Struggling Writers discussion

I've written a novel and a few short stories that I'd love to get Goodreads reviews on. The short stories are free so probably the best place to start! Just click the covers below. Thanks!

Short Stories
"Smokers Corner"

Tim loses his addiction for the ho-hum after falling for Samantha during a smoking break.

"Life Trade"

What if a stranger took over the part of your best friend? In "Life Trade," a directionless dude seeks answers after his buddy is replaced by someone new. He discovers a matching website for people who want to trade places.

Novel
We, The Watched

Seven wakes up without memory and finds himself in a nation that administers a Watched List of its own citizens. He meets people who accept invasive surveillance by the government and forced uniformity by the church as necessary safeguards for protecting the homeland. When the amnesiac struggles to fit in, he learns quickly that opposition is heresy--and punishable by death.

Adam, the Bulletin Board and Promotions folders would probably be a better place to post this.

Sorry, I misunderstood how the group was organised. Are you able to move my thread or should I repost?

Adam wrote: "Sorry, I misunderstood how the group was organised. Are you able to move my thread or should I repost?"

It's okay! This area is more for people who are looking for help with their writing as opposed to published authors who are looking for reviewers. You will probably want to re-post in one of those folders so you can re-write it to be more engaging (like you would do a flyer on a real bulletin board).