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Aug 24, 2014 07:32AM

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Another question is about the size of the investigating force. While I could imagine that a serious terrorist bombing might call for a large number of officers, is that usually the case? The books and TV shows of Lynda La Plante (Prime Suspect and the Anna Travis series) have large numbers of police investigating the crime. Is that realistic?
Britney wrote: "I was thinking about trying a Joseph Wambaugh book. What would be a good book to start with?"
The Onion Field. My absolute favorite of his.
The Onion Field. My absolute favorite of his.
Skye wrote: "As all novels are, don't you think?"
I don't know if that's always the case, but for me, there's generally more to get out of a novel than a movie.
I don't know if that's always the case, but for me, there's generally more to get out of a novel than a movie.


re task forces I think they r on big cases. and in the Anna Travis books don't think the task force was that big.

You should start with the novels that made him famous, such as The New Centurions or The Blue Knight .
The Onion Field is nonfiction, but it's supposed to be very good.

Lance how do you italicize and underline>"
Above the "comment" box, you should see something that says "(some html is ok)". That will show you the HTML codes you can imbed in your comments.
I added the underlined titles using the "add book/author" tool above the comment box.
Skye wrote: "Then there is also Gary Gilmore and Executioner's Song."
Skye, The Executioner's Songis one of my all-time favorite books. I read it a long time ago, and absolutely loved it.
Skye, The Executioner's Songis one of my all-time favorite books. I read it a long time ago, and absolutely loved it.
Jean wrote: "then what are you doing here?"
Jean, I think Skye meant that she's never read The Executioner's Song, not that she never reads. Obviously she does read -- if you take a moment to go look at her shelf you'll see she's a busy reader.
Jean, I think Skye meant that she's never read The Executioner's Song, not that she never reads. Obviously she does read -- if you take a moment to go look at her shelf you'll see she's a busy reader.

Jean, I should have included the pronoun---'it.' I never read The Executioner's Song and I wish I had.

Jean, I think Skye meant that she's never read The Executioner's Song, not that she never reads. Obviously she does read -- if you take a m..."
Hugs, Nancy: I have been sloppy because I mult-task when I respond to these threads: I just began teaching ( 25 years at a university) and I also grade many academic essays vetted from ETS to my PC ( busy time for people trying to come to the States, go to grad school or become certified in teaching). I try to read all I can, when I'm awake.
Skye wrote: "Nancy wrote: "Jean wrote: "then what are you doing here?"
Jean, I think Skye meant that she's never read The Executioner's Song, not that she never reads. Obviously she does read -- i..."
I've got your back, Skye! No need to defend yourself here at all.
Jean, I think Skye meant that she's never read The Executioner's Song, not that she never reads. Obviously she does read -- i..."
I've got your back, Skye! No need to defend yourself here at all.

Jean, I should have included the pronoun---'it.' I never read The Executioner's Song and I wish I had."
so sorry....too fast off the mark I guess.
Jean wrote: "Skye wrote: "Jean wrote: "then what are you doing here?"
Jean, I should have included the pronoun---'it.' I never read The Executioner's Song and I wish I had."
so sorry....too fast off the mark..."
I'm sure Skye didn't take it personally! Thanks, Jean.
Jean, I should have included the pronoun---'it.' I never read The Executioner's Song and I wish I had."
so sorry....too fast off the mark..."
I'm sure Skye didn't take it personally! Thanks, Jean.




Some interesting views on here, I love a crime thriller and think that forensic detail can offer a healthy, supplementary storyline. Not sure I'd enjoy a book wholly focussed on it though.
Regarding procedural while I can see the appeal a recent La Plante thiller ('Backlash') had all of her usual class but the heavy procedural emphasis made it feel a bit dry for my personal tastes.
Always happy to be disagreed with and as a debut author myself I understand the challenges of balancing these elements!

I have a main character who has transferred from the coroner to the crime lab as they are separate in the jurisdiction where the story takes place.
Generally speaking I'm assuming the coroner determines cause of death and the crime scene people work primarily with other evidence.
Suppose the coroner, during an autopsy, discover blood or skin under the fingernails of the victim. Do they run DNA and then forward the findings to the crime lab or do the samples go to the crime lab?
While working for the coroner, the character discovers an accidental drowning is actually a homicide by finding out the salt water in the victim's lungs is actually from bath salts in fresh water. This seems the provenance of the coroner but what happens from there? Who would testify in court to that fact. Certainly they work together but I don't want my investigative units treading on the other's turf.



Also, there is a difference in composition between bath salts and ocean salt water. There are fragrance and skin softening agents involved in bath salts. Salt water has algae and other substances in it. Don't take offense, but as a hint, fish swim and poopoo, too. There are plant particles, fish scales, and other stuff. This is not found in bath salts. There is actually very little "salt" involved in bath salts.

Anyway, I am looking for some basic background information that will pertain to my new book. Specifically, I need to talk with someone who was a sniper in Afghanistan. It will fill in the backstory of my main character, and I want to make sure I mention the unit he served in and the timing of when he served correctly and realistically.
Also, I am curious about crime scenes in rural parts of America. Is it plausible for a local sheriff to visit a murder scene and summarily declare it to be an accident, "Nothing to see here, just bad luck. Move along, move along" without it going to a grand jury or being up to the local DA to pursue a full-fledged investigation?

Yes, it is possible. I remember a series of murders in my small town. Seven, to be exact. We had 23,000 people in that town and the mob from Detroit was there quite often. One of the muckety-mucks of the town was a mobster.
Anyway, during the investigation of these murders, the police stated that they would not do anything to stop them, even though they knew who did them. The reason stated by all police: who cares if a bunch of drug addicts/dealers kill each other off? We will just let them do it. And they did, to the tune of 7 in one week. For your story, you need to have background stuff where cops are discussing something similar (happened in the '70's). Also, in that same small town, they did not do fingerprinting on crime scenes (did not want to and did not own a kit: period!). They did not own a rape kit for rape cases. (the cops believed in the '70's that most women were dogs and were either lying or did something to instigate the rape. Not true in every case. Some, sure, for paybacks, but there were cases of real rapes and the guys would just make the women sound like whores. The men would band together and destroy any woman who came forward.) I kid you not.
Nothing would ever go to the grand jury, there was no DNA or full-fledged investigation. The only one I knew of who did investigate was a deputy sheriff friend of mine. He did pursue leads and sneak stuff out. He did quite a few arrests on some murders, but I think even he did not pursue some stuff. It seemed like someone would run behind his back (mob related) and have his cases destroyed and the man in the process.
Yes, you are spot-on about rural America. I have seen it in action. Another case where a man was obviously murdered. His eyes were covered, his hands were tied behind his back, he feet were bound, and he was hung. The problem with this: it was ruled a suicide. How?
Good luck,
Sherry Leveck/Demented by Sherry Levesque

Hello Gary,
The British TV shows use police advisors to ensure authenticity, however, I imagine there is some use of literary licence. The Metropolitan Police have media advisors, they are happy to answer questions, you will find them on the Met. Police website

@Ken. The coroner aka medical examiner would not do a dna test, and keep in mind that dna results often take weeks. Having just had a procedural published ("Manhattan Roulette," still open on a giveaway) i can tell you that you can google almost anything you want to know about procedures. I was lucky enough to have a friend of a friend who's an NYPD detective to check with but again, after you learn all you can from google, if you still have questions, try your local precinct.

I just read a book by a new author, R.C. Johansen, The Skeleton Friend


I guess it would be better if they were, but I found this book fine on its own."
There are details and a few story plots and characters that cross from one book to the next so reading them in order might be best. I however have almost given up on the series because along with the few continuing cross over bits there are quite a few glaring inconsistencies going from book to book as well as within each book itself later in the series that drives me nuts.
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