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In the absence of a mother and a father, who and what shaped his identity? Was he destined to end up a solitary?

Certainly his uncle seems to have had an impact, probably on his willingness as an adult to work hard, but also on his bigotry, given the account of his earliest memory. (pp 26-27) He also apparently accepted his aunt as mother. But, he must have been at least a bit of odd young male out at his sister's house.
"Was he destined to end up a solitary? ..."
I don't think so, even if his situation probably inclined him toward the solitary. He could have ended up the opposite, still his circumstances of just arriving by himself probably left this kid with some primitive sense of lonely self survival. His cousins probably had a push-pull impact on any sense of belonging, one saying he was truly a cousin, the other denying such. The dynamics sounded as if they were different than just among siblings jockeying for position with parents and between each other.
Although Johnson positions Grainier's aunt and uncle as becoming viewed as Mother and Father, when he speaks of their deaths, he writes "...following the death of their parents, his aunt and uncle Helen and Robert Grainier." So there is a sense of closeness of relationship both affirmed and denied -- thought-provoking writing. (There is also a hint the boy may have been closer to his aunt than his uncle: "their mother, whom Grainier thought of as his own mother as much as theirs" versus "this smoky-smelling man he'd quickly got to calling Father" -- one can almost hear the authoritative insistence as much as or more than affectionate response. Johnson also gives him a blood-link to his aunt, referring to her as the sister of Grainier's father.)



This is a repeat of what I am going to say elsewhere, but I am finding TFS like enjoying a box of gourmet chocolates, with caramels to chew on and soft raspberry cremes to savor on the tongue. Galsworthy's irony is like dark chocolate with salt or the currently popular chilies or wasabi. The writing is a fine box assortment, with such a variety of tastes and flavors. Of course, not everyone likes chocolate. Not what I expected at all, but it fits.
It is fascinating to me that the much shorter Train Dreams is showing itself as compelling enough to return to each day for additional insights, despite other solid claims on time for reading. I'm coming to consider it a little gem, albeit more like those diamonds in the rough Stauer sells in National Geographic than any stone that has seen the cutting wheel. Still, carefully selected.

All I can say, is give me Train Dreams any day. I like my prose to be a little less laboured!

Too bad we can't sit somewhere and have a glass of wine and discuss what we would each consider "less laboured" and why.
It was somewhat accident that The Forsyte Saga followed Train Dreams for me, but I certainly saw the contrast on how families occurred in each -- and from there, found myself considering the impact on an individual in either.