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Bambii & Zephyrine
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Jun 22, 2015 06:08PM
Here we go! Would you mind posting your idea?
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((sure))GirlA has been kidnapped by GuyA, not out of vengeance or for ransom. But because he thinks he is in love with GirlA delusional and believes that the only way that they can be together is if he keeps GirlA locked up in his basement. GirlA unable to escape or call for help. As GuyA falls deeper into his delusions, he trys to convince GirlA that he is in love with her and that GirlA is the one being irrational. At the same time GirlA must try to convince GuyA to let her go, or at least let GuyA's guard down just long enough for GirlA to make a run for it. Can GirlA make a break for it and get away? Will GuyA react violently if he finds GirlA trying to run?
Sweet ^_^ which do you prefer? And what do you like for character profiles?
it does matter XD i can go either way and yes i do.
Huh? You mean you don't care which character and you do profiles?
Okie xD Can I have. The? For profiles maybe just name; appearance; age?
Nice! Sorry it took so long :/ my phone died. Who do you want to start?
it is okay and you can start if you want.
Wait, do we want it to start a little before or after he kidnaps her?
((Okay.))
Cool air kissed Eden's cheeks, forcing her into a shivering wake. She had a hard time opening her eyes, but when she did, she looked around, confused. Was she in a.... Basement? A cold one- the air was a little musty. She went to move her hands but couldn't, wiggling as she realized her feet were bound as well.
She tried to better see, raising her shoulder to brush her hair out of her face. Why couldn't she remember where she was?
Cool air kissed Eden's cheeks, forcing her into a shivering wake. She had a hard time opening her eyes, but when she did, she looked around, confused. Was she in a.... Basement? A cold one- the air was a little musty. She went to move her hands but couldn't, wiggling as she realized her feet were bound as well.
She tried to better see, raising her shoulder to brush her hair out of her face. Why couldn't she remember where she was?
Noah was in his room, when he heard movement coming from the basement. A smile slowly came across his face has he left his room and walked down the basements stairs. "Are you up Eden?" He said with a calm voice, has he moved the hair out his face.
"Huh?" Eden groaned, her head hurting. She could barely see the person who had addressed her, but she recognised him well enough. "Noah? What's going on? Why am I tied up?" she pleaded, brushing the hair out of her face with her shoulder again. It wouldn't stop falling.
"Dont worry about that it will go away over time." He said, has he seat down beside Eden on the cold cement floor. He moved her hair out her hair face and put behind her ear. "There is that better?" He asked rubbing her head. "... you bumped your head on your way here. I hope it feels better." Noah added.
"I hit my head?" Eden asked, unsure. She really didn't remember anything, like why she was here, or how she got there. "Why am I here? What's going on, Noah?" Her head throbbed as she leaned it against the wall, trying to focus her vision on his face. It finally came into clear sight, but it was still dark, so she continued to blink.
"Well, brought you here. So we can finally be together." He said has rubbed her cheek with his hand. "I know you me just has much has i love you." He said, has leaned in and kissed her lips.
Eden squirmed back at his kiss. "What? No... Noah?" she mumbled, unsure of herself. "You don't love me and I don't love-" she stopped, thinking back to what she last remembered, but couldn't come up with anything other than her chemistry class, which she'd been paired up with Noah as teammates to work on something, but other than that she couldn't remember other than fragments. Nothing to explain this. "Why am I tied up?"
"Because i dont want my beautiful sweetheart to hurt herself." He said frowning up. "...are they to tight?" He asked standing up moving his her hair once again, and seating in a chair across from Eden with smirk.
"Why would I hurt myself?" Eden asked warily, knowing she hadn't done so on purpose in years. Had she opened up to him about that without knowing? Was this just a prank?
Turning back to the question of the bonds, she nodded. "I would rather not have them at all..." She could feel them digging into her raw wrists. Seeing him in the chair in front of her made her feel cornered, like an animal being prepared for something. She still couldn't comprehend what was going on.
Again, she hoped it was just a prank and he hadn't... What? Kidnapped her?
Turning back to the question of the bonds, she nodded. "I would rather not have them at all..." She could feel them digging into her raw wrists. Seeing him in the chair in front of her made her feel cornered, like an animal being prepared for something. She still couldn't comprehend what was going on.
Again, she hoped it was just a prank and he hadn't... What? Kidnapped her?
"I dont know but this are to stop it from happening." He said pulling on the right chain. "...and they are not coming off, its for the best."He said dropping the chain back to the floor. He slowly leaned back into the chair and crossed his arms.
Eden stared at him for a moment, breathing through her nose before she finally spoke, her voice low and calm, "What are you doing here, Noah?" She swallowed hard, wiggling until she had pressed her back up against the wall, as far away from him as she could muster for the moment.
Noah softly laugh before he uncrossed his arms. "I am here to show you my love for you." Noah said with a smirk.
"What?" Eden scoffed, lifting her bound hands in gesture. "This isn't love, Noah. You don't love me." She shifted again, closing her eyes. "You don't take someone and put them in your basement and tie them up and call it love," she spat the word like it was disgusting her.
Noah frowned at Eden's word and got up and quickly wrapped his hand arm her neck. "It would be much better. When i know i am able to trust you." He said tighten his grap around her throat. How dear she question his love for her, he thought. Not not letting go of her neck.
Eden shook at his grip; widening her eyes as she wheezed, "You're hurting me, Noah." She squirmed, trying to use her bound feet to kick at his leg, but she couldn't as she got a cramp and winced.
Noah let go of her throat and seat down beside her. "I am sorry." He said rubbing her cheek before he looked down at the cement and silently sighed.
Eden coughed, her eyes watering as she scooted a bit away from Noah, but faced him. For a moment she was silent too, wondering what would make him go off again. When she spoke up, her voice was a little raspy. "What's the matter, Noah?" She didn't want to- shouldn't have had to be nice. But maybe if she was...
"Its nothing, i am sorry for hurting you." He said taking a deep breath. "Do you need some water?" He asked has he stood up.
Eden slowly nodded, watching his every move carefully. "Yes, please," she replied then cleared her sore throat.
He nodded has he walked back up the stairs into the kitchen. He grabbed a glass cup for the water but, he end up throwing it at the wall. "Damn!" He yelled putting his fingers through his hair. He sighed has he got another cup and put water in it, and started walking back down the basement to Eden.
Eden jumped when she heard the crash, but straightened her spine when she heard Noah coming, pressing her back against the wall as she took deep, calming breaths. She forced her face to look neutral when he came down the steps, but it was harder than she'd thought.
"Here honey." He said has he handed her the water glass. Then seat in the chair across from her. He sighed and looked down, he felt bad for letting his anger get the best of him. "I am really sorry, Eden." He said looking down at the floor.
Eden flinched at the endearing name, raising her bound hands to take the water. She downed it and stole a glance at Noah. "It's o-" no, it's not, none of this is. "I forgive you."
Noah looked up at her with a smile. "Thank You" He said. "..You know i would never hurt you right?" He asked, looking at her waiting for her answer.
Eden gave him a strange look as she wiggled the glass between her hands. "You just did, Noah," she reminded him carefully, drooping her head.
Noah sighed and stood up. "I said i was sorry but you hurt my feelings saying that i dont love you." He said, walking to the shelf that was behind Eden. He got a blanket and unfolded it and put it over Eden. "...Its getting late. Goodnight." He added before he walked to the stair case.
"But-" Eden began to protest, but felt defeated and folded in on herself. She let out a breath she didn't know she had been holding when Noah left, closing her eyes for a moment before trying to wiggle the binds, struggling to reach her feet. Her leg cramped and she gave up, pulling herself and the blanket further into the corner of the basement's room. Her head hurt, but her eyelids grew heavy and she fell into a strong sleep.
Noah walked into his room and seat on the edge of his bed for a moment before he fully got into the bed and closed his eyes but it took a while before he was finally a sleep. But, he keep waking up in the middle of the night. His weird dreams where starting again.
After only a couple of hours of sleep, Eden jumped awake, a sudden mini- panic attack coming on her. She shook her fists, barely registering a shifting upstairs. She swore when she remembered where she was- why she was there.
Noah woke up once again, he gave up trying to sleep. He seat up on his bed and took a deep breath. He wanted to go check on Eden but decide to let her get some sleep.
After too long of trying to sleep, Eden gave up sat straight, leaning her head into the corner of the walls meeting with a heavy sigh. Her eyelids were heavy but her mind raced.
Noah sighed has he stood up on his feet. He decide to check on Eden anyway. He slowly went down the stairs to the basement and saw Eden leaning up on the corner wall. Has he took the last step to the floor he took a deep breath and walked over to her. He got on his knees and unlocked one of the chains off the wall. He then looked up at her for a moment. Then took the other one off. He quickly picked her up and took her up stairs to his room, where their was another clean bed across from his. He put her on it and got a lighter chain then the ones in the basement from his drawer, and put it on her left ankle and contact it to the bed. "There hope thats better."He said before he sighed and walked over to his bed and flopped onto it. He turned his back on Eden and acted like he was going to sleep.
While Noah was unchaining her, Eden forced a neutral face. When he laid her on the separate bed, she took a soft breath, not sure what she had thought he'd had in mind. Well, she did, but was grateful he didn't. After he left her to lay down himself, she stretched out, relishing the soft bed and the air around her sore wrists. It wouldn't seem like it, with Noah there, but she fell asleep quite easily and heavily.
