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Hey Everyone,

I'm looking for some feedback and help.
The book is complete, and I have gone through editing but as we all know editing your own work you are bound to miss big and small mistakes. I also am looking for feedback on the story as well. I am planning in the new year to pitch this story to agents.

This will fall in the category of New Adult.
Word - 78,000
Genre - Supernatural Romance

Looking for beta readers and proof readers for this story. It was my NANOWRIMO story and the next one I want to pitch to agents of this genre.
Would appreciate all the help I can get to polish it up any advice as well THANKS SO MUCH

Synopsis:

The back story is in L.A where Lauren and her boyfriend lived. Then there is a tragic accident Matt dies and Lauren is unable to live in their apartment any longer. She moves home to Portland Oregon where the story takes place. She can’t move on, everything reminds her of him. Months after his death she moves home, but things don’t get better. Now she’s seeing Matt’s ghost and thinks she is losing her mind. He appears at random times mostly when she is alone. She can’t help but sense that Matt is trying to tell her something. Just when she thinks everything is starting to look up and she is having fun with old friends and meeting new ones She meets a guy. Mason Foster, the millionaire bachelor with a bad reputation. Everyone knows Mason and his one night stands after one night stands. It’s secret that is unique baby blues steal the hearts of every woman in town. However, Lauren finds him rude and uncouth and it’s obvious he cares only for himself. Until his eyes fall upon Lauren, the girl from his childhood. As Lauren discovers that Mason grabs her attention, despite all his best efforts. Lauren loves to hate Mason and vice versa. But a new boy comes to town, Mason’s older brother from Seattle. Turns out he is a lot easier to get alone with and also easy on the eyes. Nick doesn’t hide that he adores her leaving Lauren torn.

Who will she end up with?

Read and see!

Thanks again. Please reply to this thread or inbox me if you are interested. It will be in Adobe format.

Sabrina

This story sounds really interesting :)

thx

Have you had it published ?

no getting it ready. just looking for beta readers and proof readers first.

I can read it too, sounds cool.

ok thanks. it in pdf format and I just need ur email. :)

awesome if ud rather in box ur email go ahead or just email me at [email protected]

Camilla all sent. hope u enjoy it