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Mack Moyer (mackmoyer) | 4 comments Hey there potential reviewers, I have a tiny 2800 word short and I'm in need of criticisms!

The story goes like this: Mike takes his elderly mother to a desolate beach resort -- desperately waiting for her to die so he can inherit her wealth -- when he encounters our titular teenage girl, Rita.

After a few drinks and possibly some hallucinogens, Mike and Rita discover the world's cutest space potato (or maybe it's a radioactive slug, they're not sure).

I have a PDF file available. If this tickles your reader bones, give me your info and I'll send it to you thusly!

-- Mack


Joanie Chevalier (joaniec) Hi Mack,

Is this a story for reviewing or is this a story needing a beta reader? You can send me a pdf at [email protected] but please let me know what specifically you are looking for. Thanks.


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Mack Moyer (mackmoyer) | 4 comments Joanie it's a review, not a beta read. Thanks for helping out and I just sent it to ya.


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