Connecting Readers and Writers discussion

How about this?

For sixteen-year-old Tamin Moon, starting her junior year of high school and finding a locket from a father she never knew, is all the excitement she wants. But war is coming and Tamin has been chosen to stop otherworldly evil forces from raising an army of undead. Tamin's locket is a powerful weapon and both sides want it. Tamin can't trust anyone, not even the man she is falling in love with.

Do the two sides in the battle have names? If so, I'd incorporate them into the pitch.

I agree with Patricia. Let me know if you'd like a review done on this book.