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Dunno where this goes I'm a rap writer it's horrorcore rap. I need specific feedback. I have 7 here http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2... please tell me exactly what is good and what is bad please. Like it or not please be constructive

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HELP ME OUT I NEED REVIEWS TELL ME WHAT'S GOOD AND BAD! also added a new one. 7 and 8 I need reviews for

Have you considered sending this out to people in groups that are interested in the genre so that you can get some specific feedback from people who are interested in it -- rather than shouting in a more general group? It's hard to give "specific feedback" about what is good or bad if it is not a genre in which one has interest and/or expertise. Just a thought.

There aren't many here on goodreads....

Andy *Megans Dork!* wrote: "There aren't many here on goodreads...."

Start with the ones that *are* here, then.

I'll be honest with you; I review books and am even a judge for a competition. However, I don't know enough about your genre to say "this is good/bad/indifferent." I suspect a lot of people in this *generalist* group are in the same boat.

If your local library or bookstore has a writing group, you may want to join it. That's an excellent way to develop your chops and get critiques.

Lyrics-wise, it seems to have a good hook. But it's hard to judge something out of its own medium. If it was a YouTube link with a video where I could hear the song, I'd have more to say. Also, you might want to mention that this content isn't intended for all audiences due to some of the more colorful euphemisms.

Lol got it. Thanks Jade :) I'll make a beat for it and post it when I figure out how! XD and to Alexandria I shall do that sounds great! <3 to you both for actually helping you're the first out of all the times I've posted it!

Link won't work

I've got 500 views combined and 0 reviews from them...

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Your link is frozen! I would go on it but It is:(

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