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A. Frost
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Oct 02, 2013 05:53PM

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I did the same exact thing. And then I totally skipped out on the last one
(BTW, its indecisive XD)
(BTW, its indecisive XD)



Indie was a really suspicious character. I didn't know what to make of her.
I swear nothing happened in this book. I gave a 5 minute summary of it to my friend, who hadn't read it yet, and with that information she was able to go onto Reached without any problems.
There were some great opportunities for conflict and excitement, I thought, but none of them happened.
Switching POVs is okay, but only if the author shows that the two characters think differently. Cassia and Ky both spent like 5 paragraphs describing the color of the leaves at one point.