I'm kind of really disappointed so far how this book is turning out. Bryn seems completely unrealistic. When someone finds out the info she's found out, they wouldn't just cry for half an hour and then just pout for the next year. That's not how it works. I feel like the author is just trying way too hard to not look like an amateur that it comes off even more amateur.
Also, this is a sequel, don't re-explain every detail that happened in the first book - that's why there was a first book!!!
Also, this is a sequel, don't re-explain every detail that happened in the first book - that's why there was a first book!!!
*huff*