21st Century Literature discussion

After skimming the first thirty pages and the ending, some words of advice.

Proofread. Please, please, please do it. Thoroughly. Don't mash a novel onto the page and expect your reader to be tolerant; grammar, punctuation and orthography are crucial. Make a mistake once every fifty pages and it's alright, but your text is riddled with inconsistencies.

Give us a description. No one wants to spend their valuable time without an incentive.

Why are you using Camus as your picture?

I don't want to hate on you, but just looking after those points will ensure that you might get a few more readers. Basics first, honest reviews second. Cheers!

Moved this to the promotion thread. Please follow our group guidelines when self-promoting here in the future. Thank you.