One in the Gut (Headshot Online, #1) in LitRPG Forum

Jan 21, 2018 Anders Nordesjö rated it it was amazing

Very good

I really like the writing in this book. Alot of inner monologue from the MC without feeling like the author was trying to put ideas about the world into your head. The game itself was interesting and fresh although a weekly reset in an mmorpg seems kinda boring to me.

The overall plot was captivating and I am gonna start reading the second book right away!

2 likes · Like · see review

Feb 05, 2018 GaiusPrimus rated it liked it

Shelves: litrpg, zombies

I liked the story and have already picked up the second book, but I think there are a couple of things that if they had been addressed, would've made this stand out head and shoulders above most of the rest of the offerings in this genre.

1. Direction. The story tries to be too many things at once so you don't know what it's really about. I honestly think that the author had the beginning and the end figured out, but had some issues with how exactly he would get from point A to point Z. We're lef ...more

1 like · Like · see review

Jul 17, 2017 Mandor rated it really liked it

started off slow but picked up quickly i enjoyed the mc being a zombie

1 like · Like · see review

Nov 11, 2017 Bobby rated it really liked it

Great read.

The story is great. The setting is done well and zombie litrpg is a refreshing change. I will be honest their are a fair number of typos in the copy I have but they may have been fixed by now. The story was strong enough to overcome that for me.

Like · see review