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message 1: by [deleted user] (new)

These stories are under 75 words. Today's topic is envy.


message 2: by [deleted user] (new)

Myra couldn't decide what she was feeling. It was all too confusing. It wasn't happiness nor sadness. She wasn't angry. It wasn't envy. She couldn't even tell why she was feeling it. It was something she'd never felt before. It was the thing they'd described as love. And she was feeling it for Sam.


message 3: by Moody (last edited Jul 14, 2009 10:17AM) (new)

Moody Claire (singurl) | 22 comments 'I didn't do it!' Anna thought.

'No! I was only possessed by something...'

Her hands and clothes were stained with crimson red blood as she dropped the bloody knife she was clutching a while ago. The knife she struck in the chest straight into the heart of Emily - the one who had everything may it be clothes, riches and even the one she loves.

Everything and that's what made her kill Emily. She was possessed by what everyone call envy.


message 4: by Miinnniiiiie(: (new)

Miinnniiiiie(: this one's hard


message 5: by Esther (new)

Esther (essie7198) yey! you used my idea!!!!


message 6: by Esther (new)

Esther (essie7198) Envy, a harsh word. But for Envy it doesnt do her justice. Her parents apearently named her that because they thought that i quote, 'Her beauty is the envy of every girl.' But, every one she meets is like,'Hello! whats your name? Mine is _______. My name is Envy! oh,' and they dont talk to her anymore. But it did turn out Envy is a very beautiful girl! Brown shoulder leath hair with blond highlights. Beautiful green eyes. it didnt help that green is the color of evny and pride. So if you ever meet someone with the name Envy, talk to her, be her friend, she might repay you.


message 7: by [deleted user] (new)

This is the life. I have no worries, no problems. I'm beautiful, and that's all that matters. I'm worshiped, and that makes me happy. But most of all I'm envied. Everyone wants to be me and I feed off of their emotions. I'll never be brought down off my throne. I belong here.


message 8: by Arthur, Live a little Give a lot (new)

Arthur | 554 comments Mod
Ever heard of bottling everyone’s envy? One day envy became heavy and was dumped into a well by accident. Then all the tiny villagers drank the water, feed it to the crops. And the few animals they had. Usually they hoped for fresh rain year round, after tasting envy they each committed themselves to the well, hoping for crops and many other wondrous things they envisioned from naturally drinking their well water. Now they have a bottle industry for 'Envy' that comes in many favorite flavors.


message 9: by Esther (new)

Esther (essie7198) hehehe yours is funny!


message 10: by Davis (new)

Davis (davismattek) He spoke down to me softly, yet forcefully "Your literally sick with envy". My psychiatrist is telling me this. The man who I have literally depended to keep me mentally stable and functioning in society; is telling me that I'm envious...of him! Am I to believe him? Or am I to believe that the man who has helped me out in inconceivably amazing ways, is a quack?


message 11: by Miinnniiiiie(: (new)

Miinnniiiiie(: Crack! Crack! "She's mine!" Ant said. "Then I'll take her!" Ler said and knocked Ant to the ground, "Who's is she now?!" Ler laughed and ran off with Doe. Ant satup, full of hate and envy for Ler. He ran up and bucked Ler into the river, "Who's is she now?!" Then he ran off with Doe, making Ler feel the same Ant did. And he couldn't do anything, Ant was the leader of the herd and he was just a protector.


message 12: by Miinnniiiiie(: (new)

Miinnniiiiie(: lol its stupid


message 13: by Clare D' Lune (new)

Clare D' Lune good stories!!


message 14: by Miinnniiiiie(: (new)

Miinnniiiiie(: wat do u think of mine?? lol


message 15: by Clare D' Lune (new)

Clare D' Lune hahah absolutly confusing and funny :) I liked it!


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