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I've put this in Author Self-Promotions but it's not really a promotion - more a cry for help.

I've slaved over my new website and I'm hoping like minded readers might give it the once over and tell me what they think. I'm worried it's a bit too wordy... what do you guys think?

http://l-e-fitzpatrick.moonfruit.com/#

Hi LE -- whatever L stands for,

I don't see your site as wordy at all. Good luck with the venture. My mother's maiden name was Fitzpatrick. I don't know if you are Irish, as I am, though I have lived most of my life in England. If you are you will know that the Fitzpatricks were the princes of Munster. You are welcome as a friend on Goodreads if you want to join my small but growing band.

Best wishes,

Frank

Thanks Frank. The L Stands for Lynzie. My family are from Irish descent but I am from Yorkshire and now live in Wales.

I am not sure I have a claim to the Munster throne, but I am willing to join any Fitzpatrick campaigns.

Hi Lynzie,

I live in Yorkshire, in Sheffield to be precise.

Up the Fitzpatricks! May they be recognised as the rightful royal family of Ireland!

Frank

I like it. I like sites that are easy to navigate and I like that you give enough information.

Frank wrote: "Hi Lynzie,

I live in Yorkshire, in Sheffield to be precise.

Up the Fitzpatricks! May they be recognised as the rightful royal family of Ireland!

Frank"

When the battle looks won I'll join you : )

Hah! Coward!

You might be interested or amused by my article on dreams as an aid to writing.

Frank

Hah! Coward!

You might be interested in dreams as an aid to writing in my very short blog, which, appropriately enough, is titled Frank P Ryan's blog.

Have to dash -- just discovered that one of my books is missing.

Frank

L.E. wrote: "I've put this in Author Self-Promotions but it's not really a promotion - more a cry for help.

I've slaved over my new website and I'm hoping like minded readers might give it the once over and te..."
Hi Lynzie,
I checked out your website and I think its awesome. I have booked marked it, so I can check it out all the time. I don't think its wordy at all and I love the colours you've picked for the backgrounds. Keep up the good work.

Thanks Carolyn that's really encouraging.