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Hello fellow Goodreaders! My name is Eric Dulin,and I'm a science fiction novelist. I published my book, Condemned, on amazon.com but Goodreads is still processing it. It is available on both Kindle and Paperback.

I am only 18. Now before you condone me for being too young for truly understanding the writing world, please give me a chance. I've studied writing for many years and am not some "kid" who thinks he can write a book, throw it in the market, and become a billionaire. I just want to have my voice heard and critiqued, to learn from what mistakes so I can be the best writer I can be. (Sorry, have had many people "condemn" me for this age disparity.)

Here is a brief synopsis to see if you're interested in it:

Imagine waking up covered in blood.
Without knowing where you are. Who you are.
Hunted by a team of the deadliest soldiers in the galaxy.
This is the nightmare Arigus Vanes faces. Sheltered within the chassis of a powerful Guardian battlesuit, Arigus has no idea who he is or what happened when he wakes up at the site of gruesome murders. Government Enforcers storm in, and he flees for his life into Kingston, an enormous underground city on the industrial planet Korscia. Thrown into a world of thieves and murderers, he befriends a woman and her subservient android whom prove invaluable to helping him uncover his shrouded past while surviving the present. Together, they unearth secrets about Arigus and his assailants that had been hidden from the galaxy. The twisted truths connecting them together.

But some secrets are meant to be buried.

If you like action and mystery set in a science fiction universe, (as well as the premise above) I really hope you'd take a few minutes to read a sample and see if you like it.

http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00ACW37L0/

My website is also at:
www.ericdulin.com