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Memory: Volume 1, Lasting Impressions: A Tale Of Pride And Prejudice

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In Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice, Fitzwilliam Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet meet when their personalities are fully formed. Influenced by their experiences and the people around them, they must endure a year of transformation to find their love. What effect would the sight of their soul mates have upon Darcy and Elizabeth if it occurred at a much earlier and vulnerable moment? How would this shared memory change his advance into arrogance and pride, and her sensitivity to the opinions of others? And ultimately, what will happen when they finally meet somewhere beyond their imaginations?

The Memory series is a story of family, and how the love affair of one couple influences the lives of everyone around them. Volume 1: Lasting Impressions begins on a fateful day in Hyde Park when 15-year-old Elizabeth Bennet spies the handsome 22-year-old Fitzwilliam Darcy. Instead of wondering over his bachelor, rich, gentleman . . . all of the qualities she had been taught by her mother to seek for her husband, she saw only the sorrowful man in need. Darcy heard laughter and saw a girl and a smile. Both have much to overcome before they can be together, but one thing is certain, they would have loved each other no matter where or when they had met.

The story continues in Volume 2: Trials to Bear, and Volume 3: How Far We Have Come. These stories contain scenes of a mature nature.

514 pages, Kindle Edition

First published January 1, 2010

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Linda Wells

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Welcome to my author page; let me tell you a little about myself. I worked for years in the environmental engineering world until I traded my career as a geographer for one as a mom to a challenging and really great son. One day, I saw the 2005 production of Pride and Prejudice, and I was fascinated. I bought a copy of Jane Austen's novel and read it so many times, falling under the spell of her unforgettable characters and story, and I could not help but wonder what happened next for them. That led me in search of Jane Austen Fan Fiction.

I read many stories and then one of my own started nagging at me. So, I found an old notebook and started writing it down. Without it even being finished, I took the plunge and started posting. It was, and continues to be, a fantastic and rewarding experience to watch a story take shape while so many readers follow along. I have many ideas for new stories, and with luck and lots of imagining, they will be written too.


If you would like to email me, I would love to hear from you! [email protected]


Books by Linda Wells:

Chance Encounters

Fate and Consequences

Perfect Fit

Memory: Volume 1, Lasting Impressions

Memory: Volume 2, Trials to Bear

Memory: Volume 3, How Far We Have Come

Imperative Volumes 1 and 2

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2,911 reviews1 follower
April 19, 2018
Do you like your P&P variations with lots of drama and angst?? Then you will love this series. This is based upon the premise that Darcy & Lizzy and fated to be together. They encounter one another on the day Darcy returns from his grand tour and learns that his father is dying. He flees to Hyde Park where he sees and hears a 15 year old Lizzy Bennet, but they don't speak.

The next year he sees her at a race and a gallery but both times she is swept away in the crowd. When they finally do speak their courtship is fast and furious.

Their path to the altar is not smooth with much drama and craziness. Mrs. Bennet is a nasty shrew, Mr. Bennet a sarcastic, lax, inattentive father. Jane is jealous and bitter. On Darcy's side his married cousins are idle, philanderers who ignore their wives and gamble and whore to excess. While Anne deBourgh is insane and egged on by her mother in an attempt to keep Rosings.

What makes this book unique is that in addition to the regular prose we are also treated to journal excepts from Lizzy and Darcy to move the plot along.

As the book progresses there are more and more detailed love scenes between the Darcys. So it is for mature audiences.

Update This is a LONG book and there were things that as a seasoned reader of P&P got on my nerves. There is way more telling than showing either via dialogue or letter or inner dialogue of one of the characters. At first I justified this by saying the author isn't omniscient but then I realized that she was showing us Wickham when neither Darcy or Lizzy are near by. The book is also organized oddly where a chapter seems to cover a period of time so many things are occurring simultaneously; so POV will change frequently an one is cued merely by a short bit of Capitalization.

Because she is a mere girl of 17 this Lizzy is much more uncertain and prone to tears than the standard Lizzy. Darcy is also younger and much more 2000's emotional than 1810's stoic. The angst goes to 11 frequently but is rarely long lasting.
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1,736 reviews131 followers
April 7, 2018
“First impressions matter. Experts say we size up new people in somewhere between 30 seconds and two minutes.” –Elliott Abrams

Book 1: Lasting Impressions in the Memory trilogy.

*** May contain spoilers *** I don’t mean to; I try not to, but something might slip through.

“Whatever makes an impression on the heart seems lovely to the eye.” –Saadi

Know going in that this story is long… very long… I mean really LONG. The time line is earlier than canon and Lizzy is only 15 when she and Darcy first set eyes each other. The author teased the reader into an almost frenzy by withholding their actual meeting. They had caught glimpses of each other across the way for several years [walking in the park, at the races, art gallery… etc.], had admired and smiled at each other, yet was never able to get to the point where they were close enough to speak. It was maddening and just when they were becoming frantic... it happened and you could almost feel a collective sigh with the readership. That meeting then set ODC on course to deal with all the obstacles that family and the ton could send their way.

First Lizzy’s family:

Mrs. Bennet: she was a menace… can I say that I really don't like her. Lizzy’s relationship with her mother slowly ebbed toward nonexistent.

Mr. Bennet: indolent and lazy was mild to how this man conducted his life and handled his family. Lizzy made a conclusion that I have never seen in JAFF before and was pretty profound. She concluded that It simply broke my heart to read that. Her relationship with her father would never be the same.

The Gardiners: OMG!! These people were amazing and I just loved them. They were the parents that Lizzy and Jane never had. The best parts of the eldest Bennet sisters were because of the Gardiners… and in spite of the Bennets. That was saying a lot.

Next Darcy’s family:

Loved Georgiana: she’s very young, but so cute.

Lord and Lady Matlock… loved them… and their children… the viscount [eldest son and heir to Matlock] and his wife, second son… our dear Colonel Fitzwilliam [he was a hoot], and then Richard’s sister… loved them all.

Lady Catherine: OMG!! She was beyond the pale… conniving, controlling, b-witch to the nth degree.

Anne de Bourgh: I cannot begin to tell you… beyond the pale doesn’t even come close. I’ve never seen it played out this way. OMG! Lady C was insane to allow things to happen the way they did. Grrrrr!!! I was so shocked and upset with both of them. I don’t care if Anne was ill… that was no excuse.

Friends or so called…

Caroline was hell bent to have Darcy… however, she had to settle for what she considered the next best thing… in her mind it was still a connection to Pemberley… wonder who??? Sneaky, social climbing, diva didn’t have a brain in her head except for thoughts of how she could climb into the first circles… at ALL costs. Well, it nearly cost her… that was for sure.

Charles Bingley, although young and inexperienced, was still wet behind the ears, socially inept and in desperate need of Darcy’s help. I liked him as he tried to adjust to his new social standing… which was on pretty shaky ground. He made several serious mistakes that could have cost him dearly… socially as well as financially. His good humor made you love him and hopefully he will have his HEA in another book.

There are a lot of tertiary characters in this story that the reader simply falls in love with. I hope they are given their HEA in future books as I have grown very fond of them and want them to be happy. I figure we will still have to deal with Wickham… that bad penny always seems to bounce back and cause trouble. He was sprinkled throughout this story and I don’t expect him to go away anytime soon.

Rating: MA: mature audience: graphic descriptive sex scenes with married couple. There were several steamy scenes before marriage but no anticipating vows.

The writing was delightful… especially the love language between ODC. I caught myself smiling as we read their journal entries. Man… they were so cute. I loved that part.

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February 25, 2018
This book, just like Imperative, is a feel good book to curl up with on a rainy or snowy day and because of the length you can stay with the characters of P&P longer. Be aware that there are parts that could have been edited to decrease the length. Scenes that are not necessary and may grow tiresome for some. I like that about Wells books when I am in the mood. The other thing I like about these books is she keeps D&E together through most of her story. It does take some time for the two to come to an understanding and then separation followed due to a fire at Pemberly but by then they are engaged. Wickham becomes engaged to an unexpected person and is then exposed in time but not before swearing vengeance on Darcy. There are still unanswered outcomes that leave you waiting for volume 2. If you've read Imperative and enjoyed Wells leisurely story telling you are sure to enjoy this fun, romantic tale.
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1,291 reviews78 followers
August 18, 2023
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Reviewed in Canada on April 8, 2019
I loved this read and was spellbound from cover to cover. Very good writing style, although some sentence structure with a few too many commas is off putting. The story is wonderful, and I love how ODC discover one another at an earlier age. I welcome non-canon variations that capture my imagination and this one does. Jane was a surprise and I look forward to seeing how her character develops in the second book. There’s just a slight touch of angst to keep it all flowing, but for me as always, it’s about the love story well told. This book tells it wonderfully with outstanding dialogue. I will read book 2.

(Update January 23, 2021 - Like all of Linda Wells’ books, I’ve read this one multiple times— in 2019 and 2020, although I didn’t note the specific date in 2020, likely before I joined Goodreads. It’s one of my all-time favourite JAFF stories.)
1,150 reviews29 followers
October 11, 2020
Entertaining, but.....

I wish to give credit to the author for creative thinking and proficient writing. The story is well told, makes sense, and the editing is good.

As another reviewer said, this is a long book, REEally looong! IMHO, the length wasn't at all necessary. After a time reading, it seemed as if every minute of every day, and every long, drawn out conversation, was going to be chronicled. I started to skim over some paragraphs, and that's never a good sign. A lot of repetition of thoughts, replays of the same love scenes, descriptions of pouring drinks, descriptions of dresses and other apparel, etc. Attention to detail is, of course, sometimes important, but can also be uselessly excessive.

Then there's the extreme characters. Mr and Mrs Bennett, Lady Catherine and Anne DeBourgh, Charles and Caroline Bingley: all were exaggerated caricatures of their roles in the original P&P, and not very believable.

Now I must confess that I was turned off by our beloved Darcy and Elizabeth. The author chose to have them meet and marry at a younger age, Elizabeth being seventeen , Darcy being around 25. I don't mind sexual content in a book, not at all. The disclosure was clear up front that this book has explicit sexual content. However, there was a definite "icky factor" in Darcy's activities with Elizabeth before they married, the things that he asked her to do to him, and what he did to her, after smooth talking and a lot of persuasion. The things he did with a 17 year old innocent girl was portrayed as romantic, but was more along the lines of what Darcy always criticized Wickham about. And along the same lines, Elizabeth's agreement to these activities was more reminiscent of Lydia. Being a 17 year old, she was not more than a child, and she acted like it. She was silly, a fairly brazen flirt, and was only too anxious to impress Darcy, and he took full advantage of it. An author can do whatever they like in a variation, but if you're going to relate it to the original P&P, certain lines cannot be crossed with ODC.

I won't be reading the sequel to this book. I can pretty much guess what will be covered, and it's too bad I can't endure another lengthy story, because some of the characters are wonderful. The Fitzwilliam family, the Stewarts, the Gardiners, and some others are just begging for their resolutions.

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550 reviews4 followers
April 11, 2016
Thoroughly entertaining! I cannot fathom what the next volume will contain, since so much occurred in this one. Luckily, I bought all three at the same time so I do not have to wait. On to the next… I know I will love it!
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2,655 reviews199 followers
December 19, 2017
Having read all the reviews I will say that Linda Wells evoked very strong reactions with her book. I have only read Volume 1 in this series but do own and have read 5 other paperback books by this author and did enjoy them all. I am amused by reviewers who are dismayed that the characters have changed from the ones in Jane Austen's P&P. READERS: this is a variation! Do not expect canon here. I will say that the book was long but in it characters were developed and events explored or held us in suspense until the climax was reached. The language is not true to Regency and there are some typos. I read it over 3 days on my kindle.

Yes, Mrs. Bennet becomes an even more neglectful and verbally abusive mother in this story. And her husband is not a nice man either. Frankly, I always viewed him in a negative light in the original story: he doesn't save for dowries, he doesn't control nor does he educate his daughters to the best of his ability, he allows his wife far too much silly rudeness and improprieties and then makes fun with a raised eyebrow or a remark, which, in turn, goes over her head. And he allows the younger ones out into society far sooner than advisable. In this book he is seen as even undermining marital prospects for Elizabeth and for Jane by 1.) bringing his wife to London, when asked not to do so and 2.) allowing her to push away a prospect suitor for Jane with her remarks and 3.) adding further disdain by his own behaviors and remarks and 4.) by testing Darcy's commitment in saying that Jane must marry first.

Jane is such an angel in Jane Austen's book - do we believe she is real? I, personally, have met only one such angel in my lifetime and I am a grandmother. So for Ms. Wells to make her into a more flawed and realistic human being is allowed for this reader. One can believe that Mrs. Bennet would say exactly what is explained in this book, "Jane, you are so beautiful, just smile and you will rescue the family by marrying well to save us when Mr. B. dies and we are thrown out of Longbourn." Jane then adds to the problem by thoughtlessly relating to all that the Bennet girls are penniless, etc. She has a rude awakening when she sees that men are attracted to Elizabeth, whom she has heard her mother describe as not at all attractive and as scaring men off with showing that she has any intelligence. Friction between sisters results and, to Jane's surprise, her suitor is not happy with a smiling, silent, (no conversation) beautiful woman. This part of the story is seen from both points of view and has some real consequence.

The Gardiners bring Lizzy and Jane to London so they have a chance to meet suitors and then along with Lord and Lady Matlock & their two daughters play important roles in helping Elizabeth adjust to society and her duties in becoming Mrs. Darcy. Linda Wells has added the stories of the Lord and Lady Matlock's offspring and their experiences in the marriage mart. Part of what makes this book interesting is that the author fleshes out other couples' stories, marriages of convenience, deaths of spouses, infidelities, etc.

Yes, there is sex described in detail in this book. Frankly, I can take or leave such. It is not necessary to the story for me. On the other hand it does portray this couple as having very passionate personalities and as being willing to be open to each other's needs/wants in the bedroom. Both seem to need a lot of reassurance in this book. Reasons for such are explored so these scenes can be interpreted as a result of those needs.

The scenes with Lady Catherine and Anne are disturbing, especially when Lady C. sets the stage for Anne to be "compromised" by Darcy in the hopes that he will be forced to then marry her. Talk of committing Anne to Bedlam, etc. add complications for the family, not just Darcy. And then there is the fire at Pemberley and Wickham...and Caroline Bingley.

So this story is not just a straight forward romance of our favorite couple...there is a lot going on. Now - on to the second Volume.
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997 reviews337 followers
August 18, 2013
TYPE OF AUSTENESQUE NOVEL: Alternate Path, Mature Audience

TIME FRAME: A couple months before the death of Mr. Darcy (senior) – 1807. Several years before the beginning of Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice.

MAIN CHARACTERS: Elizabeth Bennet, Mr. Darcy, Jane Bennet, Charles Bingley, Mr. and Mrs. Gardiner, Lord and Lady Matlock, Colonel Fitzwilliam, Viscount Layton, Mr. Harwick, Mr. Stewart, Georgiana Darcy, Lady Catherine de Bourgh, Anne de Bourgh, Caroline Bingley, George Wickham

SNYOPSIS: Over the course of two years Darcy and Elizabeth keep catching small glimpses of each other around London. They exchange looks and smiles, but never seem to be able to talk. In these two years, both experience a lot of sadness, heartache, and stress. During such dark times, they live off of the precious memories of each other and hopeful dreams of meeting again. Will the reality live up to their dreams? What stands in their way of happiness?

WHAT I LOVED:
- Sweet and Sentimental: I adored the premise of Darcy and Elizabeth knowing just tiny little crumbs and scraps of information about each other, yet falling deeply in love. I loved how they kept private journals that held all their romantic notions and secret longings. And I loved how they both tried to learn about each other from other sources! Such adorable romantics!

- The Relationships: There are soooo many heart-warming and inspiring relationships in this novel! Some of my favorites include: Elizabeth's relationship with Mrs. Gardiner, Darcy's relationship with his father and Lord Matlock, and Darcy's relationships with his friends and cousins. Such excellent examples of friendship, guidance, and love!

- The Original Characters: Some charming possible suitors for Elizabeth and Jane, a couple reprobate Fitzwilliam cousins, and the wives who put up with them – I greatly enjoyed meeting these well-drawn, engaging, and entertaining characters! I hope we see more of the Stewarts, Harwicks, Laytons, and Singletons in Volume Two and Three!

- Jane and Bingley: Linda Wells daringly chose to portray Jane Bennet as having some more flaws! At first, I wasn't too fond of seeing Jane display some jealousy and vanity, I thought it was out-of-character. But then I realized that no one is perfect, not even serene and beautiful Jane Bennet! I enjoyed seeing Jane go through a little struggle and character development. As to Mr. Bingley – he was just too cute! I loved seeing the beginning of his relationship with Darcy, how he referred to Darcy as his “advisor,” and how he earnestly attempted to play matchmaker between Darcy and Elizabeth. <3

- A Saga of Epic Proportions!: It's a 500 page volume! With two more installments! I must admit, I was worried I'd find the story's pacing too slow or the prose too wordy. Nope! Negative on both accounts! It is a very eventful story and instead of summarizing what happens each day, Linda Wells allows her readers to witness it all. I liked being privy to all of Darcy and Elizabeth' encounters and found myself very satisfied with the leisurely pace of this novel.

WHAT I WASN'T TOO FOND OF:
- The Loathsome Mrs. Bennet: As always Mrs. Bennet is vulgar and full of histrionics and gossip. In this novel these traits are accentuated and coupled with verbal abuse and neglect. I couldn't find anything to like in this version of Mrs. Bennet. I know she is a silly character and we are supposed to find her exasperating, but I hope she receives a positive trait or some reform later on in this series like Mr. Bennet did in Volume One.

WARNING:
Some intimate and romantic scenes

CONCLUSION:
So far, I find this series to be “excessively diverting!” I took great pleasure exploring this inventive premise and spending some quality time with these charming characters! I wonder what kind of adventures and excitement await in Volume Two: Trials to Bear!
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297 reviews96 followers
November 6, 2012
This is the first in a trilogy that explores another way for Darcy and Elizabeth to meet; they first spot each other in a park in London when she is just 15 and he is 22. He is at a bad time in his life, having just found out that his father is dying and he is struggling with the thought of all he is going to have to take on, the estate, guardianship of Georgiana etc. Elizabeth is at a susceptible point too, having been told constantly by her mother that she is nothing to Jane, ugly and so on. So they both dwell on their brief encounter and see each other again the next year when she next visits the Gardiners. The third year they finally actually meet and this volume details their courtship.

It was interesting to explore how different they could have been at an earlier age, less sure of themselves etc, and some of the differences in their characters from P&P you could attribute to them being younger, however, I felt the characters aren't the same as P&P. Lizzy has no problem in lecturing her father and mother which I felt was out of character. The biggest difference was Jane - I can't see this Jane ever turning into P&P Jane. I would describe Jane as a 'nice' character, it's her defining quality. This Jane is petty and jealous. And Mr Bennet is too selfish and eccentric. Mrs Bennet was very harshly drawn too. Although Lizzy was her least favourite child I never got the impression in P&P that Mrs Bennet didn't love her children - her obsession with marrying them off was her way of assuring their future safety, and she did more for her children than their father did. This Mrs Bennet doesn't give two toots about her children with the exception of Jane and Lydia and she is actively hostile towards Lizzy.

The other quibble I had was the way people spoke to each other - everybody is very open, there are no secrets between people, I am sure people were more reserved than that. There is a lot of physical affection between Darcy and Elizabeth in this, which I don't have a problem with per se, it's just the fact that it was in public which made it seem odd.

This book could do with having some errors corrected, such as the wrong versions of words used (e.g. Here here instead of Hear, hear, naval/navel, principal/principle, Lady C is referred to as Lady De Bourgh, not sure that was right and there were some Americanisms - pled instead of pleaded, 'go talk to..' rather than go AND talk to, a half-hour rather than half an hour etc.

Having said all that, I still enjoyed it, and I've already got part two to read. If you are a purist, and want something that you can believe was written by Austen this isn't the book for you though!
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103 reviews23 followers
August 25, 2019
I simply love this book! Throughout the years, this has become a favorite, like a old friend you visit after a long week. It is simply so sweet, the story rolling over the pages with an ease that never fails to get me hooked.

I loved younger Darcy and Elizabeth. I loved how their encounters through the years changed them and gave them hope. Even with all the disparities on circumstances when compared to Canon, this book brings an image that is not hard to imagine or even conciliating with ODC.

New and old characters are redrawn and brought to a new light. Bingley's friendship with Elizabeth is always particularly endearing to me for some reason (mainly as it develops on the next books). Jane is not the passive, smiling creature that can so easily fall into the "bland" category. She grows, learns, and her outcome is something entirely from Canon - but that felt oh-so-right.

I am particularly found of this installment, though, as we see a very tentative, genuine and so strong love blossom between a struggling younger Darcy, overwhelmed with his responsibilities, and a not so self-assured Elizabeth, that struggles with the knowledge of her families fallings and how little she had to offer in the eyes of society.

Their relationship in this variation is one of the most beautiful versions I've read, and one I doesn't seem to tire of reread.
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Author 23 books157 followers
January 26, 2018
Loved this long read novel.
Meeting in Hyde Park in 1807 as Darcy has just learned that his father is dying. They don't speak but overhear each other's name and leave an unforgettable impression in their hearts. They happen upon each other a couple more times but doesn't come close enough to speak before 2 years later. Mr Bingley is very helpful in that matter.
They enter into a courtship and later get engaged. Much to the dismay of Lady C and Anne who start their scheme into action and they are vile... The Matlocks and the Gardiners are helpful but The Bennets are not, including Jane. Caroline and Wickham has smaller parts in this novel but they do appear. We also meet some new friends and family that are not in Canon but important for this novel.
ODC are a bit younger in this novel which make them a bit less set in their ways, helping them in understanding each other better.

This is a sweet, romantic, passionate and exciting novel that is really hard to put down. I started this last night and I am severely lacking in sleep today...
I also think that you get a lot for the money her since this a nice long read compared to a lot of the other novels at the same price.
Luckily it's 2 more books in this series so I know what start on next...

Heartily recommend this book!
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244 reviews70 followers
April 19, 2021
It is a truth universally acknowledged in JAFF that Mr Darcy and Miss Elizabeth Bennet will always, inevitably find one another and have their happily ever after.
"And isn't it just so pretty to think all along there was some Invisible String tying you to me?" -Taylor Swift

A thread of gold seems to tie them together, and in 'Memory' this seems to be the main theme.
'Memory' is one of the first JAFFs I read and that birthed my JAFF addiction.
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Although I've read several JAFFs since, a lot of them superior in writing and plot, this never fails to disappoint, entertain, and tug at my heart strings. I highly recommend.

It is long for JAFF standards but what makes it such a lovely and delightful work is Ms Wells romantic premiss of Mr Darcy and Lizzy having many close encounters since she was 15 and he 22 where they admire each other from afar but aren't able to be introduced, much like 'Sleepless in Seattle'.
It takes two years for them to finally actually speak to each other, and from there its is a whirlwind romance.
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This work has much to recommend itself; extensive dialogue between ODC, many characters, and continuously entertaining. I will admit it is not so well structured as other works, and since Lizzy and Darcy are younger than in P&P they are, perhaps forgivably, more enamored and immature at times, specifically Lizzy. I consider myself a relatively fastidious and hard to please critic in terms of JAFFs (so many reviewers just give out 5 star ratings left and right with the gusto of a food court sample tray) and I am nevertheless charmed.

Synopsis:
Lizzy is an insecure girl, having been put down by her mother all her life and still coming into her form but forced to be out at 15. She is in Hyde park on a walk with Jane laughing and talking about missing the country side and only liking London for its bookstores and theatre. Darcy sitting near by is enchanted by her laughter, agrees with her opinions and is entranced.
“But the best part of today was when I received my first attention from a man. He was very tall, and so handsome...I should like to make him laugh, maybe someday I will. I will never forget his smile. It was all for me.

Elizabeth put down her pen and reading over her entry, giggled. “He did smile just for me! Men always smile at Jane, she is so beautiful, how can they not? But this man is the first one to look only at me!” She sighed happily. “Thank you, Fitzwilliam!”

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Darcy had just returned from his tour and received the heavy blow of news that his father will soon pass. He went to Hyde park to gather himself.
“I saw nothing of the beauty, and felt only the fear that I would fail. And then I heard a sound that broke through my pain. A laugh, so warm, so musical, it lifted my eyes from my boots and I saw before me a girl, smiling and laughing, and looking at me. Her name is Lizzy.”

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Over the next two years they will catch glances and snippets of conversations of the other
“We have not ever met, sir. We have never spoken. We seem to be dwelling on the memories of each other equally, though.”


Lizzy endures a blow to her confidence when she is courted by Mr Daniel Stewart who is a second son of a Lord and looking forward to an ambitious career in law. He is smitten with Lizzy and would have even overlooked her lack of fortune but is scarred away by the silly Bennets and Lizzy although her heart wasn't touched, liked him and respected him more as a friend enough to feel the sting of his departure. She feels it mostly as a reinforcement that Mr Darcy if he knew her could never offer for her.
“Lizzy? Lizzy of the park, Lizzy of the races, Lizzy of the museum, Lizzy of Stewart? That Lizzy?”

Darcy feels the old drum of duty, he has enough information to find Lizzy and even has an opportunity to chase after her but decides to suppress his emotions.
“Far off in the distance he could see a small young woman..his pace picked up. He instinctively knew it was Lizzy…He stopped and watched the women disappear. His voice caught and he felt his heart clench, but still he murmured. “Goodbye, Lizzy.”

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However when Lizzy and Darcy do meet never again will they be kept apart, although Lizzy is constantly insecure about the little she could bring to him
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Jane never has gotten a courtship and Lizzy has had two, she deals with some jealousy when Lizzy manages to engage Mr Darcy.
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I liked that Jane is a realistic character who doesn't go totally batshit evil like some variances do, she is just struggling through her first pangs of self doubt
“Beauty seems to win dances but money wins suitors.”

An interesting side plot involves Jane being courted by a wealthy and kind young widower Mr Harwick who loved his wife but needs a mother for his young daughters and an heir, but her jealously and mean spirit towards her sister put it in serious jeopardy.


What I enjoyed:
♡The slow unraveling of the tale, setting like molasses.

♡Bingley and Darcy friendship origins being due to Darcy wanting to impress Lizzy! Also Lizzy is first brought to Bingley's attention as his latest angel he talks to with Darcy, and he helps Darcy realize Lizzy is what he wants! Go Bingley!

♡The making of the Darcy mask, origins explained!

♡Lizzy coming out to marriage mart reaction and insecurity for the beauty standards of her day and realizing that beauty comes in different forms, a beautiful message to women
“You have the perfect figure for a man, Miss Elizabeth.” She ran her hands down her flat stomach and over her hips. “A man likes curves.” She tugged again at the neckline. “And such plump breasts. You will have every eye on you.”

Elizabeth was blushing furiously. “I think that you must be mistaken, I have a very unfortunate figure. All of the magazines …”

“The magazines prefer a figure like Miss Bennet’s.” She turned to her. “Tall, willowy, fabric drapes well without fuss. Men like this.You have the figure that appeals to a certain man, a passionate man.” She nodded and stood back. “Yes, I will enjoy dressing you.”

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♡The Gardiner and the Fitzwilliam clan, they are expanded on and developed and you will enjoy them very much! Colonel Fitzwilliam is particular is utterly charming, per usual.

The laughing song William Blake, so Lizzy! Cheery, vibrant, and silly!

♡ Lady Audrey, the sister of Colonel Fitz and wife of Mr. Singleton, and their marriage and growth. They were very welcoming to Lizzy and acted as chaperones.

♡Lizzy while marred by insecurity form being younger and having been slighted by men of consequence before and her mother all her life still manages to be lighthearted, witty and charming in her dialogue.

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Conclusion:
This is my second read and I'm still as enchanted!
It's immersive, dialogue heavy, witty and romantic. Although Darcy and Lizzy treat each other with much adoration, they both face some obstacles from others but they do so as a united front, to me that is the most bearable form of angst as I hate when they are separated.

I have stated it before and I shall again, I adore MsLinda Wells! All her works never fail to entertain me greatly, but this work is tied with Fate and Consequences: A Tale of Pride and Prejudice as my favorite of hers and two of my favorite of all JAFFs.
She also wrote Chance Encounters and Imperative: A Tale of Pride and Prejudice, Volume 2 which while enjoyable are not as charming in my opinion. Regardless I encourage you to check all her work out, she is a goddess of JAFF and champion of long dialogue reads.
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I will note that there are some mature scenes, if thats not your jam, though vows are never anticipated in any of her works, which I tip my hat to.
80 reviews4 followers
February 5, 2020
I just really couldn’t get into this one. It felt overly wordy and the cat and mouse chase between Elizabeth and Darcy seemed to drag on as opposed to captivating my interest. Elizabeth did not come across as having her usual wit.
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1,172 reviews12 followers
August 30, 2023
A wonderful love story

They belonged together from the first time they saw each other. An enjoyable journey and a great beginning for a marvelous romance.
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1,416 reviews
March 9, 2019
First book of 3

First third of the story. Darcy and Lizzy fall in love and marry. Who is not happy with them? The ton. Wickham. Lady Catherine. Mr. Bennet. Mrs. Bennet. Jane, sometimes.

Some of them are defeated, some remain. Great story, well written.

I recommend this book.
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271 reviews10 followers
July 2, 2021
Serious series

This is my second (or perhaps third) time reading through this series. I enjoy it... I don’t believe I’ve ever seen the ripple effect described in this series- how one loving relationship can change the lives of so many. And yet, the book gives all of us hopeless romantics a lovely tale to fall into when we need our faith in humanity restored. Especially now, in 2019, when cruelty toward so many seems so popular. Wells portrayal of Darcy as the strong, moral, courageous, vulnerable and lovable, wealthy man of integrity and compassion seems to be so out of place in our world today, when corruption, bitterness, selfishness, cruelty and narcissism are valued by so many.
This story is a balm for my world-weary broken heart.
180 reviews2 followers
February 1, 2018
The love between Darcy and Elizabeth in this Price and Prejudice variation is intense, beautifully sweet, and pure joy. They really do seem like they're battling the world but doing it together. A wonderful book!
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September 21, 2024
Review for all three volumes of the Memory trilogy.

Premise: Darcy and Elizabeth spot each other in Hyde park years before canon and feel an instant connection. They have several almost encounters over two years, until they finally meet. About as close and you can get to a fated mate/soulmate trope without venturing into paranormal territory. ODC stay strong and true for each other while family and friends cause a LOT of drama.

What I liked: Darcy and Elizabeth's bond never wavers despite the soap-opera levels of external drama. This is a looooong trilogy and can get repetitive, but I found it comforting and warm.

Characterization: Because they met earlier, Darcy is less selfish and snobbish while Elizabeth is less quick to judge. Jane starts out as a bad Jane, but she gets better. Mrs Bennet is more narcissistic and histrionic and Mr Bennet is more of a smug dick (though he tries to get better). Lady Catherine and Anne de Bourgh are way more over the top. Wickham is more evil and violent.

Smut level: Very high. Many passionate kisses and handsy stuff prior to marriage, lots of frequent and varied marital sex. Mostly euphemistic language for bits, though.

Any non-canon parings: Lots.

Issues: It's long. over 700,000 words. The first volume covers about two years, and the next two about a year each. But I enjoyed spending time in this world.
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876 reviews26 followers
August 8, 2025
4.75⭐️

I absolutely loved this book. Anyone who has read my thoughts on the amount of time unsatisfactorily spent describing the courtship between E & D will be glad to know that I have no such complaints with this book. While the first 100 pages or so of this book are dedicated to the two MC's pining for the other without even having met, the rest of the story is dedicated to their loving each other. I loved how much in love E & D are and while they are quickly engaged it is not all roses for them. There are a few who put a damper on their spirits. I also appreciated that we have younger than canon E & D so they are both a little unsure of themselves and they both reassure each other of their constancy to each other. This is a beautifully written book and I am also slightly invested in how the side characters fare in the story and how they will fare in the books that come after this one.
25 reviews
July 6, 2017
YESSSS! Finally an author who has broken the mold.

I've not even finished the book but am rating it 10 stars. Linda Wells has written a story about people, not parroted other Jane Austen authors. If you are looking for conversations with innuendo and suffocating mannerisms, you won't find them here. If you are looking for paragraphs and pages of angst, you won't find them here. If you are looking for the same ol' same ol' cast of characters, you won't find them here. The story is true to the Darcy and Elizabeth characters but the circumstances and family surrounding them are a wonderful read. I will be purchasing more of Linda Wells.
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55 reviews2 followers
October 8, 2021
This book is sugary sweet, so keep that in mind. I was in the mood for something romantic and sweet, so some of the excessive parts didn't bother me. My favorite part was how much Darcy and Elizabeth stuck together. They worked through misunderstandings without letting them get out of hand. I hate when simple things get blown out of proportion. There was angst and drama, but through it they turned to each other for strength. I found that a nice change from situations causing unnecessary drama that could have ben cleared up with a simple conversation. Oh, and it's very long, but it kept me interested. Also some nice erotica, but I know not everyone likes that in their JAFF.
1,390 reviews4 followers
May 12, 2023
Adventure loving emotional

What an amazing adventure of finding true love. The emotional connection between Darcy and Elizabeth is incredibly written. The emotional anguish throughout the book, but the beginning will have tears in your eyes. The drama will have you turning the page to get more. Do not fear there is humour written within this adventure. There are some hot scenes in the story, but is highly recommended to read! Bravo and well written
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52 reviews
November 7, 2024
True rating: 3.5. I read this after Chance Encounters. Comparatively, Memory Pt 1 is written much better than Chance Encounters and does not have the awkward dialogue that I noted in the other novel. This was another delightful read where Darcy gets to fall madly in love with Lizzy before ever meeting her embarrassing family. It is very sweet but it did not amuse me as much as Chance Encounters so it gets a slightly lower rating.
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1,356 reviews14 followers
June 15, 2020
It was a sloooow start, but once Elizabeth & Darcy met in person and started talking, it picked up and got much better.

Luckily had enough in Amazon credits that I purchased this for free. Probably wouldn't have bothered if I didn't have those credits. Still had some left over so I purchased the 2nd book as well. We'll see how it goes.
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59 reviews4 followers
August 3, 2025
I can see some weaknesses, the repetitions of character business, the smattering of proofreading errors, the occasional lapse in Regency custom. But I still got swept away by my interest and sympathy for the very human characters and their lovely interactions. I expect I will be re-reading this.
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October 18, 2022
Darcy and Lizzy see each other in Hyde Park when Lizzy is just 15 and Darcy's father learns he is dying. They circle each other until finally meeting years later. First in a series.
6 reviews
January 1, 2023
I REALLY don't like Mr. Bennet's character. Other than that, this was a good P&P variation.
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December 16, 2022
In this Pride and Prejudice variation, Darcy has returned from his Grand Tour to discover his father is dying. Out for a walk he spys a happy Elizabeth Bennet with her sister Jane who are staying with the Gardiners. Over the next few years they see each other until finally they meet when Elizabeth is 17. How will this impact the other three daughters. But what of Jane's marriage prospects.
Again a useless Mr Bennet and a quite vulgar Mrs Bennet.
An entertaining story
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June 8, 2011


Linda Wells along with Abigail Reynolds have become one of my favorite Pride and Prejudice fanfic authors. Mostly because she usually has Darcy and Elizabeth getting there groove on, and I also love how I can totally buy into how she makes it so believable that Darcy and Elizabeth are fated and no one else can do for the other.
In MEMORY, VOLUME 1, Darcy first spies the fifteen-year old Elizabeth in Hyde Park when Elizabeth and Jane are in town visiting the Gardiners. Darcy has just returned from his Grand Tour and has learned that his father is dying and he’ll be inheriting the responsibility to his family and family fortune. As he is sitting in Hyde Park overwhelmed by the news he hears the enchanting laughter of Elizabeth (who he assumes is older because she is “out”). Their eyes catch and they smile at each other, but are not introduced. For the next two years they spy each other at various places throughout town, but are never able to meet, just overhear each other’s conversations. Between each spying of each other, they each live with the memory of their previous encounter to get them through.


This is different from other stories. Because they meet at such a different time, Darcy hasn’t had the chance to become the man so full of pride that we see in the original and Elizabeth hasn’t quite developed the self-confidence and umm . . . opinioned nature that she had.

Because of a previous suitor, Elizabeth learns at an earlier age how the disreputable behavior of her family is ruining her and Jane’s prospects for marriage, so she doesn’t have that naiveté that I found a little annoying in Pride and Prejudice. I mean if I in my time can tell that your mother, father, and sisters are annoying, you must have had seen how their public behavior is a serious detriment to your marriage prospects?

I also like the fact that she spends so much time escaping to the Gardiners to get away from her family.

Jane was an interesting character. She was written totally different than in most adaptations. All of her life, Jane has been told how beautiful she was. That all she had to do was be beautiful and smile to capture a man and save their family from ruin. So she doesn’t understand how Darcy and other men look immediately to Elizabeth and overlook her. She becomes jealous and does a lot of passive aggressive crap to try to ruin Jane and even her own happiness because she expects that because of her looks she doesn’t have to work for it. Although it was hard for me to read about Jane in in this manner, and at first I didn’t like what the author was doing to this beloved character, I thought it was plausible that Jane is always instantly deluged with men wanting to dance with her and talk to her at balls but never come calling the next day because all she does is smile and never really put herself out there to reveal interest or deep opinions about anything. I liked that at the end, she realized that she had a lot of growing up to do.

Mr. and Mrs. Bennet were also a departure, but to me this was a stretch. We know that Elizabeth was her least favorite daughter, but totally disregard Elizabeth like Mrs. Bennet does, was a little off putting to me. Mr. Bennet, while not taking things seriously, I found it hard to believe that he would try to block and sabatoge Elizabeth’s happiness. This is not the first book of Mrs. Wells that I read that she has done this and I wonder if the author just does not like Mr. Bennett as a character. If she continues to write Pride and Prejudice fan fiction I hope she doesn’t use the same road she’s used for Mr. Bennet in the past and give them a little more depth or make them a little more true to life as they were in the original. The way Mr. and Mrs. Bennet were written was pushing it a little to far for me, but that didn’t subtract to my enjoyment of the story.

I enjoyed the dynamics of the Fitzwilliam family. They were very fleshed out and likeable despite the fact that I found it hard to believe that they would be as accepting of Darcy making a match with a penniless Elizabeth.

The rest of the cast is there, Mr. Wickham, Mr. Bingley, Miss Bingley, and Mrs. Hurst as well as some interesting new additions. There were some cheesy scenes with Darcy and Elizabeth’s journals and how after they are married how they share them that I found myself rolling my eyes, but overall I would highly recommend this volume.

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