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Jul 30, 2021 Ross Eberle rated it liked it · (Review from the author)

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=Young-Adult-Ross hums, an air of confidence about him, while he reviews the 2nd novella he submitted for publishing on August 4, 2009. Crossing his arms, he smirks to himself= "Hell, yeah!! Two books written and published. Who's the best writer? This'd be me-ow!!"

=From out of nowhere, a 'Ross of the Future' sneaks behind the Young-Adult-Ross and whacks him over the head, using a Japanese folding-fan= "Boink...Wronnggg!!"

=Young-Adult-Ross turns and scowls at Ross of the Future in angered-annoyan =Young-Adult-Ross hums, an air of confidence about him, while he reviews the 2nd novella he submitted for publishing on August 4, 2009. Crossing his arms, he smirks to himself= "Hell, yeah!! Two books written and published. Who's the best writer? This'd be me-ow!!"

=From out of nowhere, a 'Ross of the Future' sneaks behind the Young-Adult-Ross and whacks him over the head, using a Japanese folding-fan= "Boink...Wronnggg!!"

=Young-Adult-Ross turns and scowls at Ross of the Future in angered-annoyance= "Heey!! Who are you? And what do you think you're doing, raining on my parade, huh!?"

=Ross of the Future crosses his own arms, just like Young-Adult-Ross did, and laughs a little= "So you wrote and published a couple of novels. But you're nothing special...Snowflake! And before you decide to argue with me, let me explain everything you've done wrong..."

(All silliness aside, I actually did several things wrong, while I was busily writing this book. First off, there were a small number of substantial spelling and grammar errors. And secondly, I also spotted a fair amount of plot-mishaps, and a few things left unmentioned. Third and last of all, when publishing this book, I should have made the cover matte, but instead, it was glossy. Well, no more! I've only just recently re-submitted this novella I wrote for re-publication.)

This time, however, all spelling and grammar mistakes have been fixed. Secondly, the plot-mishaps (Which included mentioning an incorrect year {1991 instead of 1999}, and a lack of notable dialogue and action/narrative in at least one or two chapters) have had their structural integrity internally-strengthened, so to speak. Finally, this book has been given a much more befitting matte cover, which will make it seem a tad more authentic and less...Glossy and 'glamorous'.

In addition to this, about a dozen more pages, chock-full of rich details regarding my characters, plotlines, and most of the settings the characters interact within have been added. If, even after you, my fellow Superior-Fans STILL notice anything amiss in the new edition, please let me know. And I shall do a third revision, just for you. Be glad, for not every author who writes a book, script, and so on, is willing to admit whenever he or she has made a mistake.

My final score: 3 stars...1 for the series. 1 for the characters. And 1 for my willingness to keep on writing, and see this franchise through to the bitter end. ...more

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