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message 1: by Ruth (new)

Ruth | 98 comments whatcha wanna do?


message 2: by .:Eva:.♥ (new)

.:Eva:.♥ | 1331 comments im willing to do all most anything, you have ideas?


message 3: by Ruth (new)

Ruth | 98 comments I'm good with pretty much everything too, but I've kind of had a hankering to do something where a chaotic neutral and a lawful good character have to work together for some reason... But that's just kind of like a slight thing that can maybe work in to the storyline but it doesn't have to.


message 4: by .:Eva:.♥ (new)

.:Eva:.♥ | 1331 comments no um I can try to think of something. But how to do you mean chaotic? like a bad boy? Dangerous?


message 5: by Ruth (new)

Ruth | 98 comments Not necessarily like a bad boy, more like somebody who just doesn't give a care about what people think or what's like politically correct, just kind of does whatever they think is right at the time.
But we don't have to go off that


message 6: by Ruth (new)

Ruth | 98 comments First off, though, what genres/time periods do you like?


message 7: by .:Eva:.♥ (new)

.:Eva:.♥ | 1331 comments ill do anything really, fantasy, realistic...etc


message 8: by Ruth (new)

Ruth | 98 comments Okay cool! Romance, no romance, or go with the flow?


message 9: by .:Eva:.♥ (new)

.:Eva:.♥ | 1331 comments though if we do something realistic we should have a really interesting plot


message 10: by Ruth (new)

Ruth | 98 comments Yeah I agree


message 11: by Ruth (new)

Ruth | 98 comments There's something with spies or conspiracies, those are always interesting
And then of course you have fantasy and sci fi too which are really cool


message 12: by Ruth (new)

Ruth | 98 comments So I think I might have a slight storyline in each genre if you can't think of any


message 13: by .:Eva:.♥ (new)

.:Eva:.♥ | 1331 comments okay yeah what is it? I can give some if more after


message 14: by Ruth (new)

Ruth | 98 comments Okay, well for modern and realistic of course there's something with spies... Other than that I'll have to think some more.

For medieval fantasy there's something like a princess escapes from a castle and bands up with a traveling performer/thief and tries to make a new name for herself

For sci fi maybe there's like this space pirate who's been terrorizing planets, and the space police have been trying to take him down but with no luck, so a certain guy bands up with a smuggler who used to be part of the Pirates crew to try and find how to defeat him.

But those are just kind of vague things I can't up with at the spur of the moment, so if you don't like them that's fine


message 15: by .:Eva:.♥ (new)

.:Eva:.♥ | 1331 comments those sound good

ill name a few and we can narrow things down

Vampire saves human girls brother, but he demands a price, which is for her to belong to him, do what he says, even if that means being his maid, and pretend to be his mistress, and maybe even his blood donor.

mermaid gets captured by pirate, as they struggle to find common ground they fall for eachother


message 16: by Ruth (new)

Ruth | 98 comments Ooh those are really cool! I think I personally like the sound of the mermaid one a little better? But idk what do you think?


message 17: by .:Eva:.♥ (new)

.:Eva:.♥ | 1331 comments Yeah both are romances so im good with whatever


message 18: by Ruth (new)

Ruth | 98 comments Okay, well you can decide, it doesn't really matter to me- I'm good with whatever.


message 19: by .:Eva:.♥ (new)

.:Eva:.♥ | 1331 comments umm you can pick


message 20: by Ruth (new)

Ruth | 98 comments Okay I'll say either your pirate and mermaid, or my sci fi. So you can narrow down from there lol


message 21: by .:Eva:.♥ (new)

.:Eva:.♥ | 1331 comments okay im good with the pirate, mermaid
could i be the girl?


message 22: by Ruth (new)

Ruth | 98 comments Okay sure! That sounds great! Ready to make characters?


message 23: by Ruth (new)

Ruth | 98 comments Btw I'm headed to bed so I'll post again in the morning


message 24: by .:Eva:.♥ (new)

.:Eva:.♥ | 1331 comments Name: Aribella

Age: 19

Appearance: description
(view spoiler)


message 25: by Ruth (last edited Jun 18, 2015 08:35AM) (new)

Ruth | 98 comments Sorry I took so long

Name: Captain Jack Abbot
Age: 24
Appearance:





message 26: by .:Eva:.♥ (new)

.:Eva:.♥ | 1331 comments hey looks great, just could you lower his age? like so they arn't more than 6 years apart in age?


message 27: by Ruth (new)

Ruth | 98 comments oh yeah sure! No prob :D I meant to do it but he was a pre-generated character I'd made a while back XD


message 28: by .:Eva:.♥ (new)

.:Eva:.♥ | 1331 comments great thanks! alright wanna start?


message 29: by Ruth (new)

Ruth | 98 comments Sure thing! But first off, where do they meet?


message 30: by .:Eva:.♥ (new)

.:Eva:.♥ | 1331 comments how about he captures her, holds her prisoner and all that


message 31: by Ruth (new)

Ruth | 98 comments okay sounds good! Wanna start?


message 32: by .:Eva:.♥ (new)

.:Eva:.♥ | 1331 comments can you start?


message 33: by Ruth (new)

Ruth | 98 comments ((Sure))

Jack stood at the helm of his ship as it sailed through the waters. There was a layer of fog so thick he could barely see through it, and he could sense the uneasiness in his crew. He wondered again if he should have brought them out here. Most of them considered him inexperienced as a captain. He'd had to shoot a sailor the other day for talking behind his back.


message 34: by .:Eva:.♥ (new)

.:Eva:.♥ | 1331 comments Aribella had enough of her father. He had told her she was set up with an arranged marrage to a merman she didn't know at all. She couldn't do it, she couldn't marry him. She swam to the survace, to the rock she layed on. She needed to get out of the sea, away from her father at the moment. She layed out on the rock and started to weep with her arm over her eyes


message 35: by Ruth (new)

Ruth | 98 comments "Cap'n," one of the crew came up behind him.
Jack kept his eyes front, and said, "what is it?"
"We're here, sir."
A greedy smile spread over his face. "Ready the boats."
"Aye aye, cap'n."
Jack picked up his hat and put it in, going down to the deck.


message 36: by .:Eva:.♥ (new)

.:Eva:.♥ | 1331 comments Aribella cried a while, soon she wiped her tears and rested her head on the rock pulling her tail up to her chest. She was unaware of the ship nearby, she was too deep into her own thoughts that she just didn't think about much else. Curling her now dryish hair with her fingers as she hummed a mellody calmed her down, reminding her of what her mother used to do when she was upset


message 37: by Ruth (new)

Ruth | 98 comments The men had gotten the boats ready, so Jack and a few of his most skilled crew members climbed in. They rowed silently across the water to the rocks. Jack sat at the front, his eyes peeled. He didn't believe what he was seeing at first when he saw her. Part of him had feared the myths about mermaids really were that: just myths. He motioned for his crew to get ready with the nets, and then gave the signal, and they threw them.


message 38: by .:Eva:.♥ (new)

.:Eva:.♥ | 1331 comments Aribella ran her fingers over the barnacle stuck to the rock. She closed her eyes tightly before she knew it a net was thrown over her. Her eyes flew open and she gasped pushing her hands up to the net she squirmed in it trying to untangle it her eyes were wide and she let out a scream that pierced the wind as she relized those human net that was used to trap fish was thrown over her and she was the prey.


message 39: by Ruth (new)

Ruth | 98 comments "Bring her in! Bring her in!" Jack shouted to his crew. They struggled and dragged the net towards the boat. "Row, you idiots, before more of them realize she's gone!"
They rowed the boat quickly back to the ship.


message 40: by .:Eva:.♥ (new)

.:Eva:.♥ | 1331 comments Aribella yanked at the net pulling and trying to rip at it. She screamed and thrashed towards the water "Help! HELP!" she screamed at the top of her lungs. She just needed one fish to look up for them to get her father. almost any fish in the ocean could reconize her she just needed someone to look


message 41: by Ruth (new)

Ruth | 98 comments ((real quick, i forgot to ask, do you mind language?))

"Gag her," Jack told his crew. "Quickly!"
One of them took a rag and hauled her over the edge of the boat, attempting to put it in her mouth. They'd finally reached the ship and the men still on it lowered the ropes.


message 42: by .:Eva:.♥ (new)

.:Eva:.♥ | 1331 comments not at all


Aribela screamed nad fought against the hands that were trying to hold her down. She managed to whip her powerful tail around knocking a man in the water as she struggled to gt out of their grasp, while they attempted to gag her.


message 43: by Ruth (new)

Ruth | 98 comments ((okay great :D i won't be like using it pervasively, he's just a pirate, you know, so ))

His crew were a bunch of incompetent idiots, Jack thought, as he watched them try to restrain her. "Hold her down, I'll do it myself," He told them. Two of them tried to grab her arms and another two her tail.


message 44: by .:Eva:.♥ (new)

.:Eva:.♥ | 1331 comments no i dont mind at all

Aribella was now gagged but she was still fighting their holds, the men that grabbed her tail quickly got flung into the ocean her tail strong. But then one man the had a hold of her arms brought back his fist and it connected sharply with her temple, swiftly knocking her out and making her whole body go limp. And now that she was so much out of the water her tail swiftly formed into two legs.


message 45: by Ruth (new)

Ruth | 98 comments "Raise her up," Jack told his men. He looked out over the water cautiously, hoping she hadn't alerted any of her people. When they had her up on the ship he followed, and then his men came up.
"Bring her to my cabin," he told them, "then let's get the hell out of here."


message 46: by .:Eva:.♥ (new)

.:Eva:.♥ | 1331 comments Aribella layed motionless, with a cut on her forehead and blood tricking down her cheek. a seaweed skirt wrapped around her waist down and she had two human legs rather than one long tail.


message 47: by Ruth (new)

Ruth | 98 comments Jack watched as they took her into the cabin. He hoped that wouldn't be permanent- nobody would believe him if she looked like a regular human. He would figure something out later. He shouted orders to his crew and they got the ship sailing again. After that he went in his cabin with her.


message 48: by .:Eva:.♥ (new)

.:Eva:.♥ | 1331 comments Aribella was out of it for a while. Later when she woke everything was fuzzy and her head was killing. One thing she noticed though, was that everything wasn't shades of blue. Was she dreaming that she was on land? she wondered closing her eyes again


message 49: by Ruth (new)

Ruth | 98 comments Jack was sitting at his table studying some maps when noticed her stirring and stood up to look at her. He still kept his distance. He'd never dealt with, or even seen for that matter, a real mermaid and wasn't sure if they could talk, or if they could but not in English, or what. He didn't even know how long she would survive out of water.


message 50: by .:Eva:.♥ (new)

.:Eva:.♥ | 1331 comments Aribella whimpered softly touching her hand to her head it had hurt so bad. She never experienced that kind of pain. She closed her palm trying to draw in water, when she noticed there was no water, that she was in air. and then everything came back to her at once and she let out a small scream that was muffled by the gag.


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