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A.’s comments from the Opening Line Of One Of Your Books! group.

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Cold Comfort (4 new)
Oct 02, 2016 06:51PM

200626 Jordan wrote: "They say we're able to create, but not that it comes with limitations. We had no idea our craft would be stifled, for the sake of admiration."

I hear some James Baldwin in this. That's a good opening, It grabs your attention.
Cold Comfort (4 new)
Oct 02, 2016 06:50PM

200626 Ewabernathy wrote: "The back half of the room is full of people, most of whom sit or stand behind a waist-high wooden partition. At the front is a massive bench set on a platform, dominated by a woman wearing a black ..."

I like that. I almost expected them to start singing too.
Oct 02, 2016 06:45PM

200626 The Azazaelese Year of 349 Trillion.

The magnificent blue topaz and rose garnet palace floats unmoving and unaided in the aither of the realm of the outer heavens as the beauteous Queen Paranorma of the Kingdom of Azazaeland stood with her back to her attendances.
200626 "UnHoly Pursuit: The Devil on MY Trail"A. White

“Hellions to the right, Hellions to the left. Hellions to the east, Hellions to the west, above, and below. The pits of hell must be empty by now for they're all here around me.” 24 year old Ana BuFaye Wyett thinks while gazing at the streets one level below her window as the early morning heat waves dance before her eyes.