twilight! discussion

if you want either read or write any poems that relate to the twilight series!

if you have any poems, just copy and paste them.

here's one! it's about night, kinda wierd and doesn't make sense, but i just made it so ya. comment on it if you want and tell the truth, don't try and make me feel good. so here it is!

Night

Nighttime falls with dark black clouds,
Instant blackness mystic shrouds,
Night is rent with eerie sounds,
Nothing seen but black backgrounds,
Crickets chirping, night birds screech,
Air is soulless woe beseech!
Stars appear soon calming fear,
The time when phantoms will be near,
Creatures unknown creeping by,
Only comfort in the sky.

like it?

it's cute! i love it!

I loved it!!! well done!!!!

loved it! that was deep and well written.

awesome! i wish my poetry turned out like that.

ok i was really really bored..... and i made this poem for when edward had to suck the venom out of bella and the way she felt..... so heere.....



Blank or is it Pain

or is it all blank?
blank as if the sky was whiped away.
blank like the moments have been tourn apart.
blank as if we never exisisted.
blank as the expression of a child who has no more grief
blank as if the pain has been captured and put in a case forever.
blank like the first snowflake that falls all alone to the ice cold ground.

or is it blank?
what if its pain?
making its way threw my veins every second.
crushing the hope that finds peace in my heart.
surging through the light, turning it to ash as it
passes by carelessly.
waiting for the right second to strike, forcing the tears out that only cause destruction.
or is it pain?
or is it blank?

whoa


ooh! I have one that I wrote a while back, I guess you can relate it when Edward left Bella.

Before
When I see you
A smile comes to my face

When I'm with you
I wonder if this is what heaven is like

When you hold me
I feel like you're like my Prince Charming
In my own fairytale story

Now that you're gone
though
I feel like something died in
me

awwww cute

thanks

ther all real go0d. pretty good ppl owt ther... XD

thanks lol

heres one:

when i thought i lost you
it felt like the end
but i knew you had left
tp save me

the dangers of you and me
could not quell
the feelings we had for each other

we ran and could not hide
fled and not get hurt
live without trying to find
our love

the feelings we've felt
the heart you've heeled
the days we've spent

are all now broken
you are gone
not a trace
not a sound

oooo i like

WHOA!

Wow! thats awesome.