Short Story Contests discussion

These stories are ALWAYS less than 75 words. Today's topic is revenge.

This was posted really late, but I wanted to do one today.
-Joelle

I was getting such different advice from all the people I trust. One was telling me to exact revenge. Another was telling me it was wrong. Yet another was telling me to let it go. And still another telling me to hold a grudge. None of these things sounded like me. I'm more of the spray-paint-their-car-neon-green kind of person. Including the windows.

im puting mine on a link

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...
srry it's exctly 75 words... does it still count? i hope it does... good topic!

"The place to get the best view is right here." Said Joe to his daughter. After having fallen several times coming up the hill with her father, also stung by a hornets-nest of bees a while ago about a mile off, Jill looked terrible with all her hair swept back. the pony tail loose, hair pins lost, a grudge against her mother for allowing her to go on a hick with her father, the divorcee seeking revenge no doubt.
"I can't get a good view Daddy." She said. She was suddenly disappointed that she wasn't even tall enough to see past the bushes unlike her tall father who stood by and enjoyed the lake.
"Let's just go down closer, then." Smells with his nose, "Don't you just love that smell, of the fresh fish, they'll be jumping and I brought compact rods to catch fish." Joe said.

mine is about revenge... plz read it

i think yours has more than 75 words

ooo and i have an idea for tomarrows

hey who won this one???

u guys r good. i can't even match that

we don't vote on these. it takes to much work to make a poll everyday. their just for fun if you don't have time to do the weekly contests.

so like no one wins?????

naw, it's just to for fun.

awww o well, it was still fun and i like my thing... i think im going to make it longer

oh ok