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Chapter 20 Pemberley, Derbyshire, Spring 1795 George Darcy oversaw the loading of trunks onto the carriage with relief. The Darcys were headed to a house party in Buckinghamshire. It would be several days in the carriage and both Nora and Fitzwilliam were accompanying them. He generally preferred not to travel such distances in the rainy … Continue reading Sons of Pemberley, Post 18, Ch. 20

Miss Elizabeth, Between sitting with Luke and listening to my two male cousins, I am in desperate need of female company. My husband is too enamored of our daughter to spare a conversation for his wife, Georgiana is too sweet, and Miss Bingley too much herself. Please say you will spend the afternoon with me at Netherfield. I would be grateful for your company. Bring Miss Bennet with you if you like.
Lady Marianne Pickering

Miss Elizabeth, Between sitting with Luke and listening to my two male cousins, I am in desperate need of female company. My husband is too enamored of our daughter to spare a conversation for his wife, Georgiana is too sweet, and Miss Bingley too much herself. Please say you will spend the afternoon with me at Netherfield. I would be grateful for your company. Bring Miss Bennet with you if you like.
Lady Marianne Pickering

Don’t freak out. Chapter 18 Netherfield, Hertfordshire, October 1811 “I know my visit was scheduled rather hastily, but I did think you were aware I was coming,” said Colonel Fitzwilliam as he entered the breakfast parlor. He followed closely behind the butler and spoke before the other man could announce him. No one had been … Continue reading Sons of Pemberley, Post 17, Ch. 18

Don’t freak out. Chapter 18 Netherfield, Hertfordshire, October 1811 “I know my visit was scheduled rather hastily, but I did think you were aware I was coming,” said Colonel Fitzwilliam as he entered the breakfast parlor. He followed closely behind the butler and spoke before the other man could announce him. No one had been … Continue reading Sons of Pemberley, Post 16, Ch. 18

Can you guys tell me if this should be two chapters? The break would come after Anne’s letter, at the second timestamp. For the record, this is the most complicated organization pattern I have ever written. Chapter 17 Derbyshire, 1794 Pemberley, Derbyshire 12 January, 1794 Dear Marianne, Winter must be the longest season of them … Continue reading Sons of Pemberley, Post 16, Ch. 17

Can you guys tell me if this should be two chapters? The break would come after Anne’s letter, at the second timestamp. For the record, this is the most complicated organization pattern I have ever written. Chapter 17 Derbyshire, 1794 Pemberley, Derbyshire 12 January, 1794 Dear Marianne, Winter must be the longest season of them … Continue reading Sons of Pemberley, Post 15, Ch. 17

Because I changed the order a bit, the beginning of this chapter is off. Usually, the first section is the end of the last chapter, and this one begins with the conversation with Mr. Abara. So if it feels like there is a lot of disconnected stuff happening, that’s why. I think I’m going to … Continue reading Sons of Pemberley, Post 15, Ch. 16

Because I changed the order a bit, the beginning of this chapter is off. Usually, the first section is the end of the last chapter, and this one begins with the conversation with Mr. Abara. So if it feels like there is a lot of disconnected stuff happening, that’s why. I think I’m going to … Continue reading Sons of Pemberley, Post 14, Ch. 16

Hello dears. Sorry I missed yesterday’s post. I am a bit under the weather. As mentioned in the comments, I’ve decided to add some scenes in at Netherfield in the 1811 storyline. This would take place in October, shortly before Marianne arrives at Netherfield. Let me know what you think. Somewhere near Ch. 9 Hertfordshire, … Continue reading Sons of Pemberley, Post 14, BONUS