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(view spoiler)[Okay so I have this idea that I want to write a more about on my own. So I need someone to help spark ideas on how to write it this idea.

Its August 7th 1888 when the famous killings of Jack the Ripper began. No one knows who he is or why he is doing it. Girl A is young and naive even when the killings start. In the Whitechapel District there is a new guy in town. No one knows anything about Guy A. Guy A is demon. Guy is also Jack the Ripper. When Girl finds Guy A can she resist him. Can she believe he has a good heart? Or will she be his next victim?

I want to be Girl A
I need someone who can play that mysterious bad boy
I want someone detail
Remember I can only be detail if the other person tries to be or I won't get my brain juice working. (hide spoiler)]
(view spoiler)[I'm suppose to be evil. Don't you see?

Girl A is a witch princess who was born into a powerful bloodline. Everything points to her being evil. She is very confuse on what to do. She wants to be good. She hates the dark powers growing inside of her everyday. She fights it off but the pain becomes unbearable. What is evil anyways? Until one day she meet Guy A. Well you see Guy A is evil dark and mysterious. He kidnapps Girl A to be his queen. Guy A teaches her to let the go of the darkness inside her. He teaches her how to be evil. Will Girl A relaize that she needs to stop running from her destiny and trying to be something she not? Or will she fight it?


I know this is a killer here I really would love to be Girl A.
Another thing is I'm trying to become more detail so I would love someone who can push me to be detail.
Also someone who is active I understand people have life's outside of goodreads.
Anyone? (hide spoiler)]))

P.S: I haven't checked the grammar in these ideas since I started my on going list of ideas. I apologize for that, and will have to do that some time in the near future.

Anyone?

Anyone?

Lilia nodded her head slowly. "Okay." She said softly. "So what can you do?"

"You know exactly what you did. The old winter is dead and now your looking for the new winter." Max said .

FallaciousGod wrote: "You ok?"

((Sorry I never saw any of this. Last month was a bad month we had a lot of family issues going and a lot of health issues. I still really want to roleplay this and I will respond right now))

Lilia looked at him and frowned some and nodded. "Okay." She said looking down. "How do you know when you're supposed to make things happen?"

"Why did you kill Winter?" Max asked.

"Why can't you do much?" Lilia asked tilting her head to the side. "Is it because of it being winter out side?" She asked shifting her position. Her blue eyes blinked a few times. "I can try to make winter go away. I'm sure people wouldn't mind anyways. These past few weeks are really nice." She said not realizing how important it was.


Max sighed hoping she wouldn't freak out when she awakened all the way. He would have to get some questions from her.

Lilila looked at him and shrugged her shoulders. "I don't know this is really boring, Cal what do for fun or just in general. Sitting in your room all day is boring."

He quickly decided to get out of his car. He picked up Evangeline and put her into his car and drove off to his apartment quickly. When he arrived he sat her on the couch and healed her. Before he did anything he tied her hands behind her back. Only because he wasn't going to die like the other winter.

Lilia knocked on Cal's door. "I'm bored."

The one option was the clear option was to take her and heal her, but what wouldn't stop her from killing him?

Lilia sighed some she was bored and didn't know what to do.


Max stopped his car wondering what he should do.

Lilia walked in looking back at the outside.


Max mentally slammed the doors.

Lilia frowned some and then sighed. "This is going to be a long life." she muttered.

The ambulance crashed into a guard rail.

Lilia smiled back him


Max stepped on his breaks.

She walked in the door with him. "Is that a smile I see" She joked.


"Nothing wr just slid on some black ice." They slid on some more black ice.

Lilia nodded. "Okay, " she smiled.

As he was riding he saw the ambulance servre on some black ice.

Lilia nodded her head slowly. She closed her eyes and thought about her old life and pushed it away far away. Reopening her eyes she smiled at him. "Thank you" she forced herself to forget her old life and maybe that was for the best now, but pushing problems away only makes them worse.

Mac decided to follow the ambulance

Lilia looked into his eyes. "Please Cal suggest something to me." She whispered softly


"Don't worry we are almost there" The paramedic said.

"How do you do it? How do I forget about my old life?" Lilia asked looking up at him.

The paramedics rushed her to the hospital.

Lilia looked at him and shook her head no and frowned. "I don't want to go in. I just want to go back to my old life." Tears rang in her eyes. "I thought I could push through and not think about it, but I'm wrong. I was graduating this year, I got accepted to my dream school and all of that is thrown away"

They plopped her into the ambulance.

Lilia nodded this whole new world was confusing to her. She was still weary about everything.


Max didn't have anything to do it with it. However the new winter did and he doubted that he or she realized what they were doing.