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message 1: by Segilola (new)

Dec 04, 2015 01:46AM

Segilola Salami (segilolasalami) | 32 comments

Hi folks,

I am currently working on a new book.

Quite a simple one. It is counting to 100 in Yoruba and English.

Here's the link to the preview https://www.createspace.com/pub/commu...

Please ignore the formatting for now. I would appreciate any feedback.

Many thanks

Segilola
Author of Yetunde: The Life and Times of a Yoruba Girl in London

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message 2: by Emma (new)

Dec 04, 2015 02:18AM

It's a great idea, a few illustrations as the book is for children would be essential.
You don't include any pronunciation, it can be added quite easily e.g. in English

one - ˈwʌn/ or UK /ˈwɒn/

This article should help https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Help:IP...

good luck with it.

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message 3: by Segilola (new)

Dec 04, 2015 04:09AM

Emma wrote: "It's a great idea, a few illustrations as the book is for children would be essential.
You don't include any pronunciation, it can be added quite easily e.g. in English

one - ˈwʌn/ or UK /ˈwɒn/

..."

thanks for the feedback

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