This story concerns BDSM and a master-slave relationship, a subject I usually avoid. Relieved now in retrospect, I can say that this topic was handled in such a nice way here. I basically never felt that I was reading something outside my comfort zone. On the contrary, I learned something about such a relationship, which means that I right now feel a little more peace for this topic. The master-slave subject is always very nice, tenderly and lovingly handled in this novel and I really love both of these wonderful characters now when the last page is read. (Possibly it is also a curious circumstance, but that the topic with a Dom & Sub or similar, feels better to me, when it occurs in a kind of tale or fictional world.)
It happens so much, it's quivering, steaming and uncertain. I gasp sometimes nervous and can't stop reading (...the lost night). The story progress is just so beautiful slowly in the beginning of the book. And I'm happy - I don't want "everything" already on page 20. We have time to get to know the characters, understand their feelings, background and desires.
With small slow steps forward, this becomes, chapter by chapter to a finely narrated, and slightly different, grand love-story.
‘I ached to kiss him. He lay back, panting, and his mouth enthralled me, the sharp curve of his upper lip, the sensual curve of the lower, fluttering minutely with each breath. Licking my own lips, wishing they were his, wanting to find the taste of him behind the brandy, to feel the pliant heat of his tongue. But I could not, for a kiss is too deep, too fraught with meaning, and it wasn't my place to presume. If kisses are to be shared between man and eromenos, it is the master who must initiate the first one. And my Lord never had.’
Possibly, this is classified as an erotic novel, but in my opinion it isn't more "erotic" than any other of the romances I usually read. On the contrary, it was never needlessly described sex scenes etc, but just nicely described in its proper context. There were a few small details at the end which I think was a little unnecessary, but otherwise, I like this one.
Wonderful, captivating and heart warming - I sacrificed, with joy, a night's sleep on this steamy and emotional M/M romance. It's hot, with a few surprising twists and really written with love for the characters. Would recommend it!
I Like - very much!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
You can find it here: http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2626920...
[And if you want to download web-based fics as mobi or epub files, use https://www.flagfic.com/ as a nice gr girl, and M/M author, just told us. It works.
~ Thank you Con. I will certainly read your books now...]
October 16, 2011
This is an excellent book and beautifully written, definitely the best BDSM-themed book I've read (although admittedly that isn't a large selection.) But also just plain one of the best m/m romance books I've read. There isn't an unnecessary word in here. The background is sketched out in a way that feels complete without being intrusive or over-explained. Every scene moves the characters forward through the complex maze of their changing relationships. The different elements of how these two men react to each other and the world around them ring true. The BDSM is neither gratuitous nor unmotivated. In this book it so clearly comes from the situations and needs of the characters, that it fits in a love story appropriately. There is pain involved - this is SM and not just D/s. But if that is not a complete deal breaker for you, then I highly recommend this book.
August 15, 2013
I'm soooooo disappointed in every single one of my friends who did not force me to read this sooner!! Seriously, it's been sitting there untouched on my TBR shelf for over 2 years!!! WTF was wrong with me?! It was so good that I just wanted to immerse myself in the world the author created...even though it was a very dark and dreary place.
I LOVED everything about this story. Yeah, yeah...I know some people may be uncomfortable with BDSM...and then there's the whole sex slave issue, but seriously...Sylvan and Nygell are A-MAZING!! There's some D/s and bondage and whipping...but nothing too traumatizing. It was intense and erotic and down right fucking hot!! Plus, a beautiful love story.
I must say...the branding scene...was my most favorite scene! Oh sweet Eros!
The title? Absolutely fucking brilliant...and why the fuck is this not published?!!
If you've been on the fence about whether or not to read this...read it...NOW!!
I LOVED everything about this story. Yeah, yeah...I know some people may be uncomfortable with BDSM...and then there's the whole sex slave issue, but seriously...Sylvan and Nygell are A-MAZING!! There's some D/s and bondage and whipping...but nothing too traumatizing. It was intense and erotic and down right fucking hot!! Plus, a beautiful love story.
I must say...the branding scene...was my most favorite scene! Oh sweet Eros!
The title? Absolutely fucking brilliant...and why the fuck is this not published?!!
If you've been on the fence about whether or not to read this...read it...NOW!!
February 18, 2011
Freaking...FANTASTIC!!! Why, oh why, isn't this published???
I picked this online story with the intention of reading a chapter here and there when I needed a break from something else, maybe stretch it out over a couple of weeks, no hurry whatsoever. Yeah, OK. It completely ruled my day, kept clicking chapter after chapter until it was devoured. Slave-fic, institutionalized slavery, BDSM, but so much more. If these are themes that attract your attention, I think you are in for a treat. If not, it might still be worth giving it a shot.
Sylvan drew me in from the very beginning with his narrative. I felt his struggles and even though I became frustrated at times, I understood these were steps he needed to take in order to grow. The dynamics between the two main characters was so believable to me, so real. Not once was I pulled out of the story by something that was too out there, too easy, or just too much. I was taken by surprise a few times, mostly because the story went in directions I'm not accustomed being taken to (that's a good thing).
There are so many more things I want to say, but really, I don't think I can do it justice. Incredibly well written, I would even say beautifully written, with a nice flow and no mistakes that I noticed. I wouldn't call it a dark read, no flashy cruelty or overdone violence, but not light either. I did not find the sex scenes overwhelming in their frequency even though there were quite a few. I felt they had purpose and it wasn't just sex for the sake of it. Oh, just wonderful. Loved every word.
I picked this online story with the intention of reading a chapter here and there when I needed a break from something else, maybe stretch it out over a couple of weeks, no hurry whatsoever. Yeah, OK. It completely ruled my day, kept clicking chapter after chapter until it was devoured. Slave-fic, institutionalized slavery, BDSM, but so much more. If these are themes that attract your attention, I think you are in for a treat. If not, it might still be worth giving it a shot.
Sylvan drew me in from the very beginning with his narrative. I felt his struggles and even though I became frustrated at times, I understood these were steps he needed to take in order to grow. The dynamics between the two main characters was so believable to me, so real. Not once was I pulled out of the story by something that was too out there, too easy, or just too much. I was taken by surprise a few times, mostly because the story went in directions I'm not accustomed being taken to (that's a good thing).
There are so many more things I want to say, but really, I don't think I can do it justice. Incredibly well written, I would even say beautifully written, with a nice flow and no mistakes that I noticed. I wouldn't call it a dark read, no flashy cruelty or overdone violence, but not light either. I did not find the sex scenes overwhelming in their frequency even though there were quite a few. I felt they had purpose and it wasn't just sex for the sake of it. Oh, just wonderful. Loved every word.
August 18, 2013
I have had this on my tbr for like ever. Can't understand why I kept putting it off, and thanks to some pushing from a good friend who said I would love it, I finally gave it a shot. And...I absolutely loved it.
This story pulled me right into its world. I loved Sylvan. He tried so hard at everything and wanted to understand what was expected of him, as much as he wanted to please. And Nygell...it was so easy to feel bad for him and his struggles with his position in life. I wish he would have made things a bit easier for Sylvan at times, but once they figured things out, it was beautiful. The wax scene was unbelievably hot.
I couldn't wait to see how things would turn out for them and was afraid at every page turn that something really bad would happen. Needless to say, I didn't want it to end. I really wanted to see them at the new manor and especially wanted to see them with Graf. I absolutely loved the epilogue.
While there are some elements of BDSM here, it is fairly light and easy to handle, with the exception of perhaps a whipping scene here or there, but even those are done so beautifully. I definitely recommend giving this gem a try.
January 14, 2014
What's a slave to do when he's asked to become the Master?
Ever heard that song Master and Servant by Depeche Mode? I thought of that song quite a bit and even listened to it a couple times while reading The Violet and the Tom.
To be honest, the first 50% of it dragged for me. It's meant to be a slow burn between Nygell and Sylvan which is fine, but if you're going to slow burn the relationship of the two protagonists then I need a secondary plot line to hold my attention. The Violet and the Tom is set in an alternate world so the seed was planted to world build, right? No. No world building, not for the first 50% at least. There are some secondary characters that come into Sylvan's life, none of which were all that gripping and there is some minor world building towards the end which is lacking, in my opinion.
At about 50% the "event" happens which I'm pretty sure everyone on the planet and even people on the space station could see coming except Sylvan, of course. I'm going to just put my main nitpick about this out there. Sylvan is an eromenos (a trained slave), so he's trained to observe, particularly his owner/master and he lauds his observational skills fairly consistently throughout the book-it's told from his perspective-yet, I'm to believe he missed this? o.O No denying it's uncommon and unexpected but hint after hint after hint is dropped and rattles around until finally Nygell has to come out and blatantly ask.
Nevertheless, this is where I started to enjoy The Violet and the Tom. The growth of their relationship, the miscues, the trial and error all felt authentic and believable. This cannot possibly be an easy transition to make for either party no matter how much they want it nor how many base instincts they have. There is a whole world filled with royalty and protocols they have to navigate and maintain roles in or suffer the consequences; definitely a fine, not to mention, tricky line to traverse. All of that was illustrated well plus, the kinky play was most titillating! Definitely a plus there.
The resolution was fairly predictable but still enjoyable. The secondary characters introduced in the second half added some to the story but by and large The Violet and the Tom focuses on Nygell and Sylvan. The writing is a bit flowery but I found it befitting the era. I'd say it's between a 3.5 and a 4 star read mainly due to the pacing.
August 13, 2013
Without sounding too much like a broken record I'm not a massive BDSM lover and at one time it would never have made it into my reading lists but I have to be honest just recently I've found myself becoming attracted to certain books containing it, that have being getting great press from my friends on GR, so I've pushed past my initial disinterest, taken myself out of my m/m comfort zone and taken the plunge. This was one of those books and I'm so happy I gave it a go because I more than enjoyed it ....I loved it!
Eve Ocotillo's writing style is classy, her words flowing stylishly, yet easily. Told entirely from Sylvan's ( the Eromenos pleasure slave ) point of view, it got me in its clutches from the start and I was drawn into the fascinating dynamics between Lord Nygell and Sylvan. They dont have a great start because Nygell pretty much rejects Sylvan, who has been bought for him by his father the King. Over time this changes but its the way it changes that makes this story as fabulous as it is. A brilliant take on the master/slave relationship. I was really drawn to these two men and their interplay in a way I didn't think I ever would be and by the end of the book I was totally invested in their journey together. Erotic, painful, raw and intense yet also beautiful and weirdly romantic.
I'd be lying if I said I fully understand the ins and outs of D/s and BDSM but whereas normally I want to skip through the actual scenes when they come around, in this book I found myself devouring every single one without batting an eyelid. I'm not even sure how hardcore this is but its certainly made me more open to trying more of the darker stuff. One thing it does have is a HEA so that does sweeten the pill and that's not a spoiler as Eve states it in her introduction. So I'll be reading this one again with pleasure as its made its way into my keepers. OH and before I forget its novel length and its free... Awesome!
Eve Ocotillo's writing style is classy, her words flowing stylishly, yet easily. Told entirely from Sylvan's ( the Eromenos pleasure slave ) point of view, it got me in its clutches from the start and I was drawn into the fascinating dynamics between Lord Nygell and Sylvan. They dont have a great start because Nygell pretty much rejects Sylvan, who has been bought for him by his father the King. Over time this changes but its the way it changes that makes this story as fabulous as it is. A brilliant take on the master/slave relationship. I was really drawn to these two men and their interplay in a way I didn't think I ever would be and by the end of the book I was totally invested in their journey together. Erotic, painful, raw and intense yet also beautiful and weirdly romantic.
I'd be lying if I said I fully understand the ins and outs of D/s and BDSM but whereas normally I want to skip through the actual scenes when they come around, in this book I found myself devouring every single one without batting an eyelid. I'm not even sure how hardcore this is but its certainly made me more open to trying more of the darker stuff. One thing it does have is a HEA so that does sweeten the pill and that's not a spoiler as Eve states it in her introduction. So I'll be reading this one again with pleasure as its made its way into my keepers. OH and before I forget its novel length and its free... Awesome!
November 6, 2011
Loved it. Loved it to the point where I'm thinking about rereading it already. I've been a bit gun-shy, given the ending of a few books I've read lately, but this was fantastic, the ending making it all the more better. I can't believe that this is unpublished. An extremely satisfying BDSM novel that I would gladly pay full price for. Highly, highly recommended.
June 25, 2011
Sylvan is an eromenos, a slave taught in the art of love since early childhood. When his master goes bankrupt, Sylvan -together with all of the master's other possessions- gets sold. He can't believe his luck when it turns out it's the King himself who has acquired him. On top of that he's given to the King's son, the handsome and powerful Lord Nygell. But the Lord is silent and gruff, even becomes angered when Sylvan tries to serve him. And soon the desperate Sylvan finds there is nothing he can do to please his master...
The Violet and the Tom is a wonderful slave story with a twist. What I liked most was that there was no miracle kiss or fuck that set things right between the characters. Both had to work through behavior ingrained by status, upbringing and forceful conditioning.
This resulted in a great story with good writing, steady pacing in which the events unfolded in a realistic tempo and manner and wonderful characterization.
The story is free available on line which brings me to the question why in hell this author didn't get published? The Violet and the Tom is a great story which definitely deserves more exposure. A well deserved 4,5 stars.
The Violet and the Tom is a wonderful slave story with a twist. What I liked most was that there was no miracle kiss or fuck that set things right between the characters. Both had to work through behavior ingrained by status, upbringing and forceful conditioning.
This resulted in a great story with good writing, steady pacing in which the events unfolded in a realistic tempo and manner and wonderful characterization.
The story is free available on line which brings me to the question why in hell this author didn't get published? The Violet and the Tom is a great story which definitely deserves more exposure. A well deserved 4,5 stars.
November 12, 2019
First off thank you Moony for "nudging" me to read this. You know me well. xoxo
I started reading this, was 40% in, and in love, however RL intervened, which means I had time to dwell on some things that didn't quite work for me, but overall I'm happy this exists, and it's leagues better than lots of the published stuff out there.
This story is told from Sylvan's P.O.V. He's a pleasure slave in a universe where the Greek Empire of antiquity is still thriving along with Northern Kingdoms, akin to Anglo/Celtic/Saxon/Vandal reigns of yore, with a touch of Medieval Times thrown in for color. Slavery is just another part of this society along with polytheism. Sylvan is gifted by King Orgud, to his bastard son and commander of the army, Lord Nygell. Nygell is not happy, and not for the reasons you might think.
I like the subversion of the expected roles between Sylvan and Nygell. I very much enjoyed the subtle world building, recognizable, but different enough to afford some credible distance. What didn't work for me is more on the personal taste level so I'll hide it under a spoiler tag. You can and should best ignore.
Happy Reading! :D
I started reading this, was 40% in, and in love, however RL intervened, which means I had time to dwell on some things that didn't quite work for me, but overall I'm happy this exists, and it's leagues better than lots of the published stuff out there.
This story is told from Sylvan's P.O.V. He's a pleasure slave in a universe where the Greek Empire of antiquity is still thriving along with Northern Kingdoms, akin to Anglo/Celtic/Saxon/Vandal reigns of yore, with a touch of Medieval Times thrown in for color. Slavery is just another part of this society along with polytheism. Sylvan is gifted by King Orgud, to his bastard son and commander of the army, Lord Nygell. Nygell is not happy, and not for the reasons you might think.
I like the subversion of the expected roles between Sylvan and Nygell. I very much enjoyed the subtle world building, recognizable, but different enough to afford some credible distance. What didn't work for me is more on the personal taste level so I'll hide it under a spoiler tag. You can and should best ignore.
Happy Reading! :D
December 3, 2011
This is a MUST read for anyone who likes the combination of M/M Romance and BDSM. You have not read anything in the genre if you haven't read this one. The author did an exceptional job of creating a mesmerizing world. The concise descriptions of the settings and characters, sometimes just a sentence or two, so very well worded that they plunge the reader's senses into the feelings seamlessly. When Sylvan shivered, I felt the cold. When Nygell sipped his coffee, I could taste it. Genius!
The characters, even the secondary ones, will stay with me for a long, long time. As a matter of fact, I hope they never leave me. The conflict is epic, won't go into detail, but it takes a brave soul to use what this author did. And she was justified in doing it. Excellent pacing, gradual and subtle at times, the "aha" moments clear and vivid, jerking me out of the daze this book had me in.
The ending was lyrical, the kind that had me closing the book and sitting back to savor it. The epilogue? Inspired is the only word I can think of. This is not just an HFN, it's a taste of their HEA.
Why has this never been published, while so much drivel is?
I'm going to the author's profile now, to see what else she's written that I can buy and read.
The characters, even the secondary ones, will stay with me for a long, long time. As a matter of fact, I hope they never leave me. The conflict is epic, won't go into detail, but it takes a brave soul to use what this author did. And she was justified in doing it. Excellent pacing, gradual and subtle at times, the "aha" moments clear and vivid, jerking me out of the daze this book had me in.
The ending was lyrical, the kind that had me closing the book and sitting back to savor it. The epilogue? Inspired is the only word I can think of. This is not just an HFN, it's a taste of their HEA.
Why has this never been published, while so much drivel is?
I'm going to the author's profile now, to see what else she's written that I can buy and read.
October 12, 2011
I liked the story, don't get me wrong, and I read it in one fell swoop. I would also recommend it to anyone interested in master/slave and BDSM subject matters (especially if you don't want cookie-cutter characters but an interesting twist).
I just felt at times that there could have been more subtlety in the characters, the plot, the twists, the motivations and the emotional and physical drive, and perhaps more 'adventure' towards the end. At some places I would have liked to see the story go into more unexpected directions that keep the reader guessing, but I reckon that's just me and I'm a fickle reader who isn't easy to please.
This book got a lot of very high ratings and I do believe they are well deserved, because if you're into fantasy-type master/slave M/M then you will absolutely love this story.
The fact that this story is for free does not say anything at all about its quality. It is excellently proofread and well edited. As I always say: you don't have to publish through a publisher to produce quality, and that this story certainly is: quality.
I just felt at times that there could have been more subtlety in the characters, the plot, the twists, the motivations and the emotional and physical drive, and perhaps more 'adventure' towards the end. At some places I would have liked to see the story go into more unexpected directions that keep the reader guessing, but I reckon that's just me and I'm a fickle reader who isn't easy to please.
This book got a lot of very high ratings and I do believe they are well deserved, because if you're into fantasy-type master/slave M/M then you will absolutely love this story.
The fact that this story is for free does not say anything at all about its quality. It is excellently proofread and well edited. As I always say: you don't have to publish through a publisher to produce quality, and that this story certainly is: quality.
November 20, 2013
“The Violet and the Tom” is a well written story that kept me interested until the very end; I really liked it even though I missed a pinch of salt here and there to have it spiced exactly to my taste. Court intrigues and adventures would have knocked my socks off!
Sylvan tells us this story. He is a slave in an AU ancient Greece, an eromenos trained to please and not to be anyone. It is incredible how he can be so oblivious when he is so attuned to his master’s desires! He will perhaps annoy the hell out of the most impatient of you, but I liked his story arc that begins at the feet of Lord Nygell, in this disturbingly comfortable position of being nothing more than a pet. Mistreated or pampered, but never in possession of the slightest particle of himself, or wouldn’t it be unbearable?! Where he will go from there and how is yours to discover… and be sometimes frustrated about.
The main character of this story is the D/s relationship though. It is its asset as it is an initiatory, almost educational journey, and it is its flaw as it overshadows the romantic relationship. Don’t shy away, romantic souls! It is very much about love in the end -only, it comes a little out of the blue in my opinion.
“The Violet and the Tom” is an interesting and respectful take on a D/s relationship where the choice of setting highlights how D/s is not abuse, how its foundations must be equality and shared desires.
If you’re a first timer, be warned that the story contains some whipping and lashing but really nothing hardcore, and hey! It’s BDSM! I strongly recommend it to get what submission and domination are about. I’m not an expert, mind you -only very appreciative of how the master/slave dynamic is captured, whether it is in role play or actual slavery.
Enough with me, I’d hate to make it sound too cerebral. Go read it, I promise that it’s sweet and sexy and that it will get you all hot and bothered!
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October 21, 2011
This book is too good to be free! This story is really the story of the emotional journey if the two main characters. Nygell is the reluctant master of the slave Sylvan. Sylvan, who has been trained as a pleasure slave, knows his place and his function in his Master's household, but Nygell doesn't seem to want to use Sylvan as a slave, frustrating his expectations and his wants. Nygell inspires in Sylvan devotion and worship, he ignites the flame of love in the young man, who can't help withering because of the neglect of his master. The two must go a long way before they can manage to express their true nature and to live a relationship which would be regarded as an abomitination in that society.
I really liked how the psychological aspects of the story entwined with the sociological aspects. There is a strong dycothomy between what is expectations and aspirations; between appearances and desires. It takes a while for Nygell and Sylvan to understand the point of view of the other man, and often the misunderstandings between them come from the deep understanding of the nature of their wants. I can't tell much more without spoiling the book.
The writing is very beautiful and you can really feel the patient craft of the author. The story is told in the first person point of view of Sylvan. I liked the way he was constantly aware of his position, how being a slave he had to be also a diplomat. Throughout the story there is a very delicate balance of emotions, the ones who are expressed and the ones who are kept in check. I want to find the right word and it eludes me, but it was subtle and clever and always in character.
The epilogue was really the perfect note to end the story. Highly recommended!
I really liked how the psychological aspects of the story entwined with the sociological aspects. There is a strong dycothomy between what is expectations and aspirations; between appearances and desires. It takes a while for Nygell and Sylvan to understand the point of view of the other man, and often the misunderstandings between them come from the deep understanding of the nature of their wants. I can't tell much more without spoiling the book.
The writing is very beautiful and you can really feel the patient craft of the author. The story is told in the first person point of view of Sylvan. I liked the way he was constantly aware of his position, how being a slave he had to be also a diplomat. Throughout the story there is a very delicate balance of emotions, the ones who are expressed and the ones who are kept in check. I want to find the right word and it eludes me, but it was subtle and clever and always in character.
The epilogue was really the perfect note to end the story. Highly recommended!
January 7, 2012
Excellent kinky historical fantasy m/m romance about a pleasure slave gifted by a king to his unwilling son, who is uncomfortable owning a slave for reasons that slowly become clear...
April 30, 2013
Loved this story; a wonderfully unique take on the Master-slave alternate-world genre.
January 24, 2014
I was going to write a long review on everything I loved about this, even started to, but there are already so many reviews on this who've already beaten me to it.
I will say two things, though.
First: I went into this thinking one way, and came out with a heated 'yes baby' with how that changed. I love any author who can twist a plot like that, heat it up, just take what's known and tip it upside down. The whole schema-reinforcing to schema-refreshing... it was handled beautifuly, especially as you see it emerging through the pages, even when the characters can't.
Second: why the hell isn't this author writing anymore m/m? Damn crime, it is.
Simples. 'nuff said.
Okay, maybe not enough said.
I love how Oco made me feel like reading was such guilty a pleasure by almost getting the narrator to look over his shoulder and wink at you. I'm not keen on direct address usually, but when it came along and the narrator whispered in the reader's ear, I loved how he made me feel.
5 stars from me. There were some little gripes, but nothing worth distracting from those 5 well-deserved stars.
I will say two things, though.
First: I went into this thinking one way, and came out with a heated 'yes baby' with how that changed. I love any author who can twist a plot like that, heat it up, just take what's known and tip it upside down. The whole schema-reinforcing to schema-refreshing... it was handled beautifuly, especially as you see it emerging through the pages, even when the characters can't.
Second: why the hell isn't this author writing anymore m/m? Damn crime, it is.
Simples. 'nuff said.
Okay, maybe not enough said.
I love how Oco made me feel like reading was such guilty a pleasure by almost getting the narrator to look over his shoulder and wink at you. I'm not keen on direct address usually, but when it came along and the narrator whispered in the reader's ear, I loved how he made me feel.
5 stars from me. There were some little gripes, but nothing worth distracting from those 5 well-deserved stars.
February 20, 2011
Wow, what a masterfully written book! It didn't take long for this story to suck me in so completely that I actually put off reading it for a couple weeks because I didn't want it to end! It has everything -- smart writing, beautiful writing, incredibly complex characters that affect change in each other, the backdrop of court life, and a real psychological look at the characters and what a master/slave relationship means and how power play affects people. Best of all, though it is subtle, the pacing of this story is incredibly methodical made the story such an effortless read that I was so so pleased. One of the best BDSM and all around books I've read. And it is free!
November 15, 2019
Not perfect, but a beautiful story.
February 4, 2012
An excellent M/M romance which I have trouble categorizing. It clearly could be set in the middle ages, while it also may be purely fantasy. Add a solid dose of BDSM, a dash of politics, and you end up with this story.
Usually, I'm not a fan of BDSM yet this is one of less than a handful of novels that I have read, where I felt the BDSM was integral to the story and to the characters. It totally suited the psychology of the character, and indeed, I could easily understand that the domination, in particular, was vital to the character's emotional well-being.
As to the story overall, this is a voyage of self discovery for the characters, one more than the other, set amidst a background of war and politics. The pacing is steady, and on the slow side, yet its slowness contributes to the novel, to draw out the confusion that the characters feel, particularly as it is written in first person POV, yet simultaneously allowing the reader to clearly understand the boggy ground that the characters find themselves on. Being a character driven novel, I feel that an increase of pace would make many of the changes and growth in the characters appear invalid. If you enjoy a novel that is fast paced and action packed, then this clearly isn't for you, but if you enjoy thoughtful well written (for the most part) novels, then this one may hit the spot.
Usually, I'm not a fan of BDSM yet this is one of less than a handful of novels that I have read, where I felt the BDSM was integral to the story and to the characters. It totally suited the psychology of the character, and indeed, I could easily understand that the domination, in particular, was vital to the character's emotional well-being.
As to the story overall, this is a voyage of self discovery for the characters, one more than the other, set amidst a background of war and politics. The pacing is steady, and on the slow side, yet its slowness contributes to the novel, to draw out the confusion that the characters feel, particularly as it is written in first person POV, yet simultaneously allowing the reader to clearly understand the boggy ground that the characters find themselves on. Being a character driven novel, I feel that an increase of pace would make many of the changes and growth in the characters appear invalid. If you enjoy a novel that is fast paced and action packed, then this clearly isn't for you, but if you enjoy thoughtful well written (for the most part) novels, then this one may hit the spot.
October 10, 2013
It's hard to imagine a book of this caliber being free so my first thought is to thank the author for making such a gem available to us. I loved this story because the author took the time to let us get to know the characters, their history, their perspective on the world they live in and on their relationship dynamic.
Sylvan is a slave, purchased by the king as a gift to his illegitimate son, Nygell. Nygell outright refuses the gift but one doesn't refuse a gift from the king so he tolerates Sylvan's presence for a few months before they begin to know each other and a mutual attraction begins to grow. Still though, Nygell very stubbornly refuses to make use of Sylvan's talents until he finally reveals his own base needs. Though he's head of the King's Army, he needs to be dominated by a sex partner and his relationship with Sylvan has grown to the point where he finally asks.
This role reversal is slow to evolve and the author builds the foundation for their relationship before jumping right into it. Ultimately, the two find balance and the HEA is much better than I had hoped for.
Highly recommend.
Sylvan is a slave, purchased by the king as a gift to his illegitimate son, Nygell. Nygell outright refuses the gift but one doesn't refuse a gift from the king so he tolerates Sylvan's presence for a few months before they begin to know each other and a mutual attraction begins to grow. Still though, Nygell very stubbornly refuses to make use of Sylvan's talents until he finally reveals his own base needs. Though he's head of the King's Army, he needs to be dominated by a sex partner and his relationship with Sylvan has grown to the point where he finally asks.
This role reversal is slow to evolve and the author builds the foundation for their relationship before jumping right into it. Ultimately, the two find balance and the HEA is much better than I had hoped for.
Highly recommend.
April 10, 2012
I cannot leave a long review--although this story certainly deserves one!! It is an amazing tale of a slave and his master--and how in reality we are, when truly in love, slaves to each other--giving of ourselves so completely until all lines between owned and owner are blurred!
This was an AMAZING story!
This was an AMAZING story!
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