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Mar 05, 2013 10:15PM

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Angelfall Retold:
My mom just had one of her attacks. Dad, my little sister and me left so she could be by her self, since the last time she had one of these "so called attacks" she tried to kill me. They just started to happen, not that long ago, she says there's demons inside of her. I was eleven then.
Five Years Later
My dad just left us to survive on our own, he told us that he couldn't take mom any more. She's having one of her attacks again. My sister and me wait in the hall, listening to pictures being smashed against the walls and other precious things we couldn't get back. She was screaming, too.
"Why is she like that?" Ask (can't remember sisters name),
"She..." what do you tell a little eight year old kid that her mom's crazy and that she would most likely kill her if she got in her way, I think, "she's got demons living in her," I say. We waited in the hall for another hour or so when everything went quiet in our little apartment. I walked over and cracked the door open an inch, she was lying on the ground, surrounded by papers, plates, food and anything else you could imagine. The furniture was all up turned and pushed against the walls. I stepped into our living room and carefully made my way over to her. I stopped and noticed a picture laying on the floor under a piece of broken glass, and noticed it was a picture of me when I was nine, holding (little sisters name) in my arms. We were both dressed in our Sunday best. My mother's wedding dress lay in ruin one the other side of the living room. I made sure mother was okay and I went out and got ( little sisters name). I put my handover her eyes and lead her into the apartment and to our room. I grab (sisters name) favorite book and curled up next to her on our bed.
"Once, along, long ,long time ago lived a princess. She wore yellow ball gowns and always had her hair pulled up and curled to perfection. " I read, "but before she became a princess she lived in a smelly shack on the side of a dirty river. Mice and rats and other rodents would come and go as they pleased, no one cared." By the ending of this line ( sisters name) was sound asleep. Mother walked in.
"Where's Dad?"
"He left about two hours ago.
"Oh..." BOOM! The earth outside shook.
"Whats going on?" Asked (sisters name) I just grabbed her close, while mother looked out the window.
"There seems to be gigantic birds out there,"
"What are you talk..." CRASH! The building next to our just crashed to the cement.
"Get out, get out!" Cried mother. We all ran to the door, other families were running to try to get to safety, too.
"Get back in," I say
"Why in the world would we do that?" Asked mother
"Because this is what they want. A large group of people all struggling to get out. They'll gun them down any time now. Now in!"
this is as far as I got, is it any good?


http://fufuwith1.deviantart.com/art/A...

http://fufuwith1.deviantart.com/art/A..."
It's awesome! :D

http://fufuwith1.deviantart.com/art/A..."
It's awesome! :D"
Thank you so much! <3
I just found a typo, lol. But nevertheless I really like it! It's so simple but it says a lot :)

Oh haha, Thank you anyways. There were a couple things I wished to add but Photoshop is so complicated! I'm still a beginner :)
I feel you! If I were a pro, I would have made fanarts myself. But I don't have time for those because reading takes up my entire time. HAHA

Jeez tell me about it! Every time I tell myself I’m going to start on a new project, here comes an awesome book to take away all my time :D Yeah I can’t draw to save my life so editing on the computer is the best I can do :)

http://esktasy.deviantart.com/art/Ang...
http://esktasy.deviantart.com/art/Ang...

http://esktasy.deviantart.com/art/Ang...
http://esktasy.deviantart.com/art/Ang..."
Awesome! :D Haha! I have to upload a few more drawings I did lately. I've been lazy. :/

http://xxkamijoualtierraxx.deviantart...

http://fufuwith1.deviantart.com/art/A..."
AMAZING.
Bipasha{is eviscerated by fiction} wrote: "how are these?
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THOSE ARE INCREDIBLE.
LIKE NO JOKE.
O_O
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THOSE ARE INCREDIBLE.
LIKE NO JOKE.
O_O