I'm not sure if this is the right/best forum to post this but it looked like the best to post in.
Like to topic says I am looking for a beta reader, I am currently working on a story and keep running into writers block. I would love to have someone to talk things out and just all around to chat with. I would ask that you be eighteen or older and preferably able to talk on skype. I don't know how best to describe the genre that my story falls into but it falls under dystopian and urban fantasy. There are gay character so if you have a problem with those kinds of subjects it would be best if you don't apply.
A small snippet.
She was a tall and stately woman with hair that fell like a dark waterfall around her shoulders, Her skin was as white and flawless as marble; She was like a statue in an iridescent silk-shot black gown. As she walked into the small courtyard the wind howled and was as cold as death, Her face was cold and expressionless as she entered the walled in area, sheer black fabric hanging from the jewelry that adorned her shape. The dark-haired sorceress was flanked by two men an unadorned blade at their hip and a small pistol in a holster under their arms. She was a god among men, she walked with a supernatural grace and her very presence evoked a primal fear.
Students shuddered in her presence as she walked among them, her mind touching each of them as she passed looking for magics’ power. Her eyes burned white-hot with an alien fire as she swept through them, the iridescent moonstone choker glowing just as brilliantly denoting magics power.
This woman was a poison creeping in the vein, a single touch of her mind could send a teenager into a fit of mad ravings and many did from her malicious scan. The screaming was maddening it pierced and rattled the soul brining tears to a persons’ eyes, others fell to their knees in a fugue state completely blank, while others still went unmolested, just a little rattled. Nathan shuddered as She passed him, his stomach churned and his mind burned with her rage; this was the rage that had everyone so rattled, this rage was why some screamed in madness and others became still and silent.
If you would like to give me a hand either leave a message here or you can pm me, Thank you for your time.:)
Like to topic says I am looking for a beta reader, I am currently working on a story and keep running into writers block. I would love to have someone to talk things out and just all around to chat with. I would ask that you be eighteen or older and preferably able to talk on skype. I don't know how best to describe the genre that my story falls into but it falls under dystopian and urban fantasy. There are gay character so if you have a problem with those kinds of subjects it would be best if you don't apply.
A small snippet.
She was a tall and stately woman with hair that fell like a dark waterfall around her shoulders, Her skin was as white and flawless as marble; She was like a statue in an iridescent silk-shot black gown. As she walked into the small courtyard the wind howled and was as cold as death, Her face was cold and expressionless as she entered the walled in area, sheer black fabric hanging from the jewelry that adorned her shape. The dark-haired sorceress was flanked by two men an unadorned blade at their hip and a small pistol in a holster under their arms. She was a god among men, she walked with a supernatural grace and her very presence evoked a primal fear.
Students shuddered in her presence as she walked among them, her mind touching each of them as she passed looking for magics’ power. Her eyes burned white-hot with an alien fire as she swept through them, the iridescent moonstone choker glowing just as brilliantly denoting magics power.
This woman was a poison creeping in the vein, a single touch of her mind could send a teenager into a fit of mad ravings and many did from her malicious scan. The screaming was maddening it pierced and rattled the soul brining tears to a persons’ eyes, others fell to their knees in a fugue state completely blank, while others still went unmolested, just a little rattled. Nathan shuddered as She passed him, his stomach churned and his mind burned with her rage; this was the rage that had everyone so rattled, this rage was why some screamed in madness and others became still and silent.
If you would like to give me a hand either leave a message here or you can pm me, Thank you for your time.:)