This is the first installment in a 5 part novella series that I have been working on. This part of the story is meant as an introduction to plot and characters. It is supposed to be a hook and a push to make others interested in the next books.
I'd like feedback on how well I achieved those goals.
I wrote this sci-fi ebook that is also posted here on goodreads: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...
This is the first installment in a 5 part novella series that I have been working on. This part of the story is meant as an introduction to plot and characters. It is supposed to be a hook and a push to make others interested in the next books.
I'd like feedback on how well I achieved those goals.
Thx!
Rita