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May 17, 2025
LitLinks
by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig
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May 11, 2025
Drafting
I think drafting is one of those processes we have to make our own, often through trial and error. There are a few of those when you’re a writer: whether to outline or not, how to develop characters, and whether you edit afterward or as you go. There are never any right or wrong answers, only what works best for you.
I had a writer reach out to me, asking what my drafting process is. I think sometimes we want to just get a little validation that our approach is a good one. This writer asked how many drafts I usually have before I declare my project done.
That answer has changed through the years as my process has become more cemented. When I was starting out in the early 2000s, I would change a completed manuscript numerous times, trying to get it the way I wanted it. This led, eventually, to knowing what I wanted from a manuscript before I started.
For me anyway, stumbling through multiple drafts helped me work out some plot details before starting the book. This led to mini-outlines, which helped me determine what I was going to write the next day.
This led to my developing a full outline at the start of the project. Which led to fewer drafts altogether.
So now, I basically go through three drafts with 3 total passes through the whole book. The first draft is me getting it all down on paper from start to finish. The second draft is often where I have to add in non-mystery-related elements (often descriptions of people and settings). The third draft is where I fix mechanical and consistency issues and add chapter breaks.
After that, the manuscript goes to my editor and beta readers. There will be more changes to the manuscript after that, of course. Then I’m done.
But I’m interested in hearing what your process is and how it’s been honed through the years. What does your drafting look like?
Every writer's drafting process is unique. From countless revisions to a streamlined three-draft system, discover how one author's approach evolved over time::
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May 10, 2025
LitLinks
by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig
LitLinks are fed into the Writer’s Knowledge Base search engine (developed by writer and software engineer Mike Fleming) which has over 70,000 free articles on writing related topics. It’s the search engine for writers. While you’re there, check out the Writer’s Digest award-winning Hiveword novel organizer.
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May 4, 2025
You Can’t Judge a Book by Its Cover, But it Does Give You a Peek Inside
by Mike Martin, @mike54martin
With the publication of Friends are Forever there are now 16 books in the Sgt. Windflower Mystery series. I know that sounds like a lot, but the series started in 2012. The old writer’s joke is: How do you get to be an older, established writer? Keep writing and don’t die!
That means we have had to come up with 16 somewhat different covers that all fit within the general theme of what might be a Sgt. Windflower Mystery. And while you certainly can’t judge a book by its cover, it should give the reader a hint of what’s inside. Over that time we’ve done many different things. But everything we hope, has led readers back to Grand Bank and to that most beautiful corner of Canada. This has included ice bergs and boats and fishing stages and sheds. And lighthouses, of course. But the most touching covers, I believe have come from pictures. Particularly ones that we and our family have taken while visiting Newfoundland.
We are fortunate indeed to be able to visit Newfoundland every year for most of the month of August. That means we get to enjoy the people and the scenery that make this place so special. And of course, we get to eat. A lot. Homemade raisin bread toast almost every morning. Fish every meal we can. Jiggs Dinner at the wonderful Garnish Bakeapple Festival. Cheesecake of all types, including Sgt. Windflower’s favourite chocolate peanut butter at Sharon’s Nook and Tea Room aka the Mug-Up.
To try and compensate for this orgy of eating we walk when we are in Newfoundland. A lot. We do hikes in Gros Morne National Park, to the shipwreck site in St. Lawrence and up to the top of the hill at Cook’s Lookout in Burin. Of course, we do tons of walking in Grand Bank. On the hiking trail up to the lookout and up to the Cape on every fine day. But some of the best walks are after supper when we and the dog try and stroll off some of the extra calories that we’ve consumed during the day.
It is also a calm and peaceful way to end another glorious day in Grand Bank. That is exactly what we were trying to show you in the cover for Friends are Forever. Looking out over the Atlantic Ocean as the sun slides away into the horizon. Wouldn’t you like to be there? You may not be able to get there right away but you can get a taste of what it might be like by reading the book.
A great cover should invite you in and in the case of a series welcome you to take a peek inside. So come in, sit down. You’re among friends again. We’re happy to see you.
Mike Martin is the author of the Award-Winning Sgt. Windflower Mystery series. The latest book is Friends are Forever. Available from Amazon and where all fine books are sold.
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May 3, 2025
LitLinks
by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig
LitLinks are fed into the Writer’s Knowledge Base search engine (developed by writer and software engineer Mike Fleming) which has over 70,000 free articles on writing related topics. It’s the search engine for writers. While you’re there, check out the Writer’s Digest award-winning Hiveword novel organizer.
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April 27, 2025
Why I Decided to Include COVID-19 in My Cozy Mysteries
By Joanna Campbell Slan, @joannaslan
Writing Through the Pandemic:
Why I Decided to Include COVID-19 in My Cozy Mysteries
By Joanna Campbell Slan
When I began writing Mask or Raid: Book #17 in the Kiki Lowenstein Mystery Series, I faced a dilemma that many authors have grappled with since 2020: should I acknowledge the pandemic that had dramatically reshaped our world, or should I create an alternate reality where COVID-19 never happened? This wasn’t just a practical question about setting and timeline—it was a deeper consideration about the responsibility of fiction to reflect, process, and preserve our shared experiences.
A Personal Connection
My decision crystallized when my grandson was born in 2021, during the height of the pandemic. Looking at this new life entering such a changed world, I wondered: How will I ever explain to him what this extraordinary time was like? The fears we faced, the misinformation that spread almost as quickly as the virus itself, the political divisions that emerged, and the everyday heroism of ordinary people? I realized then that my writing could serve as a time capsule—not just for my grandson, but for all future readers who might wonder what living through this period was really like.
Why Cozy Mysteries Are the Perfect Vehicle
Cozy mysteries might seem like an unlikely genre for addressing a global pandemic, but I’ve come to believe they’re uniquely suited for the task. These stories are fundamentally grounded in the quotidian details of everyday life—the very things that changed so dramatically during COVID. The canceled book club meetings, the makeshift home offices, the shortage of toilet paper (why? I still don’t know!), the sourdough starters, the neighborhood walks that became lifelines—these small details became the texture of our pandemic experience.
In cozies, these everyday elements often become clues or important plot points. By incorporating pandemic realities into my mystery, I could document this extraordinary moment while still delivering the comfort and escape that cozy readers seek.
Showing Multiple Perspectives Without Judgment
One aspect of writing Mask or Raid that I found particularly rewarding was the opportunity to present multiple perspectives on the pandemic without passing judgment. Cozy mysteries typically feature tight-knit communities with diverse personalities, making them perfect for exploring how different people responded to the crisis.
Through my characters, I could show the cautious neighbor who hadn’t left home in months, the small business owner desperately trying to stay afloat, the conspiracy theorist, the exhausted healthcare worker, and the pragmatist just trying to follow the changing guidelines. Rather than presenting one perspective as “correct,” I tried to humanize each response, showing the fears and reasoning behind different reactions.
As one reader noted in their review: “Absolutely loved the way the book related things that were going on at the time without judgment. I think we all took sides of true or false, and still aren’t really sure which is which.”
Historical Context in Real Time
Fiction has always played a role in helping us process historical events. When future generations look back at the COVID-19 pandemic, they’ll have news reports and statistics—but fiction written during this time will give them something equally valuable: the emotional truth of the experience.
By incorporating the pandemic into my cozy mystery, I’m participating in a literary tradition as old as storytelling itself. From Daniel Defoe’s Journal of the Plague Year to Albert Camus’ The Plague, writers have always used fiction to make sense of widespread disease and social upheaval.
Advice for Writers Facing Similar Decisions
For writers still debating whether to include COVID-19 in their work, I’d suggest considering these questions:
Does acknowledging the pandemic serve your story, or would it create unnecessary complications?Can you incorporate pandemic elements without allowing them to overwhelm your narrative?How might your genre’s conventions help you address the pandemic in unique ways?Whatever you decide, remember that there’s no single “right” approach. Some readers seek escape from current realities in their fiction, while others appreciate seeing their experiences reflected and validated.
Conclusion
In the end, my decision to include COVID-19 in my cozy mysteries wasn’t just about historical accuracy—it was about connection. Connection between generations, connection between diverse perspectives, and connection between readers seeking to make sense of an unprecedented time.
As another reviewer wrote: “Having lived through the Covid 19 pandemic, this is a realistic view of the troubling and divergent stances taken by the general populace… Covid has permanently changed our world as we knew it.”
Through fiction, we can explore those changes together, finding meaning and even comfort in our shared experience of extraordinary times.
About the author—
Joanna Campbell Slan is a New York Times, USA Today, and Amazon bestselling author who has penned nearly 80 books. Specializing in women’s fiction and cozy (traditional) mysteries, her work celebrates female friendships, fur babies, families, and amateur sleuths. Joanna strives to create a better world, one story at a time, by including social issues in her work. Contact her at [email protected] or learn more at linktr.ee/jcslan.
Fiction serves as a time capsule. Through cozy mysteries, @JoannaSlan documents our pandemic experience for future generations. Read why she included COVID-19 in her Kiki Lowenstein series. #CozyMystery #WritingThePandemic
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April 26, 2025
LitLinks
by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig
LitLinks are fed into the Writer’s Knowledge Base search engine (developed by writer and software engineer Mike Fleming) which has over 70,000 free articles on writing related topics. It’s the search engine for writers. While you’re there, check out the Writer’s Digest award-winning Hiveword novel organizer.
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April 20, 2025
Making Writing Subplots Easier
by Elizabeth S. Craig
As a reader, I’ve always enjoyed a good subplot. Sometimes, it’s what’s kept me reading a book. I’ll want to see what happens in the B-story, even after I’ve lost interest in the A-story.
As a writer, I’ve tried different ways of writing subplots. One of the most important things, I think, is to have some sort of resolution to them. This is especially important if you’re writing a series where the main plot doesn’t wrap up at the end of the book. Something needs to resolve. But it can be tricky to keep track of subplots in the weeds of the A-story.
This tip works extremely well with an outline, but it should work just as well with any pantsers out there. First, write the subplot out, almost like a short story with different scenes. You don’t have to fully flesh these out . . . just give yourself enough so you know where you’re going with it. Then, insert the scenes as transitions in your story, after scenes of your A-story end. This is especially handy when you’re wanting to change the tone after a scene in the main plot.
With an outline, break the subplot story into bits and put them into transition spaces in your story.
I’ve found this approach helps me be more thoughtful about subplots, develop them more, and not lose track of where I am in getting them wrapped up.
How do you manage subplots? What kinds of subplots do you enjoy best?
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April 19, 2025
LitLinks
by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig
LitLinks are fed into the Writer’s Knowledge Base search engine (developed by writer and software engineer Mike Fleming) which has over 70,000 free articles on writing related topics. It’s the search engine for writers. While you’re there, check out the Writer’s Digest award-winning Hiveword novel organizer.
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April 13, 2025
Readers Should Know What to Expect From Your Story
by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig
I’ve both read a book and watched a movie recently that had bad reviews because the audience thought they were going to read/watch one thing and were delivered something very different.
This can probably be carried off if you have a rewarding twist of some kind. Gone Girl, which starts out as a missing person story before transforming into a psychological thriller and From Dawn to Dusk, which begins as a crime thriller before morphing into something very different come to mind. But there wasn’t a rewarding twist in these cases.
In the case of the film, the show’s premise operated as a kind of MacGuffin…an irrelevant plot device. Viewers thought they were watching a movie about the disappearance of the daughter of two police officers. The disappearance was only a set-up, though, and the means to propel the story in a totally different direction.
Maybe this could have worked with more skillful handling, but according to reviews, viewers were frustrated, calling the plot a “deception.” No one likes to feel they’ve been duped, especially if there’s not a payoff in terms of a cool twist or a satisfying ending (and resolution of the original plot point, MacGuffin or not).
The book was marketed as a different genre than it was. It was promoted as a mystery, but the focus of the plot was a romance, and the mystery faded into the background.
If a publisher is trying to market a book inappropriately, the author should push back. And independent writers should be careful not to mischaracterize a genre or plot with category metadata, the cover, and the book description. Otherwise, reader backlash could prove pretty tough.
Have you found yourself reading or watching something that ended up very different from what you thought it was?
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