Hominids (Neanderthal Parallax, #1) Hominids question


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The Rape
Simone Simone (last edited Apr 28, 2013 11:49PM ) Apr 18, 2013 07:55AM
My only real complaint is with Mary, and the events that happened to her in the beginning of the book. I think it was unnecessary to make her live through what she did in order to establish that she was emotionally cautious and reluctant to start a new relationship. I think a bad break-up in her past might have achieved the same end.

What do you think?

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I am editing my comment: now that I am deep into book 3, I understand the reason. It's a jumping off point for other story lines. Still, if you are only going to read book 1 it just comes off as annoying.



It wasn't just 'reluctance' though. It was a genuine fear of men. Which made the subsequent relationship that she did develop (won't spoil it here) that much more interesting and understandable.


R Apr 27, 2013 01:29AM   0 votes
Yeah it's kind of my biggest gripe with the book to. I didn't think it was well handled, I hope it's consequences are explored more deeply in the further books.


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