Goodreads Librarians Group discussion

Hello! :) I'd be very appreciative if a kind librarian could make a couple minor edits to my quote. (They are actually corrections that were made in my book so I want to make sure the quote is consistent). :)

Here is the quote link:
http://www.goodreads.com/author/quote...

The first quote that starts with "Everyone tells..." Please change the word WHAT to WHO in the second sentence.

Then in the fourth sentence, I ended in a preposition (yikes). Please change that sentence to read: But, if you're very lucky, you might have a person who tells you a better story, one that takes up residence in your soul, speaking louder than the woeful tale of which you've convinced yourself.

Again, these are minor edits that have also been made to my book. :) Thank you in advance! I love the librarians! You all are so helpful. :)

Got it!

Thank you so much!! :)

Got #4-5

Got #8-9

Got 6

Shouldn't it be "She spoke through her teeth"?

Fixed