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message 1: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 130857 comments Mod
Where Men come to pick someone, or someones, to breed with. Free of charge.


message 2: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 130857 comments Mod
Kilo was walked up to the front desk with about five other girls. Kiki was the only one wearing a sweet smile on her face.
Kiki's supervisor handed the woman at the desk all the girl's records and the woman looked them over. She smiled at one and looked up, "Kilo?" She asked softly.
Kilo's smile grew, "present!" She announced as she raised her hand.
The woman smiled, "were happy to have you." The woman looked out at all the girls, "your new supervisors will show you to your rooms, then you will be aloud to walk around," she instructed.
Kilo looked up at her supervisor, "new supervisor?" She had had this one her hole life and didn't want a new one.
Her supervisor smiled, "don't worry, I'm here to stay," she told Kilo, "now lets find your room," she smiled and took Kilo's room key from the desk lady and then took Kilo's hand, leading her in the right direction.


message 3: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80284 comments Mod
Terry and Helen walked up to the front desk. The man behind it barely looked up from his magazine. "Names?"
Helen didn't like disrespect she slammed Terry's file on the desk, getting his attention. "She's here to be a breeder and I need her rooming assignment."

The man eyes went wide he clear he wasn't used to being bossed by a women; even if she was higher authority then him. Hesitantly he scanned Terry's file. "Terry Brooks?" He asked.
She nodded. He grunted looking at Terry slowly up and down. He cleared his throat when he saw Helen's back off look and handed her the paperwork. "Happy to see you joining the team." He called as Helen lead her away from the creep at the front desk.


message 4: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80284 comments Mod
Dequincy, Chris, and the Mayor were ushered into a separate room, once they arrived. Chris's father went to get the choices for them. Chris sat alone, twiddling his thumbs, he twitched a few times. He's probably just nervous, Dequincy thought.

His father sat next to Dequincy smiling or what looked like a smile,"This is the day you make me proud to be your father." Then he squeezed Dequincy's arm hard, "Don't disappoint me,son."

Dequincy refused to show his pain and solemnly nodded. Just as Earnest re-entered the room, with files in his arms.


message 5: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 130857 comments Mod
The woman at the front desk looked them over, "breeding hours will begin shortly, the girls are all eating, then they will be ready," she smiled and watched her computer screen that showed all cornered of the building, thanks to cameras.


message 6: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 130857 comments Mod
The buzzer went off and the lady typed something into her computer and turned the screen around to show all the girls in their rooms, "take your pick."


message 7: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 130857 comments Mod
A boy with shaggy red hair walked up to the desk, he looked about 23, "That one," he said pointing at Olli's room.
The woman nodded and handed him a room key, "435 is a very popular girl," she winked.
The boy's face became almost as red as his hair as he took the card.
The woman turned the camera to Olli's room off and looked at the other boys.


message 8: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (last edited Aug 17, 2013 09:41AM) (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80284 comments Mod
Earnest laid the files on the table in front of the boys. "These are some of our younger breeders." Dequincy looked at the pictures they varied from: skin color, eye color, favorite activities, etc.

Chris scanned over them. Dequincy's eye caught a file buried under the rest. As some as he touched it he was sucked into a vision.

A woman was arguing with Earnest. "She's damaged and new and not to mention an outsider. You can't put her file in the group that your giving to the Mayor's son." She sounded protective of the girl.
Earnest stood up and said,"Helen, your letting your feelings get the best of you. Terry deserves as much a chance as everyone else. You would stop her from doing her purpose in the city."

Dequincy knew what Earnest was doing testing Helen's trust. The city or the girl.

Helen said shocked,"I want her to do her purpose, but.."
Earnest interrupted,"Then lets see how this plays out.If your right and she's too damaged then she'll be removed."


Dequincy shook his head clearing his thoughts. When he got a vision it only is a second in real life. Chris had a file he chosen, some girl named Kilo.
Dequincy asked Earnest,"Tell me more about her,"pointing to Terry Brooks picture.
Earnest looked surprised."Wouldn't you like to look at some of,"he cleared his throat, "normal girls?

Dequincy looked at the picture of the girl again. She looked normal.but they said she was damaged like him, he thought. "No."
Earnest looked ready to agrue, but Mayor Parker spoke up, "My son has chosen,let him go."
Earnest sighed and had 2 escorts direct Chris and Dequincy to their chosen rooms.


message 9: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 130857 comments Mod
The red haired boy walked back to the front desk.
The woman smiled at him, "two hours, huh? I told you she was good," the woman giggled. She looked at all the other men in the room, "your lucky there wasn't a line for her room, we would have had to send someone in to drag you out," she winked.
His stomach flipped at the thought of them taking him away from Olli.


message 10: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 130857 comments Mod
The red haired boy missed Olli already, "can I go back? Since there isn't anyone else?" He begged.
A blond haired man walked up behind the red haired man, "I want to see her."
The woman smiled, "you only have half an hour before breeding hours are over," she told the bling boy.
He smiled, "that's fine, I only need ten."
The woman nodded and handed him the key.


message 11: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80284 comments Mod
Dequincy was leaning against the wall. Waiting for Chris to come back. The men were filing in and out of the center slowly. His thoughts turned to Terry, her smile when she got what she wanted and that cute way she stood her ground. No,He thoughtYou are not going to think about her, its strictly business.

Just then he saw Chris walk in, he's lips were swollen from kisses. And he had a goofy smile on his face.
"Wow! Who pooped gold in your cereal?" Dequincy asked.
"The world's most beautiful flower,Kilo."Chris said.
Dequincy smiled at his friend's face."Well Dad had an emergency meeting at City Hall. So, the limo is taking us home."
"Wait,"Chris walked up to the Front desk,"Reserve Rm 634 for me please."
The woman behind the desk nodded, knowing exactly who Chris's father and did as he said. "Rm 634 is now reserved."
Chris nodded and he and Dequincy walked out of the breeding facility .


message 12: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 130857 comments Mod
The blond boy walked past the desk and nodded his thanks.
Sam glanced at the two younger boys and chuckled at them.


message 13: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80284 comments Mod
Dequincy's eyes followed the blond boy.Something about him wasn't right.
Chris didn't notice the blond boy, he was to busy chatting about Kilo and her adorable birthmark.
Dequincy pulled them into the Limo to take them home.


message 14: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 130857 comments Mod
Sam ran up to the building and stopped for a second to try and catch her breath.


message 15: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80284 comments Mod
Chris stepped up the shadows once he saw the blond girl and Dequincy behind her. "Yall ready to go?"


message 16: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 130857 comments Mod
Sam looked at the two of them and felt old, "how meany girls are we getting?" she asked a bit rudely.


message 17: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80284 comments Mod
"3 if were taking Olli,"Dequincy said.


message 18: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 130857 comments Mod
Sam nodded slowly, "lets just pray there not in their bedrooms, of it could get more difficult," she whispered, remembering how meany rooms there was, and how meany room keys.


message 19: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80284 comments Mod
Chris was impatient he really wanted to see Kilo. "If they're not in their rooms were else could they be?" He asked Sam.


message 20: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 130857 comments Mod
She thought for a moment, "the cafe is closed at this time, so most likely the lounge," she thought about the court yard but knew it would be closed too.


message 21: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80284 comments Mod
"Then let's go." Chris said. He opened the front door and rushed in.

"Sorry about him,"Dequincy said,"He's in love with one of the girls."


message 22: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 130857 comments Mod
Sam smiled, "love is cute on a guy," she felt kind of sorry for him thou, especially if she was one if the girls who was "well used" like Olli.


message 23: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80284 comments Mod
Dequincy started for the door and looked back at Sam. "You coming?"


message 24: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 130857 comments Mod
Sam looked up at the building, "ya..." She fallowed the guys in, feeling unconfterble being here once again.


message 25: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (last edited Aug 17, 2013 12:03AM) (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80284 comments Mod
"Lead the way," Dequincy seeing Sam's discomfort said, "The quicker we go the faster we leave."


message 26: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 130857 comments Mod
Sam nodded and ran down the halls, it wasn't until they got to the lounge room doors that she felt it was wrong, "maybe just visit...." She thought out load.

((Put ur next post on the lounge))


message 27: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80284 comments Mod
The guard lead Olli in a panel of supervisors,"Home Sweet Home,"he said.


message 28: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 130857 comments Mod
Olli watched her feet; her mind set of the girls and her baby, whom would be trapped in here and never meet her or its father.


message 29: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 130857 comments Mod
On*


message 30: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80284 comments Mod
Earnest told the guard,"Put her back into her room, and have more guards posted outside. I want her whereabouts known at all times. Understood?"
The guard nodded. Earnest walked over to Olli lifting her face up,"After all I don't want to lose our star breeder,again. Now pretty girl reports say you were with someone else. Where are they know?"
When Olli remained silent he added,"Tell me and you may be allowed to keep your kid for a year after its birth."


message 31: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 130857 comments Mod
Olli bit her lip and glanced at her stomach, then back up at the man, "Sam..." she whispered, she didn't want to give away Terry or Kilo's opportunity for freedom; she didn't even think their names, "their were two other girls, but they ran up to me and wanted to know how far along I was.. I don't know who they were. I remember them saying something about their parents just living around the corner from the park, or something," Olli felt proud for how well put together her story was. But she knew the man stopped listening once she said Sam's name though.


message 32: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80284 comments Mod
"Sam," he muttered to himself. He snapped at the guards there,"Get all units searching for her. I already have the mayor breathing down my neck about her. Bring her in."He ordered.


message 33: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 130857 comments Mod
Olli bit her lip and hoped Sam would be alight.


message 34: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80284 comments Mod
The guard pushed her away towards her room and locked her in.


message 35: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 130857 comments Mod
Olli looked around her room and felt slightly at home, she never thought she would miss it here.
She walked over to her dresser and changed into a pair of jean short shorts and a loos low cut tank top.
She went over to her bed and lied down; she new she wouldn't be breeding until after the baby was born.
She looked at the door and called for her guard, "excuse me! Guard!" Her voice was sweet like Kilo's always was, "could I have a furniture magazine? I want to find the perfect crib," she continued. She knew that even if she wasn't actually able to keep her baby, she could at least pretend she could until it was born.


message 36: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80284 comments Mod
((I'm going to cont. in her room))


message 37: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 130857 comments Mod
((cont.???))


message 38: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80284 comments Mod
((Continue...sorry lazy))


message 39: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 130857 comments Mod
((oh lol, I actually meant to post that in her room XD))


message 40: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80284 comments Mod
((Everything's frosty))


message 41: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 130857 comments Mod
((k))


message 42: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 130857 comments Mod
Pete walked into the building and up to the front desk, "I would like to see Ol- girl 435-please."
She woman looked at her clip bored, "Sorry, she's not in circulation at the moment sir. Would you like another breeder?"
Pete shook his head, "I only want that one.."
"I'm sorry, you will have to wait a week," the woman told him, then gestured the next man to come forward.
Pete stepped aside and sliped in threw one of the doors.
He kind of remembered where Olli's room was, but ended up getting lost on the way and was heading towards the lounge.


message 43: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 130857 comments Mod
Sam looked back at Terry and glared at her, "I'm really not liking you right now."

((lol they forgot the other two sleeping XD))


message 44: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80284 comments Mod
((OMG XD what to do. No child left behind!!!))
"What else is new?"Terry said


message 45: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 130857 comments Mod
Sam rolled her eyes and stopped dead in her tracks, "oh my god," she said trying not to laugh, "we forgot someone... well, two someones," she looked at Terry and wondered if she could figure out what Sam was talking about.


message 46: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80284 comments Mod
"Omg Kilo!"Terry cried.
Dequincy walked up behind them pocketing his phone,"No worries, ladies. I called Chris there on their way."


message 47: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 130857 comments Mod
Sam nodded, "should we wait?" she asked, not wanting to leave them behind encase they got caught.


message 48: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80284 comments Mod
Chris and Kilo ran behind them,"Thanks for the wake up call, buddy."He panted.
Dequincy smiled,"Anytime."


message 49: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 130857 comments Mod
Kilo ran up and hugged Terry, "are we saving Olli?" she asked looking at the facility. She wasn't awake when the tv was on, so she didn't really know what was going on.


message 50: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80284 comments Mod
Terry hugged her back,"Ya, the news said she escaped again with some guy."


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