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message 1: by Vanessa Eden (new)

Vanessa  Eden Patton (vanessaeden) | 509 comments it is called Lust and His Green Eyes
it is explicit. I would really like to know what you liked and did not like about this poem.


message 2: by Vanessa Eden (new)

Vanessa  Eden Patton (vanessaeden) | 509 comments you can find it on my profile under my writings


message 3: by Lela (new)

Lela Buis (lelae) | 37 comments Vanessa wrote: "you can find it on my profile under my writings"

Can you provide a link? I'm new here and I don't know how to find your profile.


message 4: by Lela (new)

Lela Buis (lelae) | 37 comments Vanessa wrote: "you can find it on my profile under my writings"

Okay, I managed to find it. It's got a lot of good points. I'd rather not review it here. If you'd like to message about it, contact me.


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