Caleb’s review of All For One LitRPG: Book One > Likes and Comments
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Can you tell me what spelling and grammar errors there are? Because it's not showing up on the quality issues Amazon has that the thousands of readers can tell me about it.
I can't speak for the text versions but I caught errors and just a lot of awkward and discordant issues while listening to the audiobook.. like 10-12 year old boys being called men oddly and then there is how wagon and carriage gets used incorrectly. One of the instances that stuck with me was what I believe must have been, for reasons of function, a 4-horse heavy transport wagon, since it transported all the items for an entire smithy but was then referred to as a carriage not much later. Its not totally incorrect but Carriage is more usually used as a descriptor for carrying people. Just do a basic Google picture search for the different words and you will, pun intended, get the picture. There are more issues but to manage getting through the entire book I was forced to repress stuff so as to not go insane. The narration is also only so-so and thus doesn't help things.
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Can you tell me what spelling and grammar errors there are? Because it's not showing up on the quality issues Amazon has that the thousands of readers can tell me about it.
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I can't speak for the text versions but I caught errors and just a lot of awkward and discordant issues while listening to the audiobook.. like 10-12 year old boys being called men oddly and then there is how wagon and carriage gets used incorrectly. One of the instances that stuck with me was what I believe must have been, for reasons of function, a 4-horse heavy transport wagon, since it transported all the items for an entire smithy but was then referred to as a carriage not much later. Its not totally incorrect but Carriage is more usually used as a descriptor for carrying people. Just do a basic Google picture search for the different words and you will, pun intended, get the picture. There are more issues but to manage getting through the entire book I was forced to repress stuff so as to not go insane. The narration is also only so-so and thus doesn't help things.
