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message 1: by Julia (new)

Julia | 220 comments hey so ideas??


message 2: by [deleted user] (new)

I was thinking of teen romance?


message 3: by Julia (new)

Julia | 220 comments ok so plot? do you wind being the girl??


message 4: by [deleted user] (new)

Maybe they already know each other in school. Then one day something (can you think of anything?) happens and they start to fall in love.
Yes I would like to be the girl


message 5: by Julia (new)

Julia | 220 comments oh um do you do do fxf


message 6: by [deleted user] (new)

Do you mean fxf romance or just fxf as friends? Cuz i don't mind doing a fxf as friends story


message 7: by Julia (new)

Julia | 220 comments fxf romance


message 8: by [deleted user] (new)

No I've never done that


message 9: by Julia (new)

Julia | 220 comments okay ummm ill be the boy then


message 10: by [deleted user] (new)

Ok thx


message 11: by Julia (new)

Julia | 220 comments character
name
age
photo
traits
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message 12: by [deleted user] (last edited Sep 23, 2015 02:18PM) (new)

Name: Sophia Clara Milden
Age: 17
Appearance: Peyton List
Photo: Photo here
Traits: pretty, smart, popular. Rather rich. Most of her friends just want to be her friends because of that.


message 13: by Julia (new)

Julia | 220 comments name:jesus foster
age: 17
apperance:http://www.google.com/imgres?imgurl=h...
traits
-sporty
-smart
-passionate
-helpfull
-romantic


message 14: by [deleted user] (new)

So where do you want to start?


message 15: by Julia (new)

Julia | 220 comments hmm maybe the last day of school? im thinking that your character something bad happens to her like a leaked embarrassing photo gets around school. and shes crying and running and she runs into my character??


message 16: by [deleted user] (new)

Yeah that works since her friends aren't true friends.
So i'll start


message 17: by Julia (new)

Julia | 220 comments okay


message 18: by [deleted user] (new)

Sophia Milden was walking up to her friends, who were huddled in a group in the school hallway.
As soon as they saw her, they began laughing and teasing her. 'So you think you look so pretty huh?' one of them asked.
'What?' Sophia said.
Her friends showed her their phones. All of them had one picture: Sophia undressing.
Sophia gasped. She saw her friend Nicole in the background and realised that her friends had secretly photographed her during their sleepover last night.
She looked in horror at them and fled from the school.


message 19: by Julia (new)

Julia | 220 comments Jesus was talking to his friend from football when all a sudden girl runs into him
"with where's the fire" he says and he takes a couple steps back because of the force when she saw he was crying his smile faded " you okay " he asks


message 20: by [deleted user] (new)

'I - I'm sorry' Sophia gasped. She stopped crying for a moment when she saw the boy's face. She felt a funny feeling, like her heart had stopped beating and she was in a trance. But she soon started crying again and walked away from the boy, out of the school gates.


message 21: by [deleted user] (new)

((Signing off now, I'll post tmr))


message 22: by Julia (new)

Julia | 220 comments ((Ok))


message 23: by [deleted user] (new)

((Your turn))


message 24: by Julia (new)

Julia | 220 comments Jesus got worried and followed her "are you alright"he asks catching up to her hopping she wpuldent get mad


message 25: by [deleted user] (new)

'P-please don't talk to me,' Sophia sobbed. Then she heard the boy's phone ring. Someone had messaged the photo to him.


message 26: by Julia (new)

Julia | 220 comments he opened it up and looked at it for a second then at her "whyd o people care so much about looks?"he asks shoving his phone back in his pocket


message 27: by [deleted user] (new)

Sophia stopped crying and smiled at the nice boy. 'Thanks' she said. 'I'm Sophia, by the way.'


message 28: by Julia (new)

Julia | 220 comments "jesus" he says smiling


message 29: by [deleted user] (new)

'I-I haven't seen you around before...and I guess I won't be seeing you or anyone else again since it's the last day of school'.


message 30: by Julia (new)

Julia | 220 comments "isint thier a party later?" he asks "maybe i could take you" he says narrowing his eyeborws


message 31: by [deleted user] (new)

'I don't think I can go, not after all this. What will my parents say?' Sophia worried


message 32: by Julia (new)

Julia | 220 comments "thier highschool kids thier forget about it in an hour " he says


message 33: by [deleted user] (new)

Sophia laughed. 'Oh well, I do want to go. Where will we meet tonight then?'


message 34: by Julia (new)

Julia | 220 comments " kne wit " he says crossing his arms "give me your number and we can talk later?" he asks as the school bell rang loudly noting it was time to leave


message 35: by [deleted user] (new)

'Alright, here you go' Sophia gave Jesus her number. 'See you later.'


message 36: by Julia (new)

Julia | 220 comments he waved her bye then rode his skateboard home


message 37: by [deleted user] (new)

Sophia watched him as he rode away. It was the first time she had given a boy her number. She couldn't believe herself. This was such a strange day!


message 38: by Julia (new)

Julia | 220 comments he smiled as he rode of to his house that was just doen the street (skip?)


message 39: by [deleted user] (new)

(Sure)

At 8:30 pm that night, Sophia saw Jesus waiting for her outside her house.


message 40: by Julia (new)

Julia | 220 comments He swiped open his phone to text her that was was here


message 41: by [deleted user] (new)

Sophia took one last look in the mirror, making sure she looked pretty. She opened the door and said 'Hi' to Jesus.


message 42: by Julia (new)

Julia | 220 comments "Hey"he said shoving his phone in his Pocket once more he smiled at her


message 43: by [deleted user] (new)

'Um...you look great in that suit.' Sophia said


message 44: by Julia (new)

Julia | 220 comments "This old thing?"he say smiling "I love your dress"


message 45: by [deleted user] (new)

Sophia beamed. 'Thanks, you're really nice.'
They walked to the school, which was nearby.


message 46: by Julia (new)

Julia | 220 comments They got inside of the school everyone wearing dresses and suits looking fancy like it was prom


message 47: by [deleted user] (new)

Some of the kids pointed at Sophia as she and Jesus walked past. But most of the kids were so focused on dancing or chatting that they didn't notice her.
'Wow, you were right. They've forgotten about it already.' She said


message 48: by Julia (new)

Julia | 220 comments He nodded " yup I highly doubt they even remember what they had for lunch"he says


message 49: by [deleted user] (new)

Sophia laughed. She liked funny boys and Jesus was one of them. 'So, do you dance?'


message 50: by Julia (new)

Julia | 220 comments "sometimes" he says " im kinda bad it though"


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