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Hell to Pay takes place in the city of Eberia. Not with the core group introduced in Ascend Online.
Lots of cool characters & an action packed novel. It's a little shallow on character development because the focus is to show what's going on in the game world and how the characters are involved.
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Hell to Pay takes place in the city of Eberia. Not with the core group introduced in Ascend Online.
Lots of cool characters & an action packed novel. It's a little shallow on character development because the focus is to show what's going on in the game world and how the characters are involved.
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This series just isn’t resonating with me. I think it’s the lack of real character development or compelling connections to the reader.
A lot of cool elements in this but the story’s falling flat.
I did like this better than the first book but don’t have much to say beyond that.
Perhaps I’m influenced by how unimpressed I am by the narrator... I feel like his general narration voice is flat and monotone. He does some good voices for all the different characters but nothing outstanding.
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A lot of cool elements in this but the story’s falling flat.
I did like this better than the first book but don’t have much to say beyond that.
Perhaps I’m influenced by how unimpressed I am by the narrator... I feel like his general narration voice is flat and monotone. He does some good voices for all the different characters but nothing outstanding.
To be hone ...more

A great story, widening the world of Ascend Online.
We get to see a bit of what's taking place outside of the village and what "city life" looks like. The story is entertaining on it's own, and there's rumblings about the two story lines connecting in the next book, which would be awesome.
Keep up the good work.
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We get to see a bit of what's taking place outside of the village and what "city life" looks like. The story is entertaining on it's own, and there's rumblings about the two story lines connecting in the next book, which would be awesome.
Keep up the good work.
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Another really good book with fantastic world building, but the ending did leave a few loose ends that I wish there had been some resolution to.

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