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I found it disappointing as a reader. Readers do need more than clever writing.




I think this is a very young and promising author who will do great things in the future, but she's not there yet, at least not with this book.

What I got was so much tell, very little show, 2D characters and a hollow plot.
All the beautifully researched language and exquisite prose don't make up for the lack of contact with the reader through the characters and a that dull told not shown story.





Generally she is a bustle about type person, so for me that says something for the book eh?

But from there on I became less and less interested. I suppose it is impressively clever but at no stage did the book really grab me. Not the way some other books do, books I've really loved. It's a few weeks since I read it and it cast no lasting spell over me as do all my favourite stories. I think it can only really happen when one or other of the characters seizes you by the heart-strings and none of these characters interested me much at all so I just could not get that bothered about their troubles. Gold is always boring to me too.
What really impresses me is the age of this author and the huge promise she shows at that age. When I was that age I was obsessed by sailing - not writing. Imagine what treasures she'll be writing by the time she's forty! But she isn't there yet and you can hardly expect it of someone this age.
She'll get way better in future.

So far I'm way past the pub stage and more than just her age is impressing me.



I like as a reader to be part of the story and to have it unfold with me doing part of the thinking work. I do not like being told everything.
Yes, her dialogue is impressively Victorian but it does become boring.

I'm told that this IS exactly what she was trying to do.


Which is something that agents of historical writers tell us not to do. We are advised to write good plain English, no exact copying and no gadzookery.

Which is something that agents of historical writers tell us not to do. We are advised to write good pla..."
That's interesting. When I read she had written in this way, I thought it was a novel idea (pun intended).
I suppose it appeals to readers who enjoy reading about that era in books written in that era (Dickens? Austen? Melville?).
Then she sets it in New Zealand which, to my knowledge, would not have much literature written in this way (set in that period and written in that period) and this would appeal particularly to NZ readers with a penchant for this genre.
If she were aware of advice such as that given by the agents you mention, perhaps she was deliberately breaking those rules.
I'm only up to page 80 - not much to offer in way of opinion yet other than to say that I am still curious and turning pages. There is a lot of telling in the narrative in the form of dialogue, but it is an engaging enough story.

What a shame Toni. That's a double disappointment for you. I hope you do get to read it and discuss it with the group. The thread will remain open beyond January, so do feel free to add to it.

Which is something that agents of historical writers tell us not to do. We are advised to..."
I'm just a little further ahead of you, but still enjoying the story. I like the way she introduces each new character, their part in the story and the linking to the story so far. Like Kathleen, I see the format as immaterial - I don't particularly understand the reason for it so ignore.
I do just keep reading one more section, then just one more and just ...:)

This is where my writer's persona pops up with things like 'oh great bit of dialogue' or 'tut! telling not showing', or 'Why do I like this bit?' etc. It doesn't half spoil reading books at first until you get used to wearing two different hats and reading everything twice.
I am contrary and hate being told I ought to read this book or I will love that book, but I did want to enjoy Luminaries. I just couldn't finish it. I skim read the last quarter.

In some respects I have a similar problem to you mostly which occurs (dare I say it) when reading indie published ebooks and I come across spelling/grammar errors. Thgis causes me to have to re-read that sentence/section mentally applying the correction. I can cope with a small handful in a book, but if it happens with frequency I tend to metaphorically assign that book to the bin.
I suspect this comes from my previous life as an old secretary. An era when we were taught to proof-read our work at intervals and BEFORE removing work with several carbon copies from typewriter - done for efficiency, but more particularly your own sanity! lol

Sometimes I wish I could read simply for fun like a child.

Sometimes I wish I could read simply for fun like a child."
Hahaha - like the typo I've just correct in my #41 post above (shame faced & blushing) [g]

The school teacher in me gets very irritated, and it gets me thinking as to whether I should throw away my whiteboard markers and contemplate life as an editor!

The best I've seen is a chalkboard that stands proudly outside a local cafe and states "We make our own sand witche's' fresh daily". I've never had one.



I keep hurrying to do the other things I have to (chores) so as I can resume reading.




I haven't noticed any errors in the book - apart from one plot hole that I think is there, but that I won't mention until we've all read it through.

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